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Vokals
11-21-2007, 06:26 PM
15-20 bars

due thurs. at midnight

3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
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Topic: Final Confrontation

Vokals
11-21-2007, 06:27 PM
check

dont forget 2 links

J Prov
11-21-2007, 06:28 PM
check, ight ill get them

Vokals
11-22-2007, 04:06 AM
keyed a verse





Tyler Jacobs, a quiet kid at school and at home never wanted to harm anyone. He never aspired to be mean to anyone let alone anything. But certain events that transpired caused Tyler Jacobs to snap. Tyler went into an uncontrollable rage, repressed anger and issues caused him to lash out in angst against those who pissed him off. I now present to you:

The Tyler Jacobs Story



Every day of my life I been picked on by this bitch crew
Strict dudes actin tough but quick to pull a snitch move
I hit truth by callin em out, now I have a chipped tooth
Licked boots with my face n drug through the dirt
I been beat harder than soles on a ground after mugging a purse
Nothing but posers little thugs chirping at church
But I’ll make em hug a tree like they’re worshiping birch
Cursing these jerks soon the subtleties will end quick
You’ve been able to bend me but you don’t want me to break bitch
I hate rich kids driving daddy’s stick shift sports cars
Living in Hollywood with forked stars, who torque hearts
Picking on this dork hard, weekend drunkards would just assume to court bars
Soon their dreams will become a horrific reality such a tragedy
So magically transpired, such fathoming
Nailed into my head like a man hammering, stammering
When I’m done with these bitches they won’t understand what glamour means
Battered and bruised eye sockets protrude from their facial bones
White, black, it doesn’t matter I won’t leave no race alone
Screaming in terror through out the night seeing my smile when they wake up
You’ll all cry so smooth in this win-win for me you’ll try to lose to Tyler Jacobs


Tyler unsure of how he wants to handle his other situations with the jocks that pick on him. One at a time or all at once? Laying next to the cold naked bodies he just raped only moments ago he weeps into a heavy sleep.


Waking the next morning thinking of all the sex, horny he releases frustration
He touched Glacia n pressed warmly abreast this crushed Haitian
I must face them, touch up and punch Nathan
But how do I handle him, I need to make this Flip flop like when a sandal hits
What makes this vandal tick? I can cut out his tongue while Randal shits
Who’s the bitch now? Where’d this come from, well it must be the “fag in me”
Burning this bastard while his girl Cassa-rolls wreathing in agony
Time to shut up soon I’ll rip your cup up and start taggin D’s
You’re raggin? Geez, just more blood for me to add to the massacre
One shot two shots; I drop the bottle and soon start blastin her
Castin her off its time to move to the next character
Lookin at my list I see my next check and stare at her
A pair of girls walking down the hall, I wished their gown would fall
Soon they’re bound to ball, like a phone on mute there’s no sound to call
No one will hear them, wailing and screaming drowned by my laughter
Shouldn’t have fucked with Tyler Jacobs, no longer bound by you bastards
Quick to slash her n smash her until the skull cracks open
You’re no longer finishing your wise cracks? Then with these murders I was only half jokin
I’m past hopeless, ready to attack those who hurt n tried damning me
I’ll cry handling these issues as I take out my next on this man’s family


Tyler Jacobs had his revenge, but was that enough? Will that be the last you hear of Tyler Jacobs? Well for this story yes, because 20 bars was the limit. :(