5barz..

Checking In Now .. Ill Drop ASAP!

Check....

... Don't Gotta Tell Ya Twice That This Fools Dust, Where I'm From My Dudes Bust, Cuz "He'll Take The Whip"
Like Thieves In A School Bus'...!!
... Got Punches That'll Leave See'n What We Wreck, Victory Is Wut I See Next, Cuz Rican'll "Take A Piece From Ya Front" To Leave Ya Chest Exposed Like a V-Neck'..!!
... Snatch Ya Soul To Wreck Poor Nights, I Bet Four Twice, Cuz Ill "Take Your Life On Cold" Like Death On Ice'...!!
... How Could Ever Live To Be Violent? Never Control High Airs Like Bets On A Pilot, To "Leave Ya High Why And Gone" Like Bombings Of Caribean Islands'..!! (Hawaiian)
...Got Enough Bullets To Feed Ya Lunch, Take Ya Whole To Munch, No Matta What Happens Ya "Swings Are Low Blow'd"Like A DisQualify'n Punch'...!!

5 Bars Match Me

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1431908&posted=1#post1431908

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1431908&posted=1#post1431908

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1431942#post1431942

This kid STINKS dont need REEKING(Rican) THEORIES to speculate
Like unemployed Arab pilots in the U.S ITS HARD FOR YOU TO ELIVATE
My words penetrate through iron plate merk this Robot Chicken like presidential canidates my speech is MAKING A KILLING cause I'M NICE WIT THE HEAT, something like the FRIENDLY FIRE that killed PAT TILLMAN
I'm grilling this cat like barbeques in China and leave you scared to go "Down To The Hood" like gay men forced to eat vaginas...


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Punches: DT
Personals: Tie
Multies: DT
Metaphors: Rican
Wordplay DT
Flow: DT
Structure: DT
Overall vote: Divinetragedy

Good battle but i think the experience factor outweighed Rican with this one, DT has had a fair few battles and this one, he has the better punches and wordplay in my opinion, he gets my vote.

SMH @ ^^^^^

This was complete catsweep.

Flow-RT
Punches-RT
Personals-DT (only cat he got for 1 personal)
Wordplay-RT
Multies-RT

this was a merking, but i'm sure divine tragedy would not count my vote so i will not attempt


solid verse rican

yo lol that lines is telling me on his block his ppls bust guns bcuz dudes is stealing buses? mis-worded or typo,but that shits funny. and wreck poor nights? then he BETS four twice? what're your reasons to really be saying these things? lol

where do i start?

Rican -
"... Don't Gotta Tell Ya Twice That This Fools Dust, Where I'm From My Dudes Bust, Cuz "He'll Take The Whip"
Like Thieves In A School Bus'...!!"

great flow... but a filler bar at best... "school bus" portion was used for the sole purpose of keeping the rhyme scheme... not mad at cha, just sayin

""Take A Piece From Ya Front" To Leave Ya Chest Exposed Like a V-Neck'..!!"

str8... again good flow

"... How Could Ever Live To Be Violent? Never Control High Airs Like Bets On A Pilot, To "Leave Ya High Why And Gone" Like Bombings Of Caribean Islands'..!! (Hawaiian)"

*sighs*... is it necessary to tell you that Hawaii isnt a Caribbean island? lmao!!! com'on dude... str8 thought process tho

aight...

DT -

"This kid STINKS dont need REEKING(Rican) THEORIES to speculate
Like unemployed Arab pilots in the U.S ITS HARD FOR YOU TO ELIVATE"

Decent opener bcuz i see where you were trying to go w/ that line... coulda been worded A WHOLE LOT BETTER!!! no impact

"I'm grilling this cat like barbeques in China and leave you scared to go "Down To The Hood" like gay men forced to eat vaginas..."

uh... no... no punch at all...

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flow - Rican...
structure - Rican... DT, you gotta sperate those bars better
punches - NONE... i'ma say that because saying "like" doesnt make ur line a punch...
multis - Rican
wordplay - DT
Wit - eh, n/a
enjoyed - Rican

w/ that said....

VOTE: RICAN THEORYZ

and for yall saying "catsweep"... uh, no... not at all

punches-rican
personals-neither
multis-rican
metas-divine
wordplay-divine
dlow-rican

vote-rican

lol..

yall some stupid fucks faaaaa realz...

VOTE: RICAN THEORYZ


lol..

yall some stupid fucks faaaaa realz...


you think your own crew member is a stupid fuck....lolz

DT came correct and I believe he would've had it if he added more punches. Don't get me wrong, he had punches but I felt he didn't come at his best. Overall, no beef, it seemed a bit half assed. Rican had more complexity, even if some of it was off lol i understood where he was going. Very close match but IMO, Rican took it. It seemed like he put more work into his verse.

vote- Rican

punches-rican
personals-neither
nameplay-dt
wordplay-rican
metas-rican
flow-rican

vote-rican

pretty one sided, dt's last bar was funny as fuck though.

hmm surprising, but expected...

repps Rican