sorry my power went out so i had to drop tonight been at work....

rules

3-0 ko 5 to winner
no d/r hate cru votes... if ure in a crew i dont kno
short battle plz... 5 bar max... or if its dif here that would be 10 bar max for u i dont kno lol... i say 1 bar is 2 lines... so go by that! plz drop on sat since u prolly wont be on tonight...

oh n edited this to put "no feeding recycling or biting" lol

oh ya... i want explained votes too usually... even quote fav lines...

multis
mettas
punches
wordplay
etc..... if u can think of others... but i usually dont think flow or vocab are relevant..

~Run In Fright!~ “Punches” Are Useless - Youre ~One To “Knife!”~//
If ya Pulled a “Frankenstein” Your Words Still Couldnt ~Come To “Life”~//

Im ~One To Attack~ - Youre ~One To Step Back~ No Wonder Ya Only Battle Females Its ~Talent You Lack!~ Majority Excluding Me - Can ~Only Spit Wack!~//

Im Out ~Committing Crimes~ While You Make ~Prewritten Rhymes~//
Set Up A Million Battles N Id Still Beat Ya A ~Million Times!~//

If Ya Lyrical “Metabolism” Were Nothing You Wouldnt Be ~“Phat”~// (Fat)
You Idle-Eyez Me - Youre Slow To ~React!~ // (Idolize... idle(means laze) eyez=slow to react)

I Feel Pure Enjoyment Standin Over The ~Dead And Grinning!~ Gurl ~Dreads Me Winning!~//
Im Knockin Her Out (ko ur ass lolz) So Fast Her ~Head Is Spinning!~//

TIGHT WORK IT'S STRAIGHT TA ME.
REPPIN' THA 3-0-5

II REAL/2 REAL
ONE LUV

hey, sry i was out of town, back now, i'll try to spit tonight, nice drop burbery!

Couldnt Spit 'Sick Flows' If U 'Shitted In A River',//
Just Call Me A 'UPS Driver' Cuz My Lyrics Is Goin To Stand N 'Deliver'//

Kid Makes A Mistake she Didt Choose The 'Executive' Decision,//
Rhymes Rippin Off her 'Flesh' Like I Was A Doctor Given A circum-Sision//

Kid Thinks Shes Wesley 'Snipe' The Way Shes 'Sharp-Shootin'//
This Is A 'Disaster To Ur Emotions' Cuz Im 'Heart-Pollutin'//

Just Call Me 'Kobe' Cuz Im Rapin U Wit N Assult,//
Slingin Ya 'Limbs In The Air' Cuz My Punches Are Like A CataPolt//

Ur Foot Up A 'Kats Ass' Is The Only Time U 'Poundin Shit'//
This Verse Will Finally Wake U Up And Help Find Ur Clit//

Aight.... Here is the breakdown... highest points is 5.

BurBerry...

~Run In Fright!~ “Punches” Are Useless - Youre ~One To “Knife!”~//
If ya Pulled a “Frankenstein” Your Words Still Couldnt ~Come To “Life”~//

((set up was kind of weak... But the frankenstein idea was very creative..punch didn't hit to hard though 2/5))

Im ~One To Attack~ - Youre ~One To Step Back~ No Wonder Ya Only Battle Females Its ~Talent You Lack!~ Majority Excluding Me - Can ~Only Spit Wack!~//

((nice multis... the "talent you lack" line is kind of played.. but the multis were good..again, punch wasn't to hard..3/5))


Im Out ~Committing Crimes~ While You Make ~Prewritten Rhymes~//
Set Up A Million Battles N Id Still Beat Ya A ~Million Times!~//

(( Eh... Talking about yourself in a battle isn't to healthy.. Stick to punchlines.. wasn't a really good bar..1.5/5

If Ya Lyrical “Metabolism” Were Nothing You Wouldnt Be ~“Phat”~// (Fat)
You Idle-Eyez Me - Youre Slow To ~React!~ // (Idolize... idle(means laze) eyez=slow to react)

(( very good.. nice wordplay and good flip on idolize..nice 3.5/5))

I Feel Pure Enjoyment Standin Over The ~Dead And Grinning!~ Gurl ~Dreads Me Winning!~//
Im Knockin Her Out (ko ur ass lolz) So Fast Her ~Head Is Spinning!~//

(( good concept... again, nice mutlis, but you should REALLY concentrate on better punches.. it would help alot. 2.5/5))

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Teeny...

Couldnt Spit 'Sick Flows' If U 'Shitted In A River',//
Just Call Me A 'UPS Driver' Cuz My Lyrics Is Goin To Stand N 'Deliver'//

((nice open.. good way of using sick flows, in a shitted river.. nice wordplay on that... second line didn't really follow up as hard as it should have.. 3/5))

Kid Makes A Mistake she Didt Choose The 'Executive' Decision,//
Rhymes Rippin Off her 'Flesh' Like I Was A Doctor Given A circum-Sision//

((lmao..nice combination on your second line... top one wasn't a good set up for the punchline, but it was pretty good. 3/5))

Kid Thinks Shes Wesley 'Snipe' The Way Shes 'Sharp-Shootin'//
This Is A 'Disaster To Ur Emotions' Cuz Im 'Heart-Pollutin'//

((top line was ok...second line was uhm.. well, i got it, but you're talking about yourself..that takes away from the content of the punchline. 2.5/5))

Just Call Me 'Kobe' Cuz Im Rapin U Wit N Assult,//
Slingin Ya 'Limbs In The Air' Cuz My Punches Are Like A CataPolt//

(( lol! nice lines... good references with kobe, nice metaphor in the second line.. teeny weeny multi..3.5/5))

Ur Foot Up A 'Kats Ass' Is The Only Time U 'Poundin Shit'//
This Verse Will Finally Wake U Up And Help Find Ur Clit//

((honestly... I didn't understand the closer that much.. the top line was ok, second one lost me ....2.5/5))
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Personals: None
Multis: Burberry
Punches: Teeny
Metas: Teeny
Wordplay: Burberry
Complexity: Teeny
Creativity: Burberry
Enjoyment: Teeny

Ok, honest opinion... Burberry, your verse would have interested me a lot more if your punches were stronger. You drop was decent, but your lack of hard punches really kept you down. Teeny, you had stronger punches, and good metaphors in your verse. They were small, but kept the content of the punchlines a bit more interesting. Both verses sort of look like they were rushed.. But for the fact of harder punches, better enjoyment, and metaphors..

Vote= Teeny..

Both of you could have came a lot harder.. Ok battle though.

Multis: Burberry
Personals: None
Punches: Teeny
Flow: Teeny
Wordplay: Burberry
Complexity: Teeny
Creativity: Burberry
Enjoyment: Teeny


Vote=teeny
seems like the otha chick tired too hard to makeit look complex, but i guess it was creaticve, ill give her props for that..

teeny first off... nice drop i wasnt expecting that from u to be honest bc i read ur battles

queeny... complicated? all i did was show were my multis were at... i've used this style forever n no one has had a prob with it.... if u look at other sites thats how they lay out their verses so i wasnt "trying too hard" in that area... also if u see in my verse i had a personal .... plz explain what complexity means hahahaha

i dont mean to start beef on this site but the gurl used a lot of played out lines... i do admit it was a close battle im just sayin u guys gave her more credit...

does this site have a voting system they go by?? cuz what do creativity complexity and enjoyment have to do with anything... just a thought

anyway i doubt this battle will give me any votes,,, cuz i must admit i did come weak... so u can have ur win but no doubt there will be a rematch

peace

If people don't enjoy your verse, as in you putting down something that makes people be like "damn no she didn't".. Then their not going to vote for you. And, you had ONE personal in your verse... That's not that big of a shocker... Creativity is just as important as punchlines.. No one wants to be reading the same things over and over. And if you're going to use played lines, atleast reword them so they have a better edge. But whether you had those things or not, you DIDN"T have the elements to win the battle. Mutlis do not win you battles... And your punchlines didn't land hard at all. Complexity of your verse is essential also, because no one wants to read a choppy ass verse.. If the rhyme doesn't make sense, that keeps you from being voted on. Don't know what site you came from, but you should have known that all ready. You are based on everything here. Not just your multi bars.

just playing



Multis: Burberry
Personals: None
Punches: Teeny
Flow: Teeny
Wordplay: Burberry
Complexity: Teeny
Creativity: Burberry
Enjoyment: Teeny
damn i actually agree with queeny

vote=teeny
she had tha punches flow and complexity

3-0 KO good battle burbery, lookin forward to the rematch