http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2741/picture003en1.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9986/picture002hj6.jpg

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/900/picture001ha4.jpg

Whatcha think?

is that suppose to be good or something?

^Ouch.

But before you come in here and talk that shit go to my other thread and look at how bad i was then and now. It's improved.

rather not waste my time

It sucked.

You need to learn how to colour in properly...good effort though

big improvement :D take your time

re-size your pics

they'd probably look better if they werent gigantic...

you're right though, you have improved

SIMPLES!!!!...
you jus started, get simples down first

dude its better than i can do

what is it

i'm not sure but it looked pretty!

stick with it my dude..one comment i would make is to make the letters more boxy than bubbley...or pick one..cuz this kinda looks like a combo of the two

like the initial letters have a lot of curves to them, but then the shadow of the letters is completly boxed and straight lined...and be more creative and crazy with it...straighter lines and more creativity but it looks good

Just keep trying.... Everyone starts somewhere, everyone of those people that leaves a comment saying stuff bad about your art started the same way you are right now.... only difference is, is they were at this point awhile ago and they forgot what it was like starting.
I personally am not that good but when I asked my friends they said the best way to start is to pick a style, and then just keep practicing....

Ohh yea one more thing... thats a HUGE improvement on the older stuff