ey wats this shit, let me bust a spit
clutch my fists, im coming swift
get hit so quick with a left hook
then a right then left, rookies being wrecked
them pussies think they look blessed
a real crook cant be shook, much less
be took, my rook gettin yo king in check
ya fucked, im bringing the best
bustin never bein detested
or inturupted, respected,
my spirit lingers behind my spit,
like a ghost in a pirate ship
rap is poems defining this
life of mine as i finally live
i rhyme to the tick of the watch on my wrist
defying the laws of isaac and einstien and newton
timing it all in my mind as i do it,
out of the top of my dome comes the truest of music
ive been called louie lucid, the dude who controls his own life
and i write just to let off my chest what ive seen in my sight
and i smoke just to step towards death cuz its righteous
mortals live lifeless, eyes frightened, all fightin
but souls that have lived from before like myself
we can see through this shit, maybe even just help
im dreamin out loud while i cruise around town
with my head in the clouds, my feet on the ground
my eyes on the prize and my speakers up loud
my beats heard three blocks down

i got an essence thats hard to decipher
im just a new kid in town, but im always a fighter

il battle you 8-10 bars you spit first, due date can be negotiated

ok im on now. where is the thread?

in this thread?

i come up simply, you come definiseively,
challenge me? bitch you must be challenged mentally
battlin me is askin for catastrophe and bad memories
you wanna get rocked? c'mon pandora open this box
cant speak with my eloquence, aint possess no elegance,
you dont even know what its spelling is
dont hate, im tellin it is, what it is, ya too late
battlin, yet yappin about a due date
lets negotiate somethin else, ya fate
got a plan of action?
so you can back up that attitude you actin?
this dude is hot flashin, im kicked back cool, relaxin
aint give a damn whats gon happen
im fathomed as one of the baddest motherfuckers, you just babblin
i roll an emcee in a blunt then smoke him while im rappin,
blowin the smoke in his face and laughin
im invadin, ill punch you and make sure bloods tasted
not a single bar goin wasted, to make you see you were mistaken
i kick it wicked with a way of killin the hyporcitc hating
i give a shit im just sittin sippin liquor and blazin

nope this is not the thread - will be set up in the battle text arena, i'l get it set up by a mod tomoro, you should be able to use the same verse upto you...