Check In By Wed. Dec. 5th Midnight EST
Verses Due By Thurs. Dec 6th Midnight EST
3-5 Bars Only
Anything over will result in 1 docked vote.

check..... g'luck

Com’on duke… ya a little more then half whack… not even worth being laughed at…
Doing TaeBo DVD with Billy Blanks is the only way he can “workout” an “Ab-Track”//
Say fella, I will crush ya melon! Girl Scouts of America is your only chance at selliln…
Your record is worst then a felons, no one pays attention to your lyrics, that’s why your name is yellin(!)//
He no-shows, he gets dock (votes) more then Dickery’s clock…. I am done with this…*
Please spare me this dumb shit, why are you on this hip-hop site? When you’re nothing more then a Junglist//


*All his battles he no showed

3 bars of “fuck it”… I doubt he’ll even show

Check!

lol... glad you made it!

I matched your three bars. Everyone picked you to win, in the predictions thread. Good luck homie!
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I'll rape this bitch with my mind, like a child molester jerking off to a dance recital.
I'm regicidal, I murder this King, like I was James Earl Ray's idol.

Your flow? I'm not finding it. Your punches make less sense than your fucking text alignment. (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=111030)
When I react its violent, spit his own bars back at him, and render Def silent.

I radiate deadly heat like detonated atomic bombs, scorch, disrupt, and immobilize DEF CON.
I'll terrorize D.C. with more force than crashing planes into the Pentagon!

ya'know lol...although ppl are hating on me baddly for my replies of honesty
it seems like they're also taking my words into thought and really trying it.
now i dont mind at all....cause they STILL know im fucking right. w/that said:

Com’on duke… ya a little more then half whack… not even worth being laughed at…
Doing TaeBo DVD with Billy Blanks is the only way he can “workout” an “Ab-Track”//
^a setup about him on tracks could've been even more sick for this. and before a newb comes in here:
NO i dont mean to use the word track. idiots. now,back to D's verse.
the wordplay here was good. newbs would say omg that was an awesome punch.
just like the TRUE FUCKING newbs are.

Say fella, I will crush ya melon! Girl Scouts of America is your only chance at selliln…
Your record is worst then a felons, no one pays attention to your lyrics, that’s why your name is yellin(!)//
^eventhough you spelled selling wrong lol i wont mind. nah the nameplay was decent. not saying its hard hitting,but it was done well though. no gay force.

He no-shows, he gets dock (votes) more then Dickery’s clock…. I am done with this…*
Please spare me this dumb shit, why are you on this hip-hop site? When you’re nothing more then a Junglist//
^not feeling this much. why? cause its too broad. i have no clue which definition you're referring to since your setup isnt narrowing me into the follow-up. i cant give credit just cause i know the definitions. i can only credit for picture perfected words. feel me?

I'll rape this bitch with my mind, like a child molester jerking off to a dance recital.
I'm regicidal, I murder this King, like I was James Earl Ray's idol.
^that setup isnt working for me. regicidal's definition is repetative here.
it seems like you just wanna show us you knew it. instead of using it as a pun.
that line read out: the killing of a king,i murder this king,like i was etc.

Your flow? I'm not finding it. Your punches make less sense than your fucking text alignment.
When I react its violent, spit his own bars back at him, and render Def silent.
^the link wasnt a creative personal to me. 2nd line was a filler

I radiate deadly heat like detonated atomic bombs, scorch, disrupt, and immobilize DEF CON.
I'll terrorize D.C. with more force than crashing planes into the Pentagon!
^setup was weak. the 2nd line was kinda weak too,but its proper material.
so although THIS one was weak atleast you'll know you had the right idea.

v/DC

Com’on duke… ya a little more then half whack… not even worth being laughed at…
Doing TaeBo DVD with Billy Blanks is the only way he can “workout” an “Ab-Track”//
decent little name flip 3/5
Say fella, I will crush ya melon! Girl Scouts of America is your only chance at selliln…
Your record is worst then a felons, no one pays attention to your lyrics, that’s why your name is yellin(!)//
funny personal 3/5
He no-shows, he gets dock (votes) more then Dickery’s clock…. I am done with this…*
Please spare me this dumb shit, why are you on this hip-hop site? When you’re nothing more then a Junglist//
little jab, not much more 2/5

total-8/15

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I'll rape this bitch with my mind, like a child molester jerking off to a dance recital.
I'm regicidal, I murder this King, like I was James Earl Ray's idol.
little jab 1/5

Your flow? I'm not finding it. Your punches make less sense than your fucking text alignment. (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=111030)
When I react its violent, spit his own bars back at him, and render Def silent.
decent 2/5

I radiate deadly heat like detonated atomic bombs, scorch, disrupt, and immobilize DEF CON.
I'll terrorize D.C. with more force than crashing planes into the Pentagon!
nice little name play, but seen it before 2/5

5/15

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vote-dc

Im jus voting...jus b/c
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Flow- DC...Abs strucuture was a lil off which thru the flow off a lil
Punches-DC
Personals- neither really...a lotta nameplays
Multis- DC
Metas-Ab
Vocab/W.P.-tie
Creativity-Ab
Enjoy-DC
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Vote-DC

this was actually an ok battle...Ab had some good concepts he coulda worked into better punches...Rep 2 both...I really jus thought DC punches hit a lil harder...maybe cause the wording was smoother...but Ab u coulda took this...jus work on ur structure...everythings there...u jus need 2 set up n deliver ur punches better...No Hate..n this aint a d/r vote...But accept it if u want