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good luck

Check check
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=110518
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=108821
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=109720

Ill have this up within the hour

Hit personal on "A-Piphany", your an uncut rock while I shine like a "Tiffany"
You battlin' me's an outrage cos just like "Centre Stage*" U.L** find-out "Life doesn't hold try outs***"

"Cant Speak on What You Cant Beat****" You Couldn't spit hot even if you were "In-Heat"
First win of which to speak, I guess its "upheavel-week", I'll leave you with more cuts than a "Medieval Greek"

Don't grieve for A-Piphany, God'll recieve him instantly, However Satan may percieve "God" differently!
I'll end with Expertise, A-Piph is eager to please, This herb is meager-to-seize, Spits? He DROOLS LIKE A RETIREE!

no hate. good luck
*Movie made in 2000
** U.L Is his crew, also meaning You'll - his crew recently held "Try Outs" if you wanted to join.
*** The tagline for the movie
**** its in his sig

drop drop drop!

sorry i will drop tonight...forgot about this

No problem I have to learn patience anyway

ok lets go this will be easy......
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similar to def jam, i'll get this MC then kill and shelf his spits
(A)'s like pissed U.S. officials, the way i'll show this deff a sit
(deficit-deff a sit)
jr. writer? i'll show u Hell w/ a Cal & make ya juels switch quick
Deffs like CAM on X-lax, this youngins one helluva DIP-SHIT
(no homo)
this kids no where near nyce, punches couldnt poke a bitch
frontin an thinkin ur ill? the closest you get is to quote his shit
(check is sig)
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thanks for the points

drop your links so we can get this moved

Deff -

"Hit personal on "A-Piphany", your an uncut rock while I shine like a "Tiffany"
You battlin' me's an outrage cos just like "Centre Stage*" U.L** find-out "Life doesn't hold try outs***""

great flow... but don't EVER compare yourself to Tiffany jewlery again... sounded a little "suspect"


""Cant Speak on What You Cant Beat****" You Couldn't spit hot even if you were "In-Heat""

quoting his sig was ultimatly useless... you didnt play on it... you didnt switch it... you did nothing w/ it but repeated it... which in this world we call a "filler"... but not only was it a filler, you actually explained it at the bottom... didnt really hit on much... but the second part was at least a punch

didnt really finish too hard....


a piphany -

"similar to def jam, i'll get this MC then kill and shelf his spits
(A)'s like pissed U.S. officials, the way i'll show this deff a sit"

decent use of wordplay...

"jr. writer? i'll show u Hell w/ a Cal & make ya juels switch quick
Deffs like CAM on X-lax, this youngins one helluva DIP-SHIT"

didnt know if you were battling Deff or Dipset, but again a pretty good punch

and finished w/ a good personal... about the quote in his sig

______________________________
punches - (A)
flow - Deff
structure - (A)
creativity - (A)
multis - (A)
this battle was only 3 bars long... but (A) made all his lines count... so the choice here was pretty easy

w/ that said

VOTE - (A)PIPHANY

1-0 me

Deff Verse

Hit personal on "A-Piphany", your an uncut rock while I shine like a "Tiffany"
You battlin' me's an outrage cos just like "Centre Stage*" U.L** find-out "Life doesn't hold try outs***"
(I shine like a Tiffany) lmao.. and where is this bar rhyming? i cant find it???
"Cant Speak on What You Cant Beat****" You Couldn't spit hot even if you were "In-Heat"
First win of which to speak, I guess its "upheavel-week", I'll leave you with more cuts than a "Medieval Greek"
hmmm this was ok... yea ok
Don't grieve for A-Piphany, God'll recieve him instantly, However Satan may percieve "God" differently!
I'll end with Expertise, A-Piph is eager to please, This herb is meager-to-seize, Spits? He DROOLS LIKE A RETIREE!
ok the bar was flowing smoothly for the most part but this "HE DROOLS LIKE A RETIREE" wtf is that man?? wack ender


Aphiphany Verse

similar to def jam, i'll get this MC then kill and shelf his spits
(A)'s like pissed U.S. officials, the way i'll show this deff a sit
(deficit-deff a sit)
flow is so sketchy and choppy in the rhythm...the punch wasnt hard hitting enough either
jr. writer? i'll show u Hell w/ a Cal & make ya juels switch quick
Deffs like CAM on X-lax, this youngins one helluva DIP-SHIT
(no homo)
lol man you shouldnt have even used this joint.. shit was corny was hell
this kids no where near nyce, punches couldnt poke a bitch
frontin an thinkin ur ill? the closest you get is to quote his shit
Could have been a nice personal but your wording wrecked it

Neither verse was dope at all the flows in both were sketchy and the punches werent setup properly.. but besides all that the vote goes too..

Deff

lol^ you cant be serious......lol


1-1

bump dont ban hasnt had feed for 3 days

one sided battle, but heres the cats

punches-piph
wordplay-piph
metas-piph, better ones anyway
personals-tied
nameplay-neither had anything that good, but piph had the deff a sit line
flow-tie

vote-piph

regretting that neck remark, 2-1

pretty simple call

punches- A, nothing stand out but harder than deff's
personals- A, deff u had some concepts but didnt hit them effectively
metas- A, nothing stand out by either, but A's were more consistent
Flow- Tie
Multis- A, his went together better

overall A

Doesn't house rules mean no crew votes count? You got Snale and PG voting..if im wrong 3-1 if im right 1-1

3-1 dont bitch about votes cause you shouldnt have any..................


vote up people thank you

If your so hot why you gotta break the rules to get votes??

meti - a
flow - deff
punches - A
structure - A
personals A

Vote A pipahany