House Rules
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check mate...

man i make ya blood "pressure" raise like diabetic's eating sugar cain's"
vet status, ya aint tall so when i knock ya yes-i do expect ya ta "fall"

this man crazy screaming more then a jumped up whore, "heavy breathing"
when i dismantel an displace your frame have your lungs "heaving"

think am done -ner-ya-dreaming...ma lyrics ya cant even see em..
like blind men looking..am "OUT OF SIGHT"

dude..may as well start ,ducking..before i come an start ,lookin"
when i find an slice, an dice, ya am gone start some real "cookin"

how can this man stand here chattin..vet status?when i drop...ya lyrics be "lackin"...
man il send you "packing" taking long trips 6ft under faggot..

this man play acting!! like,"hentai conventions"
, dont need to mention this man needs to be "sectioned"


man am out....peace
10 min typed

it'll fall on deaf ears..if i say you suck, you verse going to the grave yard this time
strange? nah..pressah n' piph calling you racist, ain't the only time "Lo" was on your side!(DunLo)
you getting Ko'd so "shut your trap"..or 'fall victim', to suicide meetings with sicker bars
so when'd you start? hmm..wish they ordered the "thread clearing"..beginning march!('07)
he isn't hard!..you've beaten countless newbs, so now your dope? i'll just say retire with pity
i'm guessing well, maybe you're "nice" enuff to beat me, since your only "kind" enuff to say Hi to my city!!*

this is a nice thread hello there nyc (shakes hands)

this good samaritan will get punched in the face, after writing..proceed tossing ya' scripts
ya' material's soft as a bitch, don't let your own fingers..become the next 5 losses you'll get!!
unlawful this is..so i'm skipping Josh like King James bibles, cuz this faggot is done now
only thing "Jo" is good for, is providing a 'cab service' for his father on Run's House!!(Jojo)

Vote Han

"so when'd you start? hmm..wish they ordered the "thread clearing"..beginning march!('07)
he isn't hard!..you've beaten countless newbs, so now your dope? i'll just say retire with pity
i'm guessing well, maybe you're "nice" enuff to beat me, since your only "kind" enuff to say Hi to my city!!*"

i thought that was a pretty good sequence of personals...

ummm... yea... Josh... the best thing about your verse is "10 min typed"... lol... it looked it bruh... real talk... the repeatitive "short" lines werent hittin on much either... but Goodfellas is one of my favorite movies

Personals-Han
Punches-Han
Wordplay-Han
Enjoyed-Han

Vote-Han

This battle was one-sided. Josh's "outta sight" line was so played he shouldve lost just for using it. Han's verse was better in every area.

he isn't hard!..you've beaten countless newbs, so now your dope? i'll just say retire with pity
i'm guessing well, maybe you're "nice" enuff to beat me, since your only "kind" enuff to say Hi to my city!!*
these were okay...you kids write some LLLLOOONNNGGGG ass bars...but i guess thats cool in a text battle...

this good samaritan will get punched in the face, after writing..proceed tossing ya' scripts
ya' material's soft as a bitch, don't let your own fingers..become the next 5 losses you'll get!!

i liked the above lines, could have carried the concept into something more but you really didn't need to.

Josh's verse had pretty literally nothing of value... i was a little shocked at how often the rhyme scheme changed, and it wasn't even done in an interesting way...it sounded like five minutes...don't brag that it was ten.

ehhh.

Vote-Han
for at least throwing a couple punches.

haha you fuckin whack!! i can vomit a better spit! go ballet dance, you whacks!

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