View Full Version : Week 3: Skream vs Feral


Flat ¶.
06-26-2007, 01:01 AM
Line Limit: 50 lines
Check In By: Friday June 29, 2007 11:59pm EST
Poem Due By: Monday July 2, 2007 11:59pm EST

If you no-show, you will not be permitted to participate in the next round. If it becomes a habit, you will not be a part of this league.

NO EXTENSIONS WILL BE GIVEN! Call it tough love... but if you want to be part, please make the time.


You will be voting on:

- On Topic
- Depth
- Imagery
- Originality
- Flow
- Word Choice/Diction
- Enjoyment
- Overall

(A lot like the Topical League)

Not just "A" did better than "B", but explain WHY... we are all here to elevate and get more feedback on our work!

YOU MUST vote on at least 2 other battles to make this work in the beginning!!! If you do not vote, votes may be discounted from your battle.

TOPIC: Fight Against Time

Skream
06-26-2007, 02:45 PM
checkin in like paschetti

feral
06-27-2007, 02:37 AM
cheeck

Skream
07-03-2007, 03:19 PM
this is late lol but i didnt no show

i call this night and day the genesis

it all started as the night married the day
as the roots of a once great bark
lay as if created to soak in the juices
that would forever unify them
and the darkness let himself
be snatched into the plain white surface
leaving a mark that would exist forever
for unity and for viewing pleasure
their consemation would give birth
to an evolution of symbols
each unique in formation and character
yet equally similar in importance
only when they collided together
in millions of combinations
so to be united as one
would they make a difference
the symbols begat words
yet words found little meaning
separated from its purpose
and the words begat sentences,
which embody the paragraphs,
which in a sense help provide a little
insight on the experiences,
the paragraphs begat the chapter,
which starts and begins a new stage,
the chapter begat the novel,
which brings it all together as
the story of life,
as each novel is read
the marriage becomes relevant
the sacred vows taken held true
which each page turned comes
so much love and abhoration yet
so many beautiful memories
all are stored never to be erased
the novel is read never to be sequelled
the novel is read never to be unread again
for doing so would create a divorce
between night and day
and life would cease to exist.

feral
07-03-2007, 03:39 PM
Shit sorry, I completely forgot about this, I only remembered when it only just came up in my user cp. Sorry Skream.

Skream
07-03-2007, 03:51 PM
np i forgot to.