since we have our own thread now this should be in here

throw some ideas im down with all so ill write my verse to each idea

Aight our current collab topic is..."Murder We Wrote" so if u in...say so before we put our verses together

you already know imin

yeah its Stevos Topic...so he has to say the specifics...i think it was 8-12 lines or something...Stevo...remind me of the details

I'm.. tell me the dead line=)

deadline in about a week....just have it done by then...10-14 lines...if your a little short or a little long thats fine..."murder we wrote" basically tell it from the point of view that your confessing a murder to a reporter or someone interviewing you...tell about it...mainly just to display imagery and our creativity...

aight i got mine pretty much done...jus lemme kno when everybodies ready

yah let me know also.. so i can do my verse also

Yo it's murder she wrote.

Yea...

I put a knife to a bitches throat, and left a note
About how im giving up on life, with a bit of hope
I picked my coat, and ran out with a sniff off dope
She aint exactly a "dead man", but im sure the bitch will "float"
So i took her down to the river, where her bodie's bound
To be digested by pirhanna's before the bodies found
The cops think the got me now, but i've thought a head
I stood atop a bled, the corpse was cut up, long before the blob was dead
at last the cops rehearsed what the note had read.

"It's time to put an end to this relationship
Im sick of taking shit, from this bitch while she's tasting dick
I made a pick, hows the machete look? Pretty good you pasty bitch
Ive aldeady made the ditch, if i plan to bury the body
Best belive the devils got me, right now i'm feeling more metal than Ozzy
And i'll give some "real shots to kill for" while i murder this broad right infront of paparazzi."

Theres my verse, did it real quick figured it could be used as an opener or a closer.

Yo it's murder she wrote.

Yea...

I put a knife to a bitches throat, and left a note
About how im giving up on life, with a bit of hope
I picked my coat, and ran out with a sniff off dope
She aint exactly a "dead man", but im sure the bitch will "float"
So i took her down to the river, where her bodie's bound
To be digested by pirhanna's before the bodies found
The cops think the got me now, but i've thought a head
I stood atop a bled, the corpse was cut up, long before the blob was dead
at last the cops rehearsed what the note had read.

"It's time to put an end to this relationship
Im sick of taking shit, from this bitch while she's tasting dick
I made a pick, hows the machete look? Pretty good you pasty bitch
Ive already made the ditch, if i plan to bury the body
Best believe the devils got me, right now i'm feeling more metal than Ozzy
And i'll give some "real shots to kill for" while i murder this broad right infront of paparazzi."




news update*


A body was found today just east of zimbobwe
It was a pretty modern day, sun gleaming right where the body lay
Microphones picked up interviews of her father's say
Who said what he got to say, contemplating his father's day
A sad site as tears ran through this man's eyes
The man sighed, and dropped to his knees, in the same spot his FAM had died
HE asked why!?
Why so soon, he screamed with his eyes closed shut
He took a knife and jabbed it into his own gut
His organs struck, he bled the pain that he couldn't front
As he screamed the killer's name, right there the camera's cut


*fades to black*

That's my whole edited verse, i wrote it as a closer to be posted last in the collab, because it basically wraps up the story while leaving room for a sequel, hope you guys enjoy it.

^^ ill shit... everyone else PM me and payroll their verses after your claned them up...and we will put them together in the written rhymes section...

Nice key snale...

Thank you, any other collabs just give me a shout, i'm always down.

aight i got my Murder We Wrote verse ready...pm me if u wanna c it..send ur verses to Stevo...i dont feel like goin thru, puttin it together n all that...so Stevo u can take care of it

*Sham ill pm u a copy of it in a sec*
*And Snale...gimme a couple days to get that other collab verse together*
....but u jus want it 2 be me n u...or u want let the crew get in on it too?

Ight im gone start mine i'll be done before saturday... everyone show me their verses when your done ight? ttyl

She asked what it was like so I grabbed this reporter's mic/
It was divine power to watch my enemies bow and coware/
Feeling like im untouchable in my tower, flesh and blood is what I devour/
Walking in my facilites to clean off the blood and sin in my shower/

She asked why did I do it, I told her I just wanted to see a body split/
Cause the crimes that I commit are nothing close to legit/
The terror that I transmit is worth it each and every bit/

She asked If i'm ready for death, I told her "yes thats all I have left"/
I did this all while I was on a overkill of meth/
To stab a punch bitch till he took his final breath/

Now I set in my cell, a angel that fell/
Insanity ringing its bell/
pubilicity comes around just to hear me tell about my dreadful acts/
Like the time I killed that young girl when she was looking for her contacts/
Hell is missing one thing and i'm what it lacks/


[What do you guys think??/ I think its allright not my best but fairly allright] I did it pretty fast cause this is what I write the best

its good man...we will have like 4 or 5 verses on this piece and its going to be our first crew collab...so nothing will be perfect...point is...were here and making a statement...

ight.. i sent my verse to payroll... looking foward to the final project so who all is done and doing a verse for it?

aight Stevo... u want me 2 fwd u my verse...cuz ima let u put this together...its ur topic...n i really dont feel like doing it...so lemme kno wuts good

yea fwd it to me...I just got mine done..so thats me sham, you, snale... is anyone else on this or should I thread it up tonight?

Isn't remmy doing a verse on this one also? and how about conclusion

yeah im pretty sure rem is in...i dunno bout conclusion...someone gotta get in touch wit em...n i think hec wanted in too

but jus put a deadline on it...like tomm or sat...n if verses aint in by then...jus put it together wit out em

I'll try get in contact with conclusion and see if he is gone be in on this....I dont know about hetick haven't seen him around

aight straight...thats wut i was sayin tho...Stevo need 2 put a deadline for verses...then once it comes...jus put it together wit wut hes got...u should prolly use my verse somewhere in the middle...cause i kno i aint that great at topicals...but ill leave that 2 stevo...his project his decision on how he puts it together

DS bitches!!!!!!!!

Ight sounds good

yeah I'm in this drop verse tomorrow fam

ok tomorrow at midnight if you want in on it have ya verse ready...

Sweet... glad your gone be part of it remmy... my new name rules=) thanks to conclusion

dark, what state are you from?

"Murder We Wrote"...


Blend In
Situation Bending
Past Events Failed To Mention
Those Moments Of Tension
Subtract The Exstension
Don't Look In My Direction
Action After Corrections
45 Make Your Thought Change Directions
I'll Put So Many Bullets In Your Face
You'll See Your Reflection
Sawed-Off Blow Away The Center Of Attention
Cocked Back After I Murdered The Contact
Killed That Nigga Who Shot Back
And Then Burnt The Contract
Then I heard a "CLAK CLAK"
A Survivor Tugged At The Trigger Of His Mack
No Rounds Like A Boxing Ring Whom Fighters Lacked
Can't Believe That I Slacked
12 Gage Shells Disengaged
And Emptied The Chest Faster Than Pirates Greedily Enraged
At This Point
I Dropped 21 Like A Drunk Underaged Trying To Prove His Age
Hitman Erasing The Evidence Of An Evil Residence
After Being Tricked And Denied The Dead Presidents



I know its forced in all , but fuck it.........it is what it is

goood verse remmy... and im from wv right now snale

ay steve...wuts the word on this collab piece?...post the link when its done

It's up...http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=108224

I still have to get links...so if anyone has replied to any Written's in the past couple days...just send me the links so I can edit them in the collab...Thx

NEW COLAB
*********End Of The World*********
Be Descriptive...feelings...what your going to do...ect...
16-20 Lines...Make it ill as fuck guys...we have to make a statement on here...

Deadline Friday...

New Deadline...Due by Sunday...we all should be good with that...6 days...Aiiiiighht...

im in....i need 2 elevate my topical game...so ill get u something soon

Checking...when u say 16-20 lines...do u mean like 8-10 bars or wut??

this is gonna be sick...

ay Steve...Im sending my *End of the World* verse to u now...if ne body else wanna see it jus say the word n ill pm u a copy...(Hopefully my verse this time, will b a lil better)

where was my fucking notification?

right here...nobody sends out pm's LMAO...u gotta see a piece, see the deadline, n get ur verse in...so if u wanna b in on this...get ur verse to stevo b4 the deadline

ill try and do mine tomorrow

steve did u get my verse...im not sure if it went thru...lemme kno tho

OOO shit when is this due... make sure you till me, so i can get my verse done before this is over with.. allright?

And the topic is "End of the world" but tell me in more detail what you want from this collabo

NEW COLAB
*********End Of The World*********
Be Descriptive...feelings...what your going to do...ect...
16-20 Lines...Make it ill as fuck guys...we have to make a statement on here...

Deadline Friday...


there ya go..i think the new deadline is sunday night tho...

Okay thanks.... i'll work on this, goodluck

Yes I got your verse pay

Aight good...im lookin forward to this one...make sure u put up the link when its done n posted

yeah im down

either 11 or 12'th i'll have mine done.. ill send it to steveo when the shit is completed.. for sure ight

This is the end of existence
Show no resistance
Life is in the distance
Death is my only assistance
Riots & destruction
Politics & corruption
She-devils & seduction
Here is Lucifer with his introduction
Here is the Reaper with your instruction
Confessing my sins
Good fails and evil wins
The journey to hell now begins
Criminal actions
Sexual attractions
Brutal satisfactions
Cash in your soul, here comes the transactions
Pit lords, Demonic swords, Undead hordes
This is why human beings go into mental wards
Only death "NO REWARDS" So walk toward the inferno
Get raped by monsters in this twisted porno
The end of my beautiful conclusion
So I can stop all this confusion
To figure if its real or all a optical-illusion
This nightmare has me constricted
This hell has me convicted
Just as my psychic predicted



Sketchy, i been real sick... blah, tried to dumb it down cause im really not feeling well... so i'll give it to steveo

ay i think rem n dark should go get in on this collab
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=108565
i think yall 2 r the best at topicals...n its a chance 4 us to keep elevatin

awww payroll... im drunk but thats so sweet, when im fucking my bitch tonight i'll think of that comment lol hahaha im fucked up REMMMY ILLL MURDER YOU BITCH BUT I LOVE yoU BITcH

But im so drunk.... i dont know, i want to get well know before I go out and hit the big game

So remmmy... this is all your shit, im tooo wasted for this fucking crap... mnawwww mean bitch

^^^LOL FAM...love ya too kid

Sunday night deadline aiight I'll do my best to post up...

Much love to yall DS

coool man... so everyone the deadline is sunday night, make sure you have this shit done by today... everyone who was involved, so keep it raw and lets try hard with this shit for realz

i finished mine a while ago...n sent it too Stevo

yea i got 2 of em.... im got 1 hour i have to get a verse against burden in tonight...not really feelin it tho...but i need to dethrone this kid...

Good-luck on that steveo....Burden is pretty dope though hehehe, but goodluck homie

ay steve wuts the word on the End of the World Collab...jus put the link in here when its up

Ya man it will be a couple more days, only have 2 verses and mine is still "under construction" but by Wednesday it will be up guys..and if you still want to be in it...write a verse and Pm it to me

yo im going to rip aphiphany up in this league battle, i decided im not gonna drop the league just have to magane work and texting

3 verses for the end of the world collab... would want to put 1 more in it...make it nice whoever can finish it by tomorrow...cuz its going in the end spot..

Yah man... I rushed mine, and now the deadline changed lol..... but ooooo welllllllll, hopefully its done sooon

i'll have my verse done soon

the world is ending, doom is impending
hip hops my life, death is my sentence
my soul is an essence, attacking when threatened
chaos has sprung, armageddon was mentioned
People lash out, as a calm street turns hectick
Theres a battle of ethnics, cleansed by the medics
An out break among men, who's fate will regret it
To all you who said it, dooms day is dreaded
The world will destroy itself if you let it
Images show, the presidents men beheaded
All this is real life, not even an edit
God said man would destroy the world a promise he kept it.
So who's gonna repent when the skies collapse
Let your mind relax, breath deep as your eyes relax
Is your life on track? Hell no, but ya life is back
Second chances are given, when first chances are cracked
minus yaself from sin, if you know how to subtract
The prophecy gave ya son back, man you gotta love that
So put down the thug gats, step into the life of a warrior
I'll open the door for ya, cause life should mean more to ya
Yea, maybe now life will mean more to ya.

good verse snale... keep it up bro, love your work homie;) mad talent

Thanks bro

wordup!!!...hey whens the deadline for the E.O.T.W project?

erm. I'd like to post it tomorrow night, but whenever is fine.

good verse snale... keep it up bro, love your work homie;) mad talent

Since we have the time extent, if you wanna work on your verse while we're waiting for everyone, that would be efficient.


nah mean'?

Yea man , im at work right now, and I planned on posting it up tonight, but ext till Thur 11:59pm Est... I am posting it up midnight that night.

Ps... any verse corrections

send me the whole verse edited through a PM so I don't have to make the edits for you...thanks

Steve did i send you mine already?

yea I got it

iight good looks.

End Of The World Verse


Wokeup feeling blue
shadows outside my window
made sure I was really awake though
I was and I watched
no thought of what to do
Revelations took animation
and proved true
instinct took a affect
maybe its fear
gasping for air , errie sounds
I spilled the cup of beer that was on the floor from hours before
ran for the closet
grabbed the shotgun, but had no rounds
adrenaline tore through my contour
screams!
imagining the ghoulish themes
cant believe
cant be real, what my senses perceive
movement in the background
how can this not be a dream
banging on my door
windows breaking
my limbs are shaking
even worse I feel like fainting
God free me from this situation
heart racing
what it it I'm facing?
tv's on Emergency News didnt turn it off
before I fell into a snooze prior to
but couldnt her what was going on
cause at that movement I heard
another window bust
shit! I forgot to lock the backdoor
dark shadows came through, making sneery grunts
searching as they explored
shut the bedroom door blocked it with the dresser and bed
anyother furniture furthermore
grabbed the shotgun holding the barrel
to use as blunt force
beads of sweat dripping down my head
then I felt another conscious
as the fear subsided, replaced by Confidence
Guided by the words of The Prophets
my physical form transforming off it
feeding off the drums and trumpets
that ring from within the conquest
my flesh hardened and golden
bolden and emblazed with written code in hieroglyphics....

nice poetic structure, most people are gonna miss the rhyme scheme, but that's cause they're a littls slow.

good shit man.

lol I'm glad you caught that..
thanks Fam.

It's that End of The World Smoke
When My Thoughts Awoke
Like I Remembered Every Toke
Every Booty Stroke
Every I'll Line L Spoke
So I Sit Back And Relax
And Take Another Road...
About My life's Riches And Gold
Please Take Note...
I'm Only 20 Years Old
I've Never Lived With Big-Stacks
And Moved Smack, This Or That
But I Came Through When Asked Asked Upon
I Held My Family Together With A Lasting Bond
I believe if you live Freely you live Forever
So In that Case When Death Strikes I Guess Ill Never Endeavor

^^^short and sweet bro...nice

yep.....

So is that everyones verses?

divine...lmao...u need 2 help me wit my topicals...that shit was crazy...im wit snale...if u didnt pick up the poetry vibe 2 it...then u wont feel it...but the shit was sick...no hate to stevo cause ur verse was dope...i jus felt Divines...So gimme some tips...i got battling down...I think...but i need 2 diversify...get stevo 2 send u a copy of my verse for this collab..cuz i think i deleted it...Again no hate at stevo...nice short n sweet, wit solid imagery!

Ok ill drop ur verse pay

EDit


Its the End of the World, Time to make some important decisions
Ill ignore goin 2 Prison...Shit! Since Im'a die anyway, Ill jus spray the 4 wit Precision/
Say Fuck the courtroom decision, Im not abortin the mission
I put the nickel-plate, right in ya face, til Im Distorting ya Vision/
Cause Im Robbing whoever I see
Nobody maneuver like Me
thats y Ill b remembered a Legend, Even wit-out a Conclusive I-D/
Dudes Who use 2 Try Me, kno I been around death, since about Age 9
so I been anticipating the situation, so I Stand like a Man, n I Take Mine/
Eyes Open n Chest Out...A real G, see I cant hide
I got too much Damn Pride...
n Cowards spend Lifetimes, searching for Heart, that they Cant Find/
So they Spit, But they Cant Rhyme!...n Inside, Afraid of Facing Reality
so unlike me, theyll just be remembered...as another Percentage Fatality/
the members is mad at me...
Cause I get Better wit Pressure, which is y I kill It in crunchtime
How??...I get straight, Off a Eighth...Of some Chemical Fungi/
thats Mushrooms if u dont know...Waiting on Death, But it Wont Show
Oh, I see It Now...n my girl screaming, "No!...PayRoll Dont...No!"
No!...PayRoll Dont Go.../

Oi so when is this being posted on the written ???/ curious

divine...lmao...u need 2 help me wit my topicals...that shit was crazy...im wit snale...if u didnt pick up the poetry vibe 2 it...then u wont feel it...but the shit was sick...no hate to stevo cause ur verse was dope...i jus felt Divines...So gimme some tips...i got battling down...I think...but i need 2 diversify...get stevo 2 send u a copy of my verse for this collab..cuz i think i deleted it...Again no hate at stevo...nice short n sweet, wit solid imagery!


I just try to imagine things in first person and really try to add some fantasy/creativity to it Pay...

thanks Fam...

Yea it's a lot to do with flow and imagery, paint a picture using detail.

Yep....So this collabo is pretty much done

POOOOOOOOST...

it Fam

Yah for real post it lol....

are we there yet? are we there yet?

YAH!! lol snale you crack me up son... thats why i'm gone to punt your first born like a pigskin across the interstate =) def love fam

Lolol

has this collab been posted yet?

Everyone who was in the collab, please reply to one written rhyme and drop the link in here, I will get a mod to edit them in...other then that, its about to get posed

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=109153
collab up im feeling it...goood shit fellas

Lets keep pumping these collabs out man....
It keeps us sharp and active....
Everbody should take intiative. call out a topic at some point and be head of the project.....


I wanna do a collab called. "I Used To Love Her".....obviously about an old flame

Um I'll post my verse up here soon as I have it. So yall can get a feel for it.....

im on that with ya dt

oh im def down with that,I like that topic

Im in...

Im in also Dt... for sure

I dug deep

for hearts sake, lets say that heart break
is a dark way, to see how much pain a heart takes
dark days gloom before we embark ways
dark shade, covers the soul before the marks made
chart ways, to leave behind the things that we said
separate the lies from the things that we meant
penetrate the lies that are released from your head
Generate a sign, to release when we're dead
Memories sneek up when i sleep on my bed
i can smell your scent on the sheets that i dread
your beliefs all thats left, in a room full of meth
take me away from world, im immune to your best
your eyes serve the lies, that protrude from your breath
i despise all the times, from the june when we met
you jaded my life for all i had left.
in a moments notice, you served a love spell like hocus pocus
the lowest components, are fed as the locust engulf it
i never thought that you'd be out of my life
out of my site, outta my might
theres nothing i can do, i guess you were right
but i set my sights, and your there, blessed as my wife
corressed as i smite, im depresses as i write
pen touches the pad, but whats left at the end of the night?
You were my sunishe, i was your rays
i portrayed every inch of happiness you displayed
when your were sick and they left, i always stayed
when the homies left to ball, i never played
the things that we had, i'd never trade
if i didn't see you for a minute, i'd sware it were days
What happened to us?
sometimes i sit back and wonder
How the lightning carries on when it's away from its thunder
how the fall leaves collapse, do distant from summer
how can she feel so low, when i'd put not one person above her?
sometimes i wonder.

feelin it homies?

sunishe?...

ill poetry Fam...
dope!

sunshine, haha sorry.

Im feeling it man... good shit thurr

after this^^ collab...i think we should do jus a straight "Def Syndicate" collab...jus rep the roster n all that...its the perfect way 2 self promote!..lemm kno wut u think

Im not into self hype. I think it's ignorant to glorify yourself, just let your work speak for you.

Im not into self hype. I think it's ignorant to glorify yourself, just let your work speak for you.

LMAO...i hear u...i wasnt sayin it literally...i mean jus like a crew collab..where u show wut u do best...some ppl do topicals crazy n some do metas, punches etc. etc...something like the intro on the ol Ruff Ryder..wit snoop, n jada n all that...jus like a straight crew collab

EDIT: Shit...we could even have kodez do his verse audio...n jus link the soundclick or w/e Into the verse

True, i was just letting you know how i felt about it generally.

nah...point well-taken...but i jus wanted 2 explain the idea i was really goin for

BTW...wussup wit our tag battles?...i been tryin 2 battle for a min..lemme kno wus good wit that

Idk man, my battles lately have been being clogged my multiplaxed, spamming the chat trying to get people to vote against me, as i marked in my sig, it's some immature shit.

Did Dt tell us the dead line on this collabo? if not he should lol so I get mine done

Beauty so divine, her lips and thighs blew my mind
Her elegance was cascaded over mankind, plus that bitch was fine
Them lips trickled down with venom, titties you could swore implants was in'em
She had fingernails that cut like a adament claw, the bitch was maraculis in all
The girl had men about to trip and fall, what grace we all saw
A true goddess of enteral perfection, had me up all night with a erection
Couldn't get her off my mind or her smell off my skin, bitch has to be a infection
Her delicate touch that gave me goosebumps, faster and faster my heart pumps
But its all over now shes nothing but a ghost, so let me make a toast
A tyrant and queen drinking from the same gaunlent, here's the time spent
The bitch told me it was over, to go get bent
My "Old Flame" how she fluttered so bright, then she left me that faithful night
I see her in my dreams with wings soaring without a care, never able to touch her makes it no fair
In the streets I see her on every block and I stare, that heartache she left with me I can't bare
Once a breed of no emotion is now crying a tear filled ocean
The pain renders me still, so I set in my room and pop a sleeping pill
Just to see her again and again, with no fucking end
Lesson Learned
Feeling Burned
Head Turned
Love comes and goes but the emptyness it always grows




[My verse for DT'S COLLABO]

Much Love On The Topic

Respect DS FAM

DT...i sent u my verse...lemme kno if u got so i can make sure

working on mine but i have a huge topical tourney right now which a 30-40 line verse

I got it Pay and Snale , DM NICE verses bro...
take your time Stevo

I got a tourney and RW collab to do too...
our last collab got slept on MAJOR shits dead at the moment
but dont worry this is still going down!

Cool no rush... illl be busy playing unreal tourment and some old school rpg games like ff5 and seiken densetsu3... and thanks Dt.. I try =)

wus the word on this latest collab

its gonna go down...

just shit deAd at the moment...
just waiting to pickup abit

Cool... can't wait to see what yall come up with, espically payroll and DT.. who is coming up with the next collabo? if no one is I might have a cool topic

im listenining^^

Edit: n jus so im clear i was askin about the "used to love her" piece...i wasnt sure if u knew...but as far as the next piece...i have no ideas really...but im in on wutever

my verse is the only one needed for that collab...

everyone did a great job...

just give me a few days I've been doing everything half assed lately and need some respite

Allright Dt... no rush bro, so whats the next collabo gone to be... i had a idea, I thought we could do one about medi-evil times...but i dont know, someone might have a better idea

Yo guys I will be out of town till saturday, going to visit my family...If you have enough verses for that love collab then go ahead and post it, if you want to wait till sat/sun for me to submit one DT then that would work too... Either way it would be fire so thats all that matters. Be back Saturday brothers.

Whats the word on the collabo...?????? i'm about to a collabo with .Retrospect. so tell me whats going on with this "old flame" one and when its up on the written

name a topic n well get it goin

"The old flame joint"....gonna be up between today and sunday

Our last collab got hella slept on....prolly cause it was to much for people to read

Darkmatter I been wanting to do a collab wit cha homie....feel free to send me something to get me startd

Pay we need to drop some heat fam on a tag collab too...

And the next group collab???

yeah i was bout to say that...u gimme a topic for our tag collab n ill have a verse ready for u...

as far as the next group collab...im down wit wutever...jus need a topic...I say "Traitors"

yeah i was bout to say that...u gimme a topic for our tag collab n ill have a verse ready for u...

as far as the next group collab...im down wit wutever...jus need a topic...I say "Traitors"

Lol bro I was fucking thinking that, but was like nahhh he aint worth it....I'll just do a drop dedicated to him like the one I did for apiphany(though I doubt he read it)

lmao...it jus popped in my head..but lemme kno..ur the topical king...so u name a topic n ill spit

topical king?...lol
I'll post some shit up and yall can lay verses to it...
last person to drop verse posts collab
aiight fam
lets just keep it moving...

DS

lol Dt... I got collabo to do with retrospect... the me and you will do something i'll post the topic in here... when i'm ready much love fam

I'll throw some topical ideas out here for the next collabo....

On a acid trip
Making your way to the top
Medi-Evil Rap
School shooting like (Like Columbine... no what I mean)
Thoughts On War
No Can Fuck With Us (DS Theme Rap)
Or what Pay said Traitors also a good one

hmmmm...

Hmmmmmm yes hmmmmm

i like no one can fuck wit us...but i like traitor too...but i like no one can fuck wit us the best...its should jus b me, dt, dm, n stevo...cause im about to remove the rest...we the only ones whos really active...cause im skeptical on conclusion...n i dunno wuts wit kodez

Pay send them to the pendelum.....

its been Done

For real man... people need to get serious

Yo fam...

I've been on a writers block camped out...

Gimme a minute...

I'm ready to do a collabo with you DT...if you are up for it, just get at me back on this thread.. peace

Tell me if you got any good topics....I'm gone set here and think of a few...DM Out

I am good with all of them, traitors, and no one can fuck with us... I got some energy im about to bring and im need to write something sick...and with us 4...who the fuck needs more at the moment, 4 horsemen son recognize it, but if some1 comes around im sure we can add to the sickness

so wuts the topic...cause im feelin the same way as steve at this moment...got some shit i need 2 say...n it needs to be said this way...so lets pick!

Im a take DT's idea n run wit it...So the topic is "No one Can Fuck Wit Us"...if its cool ill put this one together...send me ur verses...lets say by Thurs 11/8...Midnight...if u need extensions say it now...its only 4 of us shouldnt b to hard...so if its cool wit everyone ill take care of this one...Just get the verses into me

im blazing so ima write this shit up right now

Good shit...i pretty much got mine done for this topic...im jus doin a few touch ups

EDIT: lmao...btw...i jus got finished gettin fried when i did most of mine

Lol i'll start on mine tomorrow... when I ain't so damn tired... :) Good to see that we are up and running and welcome back steveo

Risen within black cloaks, arched with steel wings, lyrical assassins with a heavenly creed
Riding on a hell spawned undead steed, no emotions cause there is no need
Digging ten foot graves for the slaying, Rituals of heretics that are praying
Necromancers calling up the dead from the infernal pits, Cerberus guarding our detached hearts
Trained in the most deadly sadist arts, Undead villians climbing up the charts
Chapters torn and no longer containing certain parts
We ain't tyrants or demi-gods, we ain't soulja boys, we are forsaken apostles
Wandering phantoms that are nothing but dust and fossils
Clashing blades and daggers in the atomsphere, fearless barabians pillaging and drinking beers
Masters of deception with no strings attached only turning rusty gears
Never spoken in a house of god, Never looked upon by religious eyes
Monsters and demons that joined the alliance, Turning human remorse into plagues of flies

The finished Verison



Risen within black cloaks, arched with steel wings, lyrical assassins with a heavenly creed
Riding on a hell spawned undead steed, no emotions cause there is no need
Digging ten foot graves for the slaying, Rituals of heretics that are praying
Necromancers calling up the dead from the infernal pits, Cerberus guarding our detached hearts
Trained in the most deadly sadist arts, Undead villians climbing up the charts
Chapters torn and no longer containing certain parts
We ain't tyrants or demi-gods, we ain't soulja boys, we are forsaken apostles
Wandering phantoms that are nothing but dust and fossils
Clashing blades and daggers in the atomsphere, fearless barabians pillaging and drinking beers
Masters of deception with no strings attached, only turning rusty gears
Never spoken in a house of god, Never looked upon by religious eyes
Monsters and demons that joined the alliance, Turning human remorse into plagues of flies
Serial killers and over-grown rats walk these corridors, ask payroll's S.T.D. tainted bitches for the full blown tours
We smoke the finest grass from the netherrealm's garden, we suck down the sweetest liquor from a succubi's tit
Spending my deathtolling days with a divine tradegy, A poetic lyricist we all call majesty
Victims that are hung from their halo's, Steveo places the whisker basket for the decaptation
This is are world, this is are dimension, this is are morbid nation
The Def Sin Da Kit working the bag with a thousand man hit, We don't really give a fucking shit
A doorway opening a world of suffering and internal pain, Welcome to the merry go round of death
when you got nothing left this is where you go for that last breathe
You struggle for the vintrilaquist's reach, grasp the hand of unspoken hate
This is the def syndicate fate, so embrass it mortals
Chuck your martielistic errors out the door, and walk into the gapping portals
We all chose this fork in the road, we continue the sith's path
SO FEEL THE DEF'S WRAITH

DRess Up For The DeF DestructiOn Hahaha

Awesomely done....
Great imagery , nice name playss....

Needs some spell check though

Instead of ARE in some spots use OUR

Only problem I'm thinking is that's a lot of content and with the rest of us it might be to much to keep a readers attention....but if were doing it for the sake of self elevation and staying sharp then were good

I apologize for my inactivity I needed some down time I haven't forgot about our current collabs....

nah its straight i been busy myself lately..but everyone get me there verse ill try 2 have this up by sunday

Ight i'm gone dumb down a bit.. but i dont think i'll lose any detail on it cause...I'm known for graphical nature

fixed the errors....spelling that is


Risen within black cloaks, arched with steel wings, lyrical assassins with a heavenly creed
Riding on a hell spawned undead steed, no emotions cause there is no need
Digging ten foot graves for the slaying, Rituals of heretics that are praying
Necromancers calling up the dead from the infernal pits, Cerberus guarding our detached hearts
Trained in the most deadly sadist arts, Undead villians climbing up the charts
Chapters torn and no longer containing certain parts
We ain't tyrants or demi-gods, we ain't soulja boys, we are forsaken apostles
Wandering phantoms that are nothing but dust and fossils
Clashing blades and daggers in the atomsphere, fearless barabians pillaging and drinking beers
Masters of deception with no strings attached, only turning rusty gears
Never spoken in a house of god, Never looked upon by religious eyes
Monsters and demons that joined the alliance, Turning human remorse into plagues of flies
Serial killers and over-grown rats walk these corridors, ask payroll's S.T.D. tainted bitches for the full blown tours
We smoke the finest grass from the netherrealm's garden, we suck down the sweetest liquor from a succubi's tit
Spending my deathtolling days with a divine tradegy, A poetic lyricist we all call majesty
Victims that are hung from their halo's, Steveo places the whisker basket for the decaptation
This is our world, this is our dimension, this is our morbid nation
The Def Sin Da Kit working the bag with a thousand man hit, We don't really give a fucking shit
A doorway opening a world of suffering and internal pain, Welcome to the merry go round of death
when you got nothing left this is where you go for that last breathe
You struggle for the vintrilaquist's reach, grasp the hand of unspoken hate
This is the def syndicate's fate, so embrass it mortals
Chuck your martielistic errors out the door, and walk into the gapping portals
We all chose this fork in the road, we continue the sith's path
SO FEEL THE DEF'S WRAITH

Dizzope!!!

So whens this shit gone be up and running on the writtens??? I want see what everyone had down on this

as soon as i get everyones verse ill put it up.. i was hoping sometime sunday

ill try and get it to you guys, i got a couple more lines to drop on this herb in one of our battles...then back to the piece..got a couple bars of it done been driving back and forth between states for familiy and shit guys..but im trying

aint no rush...ill put it up as soon as i get verse from u and DT..n ill send everyone my finished verse too before i post it up....so we can all have an idea

OOo Is This Is The Sig Eh??? I like it

yeah its pretty dope..

Its The ShizNAT MOFO DT

Ok...now as far as the "No One Can Fuck Wit Us" Piece, im puttin a 48 hr deadline on it as of NOW...so if i dont have ur verse SENT/POSTED by thurs 10 pm...itll jus become me n DM's collab...tryin 2 keep these collab pieces moving sorry...

Wow I just seen this now...
Won't be able to get in on this
You and DM got this 1 fam
Represent..

Dt I'll miss you bro :(...A lot

^^^scratch that homie..
We gonna make it

Cool..:) good word man

Since the last collab fell apart...lets do a new topic..jus us 3..cause stevo is goin b on n off...so someone name a topic n deadline n lets the piece 2gether ASAP

Fam last collab aint fall apart "I Used To Love Her" still going to happen....

And DM got a sick verse for that DS collab ya diggs....

Now that I feel refreshed I will be picking up activity....

ok...i wasnt even think bout the i used 2 love her piece, i was jus waitin for that to get posted...i was talkin bout the DS collab...but if u still want it on im wit it..i got like bunch of diff material for that one...so lemme kno...we'll rep it jus us 3 for now...i wanna send both of yall some of the shit i wrote cause its a bunch diff stuff...i was like sporadically puttin it toghther when i was f'd up...so in a nutshell..Get At Me!

Hmmm...I'll drop a few good new topical suggestions for us

True meaning of life [Each of us tell what we think the meaning of life is]
Betrayed/Backstabber is still a lingering topic
Poverty and struggling
Tales Of Horror [Three horrific tales of murder,suicide,or whatever scary or freakish]

ok i like the tales of horror n betrayed...so lemme kno the deal wit that...And DT get me that DS collab verse so i can get that piece up 2

Betrayed sounds good..I VOTE ON THAT ONE

Im wit the betrayal piece definantley...But i jus got an idea for a new crew topical...its my first real idea so im happy so lemme kno wut u think

Its called "Why I do/did It..."

spit about why u rap, hustle, commit murder,fuck broads, Anything u Feel...Lemme kno wut u think..cause i was think of doin it solo...but i think its a good topic i wanna collab on

Sounds dope fam
Only thing is we have to limit our verses so that people can read the collabs without losing interest from laziness....

I'll get on this... I have time to write just can't be online all the time... and shortening the verses would be a good idea... 10-12 lines?

Yah... that sounds good...payroll has a good idea,But Dt I WANT SEE YOUR VERSe BEFORE I WRITE MINE LOL... :) cause I like to see your work gives me inspiration

Stevo want me to smash u in Call of duty 4 send me a friend request when ya got a chance....

Rest of yall nigs to to buy an Xbox...


DM I don't know what ya talking about it U who got me back into writing fam...

Hahah... Man When I move, Im getting my xbox back and.. i'll own yo ass at any game you got DT :) FOR SURE [IM thE CHamPion]

i dont do Xbox lmao...PS for me...but when the topics been decided n everything settled lemme kno the details so i can get another verse

and my bad for not sendin the verse to the DS collab piece...i completely forgot..but ill get it to u asap ---------> Everyone

So Whens The Next Deadline for this new collabo.. So I Know

i dunno...lets wait til jk signs n and find out where stevo stands...then we can work out the details...but i still wanna put up that DS collab piece too...n it works out nicely cuz kno J can get in on it 2

I'm down with that topic...very general but we can make it fresh..."Why I do What I do"...nice topic Pay. When's the deadline?

lets say 8-10/12 bars...not really sure on that, dont want it to be 2 long...but lets say due Fri...i would say thurs but i gotta work all day again...so i WILL get it done n posted if all verses r in by friday

Topic: Why I do, What I Do...

^Thursday is turkey day fam...maybe sunday nite instead, post it monday morning?

o yeah! my bad...i wasnt even thinkin...yeah sunday will work

Oi Sounds good, I'll probably have mine done by then, why I still got it fresh on the mind..Ight

I Devil the outside with my pen that proceeds with no angels at the end
Ghastly monstrosities that I send and the puss filled wounds that I mend
Deflowering a bitch then calling up her daddy for ransom cause he is rich
Mailing little parts to his P.O. Box as I bury her under a stack of rocks
Using her severed skin for my own recipe the cops come im ready to flee
I stand behind a sycamore tree as I wait for the killer to rise up in me
Strangling my victims with barbwire then I catch them on fire like richard pyer
They feel the reaper holding them around the waist as I turn them into waste
Scars up and down my face feeling my heart beat speed up in pace
So I set behind these concrete walls as I feel my macabre ways start to stall


Tell me what you think, i'll redo do it, if you dont like it

^^^what collab is that for....

Honestly I didn't like that joint...
The flow was stretched, almost poetic
The imagery was bland
Basically if you read that verse from another persons perspective would it awwww you?

Sorry fam, but I know what you can do and that wasn't impressive...

Much love and respect

i dont even know which piece that is for, but i agree wit DT, this aint you....i think u should re-do it...i know for a fact, it could be way sicker...and youve got the skill to make it happen...go read some other pieces...maybe itll give u some inspiration, Works 4 Me

And wut piece was that for anyway?

Lol no idea... what is the collabo we are doing right now????? yah I wasnt feeling it either, i got work on my shit

Just a reminder...

Verses for "Why I do, What I do" collab are due by midnight, Sun (25th)...Its goin up on Monday morning or sometime Monday

Bars= 8 min, 12 Max, Anything Over will be Cut off at the Limit...Just tryin 2 keep it short...So work wit me

Stay Up!

why I do what I do???/ and this follows under what, like why you write or rap??? not really getting it.. fill me in, plus my net will down for awhile so ill have mine done before sunday hopefully,if not just do it without me

Im wit the betrayal piece definantley...But i jus got an idea for a new crew topical...its my first real idea so im happy so lemme kno wut u think

Its called "Why I do/did It..."

spit about why u rap, hustle, commit murder,fuck broads, Anything u Feel...Lemme kno wut u think..cause i was think of doin it solo...but i think its a good topic i wanna collab on

^^^^^DarkMatter

yooooooo...PAY

D.C wants in...
fuck votes on this one fam
kids dope

"Why I do/did It..." sooo its this one eh?? well okay thats all good... ill have mine up soon and I won't suck it up this time

Why?, thats the question
Everyone is looking for the answer
I got in the game like terminal cancer
Infected the sights like a disfigured belly-dancer
Raising the unwanted speech like a vengeful necromancer
I came here from the arcane silence
Jolted up and signed with the star-crossed alliance
I was rebelious an hungry for defiance so I split the scence
Walking in the dusk looking mean waiting for my moment
to make a little green but all my efforts where unseen
Up all night chugging down caffeine an writing my stories like
Every day was halloween then that day happened when I hit 18
Pushed out of dark and walked out of my purgatory and stepped up
With mighty fury and started up my brand new story

Thats all I got... kinda sucks -sigh-
If you wanted me to add more just say so... kinda I suck lately

Fuck this spill... im doing my verse over cause im not digging this and im really dissapointed in myself lately, im lacking and unmotivated....but im gone get back into my usual state of mind and fucking write better then this shit.. so I apologise...Ugh well enough me being a drama bitch lol ill just work on it

Just a reminder...

Verses for "Why I do, What I do" collab are due by midnight, Sun (25th)...Its goin up on Monday morning or sometime Monday

Bars= 8 min, 12 Max, Anything Over will be Cut off at the Limit...Just tryin 2 keep it short...So work wit me

Stay Up!


Jus uppin this thread again...so everyone knows n can get there verses in..i wanna get this piece up

Hahah pay you got your verse done yet.. if so i'd like to see it so send me what you got in a message, just curious :)

aight i got jaekae verse...still waitin on everyone elses...lets get em in...

Verses??

Rather busy.. im gone try to get my verse in ASAP... but im having a hard time concentrating on it.. with all this hustle in my neck of the woods... so ill try :) love you fam

Grew up in a wasteland that was full of dirt instead of sand
Never had anyone willing to give me a hand just left me damned
My anger turned into suffering then into rage, I was losing hope in my own cage
Every step, Every page, was ripped split into with a executionor axe
I had my limits I was drove to the max, my ego crumbling, scratches turned into cracks
I turned my hate into ink that sealed away the lesser imps, I was getting hustled like a bitch to a flock of pimps
My rebelious side turned into a demonic thrill, each of problems drowned away with booze and pills
I felt the sting that came with my unsettling curse, It seemed insanity poured from each an every verse
I was holding it all away in a vault that has now brought me to this occult
I was made this way and its not my fault, So now I found my home between this pen and papper




Thats all I got i'm rather busy, I'm gone try to get more active and have more time to work on shit when I move... so keep it real,

Much Love Fam

"Why I do what I do"

The best of both worlds creating the worst the blessing cursed since birth
Observing hidden spectrums within the earth saddened smirks barbaric quirks
Amongst the shadows I lurk sadystic outbursts but protected by divinity wars within taken tolls continually crucial conflicts killing me and resurrecting the madness product of the past's rashness
Cold and sullen laughing burning with trapped men looking back ten years later saying, "What happened"?
Wired for destruction like terrorist production but Heavens ways divide my functions pushing for me to be triumphant...


Prolly not what u expected Pay...
I know
I did this on my Sidekick so structure might be off...

im thinking bout givin a extension on this...i dont want the pieces to be rushed...ima send yall mine now...but lets put like a 24 hr extension on this..i want this to be a quality collab...not all rushed n forced

Put your verse or Jaekaes verse up for some inspiration or something....
Personally I felt though my verse was rushed it details my struggles and what I'm going through...

i jus sent all of u my verse...but ill send J's Now..his shits way doper than mine

Everyones verse is aiight, but I think Jae hit it on the button on what Pay wanted...
Me and DM took it a bit more personal and defined who we were as people...
Pay had a nice verse incorporating the crew


I think we should pair up me and DM collab / Jae and Pay...

I'll rewrite/touch up my verse cause it might be to short and insignificant

Im wit that...but how should i post it up...or u want me 2 jus post up me n J's n let u n DM post ur own...or u want me 2 wait n post em up together...cause i gotta verse from Kon 2...thatll ill send in tomm. cause i gotta go 2 bed...gotta work at 7...so jus lemme kno the details n ill take care of it tomm afternoon

Thats a smart idea Dt.. cause if it is all together people will get caught up in one style and disslike the other if we seprate the different styles and put the others together it would work better so im all for it and I'll touch up my verse just like DT will, so I agree with that cause me and dt have a similar style and payroll and jaekae have a kinda layed back style that isnt as emotional but yah good idea DT, much love fam

ok 2 things...Now that the roster additons have been made official

First, ima give another 24 hr extension on the why i do piece...give the new dudes a chance 2 get in on it if they want

Second, now that the roster is what it is...lets bring back the DS Collab...ill put up the details later, jus a heads up tho...i wanna put this back 2 gether

i'll have about 3 bars for you tomorrow morning

yooo Pay your verse against Zulou in the tourney was craaazy fam..
looks like you went over the 4 to 6 bars though, but like you said once ya start u cant stop huh...

yooo Pay your verse against Zulou in the tourney was craaazy fam..
looks like you went over the 4 to 6 bars though, but like you said once ya start u cant stop huh...


o shit...i thought it was 5-8 bar limit

i got me 4 bars together... do i post it here or PM Pay? and when yall droppin this?

w/e u wanna do...up 2 u...its gonna go up hopefully tonite...i send the link once its put together n up

Why do what I do? Well, my first off all is the worse of all…
I curse them all… cuz when my shit hit the fan it’s the first to fall//
What I mean? I get hatred for my “labor” but I “birthed them all”…
I’ma solid originator but these hating faggots bout as stable as a circus wall//
The reason I spit ruthless, can’t a fucker out here man me…
If a rolling stone gathers no “Moss”… you might miss out on Randy//
So – I’m the diamond in the rough… that’s why yall can’t stand me…
We DS, we always bring our “A” game… yall more like “Plan B”//

I'll try have to my verse done by this morning or.. later today

If u havent seen wut i posted in the other thread...Id like to do one last Crew collab wit DT b4 he goes...i want EVERYONE on this...i mean EVERYONE...well work out the details n shit lata...i jus wanted 2 make sure all were cool wit this

^Word, I'm in.

Word I'm In Also thats my boy

I think i may have convinced DT to stay...And wit that said we can put that piece on hold

But i do have a new idea that should help us get working...Since we seem to be having trouble gettin a piece together...i think i have a nice topic for us...or it could b weak not really sure..But imo we BS'ing...all we do is keep talkin bout collabing n havent done shit!...SO my idea for a piece is called:

DS Presents: "A Topical Keystyle" (Collab)

that should give everyone freedom to do their own style for a collab...No more than 8 bars (our rosters increased a lil)...i'll set a due date once i hear from everyone...Can we please get a piece up wit all the currently active members? It's Time!

^^^DOPE IDEA...

:( my fault bout them other collabs, they still going up though before 2010

I like that idea for a colab..."It's Time"...

I been busy lately but of course I will try, to make time for the def family

well tell us wuts a good time 4 u...cause this piece needs to get done...n i havent set a deadline yet....So EVERYONE is IN on this no questions asked...its an easy piece...spit a topical however u spit a topical..."Topical Keystyle"...it shouldnt b a prob for ne one...all the new additons, orginal members...i want everyone on this

Well i'm ready for the new collabo... and I think we all should pair up... Like me with Shatter, Payroll with Steveo, D.C. With Jaekae, and so on

im tired of beggin for group collab pieces...so when it happens it happens...until then im lookin for like 2 or 3 guys who wanna do a collab...if u got ne ideas for a topic then drop em when u say In...

whatever happened with the last topical?

only got 3 verses!...everyone had other shit to do...thats y i im sayin...if ne one is interested n free 2 do a collab right now under the DS label...then get wit me...im accepting the first 2 or 3 who accept n can get it done soon

^I'm in.

ok thats me n jae...who else?

Jae u got any topic ideas

ok thats me n jae...who else?


me you and Jae... we aint gotta have a drawn out process.... put verses together and drop it.... my goal is to drop something w/ everybody on DS... everybody that does text at least

Eh im not sure if i'll be on board for this collabo, I got a collabo to do with lyrica rogue and shit.. so i'll see depending on when i get that done

aight then itll jus be us three...Whats the topic?

we can have a 3-fold prespective of the same topic... good/evil/truth(outcome)... type shit... on some guilty conscience shit... just a suggestion... i dunno what the actual circumstance would be... but do yall get where i'm going tho?

no i get it...something like the Good, the Bad n the Ugly...i actually like the idea...we jus gotta figure out how we gonna do it...like the actual topic...the good, bad , ugly (about wut)

lets expand on that idea...jae n dc lemme kno if u come up wit ne thing..cause if push come to shove...we can jus do like "DS, The Good,The Bad & The Ugly...thats kinda generalized tho...so get at me

I'm down with whatever. Ya'll know I key up all my shit anyways...

we can jus do like "DS, The Good,The Bad & The Ugly...thats kinda generalized tho...so get at me


^lets do that then.... i'll be the ugly... lol... and we can just spit from that

after reading this thread, Snale sent me this PM..... i think it's a pretty good idea... let me know what yall think....


Suggestion about 'The good, the bad, and the ugly' collab.
I saw you guys were contemplating a way to figure out what you wanna do with the topic.
May i make a suggestion?
Make it as if it were someones life, how it started good, went bad, and got ugly.
The story is up to you, but maybe like, things were going good than they got into something.
And they had to do some bad/illegal shit to get out of it
and it got ugly from there'
See what im getting at?
-------
I'd be interested in jumping in as well, i can play the part of a narrater and spit a spoken word before each new verse?
Get at me.

I like it!

I like it!

dope..

yeah he sent me the same message...so details?

I Used To Love Her



thinking of the past has me doubting the future
love so sweet Heaven tried to recruit her
shorty's presence is like kids anticipating their Christmas presents
I could never get enough of her essence
as I scorn lifes lessons reflecting on a love
that should have never been questioned
never overpowered what should have been destined
with selffish intentions, but within my mind
her name will always be mentioned
since that wrong decision I keep the memories clenched in
while thinking what could have been
though the little time I had was the BIGGEST bless'n
every moment we had were my brighest days
and even at my darkest moment I will never forget them

???/ whats this about... didn't we already do this??, I could swore i wrote a versus for that

yeah i was thinkin the same thing...But im still tryin 2 get a piece done...but we neva agreed on the topic (me, j, n dc) it neva got worked out
but we seriously need 2 get something done...i keep sayin it n sayin it...but we still aint got many pieces up wit majority of us so can we get it done

just let me know...im going to take a break from the writtens section for a while (100+ writtens in 1.5 years). My eyes are on the topical league. But I am always down to show that our crew is the illest.

Yah ... I knew i did a verse for that "Old flame shit" ..... and yah I noticed we had what like 1-2 collabos up and we did like 4-6? or someshit like that, I just don't get it... we need to figure a way to get people to hit the -DeadLine- without delay

ya'll need figure out the topic first.

Yah for real.. we need one topic and one only... and something simple and not too complicated... so get them minds working.. espically you shatter, you little bitch zit

aiight..


true that