View Full Version : UL-DunLo vs SB-Akeliz (Battle)


Vokals
11-17-2007, 09:59 PM
8-10 bars
Typical Voting.. only people who know how to vote on these are going to vote anyways, so there is no need for a break down.
No crew votes unless stated otherwise by participants.


Due Date: Undecided


Please do not freepost or spam threads, keep it in designated threads thanks.

DunLo
11-19-2007, 06:33 PM
Check....

...AKeliz...
11-23-2007, 05:55 PM
Check!!!!

...AKeliz...
12-16-2007, 12:45 AM
Fuck this, I'm done with this cat trying to buy time, I'm droppin' 5 bars real quick key before midnight cuz that's all you said you wanted to do.........So without further distractions, let's go..............>:/

Aiyyo,
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES!!,http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/image.php?u=33315&dateline=1187902030&type=profile
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,:smoke:
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!:owned:

(My bad BRO!!! I didn’t mean to do this to ya, what I got, 2 more bars….I’m sorry D)

I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
*Akeliz throws red flag, Awaits the call*
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
It’s a Dun deal……….:cool:

*Called me up excited as a pig and shit that he became a moderator on this website….

DunLo
12-16-2007, 03:48 AM
Breaking News!!!....I thought I was battling my twin brother, then all of a sudden, this bitch shows up..Fuck it, twin brother, twin sister, he's got a mangina, then he could get served...let's go you has been....GET EMMM!!!....


Yo...
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,:owned:
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=101215 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=101215)
,,!,,
***Flash to Ak in the E.R. on life support...Yo, is this homo thug still breathing?...NOT FOR LONG....

I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**

***Flash back to Ak in the E.R. on life support...It's up to the family to pull the plug, and the decision went....
PULL....
THE....
FUCKING....
PLUG!!....^^^-^^-^-^__________ - - Flatline Beotch!!

Vokals
12-16-2007, 05:39 PM
votes.. bar by bar breakdown only

DunLo
12-16-2007, 11:29 PM
Certain peoples votes will be eliminated if you try to vote, and you know who you are....peace

ALUCARD
12-17-2007, 01:06 AM
Fuck this, I'm done with this cat trying to buy time, I'm droppin' 5 bars real quick key before midnight cuz that's all you said you wanted to do.........So without further distractions, let's go..............>:/

Aiyyo,
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES!!,http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/imag...0&type=profile
decent wording and good personal 6/10
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
the setup wasn't that great and janet lines are played 4/10
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,:smoke:
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!:owned:
decent diss to crew not a real good set up thought. 5/10

(My bad BRO!!! I didn’t mean to do this to ya, what I got, 2 more bars….I’m sorry D)

I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
*Akeliz throws red flag, Awaits the call*
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!
pretty god personal 6/10!”,
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL
decent closer 5/10…
It’s a Dun deal……….:cool:

total score 26/50



Yo...
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
pretty good wordplay and set up decent punch 6/10
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
good personal and setup 6/10
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
decent set up decent worplay ok punch 5/10
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,:owned:
setup wasn't great wordplay on the punch was decent punch was ok 5/10
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=101215 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=101215)
,,!,,
***Flash to Ak in the E.R. on life support...Yo, is this homo thug still breathing?...NOT FOR LONG....

I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user title’, is the only time he ‘signed a dotted line’….**
decent setup decent personal and punch 6/10

overall-28/50


vote-dunlo

DunLo
12-17-2007, 07:23 PM
255 views and only one vote?.....WTF?

GET TO VOTING!!!

1-0 DunLo. uppin'...

And as PG stated, bar by bar breakdowns only...Peace...

TakeNotes.
12-18-2007, 10:41 PM
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES
Nah man, personal was lacking.
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
Weak attempt at a personal, much too simple.
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!
Lol, alright personal.

I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
*Akeliz throws red flag, Awaits the call*
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
Not feeling at all.
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
I used this wordplay about 8 months ago, and flipped it better IMO.. it's horribly played, and the flip was weak.

..
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
1 Letter nameplays.. well I get the crew personal.. but idk, not really feeling.
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
Lol.. kinda funny, but overall bar is horrid.
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
No, not good whatsoever.
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,
Lol.. ok..

I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**
No hate, but probs the wackest bar of the battle man..

..

O/V- I really didn't see many strong points from either battler.. but AK came a bit more consistent with harder hitting punches, so he takes this. V- AK.

PayRoll
12-18-2007, 11:07 PM
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES
ok personal...wit the link...coulda been delivered better...3/5
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
Wasnt really feelin this...concept was ok...but didnt work 4 me 2.5/5
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!
Nice...I like the w/p...set up real smooth n good punch 4/5
I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
Ehhh..concept was played..u used it ok but i didnt really feel it...3/5
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
this was kinda played...ive seen it used a few other ways so...2.5/5

..
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
nameplays kinda weak...ok concept...kinda feelin coulda been used better 2.5/5
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
i actually like this...the personals pretty good...coulda had a better setup instead of filler but...still ok 3.5/5
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
i dont really like this...1st u kinda fed n the w/p was good but the punch n concept was off...2/5
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,
I like it...flow was clean n punch was delievered nice... 4/5
I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**
ehh...not really feelin...again the punch was good but i didnt like the concept...i got wut u were sayin but im not sure every 1 would...2.5/5

A=15
Dun=14.5

Vote- Akeliz....
i think i added that up right....pretty good battle...if yall aint really brothers i can tell u do really now each other...the personals are very evident from both...thats my vote no hate 2 either i jus graded as i went

DunLo
12-19-2007, 12:24 AM
2-1 Ak....Uppin'....

**InSaNe**
12-20-2007, 09:37 PM
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES
ok
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
not really
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!
Nice
I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
this was all right
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
allright

..
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
this was ok
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
good shit
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
no
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,
I like it.
I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**
ehh...not really feelin...again the punch was good but i didnt like the c
good shit


over all this was a great battle these are both of my home boy...

but i think that you both could of come harder at each other

but overall great battle

vote tie

DunLo
12-21-2007, 04:20 PM
2-1 Ak, Uppin'...

Tony..
12-24-2007, 10:43 AM
AK -
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES!!,

funny shit... good opener... it's rather difficult to be hard when there are butterflies on the ceiling.. lol

Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN

good personal

I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
*Akeliz throws red flag, Awaits the call*
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,


lol... this was a witty bar... good set up line

A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…


good use of wordplay and still throwing some personals in there

Dun -

THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
good wordplay, personal... solid opener

Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!,

witty line... made me chuckle

Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,

eh... wasnt feeling this one as much... good flow tho

I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**

wasnt feeling this bar either

_______________________
punches - AK
Personals - tie
multis - Dun
flow - Dun
wordplay - tie
creativity - AK
Wit - AK
enjoyment - AK

overall.... this was a very solid battle.... a big part of my enjoyment of a verse is wit... lines that made me laugh... AK had that in a couple of this lines... Dun had em too but not as many.... Dun had some questionable lines that didnt hit to hard for me... AK, that Janet line was pretty weak but besides that, the rest of ur verse was solid and hard hitting throughout....

with ^that^ said....

VOTE: AKELIZ

Vokals
12-24-2007, 12:08 PM
4-2 ak

Han Solo
12-24-2007, 01:29 PM
err, i'll vote later..hold my spot.

MasSGyozA
12-25-2007, 08:27 PM
ugh, bar by bar only? ill do this lata. . .

...AKeliz...
12-25-2007, 10:55 PM
I'm ugly P? I'm sorry homie, I don't judge dudes, but good look with the vote, at least you should be able to post in a battle where dope rhymes are written....

Chy'ea, you know what time it is....

...AKeliz...
12-28-2007, 06:20 PM
Uppin, votes

Archaic
12-30-2007, 08:27 PM
Fuck this, I'm done with this cat trying to buy time, I'm droppin' 5 bars real quick key before midnight cuz that's all you said you wanted to do.........So without further distractions, let's go..............

Aiyyo,
Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES!!,http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/imag...0&type=profile
^^^lol..aiight

But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
^^^aiight...

Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!
^^^filler, nothing hard but ok

(My bad BRO!!! I didn’t mean to do this to ya, what I got, 2 more bars….I’m sorry D)

I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
*Akeliz throws red flag, Awaits the call*
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
^^^pretty nice


Dun




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Re: UL-DunLo vs SB-Akeliz (Battle)

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Breaking News!!!....I thought I was battling my twin brother, then all of a sudden, this bitch shows up..Fuck it, twin brother, twin sister, he's got a mangina, then he could get served...let's go you has been....GET EMMM!!!....


Yo...
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
^^^ok

Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
^^^aiight felt like it could've been worded bit better

Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
^^^aiight

Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=101215
^^^pretty nice

***Flash to Ak in the E.R. on life support...Yo, is this homo thug still breathing?...NOT FOR LONG....

I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**
^^^ok

***Flash back to Ak in the E.R. on life support...It's up to the family to pull the plug, and the decision went....
PULL....
THE....
FUCKING....
PLUG!!....^^^-^^-^-^__________ - - Flatline Beotch!!


vote:Dun, seemed like he had more material, so he was more consistent
nice read to both

DunLo
12-31-2007, 12:53 AM
Ok, thanks for the vote homie....4-3 Ak....Uppin'....

Harsh
12-31-2007, 02:52 AM
I was not crew before this started, but take it or leave it...ive had my opinion on who won this for awhile but its been up so damn long ill drop my vote...count it if you want


Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES
not bad
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
i kinda liked this
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!
dope
I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
nice
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
nice personal
..
THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
not bad
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
nice
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
too forced
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,
this was cool
I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**
solid closer


this was a pretty good battle guys

heres my cat breakdown

punches-AK
personals- tie
multis-AK
wordplay-tie
nameplay-AK

vote-AK


good battle fellas

stay up

DunLo
12-31-2007, 12:31 PM
I was not crew before this started, but take it or leave it...ive had my opinion on who won this for awhile but its been up so damn long ill drop my vote...count it if you want


Dun has lovers appealing to another size, he’s concealing while I’m revealing it’s other guys!,
I should be healing my brothers cries, cuz his rep is HANGIN’, like his boys ceiling with BUTTER-FLIES
not bad
But otherwise… I’ll banish and make you vanish uncanny, I never planned this just understand me,
I don’t panic what he can be…This HOE will be most famous for being EXPOSED, meet the JANET of the family, (HEY!)
i kinda liked this
Got U-L thinking “Can He??”, while there’s some hoping, I don’t do crack……But it’s fun joking,
I don’t know what Dun’s smoking, cuz real LEGENDS are treasured forever and never go UN-SPOKEN!
dope
I heard you’re ranked, I blanked and wondered if true, you should thank the newcomers too!,
Because UNDER-REVIEW…….”He’s never beaten a worthy opponent, No wonder he’s NUMBER 2!!!”,
nice
A slumber view, but now a MOD so his shine is surreal, called me unwinding like he was signing a deal,*
You should start rhyming for real…….Cuz these internet FRUITS is the only place that you're finding A-PEEL…
nice personal
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THIS FAGGOT WRITES ALL LIES!!!....I live with you, so I know whatever you do and say….
Got thrown to a crew in stray….plus ’UL called out SB’, so it was like ‘Surveys’ when I started ‘Cue-in A’!,(Q&A)
not bad
Hopped on a bandwagon cuz he couldn’t choose sides…had a broken spirit when the crews died…
His purpose is a confused ride…cuz my mother first birthed 2 boys, then after this bitch she got her tubes tied!, (REAL TALK!!)
nice
Fuck this gay bitch I’ll leave Keliz to lay stiff…he ’never elevates’, he only arrays to a ‘sway shift’…
Dun’s #2 on the display list…While AK made ‘RW’s non-drinkers’, because we’ve never seen ‘A-FIFTH’!,
too forced
Your crews only responsible for small classics…….so It’s ‘Strictly Business’ whenever I ‘withdrawal assets’…
‘Ancient’ ass faggots I never seen ya’ll ‘Az-Tecs’…so why ‘create threads bitching at Multi’, when you needed help in ‘all aspects’?!,
this was cool
I’ll leave his flesh hexed with a rotted spine…he has no flow audio, like the whole site forgot it rhymed!!...
On tracks you’re ‘the gaps’ for allotted time…so ‘when you changed your user name’, is the only time you ‘signed a dotted line’….**
solid closer


this was a pretty good battle guys

heres my cat breakdown

punches-AK
personals- tie
multis-AK
wordplay-tie
nameplay-AK

vote-AK


good battle fellas

stay up

Thanks for the vote, but Ak wanted no crew votes....

Appreciate you takin' out the time though homie....

4-3 Ak still...Uppin'....