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Anything over will result in 1 docked vote.

Check..ill have links when possible

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=112419

checked in.

aight my bad...heres a verse...accept it if u want...sorry im late ..jus been crazy busy man...
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Look, Wut u Call Raw, isnt Ill, Im appauled wit ya Skill, I'll take ya Heart n ya Will
start a spark that youll feel...N Will someone please tell Han...Star Wars isnt Real
Ur Punches Missing, Draw All-Air...Thinkin TUN would return must mean, Your Mind Gone Or isnt All there
n Nuts, u gotta Small Pair...So only time 'H before P', Is On ur 'Microsoft Hardware'
But i finally gotta battle to Call Fair...Yet watch how Tradegy Happen,when he battered like Hatton
n 'beat at his own game', like i 'took over Manhattan'
Heres a glimpse at his style...a few irrelevant verbs, Now heres my lame set up attempt
(tryin insert a multi here)...spit somemore meaningless words,then a punch that doesnt make any sense
Its Easy! Dudes Simple...U'll get Erased, Like ur Musics in Pencil, n Im Proven wit Mentals
and the Main Reason that TUN failed, Is cause u couldnt Improve ur Potential
n the thoughts bruisin ya Temple...its also y u get No Dough, jus heavy stitches lilke logos
cause all u Good For is, "Beating Dick"...Why else they Reppin, "Han(d) Solos"/
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i dont even kno how many bars that is...jus threw it up here....sorry for my tardiness again...prolly goin b gone again 4 a lil bit cpl days prolly so if u accept this take ur time on ur verse

YOU..stretch...SHIT! with bars longer than Jolie's breast is, you get sick?
not with the money in ya' avvy, like u got problems with hallutosis tryna' rep the u.s. mint!!/
ya' teen gawbage, an obscene novice..a heavyweight who still needs progress/
believe he puts money where his mouth is, but ya' like marvel comics..since here ya' green gobblin'!!/
i've seen squadrons, and kilt plenty crews..singlehandedly, bandage payroll like money clips!/
dunny must've flipped, a "quarter million"..way he "joked" with him first time then made "pay a cut up again"!!/
adjust it friend, cuz we cool..but i'm iller, and you've been struggling up some flair shaawwty
cuz given ya' skill so far? ya' couldn't "throw me" with a "tumbler" convincing me at a fucking tupperware party!!/
so give up the belt kindly, since everyone in def's not buying a chrysler..knowin that Han-da-man/
and if i run outta rants, shit i'll even put my fist to ya' calendar n' just DROP ya' plans!!/

(hmm...is this thing on? iight, 1 more..u STILL here PayRoll!? Ok, i got you.)

bro' you'll need to settle down, cuz ya' hardly found without scars that shard ya' clout/
but post "currency" while we box here? it's like our 2 way battle: "you sending a message that you need to "change" ya' bar's a-round"!!/


iight, i'm done.

erm this battle was weak.

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Felt both could have came harder/got more personal.
Mediocre nameflips/metas in this battle.
But pay came a little harder.
Keep at it guys.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1452984#post1452984

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will have other link in a sec...

Snale we did these verse quick...of course we coulda been better..but its still better than most u c around here when they take the whole time...but i aint mad at ya...1-0 me..unless Han gotta beef wit it

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=112416

nah, it's cool..but i don't think it was a weak battle. i just keyed quickly i wasn't really thinking about personals...there's too much thinking going on around here with these verses period. You, dunlo, and pay are some of the only ones i know who key their shit straight out...maybe auroura too

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couldn't really see a definent edge in either verse. pay had better personals but his closer was real played. some of hans punches were pretty hilarious but not knock outs. so I say a tie.

sorry guys...thought this was a lackluster showing from both of you...did really appear that either of you put much effort into it

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Han Solo: You Had Good Topics Here, Set Ups Were Effective, But You Didn't Clearly Follow Threw, You Had Acouple Solid Flips, Good Hits There N There, But Some Bars Was InConsistent. But Overall Your Verse Was Solidly Decent.

PayRoll: Nicely Done With Potential, But You Same Played Concepts In There Aswell, And Personals Was Hit Smooth, Overall Your Verse Was More Consistent I Dunno Seem Like Han Rushed It Or Something But You Get My Vote.


MVGT: Payroll