8 bars per team
4 bars from each member
No more, no less.

House rules
No hate/unexplained votes will be counted.

Both verses are expected to be posted by ONE member, so figure that out between yourselves, and pm your verse to your partner who'm will be posting and representing you as a team.


WITH THAT SAID, Good luck, verses due asap, no deadlines, but try not to takes weeks to post.

clim and legend are the challengers, you will post first, we will follow.

Just checkin' in. I'll post my verse either Sunday or Monday.

Just checkin' in. I'll post my verse either Sunday or Monday.


2nd, but yo Clim, are you PM'ing me your verse or vice versa? so we can drop int he same post

Keep the chit chat through pm's dont want this thread clogged with free posts.

Check

Check.

Here's my verse. Keep in mind that I don't like to mark out punches or explain lines too much, so you'll have to keep an eye out. Anyway...



Let's start this shit, I'll park this bitch, dude was at Japan hopin' to score on Roppongi chicks~
Dyke hark this spit, I'll mark your ditch, he felt at home in Japan with his short gaijin dick!

Like me clockin' ya rhymes, it's just a meta of time before I have ya exposed like fixed dices~
See in Japan he was with a chick who chewed his dick, and now he calls it the Roppongi crisis!*

For Burden...

This pussy gets passed around like forwarded e-mail's, slawasses like you are totally bitch made~
Think he on track to get signed I'll have him derailed, internet rhymes ain't why you got that e-grade!

Finisher...

See topplin' Burden ain't a burden for me, I'll 'personify' and 'hit him so hard', fag will be bending over Dublin!
Irish rapper? Wrong decision; cos now you ain't just a burden to rap, but a fucking burden to your Irish kin...

*So much funnier if you've seen Speed Grapher


Done.

Edit: Lawl, I only just realised Snale changed his location : p

sorry 'bout the wait, I just like to be fashionably late #-)


time to put another duo on legend status :boxing:



yo, i'll push ur time back like daylight savings, ur body I suppress/lets face it, these dudes are slower than the 2nd coming of jesus// 1
ok, lets take it to recess, i'm such an Outkast, lyrics'll put that Stank-On-Ya/can i be frank-wit-ya? facing me is like Kobe playing soccer, you're out of ur league// 2
i'm an army, without-the-fatigue, no need to camouflage, u say u what's up? well i'm shortening that like 'sup/ so like catapulting armor you better keep your guard up// 3
i'm nothing to mess with g, leave ur bodies leaking like the Carter 3, approaching me? take precaution/ u might be good but i'm a Monster(period)Come at me and u'll be searching for a new occupation// 4(monster.com-job search)



give me one sec to post links

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1436929&postcount=12

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1436914&postcount=23

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=110917&page=2
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=111210&page=2

Legend status!

the whole sites sick of reading your whack shit, you need to extend your practice
i'll bend ya backwards, than smash your skull into the hall of fame, so you can get the'heads up' on "legend status!"

your verse got 'skipped' more than 'bad recordings' your bad and boring
snale' be known as "Legend Killer" by more people than Randy Orton!

clim hazzardous!

beating ya verse? please this battles a deathmatch, you'll leave in a hearse
Rw's "catching the Z's" in your name, cause the whole site sleeps on your work!

i'll leave your body in the ocean, with 3 holes while pumping teks at you
I'll leave hazzardous under water and i aint talking about "dumping chemicals"

-----------------------------

Burden

Legend_Status?

...Blah, quit smiling 'cos I stay stinging festive faces beyond raps. I'll have ``Legend, marked and stabbed`` ..without ``pinning destinations on maps``...
...Thinkin' he could touch me? This bastard is so barking...So when I recruit Snale? I'll ``A sign : your danger`` similar to ``hazardous road markings``...

As for Clim?

..You get sent, dissin' with an intensive tumor. I don't know ``wire`` this wack, ..Next time you call me out? I'll ``laugh then refuse your shit`` like an ``electrician with a sense of humour''..
...I'll leave the news: see 'um broke sure..I'll skin him alive, Cos whether he could ever drop a nice bar``remains to be seen``.. Like a fucking ``museum brochure``...

aight nice, yo, lets get some votes on this please

Let's start this shit, I'll park this bitch, dude was at Japan hopin' to score on Roppongi chicks~
Dyke hark this spit, I'll mark your ditch, he felt at home in Japan with his short gaijin dick!
^first line,eh. but wtf@PARK this bitch? 2nd line. eeeeeh.

Like me clockin' ya rhymes, it's just a meta of time before I have ya exposed like fixed dices~
See in Japan he was with a chick who chewed his dick, and now he calls it the Roppongi crisis!*
^wack

This pussy gets passed around like forwarded e-mail's, slawasses like you are totally bitch made~
Think he on track to get signed I'll have him derailed, internet rhymes ain't why you got that e-grade!
^wack

See topplin' Burden ain't a burden for me, I'll 'personify' and 'hit him so hard', fag will be bending over Dublin!
Irish rapper? Wrong decision; cos now you ain't just a burden to rap, but a fucking burden to your Irish kin...
^waaaaaaaaaaack. and you put 8 lines instead of 4 vs their 4lines.

yo, i'll push ur time back like daylight savings, ur body I suppress/lets face it, these dudes are slower than the 2nd coming of jesus// 1
^wack

ok, lets take it to recess, i'm such an Outkast, lyrics'll put that Stank-On-Ya/can i be frank-wit-ya? facing me is like Kobe playing soccer, you're out of ur league// 2
^where is the rhyming lol. wack again.

i'm an army, without-the-fatigue, no need to camouflage, u say u what's up? well i'm shortening that like 'sup/ so like catapulting armor you better keep your guard up// 3
^you need to fix your flow in your VERSE. weak here too no material.

i'm nothing to mess with g, leave ur bodies leaking like the Carter 3, approaching me? take precaution/ u might be good but i'm a Monster(period)Come at me and u'll be searching for a new occupation// 4(monster.com-job search)
^HORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIBBBBBBBBBBBLE. so stretched out and not effective. does it make sense,yeah,but its just so stretched out and weak. could've been worded to hit much better.

your verse got 'skipped' more than 'bad recordings' your bad and boring
snale' be known as "Legend Killer" by more people than Randy Orton!
^eh,decent at best.

beating ya verse? please this battles a deathmatch, you'll leave in a hearse
Rw's "catching the Z's" in your name, cause the whole site sleeps on your work!
^could've been better. still good

i'll leave your body in the ocean, with 3 holes while pumping teks at you
I'll leave hazzardous under water and i aint talking about "dumping chemicals"
^saying HAZARD would've been better. hazardous is a description.
...Blah, quit smiling 'cos I stay stinging festive faces beyond raps. I'll have ``Legend, marked and stabbed`` ..without ``pinning destinations on maps``...
...Thinkin' he could touch me? This bastard is so barking...So when I recruit Snale? I'll ``A sign : your danger`` similar to ``hazardous road markings``...
^stretched as fuck. legend/marked could've been better. 2nd part not feeling.

..You get sent, dissin' with an intensive tumor. I don't know ``wire`` this wack, ..Next time you call me out? I'll ``laugh then refuse your shit`` like an ``electrician with a sense of humour''..
...I'll leave the news: see 'um broke sure..I'll skin him alive, Cos whether he could ever drop a nice bar``remains to be seen``.. Like a fucking ``museum brochure``...
^1st line,homonym wordplays is always GAY w/o a double. 2nd,eh.

wow,my eyes hurt reading all this. v/snale's team.

all of u stfu... thanks

shut the fuck up, next person that posts, bitching, whining, complaing, argueing will be DQ'd for their team...
if an outside person comes in and does any of the above they'll get banned for a week


STFU NOW

Let's start this shit, I'll park this bitch, dude was at Japan hopin' to score on Roppongi chicks~
Dyke hark this spit, I'll mark your ditch, he felt at home in Japan with his short gaijin dick!
allright

Like me clockin' ya rhymes, it's just a meta of time before I have ya exposed like fixed dices~
See in Japan he was with a chick who chewed his dick, and now he calls it the Roppongi crisis!*
no...

This pussy gets passed around like forwarded e-mail's, slawasses like you are totally bitch made~
Think he on track to get signed I'll have him derailed, internet rhymes ain't why you got that e-grade!
allright

See topplin' Burden ain't a burden for me, I'll 'personify' and 'hit him so hard', fag will be bending over Dublin!
Irish rapper? Wrong decision; cos now you ain't just a burden to rap, but a fucking burden to your Irish kin...
not that good.

yo, i'll push ur time back like daylight savings, ur body I suppress/lets face it, these dudes are slower than the 2nd coming of jesus// 1
nothin

ok, lets take it to recess, i'm such an Outkast, lyrics'll put that Stank-On-Ya/can i be frank-wit-ya? facing me is like Kobe playing soccer, you're out of ur league// 2
not at all

i'm an army, without-the-fatigue, no need to camouflage, u say u what's up? well i'm shortening that like 'sup/ so like catapulting armor you better keep your guard up// 3
allright.

i'm nothing to mess with g, leave ur bodies leaking like the Carter 3, approaching me? take precaution/ u might be good but i'm a Monster(period)Come at me and u'll be searching for a new occupation// 4(monster.com-job search)
wack

your verse got 'skipped' more than 'bad recordings' your bad and boring
snale' be known as "Legend Killer" by more people than Randy Orton!
good.

beating ya verse? please this battles a deathmatch, you'll leave in a hearse
Rw's "catching the Z's" in your name, cause the whole site sleeps on your work!
this was straight

i'll leave your body in the ocean, with 3 holes while pumping teks at you
I'll leave hazzardous under water and i aint talking about "dumping chemicals"
good good.
...Blah, quit smiling 'cos I stay stinging festive faces beyond raps. I'll have ``Legend, marked and stabbed`` ..without ``pinning destinations on maps``...
...Thinkin' he could touch me? This bastard is so barking...So when I recruit Snale? I'll ``A sign : your danger`` similar to ``hazardous road markings``...
this was a good line
..You get sent, dissin' with an intensive tumor. I don't know ``wire`` this wack, ..Next time you call me out? I'll ``laugh then refuse your shit`` like an ``electrician with a sense of humour''..
...I'll leave the news: see 'um broke sure..I'll skin him alive, Cos whether he could ever drop a nice bar``remains to be seen``.. Like a fucking ``museum brochure``...
nice realy


this was a onesidded battle all the way...

good battle snale and burden..

big ups vote snale ..slayer

2-0 up for ko.

Cool, 2-0 uppin.

To the next voter, I don't mind who you vote for, just leave an explanation because I want to improve. Thanks.

since there are so many verses... i'll only be breaking down the ones that stood out to me....
Clim -

"See in Japan he was with a chick who chewed his dick, and now he calls it the Roppongi crisis!*"

^never seen "Speed Grapher"...

"This pussy gets passed around like forwarded e-mail's, slawasses like you are totally bitch made~
Think he on track to get signed I'll have him derailed, internet rhymes ain't why you got that e-grade!"

decent... the most solid line in ur flow

Legend -

"ok, lets take it to recess, i'm such an Outkast, lyrics'll put that Stank-On-Ya/can i be frank-wit-ya? facing me is like Kobe playing soccer, you're out of ur league// "

this didnt even rhyme playboy....

"i'm an army, without-the-fatigue, no need to camouflage, u say u what's up? well i'm shortening that like 'sup/ so like catapulting armor you better keep your guard up// 3"

Best line of ur whole flow and that Monster.com line was just awful.... sorry wasnt really feeling it


Snale -

"your verse got 'skipped' more than 'bad recordings' your bad and boring
snale' be known as "Legend Killer" by more people than Randy Orton!"

eh, the punch wasnt too hard hitting...

"beating ya verse? please this battles a deathmatch, you'll leave in a hearse
Rw's "catching the Z's" in your name, cause the whole site sleeps on your work!"

easy the best line of ur verse....

Burden -

"...Blah, quit smiling 'cos I stay stinging festive faces beyond raps. I'll have ``Legend, marked and stabbed`` ..without ``pinning destinations on maps``..."

decent opener...

"..You get sent, dissin' with an intensive tumor. I don't know ``wire`` this wack, ..Next time you call me out? I'll ``laugh then refuse your shit`` like an ``electrician with a sense of humour''.."

solid punch... didnt find any personals in ur stuff tho

_____________________________
punches - s/b
personals - s/b... really Snale and Clim had personals but Snale came harder
metas - s/b
wit - s/b
enjoy - s/b

at Clim's request, i'll try to give you some "improvement" feed.... don't ever team w/ Legend Status again!!! lmbo.... he held you back... your flow was pretty good... but both of your Snale bars were about Japan and neither were hard hitting... so to continue the Japan lines was getting a litte irritating...

uh, Snale i seen you come harder... but i guess you did just enough to get the W... and Burden had solid lines but none were directed to the other guys

with that said............
VOTE: SNALE/BURDEN

Great vote dude, thanks. 3-0 ko close this.