im tryin to get down with the crew that stands out amongst the others...heres some of my shit

like paper i'm easily "ripping-you" - i'll rip out ya organs and give 'em to denz for your "inner-view!!"...lol (interview)

charged-wit-dat-shit that "blasts-domes" - face it yo - sweating is the only time you got "phat-flows"...

i got wins in "stacks" - i buried DBO in the front garden but heard you like it in the "back!"

lyrical fire i "douse wit" - are you scared of mice? cuz kid jump whenever my "mouse-clicks!"..

i got respect i'm ill - inhaling ma spits then sneezing is the only krooks "blessed" wit skill...


ill plow thru any so called rapper i stay "pump" like "reeboks"/
even without a beat dropped, ill "wear" quiz "out" like "fat people" who "speed walk"/
now 2 b honest with this, stop actin like dis rap shit is all in da wrist/
ill have on u on da "phone" wit "nicoderm" da way ull b "callin" it "quitz"/
crushin his hopez 2 b dope tryna touch everyhing dat i spoke/
ill have ya "moms" write ya "obituary", so ya kno itz "murder she wrote"/
u cant beat Pump kid so face it/
imma "mess" ya "head" up like a "blowjob" wit "braces"/
im shocked u battle deze catz on dis board n managed 2 win fairly/
ya raps gettin "dumb n dumber" like da flick wit "jim carey"/
so dont come at me wit no wimpy grammar/
using "rappers" as "weapons", ill shatter ya skull wit MC's hammer/
like absent students im da one u cant test, so ya plans "wrecked"/
u couldnt "spit-tight" if ya "saliva" was "spandex"/
i cook beef betta den da grill made 4rm george foreman/
toss ya "mind" in a "cloud", holla wen u finished "brain stormin"/
im coming up wit nothing and end da end X's still clueless/
i feel like kobe bryant, " i neva forced u 2 do dis"/
comin at me u betta not have a "bird chest" like u play in "st.louis"(st.louis cardinals)/
face dis test, help u recognize, who's really da best/
do me a favor quiz, put ya "lungz" in a "piggy bank" n "save" ya "breath"/


ayo scorpion if ya "writtens" was "lethal" u still wouldnt have a "ill"-spit/
even if he was rappin with his "anus",i still wouldnt feel-"shit"/
for real-bitch,i dont know why scorp tryna hold it down-as-a-spitter/
his fuckin verse wouldnt "flow" if his fuckin "mouth-was-a-river"/
im "drownin-his-scriptures",i come with drops that are "liquid"/
im on some sick-shit,this "beat down" make u end up as a "midget"/
u a bitch-kid, i attack ya track, and smack u wack, yo i dont give-a-fuck/
my style IS flawless bitch,call me "2pac" the way i "hit-u-up"/
u think-ur-tough?,dawg,u know im about to rip ya legitimately/
dont "swallow" cuz its the only way u could "spit-at-me"/
u "sick"-of-me? n my "epidemy",maybe cuz my flows are "iller"-than-urs/
u know the only "shit" ur droppin, is the "logs" fillin-ya-"draws"/
ayo im killin-these-whores,n rip will get somethin-too/
u dont deserve to be in this,n scorp i cant see how ya crew wanted-u/
im sonnin u, think u wanna test-again,but u gon need a extra-pen/
fuck medicine, ima damage u so ull never have sex-again/
leave u in a pile of my escraments,after i "shit on u" a "dozen-times"/
come with "dirty" lines,that execute ur shit that doesnt-rhyme/
u claim ur "straight" but ur "swallowin" more "balls" than "pac-man"/
i put ya style in the trash-can,scorpion,face it bro, ur wack-man/
but ayo why even diss u?,i realized that im waistin-my-time/
now u get my "punchlines" in ya "mouth" so ur "taistin-my-rhymes"/

let me know whats up......peace

no beef... a lot of your wordplay is weak or played... but at least you got it down with multis, which is a lot better than most people here... try DS or TSK

yo well let u in

i heard TSK got shit on lock....amount of talent atleast...i want to go where the most talent is...i dont need to stand out

GOOD LUCK WITH THAT ONE

try hookin up wit us man, just drop the shit you have here onto our forum and elldawg will see what he can do aight, peace.

holla!!

also YO-MOMMA can you by any chance make your sig abit smaller cause its so fuckin huge

^^yepp its realli small now lol

lol

Yo I see you already got a crew now, so I'm kind of late. But hands down, THE SUPREME KINGZ!!! are the illest on this site. And you rap pretty damn good, I just think you have too many fillers, and your structure is off in some places. Sometimes your lines are long, but in other places their waay short. But if you stay active with battling and are serious about elevating than you'll get better.

I think TRP is a good fit for you right now(No Diss), thats a pretty good crew. I would have suggested someone like Da Illete or DS or something like that, but you need to elevate a tad more for THE SUPREME KINGZ!!!!. No Beef though.

1z