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...like a 2yr old, homie in ya speech you didnt speak clear,
thought River went ta heaven but obviously we meet here,
.....i'll daughter you,
C thURZ LEAVES all AGES 'openly exposed' like a xtra small halter top a do,
i only give PROPS to you- for puttin on a good ACT, cus ya skills is STAGED,
1 2 3 and 4bars leave u ill dismayed, CLOWNS round here turn they heads when they SAW u gettin killed this way,
this kid is crazed, what was you thinkin with the name you picked,
this prick claims he spits because his screename is the slang for DICK,
you're lame as shit changed up quik- posted you verse as bonafide,
then knew that MT was like an UNATTENTIVE HOTDOG VENDOR the way i'd leave BUN's(BON) ON FIRE,
its easy to see your GETTIN RIPPED like a BUMS ATTIRE, C i HANN EL's so you cant say T-BS,
im a fuckin one man crew, but people think im a SPOKESPERSON FOR FAT PEOPLE the way i REP TUN(ton) TO DEATH.....

check in. dropping soon.

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Look a, here, boy. I'll hawk ya shit, put a knife in ya heart, u prick.
comparing urself to me lyrically? like ''mild headaches, ur hardly sick''!
consistency is a must, he's washed up, Like 'first times hes not lasting'!
but since he's a vet,
the people ''Pretend to feel it, to please him like his wife fakin orgasms''!
Everything you spit is garbage, the opposite of nice bitch
beef?
I'll get him ''set, up for about 40 dollars, like a satellite dish''!!
wanna have a crew battle? it's nothing fam, to fucking blam, and hit ya crew w/ the heat
maneuver the piece,
he's not hood at all, so like ''broke radios in the ghetto, he's not in tune with the streets''!
dont front like u hot, the key up there, is the real drop, beef? shit, i'm grimey, i'd fuck ya mother son!
drama in ur life? haha, please bitch, the biggest dilemma he has, is to stay in one dead crew or the other one! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1434411#post1434411)
thurz is a 'constipated procrastinator, he wont do shit, yeah you screwed bitch
so why fight back?
like ''extravagant residents trying to cut down on expenses, it's useless/use less''!!

will revise my verse later.....

good verse fam, upping for votes.

punches-thurz
wordplay-one
metas-thurz
punches-thurz
personals-one
flow-thurz
multis-one
creativity-thurz
enjoyment-thurz

decent battle. ones verse had alot of played punches in it and his flow was off in spots. thurz ya verse was solid throught out and had fresh concepts. you just lacked multi's.

vote thurz

lmao, no comment, 1-0.

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Punches: Tie
Meta's: Tie
Humor: Bona
Multis: Tie
Vocab: Mighty
Structure: Bona
Complexity: Tie


Best Bar From Mighty Thurz: then knew that MT was like an UNATTENTIVE HOTDOG VENDOR the way i'd leave BUN's(BON) ON FIRE,

Best Bar From Bonafide: he's not hood at all, so like ''broke radios in the ghetto, he's not in tune with the streets''!

Overall Vote: Bonafide.

Didnt Really Like This Battle. Coulda Went Either Way But I Guess Bona Pulled It. I Seen Better From Both Of You.

wordplay-one
metas-thurz
punches-thurz
personals-one
flow-thurz
multis-one
meta-thruz


this was a good battle ..but THRUZ just hade a better battle verse.

but one eye you did your thing to man that just was filled with multis
just not that many good punches.

good battle from both
big ups ...vote ...THRUZ

2-1 thURZ...and good shit One...

let me go ahead and spark this process by saying this was a very entertaining and close match up....

Thurz -

C thURZ LEAVES all AGES 'openly exposed' like a xtra small halter top a do,
i only give PROPS to you- for puttin on a good ACT, cus ya skills is STAGED,
1 2 3 and 4bars leave u ill dismayed, CLOWNS round here turn they heads when they SAW u gettin killed this way,


i was feeling this portion... not too much the first bar tho... but this was solid

this kid is crazed, what was you thinkin with the name you picked,
this prick claims he spits because his screename is the slang for DICK,

lol... made me laugh...

then knew that MT was like an UNATTENTIVE HOTDOG VENDOR the way i'd leave BUN's(BON) ON FIRE,

solid punch... decent flow....


One -

Look a, here, boy. I'll hawk ya shit, put a knife in ya heart, u prick.
comparing urself to me lyrically? like ''mild headaches, ur hardly sick''!

dislike this opener... worded good, flow was there... but the punch wasnt

wanna have a crew battle? it's nothing fam, to fucking blam, and hit ya crew w/ the heat
maneuver the piece,
he's not hood at all, so like ''broke radios in the ghetto, he's not in tune with the streets''!

haha... nice.. enjoyed it

dont front like u hot, the key up there, is the real drop, beef? shit, i'm grimey, i'd fuck ya mother son!
drama in ur life? haha, please bitch, the biggest dilemma he has, is to stay in one dead crew or the other one!


dislike the set up for this line... but you followed it up good w/ a solid punch and a appropiate link'

______________________________
punches - MT
wordplay - MT
metas - One
personals - One
flow - tie
multis - MT
creativity - One
*adds* wit - MT, slightly w/ that "slang for dick" line... lol
enjoyment - MT

damn this was a close battle... and please believe i've examined both thoroughly... both of yalls flow was there... i enjoyed the punches... and both had some pretty soild punchs but neither were really consistant throughout... but when it's all said and done, i simply enjoyed Thurz verse a little more

with that said.....

VOTE: MIGHTY THURZ

punches-bon
personals-bon
wordplay-thurz
nameplay-thurz
metas-bon
flow-tied

Vote-bon

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thurz might have been more complex, but bon's verse was cut throat, that 1 man crew line killed it, very personal verse, i enjoyed this battle.

pz

close battle

Flow- One.. was a little more consistent, thurz u were choppy in the beginning n end
Multis- tie
Punches- One
Personals- One
Name flips- thurz
W.P/Metas- tie
Enjoyment- tie

overall i vote One.. he was just a little more solid, not thurz's typical drop...
pretty decent battle

...like a 2yr old, homie in ya speech you didnt speak clear,
thought River went ta heaven but obviously we meet here,
^weak opener

.....i'll daughter you,
C thURZ LEAVES all AGES 'openly exposed' like a xtra small halter top a do,
^not bad. if you had a nicer setup that'll help too.

i only give PROPS to you- for puttin on a good ACT, cus ya skills is STAGED,
1 2 3 and 4bars leave u ill dismayed, CLOWNS round here turn they heads when they SAW u gettin killed this way,
^thats long as fuck. thats like 26 syllables in that last line. and the first line i know you're tryna' say you're giving him the stage props and all,but thats weak. you could've used that just for a sick setup,but then you didnt.

this kid is crazed, what was you thinkin with the name you picked,
this prick claims he spits because his screename is the slang for DICK,
^see here,you used a setup to talk about your very next line.
so eventhough the play on spit/dick is played,you still executed this good.
i wish people would understand that this is how its done. so yeah...
weak,but still i can appreciate the relevance of it. dont expect much credit though lol

you're lame as shit changed up quik- posted you verse as bonafide,
then knew that MT was like an UNATTENTIVE HOTDOG VENDOR the way i'd leave BUN's(BON) ON FIRE,
^this concept was kinda flipped poorly. it came out kinda weak here

its easy to see your GETTIN RIPPED like a BUMS ATTIRE, C i HANN EL's so you cant say T-BS,
im a fuckin one man crew, but people think im a SPOKESPERSON FOR FAT PEOPLE the way i REP TUN(ton) TO DEATH.....
^here i beg you to not say you're using wordplay with CHANNELS and TBS.
honestly nobody would understand that w/o all the special caps and shit.
nobody would feel this if you spit this out and yes i know its text,but its just pushing the boundaries of the game too far. and the rep tun was fine,but it just felt like you was bragging about you and whatchu' repping. not really dissing him.


Look a, here, boy. I'll hawk ya shit, put a knife in ya heart, u prick.
comparing urself to me lyrically? like ''mild headaches, ur hardly sick''!
^weak choice for opener. especially a played one

consistency is a must, he's washed up, Like 'first times hes not lasting'!
but since he's a vet,
the people ''Pretend to feel it, to please him like his wife fakin orgasms''!
^concept was coo. but i'd have to say it could've been flipped better.
the setup wasnt all that either for me.

Everything you spit is garbage, the opposite of nice bitch
beef?
I'll get him ''set, up for about 40 dollars, like a satellite dish''!!
wanna have a crew battle? it's nothing fam, to fucking blam, and hit ya crew w/ the heat
maneuver the piece,
he's not hood at all, so like ''broke radios in the ghetto, he's not in tune with the streets''!
dont front like u hot, the key up there, is the real drop, beef? shit, i'm grimey, i'd fuck ya mother son!
drama in ur life? haha, please bitch, the biggest dilemma he has, is to stay in one dead crew or the other one!
^'get him setup' line could've been better. still alright as is. 'in tune w/the streets' line coluld've been better too. 'drama/dilemma' line was cool,but i didnt like the setup much. pretty decent on the personal side too for that line. see,thats a pretty well executed use of info. not just stating it,but used it in content and flipped it well. a fucking BREATH OF FRESH AIR lol.

oh and the closer that i didnt quote from yours? i didnt feel it.
anyway,overall Mighty was coming kinda well,but if i had to quote out something i'd say i felt more of Bona's verse. v/Bona'

and i really hope ya'll take into consideration what im saying. saying more w/less is really how its done.

punches-thurz
wordplay-one
metas-thurz
punches-thurz
personals-one
flow-thurz
multis-one
creativity-thurz
enjoyment-thurz

decent battle. ones verse had alot of played punches in it and his flow was off in spots. thurz ya verse was solid throught out and had fresh concepts. you just lacked multi's.

vote thurz


yeah I did punches twice. My mistake.

^DO YOU realize that FLOW=rhyme scheme?

^ not necessarily.

alright...

flow-thurz
multis-thurz
personals-one
creativity-one
punches-one
wordplay-thurz
metas-one

close ass battle here


then knew that MT was like an UNATTENTIVE HOTDOG VENDOR the way i'd leave BUN's(BON) ON FIRE,
thought this could have been better....somethin like 'cause only girl scouts feel Bon's fire'

close shit

vote-bon

stay up guys