Aiight, it goes like dis:

1. 10-15 lines
2. No crew votes, hate votess, d/c votes
3. Explained votes only will count
4. No feeding off verses
5. First to five wins 3-0 ko
6. ABSOLOUTELY NO FREEPOSTING!!! LET"S KEEP IT CLEAN PEEPS!
7. Must post within 30 mins of submission

let's spin this shit.

Lady Dawn, what a freak, she lost her first fight
Gotta admit, you did shit, not even close to "alright"//
peeps, this dog is a lost soul in need of refining
Like stephen King, this bitch was nowhere near scarier than "the shining"//
Da scariest thing about you is the face yo momma produced
You were so fat, like a Klump, you needed to be induced//
I said i wanted this short and sweet
And that's exactly what it's goin to be, i can see you already sweating from my heat//
You little whore, i gots no respect fo gats like you
Like in "original sin" my poison will make you wanna spew//
You feelin ill already dawn? I know that you can't take it
When i rhyme to a beat, you know you can't beat this shit//
So ima goin to throw you the mic, and listen to yo Asian rhymez
C'mon you little hoe, let's see you lose a second time!!//

you now have 30 mins to deploy

uh oh....ok here it is

Lady Dawn on this mic, throwin punches like sharpened knives
Screamin at this IvoryBitch, i think you need to get a life~~
It's good dat we're both rookies, but we know which one's da illest
In this number two battle, we'll see which bitch is da fittest~~
I'll be dancin circles around you, like on Save the last Dance
You gots nothin on me Ivory, you offered a little prance~~
You little dyke, keep tryin to elevate, with a few little disses
And i'll show up on yo door, cutting up yo face wit a pair of scissors~~
Fool, ima goin smah yo Ivory face in and leave you ta bleed
I don;t need to read yo shit, and i don't need to feed~~
See i gots da skill, i'm da female BRabbit
You da Papa Doc, who needs to cut out this old habbit~~
Of spittin rhymez, dat make no sense to da biological ear
Give it up to lady Dawn, i'm da one you should fear~~

Uppin fo da votes

shit, this battle was pretty good.

IVORY:
you've elevated well, i think you nailed this one well, wit good punches. i loved "the shining" diss, very creative

DAWN
i'm sorry gurl, you started off slow in this battle, but you picked up towards the end, but you have to remain consistent. i know iit's hard to battle in suich short deadlines, but it's comes down to the quality and consistency and how well you hold it together

Flow: Both
Punches: Ivory
Wordplay: Ivory
Multis: (i hav no idea what they are)
Personals: Dawn
Creativity: Ivory

Vote= Ivory

thanx gurl 1-0, uppin!

votes peeps!

you heard the lady, can we hav some votes here?

as much as i would love to vote i cant its to close of a battle in my opinion...dawn started off slow but picked up enormously..Ivory came in throwin but slowly slipped her grace..
i recommend a REmatch..

sorry..:( if i wasnt of any help

Ivorydoll~ you were really good wit tha punches and you were better wit tha wordplay.

Dawn~ like leeta said you were kinda slow in tha beginning but it got better towards tha end..

but overall both had very nice verses and its hard for me to choose which one whas better but hurr:


Flow: Ivory
Punches: Ivory
Wordplay: Ivory
Multis: ummmmmmm
Personals: Dawn
Creativity: both

vote~ IvoryDoll*

Originally posted by Azerdae
as much as i would love to vote i cant its to close of a battle in my opinion...dawn started off slow but picked up enormously..Ivory came in throwin but slowly slipped her grace..
i recommend a REmatch..

sorry..:( if i wasnt of any help

^^^ NICELY SAID!!!!!

ayo gurls, i know dat this was close, but i'd still like to see how this finishes.

2-0 UPPIN!

U*P*P*I*N*

no uppin, last warning or it will be closed

Flow: Dawn
Punches: Ivory
Wordplay: there's none!
Multis: none
Personals: none
Creativity: ivory

Very poor battle! But, someone has to win, right? N*e how my vote goes to Ivory for the simple fact that the punches were more consistent...i guess

*LaDy

3-0 tko, nice battle, kinda weak tho...
WuN