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I guess I'm the under dog, but you're the bitch, I mangle your verses
You've proven you can't be champ, 'cause you couldn't handle the burden!*
My mission's to show you couldn't cook up a hot line spittin in the stove
You get the votes? You couldn't take the cats workin for pet control!**
I'm killin this lame, I'm the truth, he got lies fillin his brain
We know you ain't the American Psycho punk, you just got a Lil' Insane!***
You look like Wierd Al with a fade, tatoos and a gay lover
(2-0)/(2-0) is funny, 'cause it's clear to see Lo displays Dun's(Dunce) words!****
You gotta admit me losin is impossible because you can't see it, Dun
Sorta like Micheal jackson, race leaves, you're a pansi that runs!*****
I know I'ma get Done Low like I was havin sex with a midget, dude
I've proven I can get three to win, but all dun can (dunkin') get is 2!******




* - Under dog, the female dog, bitch... he Lost to Burden...
** - categories... cats... pet control...
*** - His sig... his boy, Lil' Insane...
**** - Look at his pic... Dunce means stupid, ignorant...
***** - Michael Jackson was black, now he's white, race left, race as in running, pansi is a flower that has leaves (petals), pansi means he's homo... get it?
****** - Note in the first line, there is a comma after midget... I don't fuck dudes... lol... second line: I've got 3 wins so far, Dunkin in basketball only gets 2 points... there for... do the math... I win... lol...

STOP EXPLAINING SO MUCH!!!....WE’RE ALL NOT AS DUMB AS YOU, WE GET YOUR BASIC BARS!!!

This Punk is a faggot and worthless...but the truth is I’m stronger than your surge is…
Left to ponder and your nervous…
I'm so underrated...
^^^Cuz like ‘stalling battlers’, your ‘explanations read longer than your verses’!,(Versus)
His latest written showed his sin hand…cuz he delivered a ‘skinny plot’ with a ‘thin plan’…
Honestly you’ll never win fam…cuz you couldn’t put ‘Heart in-The Game’ if ‘Black Wall Street had the Tin Man’!...(His new written piece 'Heart in The Game')
What did this bitch expect?!...he's never ripped the vets, or even spits correct...
You'll miss respect...Cuz 'you logging off RW's', is the only way a 'FranchiZe Dis(s)-Connect'!,
This belt I’m back to clench…spit with raps intense, then react and bash the trench…
He’d never extract a quench…Cuz ‘The FranchiZe is no threat to the net’, like if ‘S. Francis sat the bench’!,
Make sure you don’t get another win with poor shit…so let Dunny settle the score quick…
Saw you had ‘3 wins’ made me more pissed…but ‘2/3rds’ of them were ‘no-shows’, so with you I don’t see a ‘four-fit’!, (forfeit)
Your bars are never felt whore!!!....I’ll leave his health tore, and make his self sore…
Watch him melt more…His whole ‘career is a waste/waist’, so that’s the only thing he'd ‘need a belt for’!!

*Dunny Knocks FranchiZe out with a hard left, Grabs his belt and walks away humble, goodnight faggot....*

Bar by bar breakdowns only, If you don't get the bars, don't vote....

I don't need a whole additional 10 bars to explain my shit....peace bitches....

I only explained so there were no misunderstandings... anyways, vote people...

Flow-Fran
Punches-Dun
Personals-Dun
Multis- Dun
Metas-Dun
Vocab/W.P- Dun
Creativity-Dun
Enjoy-Dun
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Vote-Dun

i gave em flow...so its not a complete CAT sweep i guess..but again Dun jus killed wit the punches n the metas n everything...no hate towards Fran...Dun jus came better in almost all CAT's imo...Nice job 2 both

there will be no bar for bar.. it is NOT required, no one can change the rules, the rules are already set, next posts after me are votes only..


1-0

I'm not trying to change the vote I'm trying to improve, which if it's a cat sweep, I would like to see how my bars were weaker...

Without explanation it's harder to do so...
Thanks I appreciate it...

1-0 Dun

I guess I'm the under dog, but you're the bitch, I mangle your verses
You've proven you can't be champ, 'cause you couldn't handle the burden!*
^setup was weak. your explainations for underdog/bitch made me think you're gonna do a play on those words. you didnt,so the explanining was for what? and the burden line was decent at best.

My mission's to show you couldn't cook up a hot line spittin in the stove
You get the votes? You couldn't take the cats workin for pet control!**
^weak. i know whatchu' saying,but this was weak

I'm killin this lame, I'm the truth, he got lies fillin his brain
We know you ain't the American Psycho punk, you just got a Lil' Insane!***
^pooooorly flipped. could've made a difference if you took time.

You look like Wierd Al with a fade, tatoos and a gay lover
(2-0)/(2-0) is funny, 'cause it's clear to see Lo displays Dun's(Dunce) words!****
^wack.

You gotta admit me losin is impossible because you can't see it, Dun
Sorta like Micheal jackson, race leaves, you're a pansi that runs!*****
^wack again.

I know I'ma get Done Low like I was havin sex with a midget, dude
I've proven I can get three to win, but all dun can (dunkin') get is 2!
^damn,i'll just give you the benefit of the doubt. shits still horrible


^^^Cuz like ‘stalling battlers’, your ‘explanations read longer than your verses’!,
^i didnt bring down the setup...but this is true.

His latest written showed his sin hand…cuz he delivered a ‘skinny plot’ with a ‘thin plan’…
Honestly you’ll never win fam…cuz you couldn’t put ‘Heart in-The Game’ if ‘Black Wall Street had the Tin Man’!...(His new written piece 'Heart in The Game')
^werent yo talking about LONG explanations? tin-man line was decent.

What did this bitch expect?!...he's never ripped the vets, or even spits correct...
You'll miss respect...Cuz 'you logging off RW's', is the only way a 'FranchiZe Dis(s)-Connect'!,
^played and poorly executed in here.

This belt I’m back to clench…spit with raps intense, then react and bash the trench…
He’d never extract a quench…Cuz ‘The FranchiZe is no threat to the net’, like if ‘S. Francis sat the bench’!,
^spit w/raps intense is forced. follow-up was eh.

Make sure you don’t get another win with poor shit…so let Dunny settle the score quick…
Saw you had ‘3 wins’ made me more pissed…but ‘2/3rds’ of them were ‘no-shows’, so with you I don’t see a ‘four-fit’!, (forfeit)
^could've hit harder. still decent here.

Your bars are never felt whore!!!....I’ll leave his health tore, and make his self sore…
Watch him melt more…His whole ‘career is a waste/waist’, so that’s the only thing he'd ‘need a belt for’!!
^damn you're forcing the multi's too much. belt line is blah. could've been better. oh well,that'll allow me to still use mine.


horrible battle IMO,but v/Dunlo. he edged it out w/a FEW disses.

that's 2-0, uppin'....

*EDIT*

I'm retarded....

It's 2-0 dun... it says it on the thread, lol...

Punches-Dun
Personals-Dun
Multis- Dun
Metas-Dun
Vocab- Dun
Creativity-Dun
flow-dun


you fuccks can take this vote or not dont give a fuck this was a
one sided battle any body can see that ,,,

so fuck any one that dont think this vote counts

v...dunny

Your vote don't count homie, Don't be mad cuz he dissed you, lol...

2-0...Ups....

he didnt diss me that was a hot line ...but what ever

Punches-D (hands down destroyed dude)
Personals-D (other guy had them but as always quality over quantity)
Wordplay-D
Multies-D
Flow-=

O/A-DunLo (easy win IMO)

3-0 Dun.
There's the KO. Dun's the new Middle Weight Champion. Congrats.

pretty solid battle fellas... i dunno which votes count and which dont, so i'll vote neway... i don't care

Franchize -

"I guess I'm the under dog, but you're the bitch, I mangle your verses
You've proven you can't be champ, 'cause you couldn't handle the burden!*"

i didnt like the first line... str8 personal in the second but wasnt hard hitting

"I'm killin this lame, I'm the truth, he got lies fillin his brain
We know you ain't the American Psycho punk, you just got a Lil' Insane!***"

the flow was there... solid personal...

"I know I'ma get Done Low like I was havin sex with a midget, dude
I've proven I can get three to win, but all dun can (dunkin') get is 2!******"

lol.... nice closer

Dunlo -

"^^^Cuz like ‘stalling battlers’, your ‘explanations read longer than your verses’!,(Versus)"

this is a form of "feeding" to me... mentioning the other persons verse in anyway is a turnoff for me... but aside from that, nice opener

"His latest written showed his sin hand…cuz he delivered a ‘skinny plot’ with a ‘thin plan’…
Honestly you’ll never win fam…cuz you couldn’t put ‘Heart in-The Game’ if ‘Black Wall Street had the Tin Man’!...(His new written piece 'Heart in The Game')"

good personal... solid punch

"Make sure you don’t get another win with poor shit…so let Dunny settle the score quick…
Saw you had ‘3 wins’ made me more pissed…but ‘2/3rds’ of them were ‘no-shows’, so with you I don’t see a ‘four-fit’!, (forfeit)"

lol.... hot shit... i liked the flow and the breakdown of this w/l record... good shit

"Your bars are never felt whore!!!....I’ll leave his health tore, and make his self sore…
Watch him melt more…His whole ‘career is a waste/waist’, so that’s the only thing he'd ‘need a belt for’!!"

good flow for the first line... but nothing else, second line was solid tho

__________________________
punches - dun
personals - dun
multis - dun
wordplay - dun
wit - dun
enjoy - dun

both came w/ very decent verses.... i do think the explainations were overboard from Franchize... very unnecessary... i've seen dun come a lot harder but i guess he did enough to get the job done... Franchize came nice but i think Dun is a different level then he can handle at this point... but good shit from both

w/ that said.........

VOTE: DUNLO