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I know it's horrible. But I really want to improve like some of the sick creations yall pull off. I followed that tutorial that one guy posted that's what I got. Can yall offer some insight on things I could do to improve?

Draft it in pencil, take your time, individualize the letters as best you can e.g. keep gaps between them dont make them look like one big letter, shits illegible, respect for wanting to take up graff but youll only enjoy it if you put into it , see what im sayin?
deff

intersting

nice attempt, keep it up, you'll only get better

Yep,Horrible..haha Nah its allright,keep at it

I don't understand why people feel the need to post up their wack shit that no one wants to see. Especially when they even admit that it's bad.

Wack as fuck.

its alright for first attempt..i think you'll only grow into this+peace+

I don't understand why people feel the need to post up their wack shit that no one wants to see. Especially when they even admit that it's bad.


BECAUSE YOU ARE THE WRITING EXPERT WHO NEVER MAKES WACK SHIT.


But seriously everyone was wack as fuck when they first started out.

I don't understand why people feel the need to post up their wack shit that no one wants to see. Especially when they even admit that it's bad.

for tips on how to improve? yeah that would be it, dumbass

That last comment coming from Patrick Ewing, a no talent ass clown who probably doesn't even write. It's not a gallery for you viewing pleasure. He wants feedback from more seasoned writers. like me.

Your best bet would be to start simple. You can't build a house without a foundation homie. Remember that. Wether you like it or not Simple ass old block letters are the way to start. Trying to bust a wildstyle right of the bat is what all toy writers want to do but...like i said they have no foundation to build off of. As of now it looks like a big mush of color. I think i might post some tutorials up for guys like you who are just trying to learn. And the biggest thing is to not listen to haters and keep doing what you do bro. Post some more shit!

for tips on how to improve? yeah that would be it, dumbass

heh. he just verbaly ass raped.. as for the drawing. your best bet is to draft in pencil that way you can erase your mistakes, iuno but it looks like you started with the marker from the get go... also like just about everyone said start with basic letters and then add stuff on to them. only work to describe how to get better at graffiti.. EVOLVE.. everything, your letters, style, everything.

That last comment coming from Patrick Ewing, a no talent ass clown who probably doesn't even write. It's not a gallery for you viewing pleasure. He wants feedback from more seasoned writers. like me.

Your best bet would be to start simple. You can't build a house without a foundation homie. Remember that. Wether you like it or not Simple ass old block letters are the way to start. Trying to bust a wildstyle right of the bat is what all toy writers want to do but...like i said they have no foundation to build off of. As of now it looks like a big mush of color. I think i might post some tutorials up for guys like you who are just trying to learn. And the biggest thing is to not listen to haters and keep doing what you do bro. Post some more shit!

Oh yea? You're an experienced writer, I bet. And if I don't write, then why would I post in the Graffiti section of the website.

You just have no respect bro...You aren't here to help....you are here to hate....you have this Holier than thou attitude....its rather annoying.

Post some of your shit then Patrick

Post some of your shit then Patrick

second that

I don't understand why people feel the need to post up their wack shit that no one wants to see. Especially when they even admit that it's bad.I agree and disagree at the same time. I agree cuz it's like, no one wants to see it or cares to see it. If only to hate on them. But I disagree because some people want constructive criticism. Their problem is... forums are not a great place for that.


Anywho, yes wack as fuck. Does that say Gay? Gae? It's pretty wack, less fire next time. This is graffiti not art class. If you are going to do fire, do it inside the letters. Hoep that helps any. Good try.

Patrick shut the fuck up son..

You was wack when you started..Everyone was..GIve the man time and for a first attempt this is pretty good.