Check In By Tues. Dec. 11th Midnight EST
Verses Due By Wed. Dec 12th Midnight EST
8-10 Bars Only
Anything over will result in 1 docked vote.

Alrighty, Checking In Now, Please Guys Shows Up?

Good Luck To Both.

audio or text? im in

fuck ya'll niggaz

This is really sad, but ill probly still win
you couldnt write me up with an ink filled pen

you couldnt pop me if your mouth hadda pill
you couldnt roast me if your mouth hadda grill

Leave eyes teary when the theory verse done
cant even see da gawd P, cuz ur the worst one

call the nurse, son..cuz im sicker than incest
While R!can theory's Da Gawd's lil princess

Da Gawd aint god thats a prom-ise ya dig?
what a lovely picture of your mom in ya sig

Rican got about as many losses as wins
Rican is ill? yea, the pope burns crosses as sins

Da Gawd, P lease, fuck you too
good luck, too bad, you suck who knew?

and Theoryz is beggin people to please show up
for a show down? good luck, HA..please grow up

convince me, you both aint jus 2 jokes
Ill drop a verse u can discuss who chokes

So i'll kick my feet up, wait for a letter of fear
I gotta clean record, it jus gets better from here

uhhhh WOW


Look






























nah seriously, pay attention
















Look
I'm I warned foes, I bring it "raw" just to leave you scorned hoes
so these 2 pussies are fucked without group pornos

look, I slash shit, I blast it, you maggot
man fuck a rhyme, YOUR my punchline...
http://cdn2.soundclick.com/31/images/j/band/jerrod.jpg?version=243
You fuckin faggot :smh:
and don't try to say it was a joke, nah bitch you gay :smh:
It was a bad move when "PG set up" like a bad offensive play

I'm wrong or should I say? somethin about Rican in this hoeish slumber
I would diss him, but I heard Dem Purtoricans roll in numbers :(

You hoes get thundere'd, braggin about your cash flow :smh:
shit, ya'll "2 faggots Together" like that Ye/Wayne Collabo (http://youtube.com/watch?v=F3RORAssONs)

Yaw, I sit back, roll up and hit the yay
fuck this battle B I ran outta shit to say

on other topics, Let's talk about drama, no lets talk about P
How can we have a "mentally fucked up Champ" like Mohammad Ali :smh:

But I promise I'll be, here you need a new bred champ
R!can, came, but couldn't "Stick to the Post" like a bootlegg Stamp

Soooooooo I'll lay back in the menage, while 2 bitches massage...
me, and "Bump They Body Body" with the Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawd
P!!

Blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Jerrod Thomas
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The Spotlight Has Failed On You For Ya Shine, Bruise Your Eyes Until He's Blind, Cuz Its Obvious That "JT Loves The Rest Of His Boyfriends" Like Nysnc Back On There Prime'..!!

3 Way Match Should Of Never Occured Today, Give Your Face's Apperance A Negative Raise, Cuz Rican'll "Throw Rod Into Shallow Waters" To Prove He's Nothing To Be Cast'd Away'...!!

Put You On Running Waters And You'll Witness His Flow, Knock His Knees Out So He Can Really Blow, Cuz ER Is Nothing Special To Viewrs But A Damn Hospital Show

Jumping Around In A Pogo, Your Life'll Be Put In Some place were you dont Know, Your In A D, Block Of Hatred Sure Though, And Rican'll Double R In New York Streets Like The Ruff Ryder Logo

These Lyrics Are Full Of Hatred N' Will Hurt You, I Got Bars That'll Scar Ya N Support Few,Cuz Jerrod is Nothing But A Motivation For Lose'n Weight Like Subway Commercials
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Come On I Got 5 More Left? Pssh Gotta Be Kidding Me?
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Da Gawd P.
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YOUR TURN FOR DEATH:
Stop Actin Weak Kid, iTs Sad When Im Not Trying My Hardest, Put Blades To Ya Chest, And Get Scared Bitch, Your Nothing! Cuz To Us Your Styles P Like D-Block Artist

Take Your Life Instantly, Because Your Soul Doesnt Deserve This Buddie, And If You Continue To Live Then Yes, Your Actually Lucky, Cuz Gawd Above Me? Yeah Only When Mention'n Bible Studies'..!!

In Viewing Public Your Not A Pal in There, Wont Stop Cutting You Until Ya Blood Leaks Out Lavender, Cuz Your Life Is Being Marked Like Days On A Calendar'...!!

No Need for The Gun When My Fist'll Give You A Pound, Like Weak Boxers You Cannot Manage Another Round, Get Hurt With Impacting Nouns, Once You've Been Murked Aw Will Be Mention'd Like Depressing Sounds'...!!

Get Slapped, Then My Fist Will Give Ya Chin A Throb,You Fucking Slob, Earn A Check By Gettin Employee'd At A Job, Punches Will Alert You In Mourning Hours to Show That This Is A Wake Up Call For You To Get On The Job'..!! FireFighter! :owned:

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1453496#post1453496

haha...i nice job to both..i dont normally do text...
i shoulld probably keep it that way......

damn...this was a little close between P and RT

punches- tie(P & RT)
personals- press
wordplay-RT
nameplay-RT
metas-press
multis-RT
flow-lol JT
structure-JT
enjoyment-press
CONSISTANCY-RT

this shit was close guys, if you woulda came more consistant and not wasted 2 bars press it woulda been your battle easily

vote-RT

punches-rt
personals-p
flow-p/jt
multis-rt
metas-tie
wordplay-none
enjoyment-p

vote-rt

exp-jt your verse was o.k. just wasn't a battle verse. every bar was a diss. no punch no setup, just a diss. p you wasted two bars and didn't even really go at rt. rt your bars were pretty stretched but you had decent punches and you were consistent.

punches-Jt
personals-tie
flow-tie
multis-rt
metas-tie
wordplay-P
enjoyment-p

Overall: P I enjoyed his lines the most and I liked his word play

i enjoyed jarrods verse, short and simple...but p came stronger, and practicaly had all the punches...rican said alot...but actually just filled a page...

flow - jarrod
punches - P
Structure - P
Metas - P - RT
Wordplay - RT
overall - Da Gawd P...just had the best drop

punches-jarrod
personals-jarrod
wordplay-tied
nameplay-rican
metas-da gawd p
vocab- no one

vote-jarrod

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To be honest his verse was simple punches with little to no nameplay/wordplay at all, but he's the only one in the battle who gave ten bars of punches rather than filler shit, like the gawd p literally said 'im running out of things to say' which was like the punch in his bar? that's whack.

Ricans verse was a bunch of attempts at nameplay that more often than not missed. You cant take random letters like E from their name and use it as nameplay. If it's their name of their initials thats fine, but other than that it just seems forced.
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vote-jarrod.

pz

Thanks For The Votes.

Count Is? 2-2-1 ? IThink ...?

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1455386#post1455386

its 1-1-2, u were docked a vote b.c of being late

punches- Rican, his were more complex, & less shit.
personals- None that were any good.
wordplay-Rican, some was just ludicrous though, you can't use WP on like one letter of a name.

The rest of the cats don't matter to me, I've seen much better from P, he just drops random shit now so he can stay cool with the shoutbox gays, Rican dropped okay here, some meh bars but some cool bars too. Jerrod dropped more of an audio verse & therefore was never really in contention.

punches- Rican, his were more complex, & less shit.
personals- None that were any good.
wordplay-Rican, some was just ludicrous though, you can't use WP on like one letter of a name.

The rest of the cats don't matter to me, I've seen much better from P, he just drops random shit now so he can stay cool with the shoutbox gays, Rican dropped okay here, some meh bars but some cool bars too. Jerrod dropped more of an audio verse & therefore was never really in contention.

???
People in the shoutbox don't even read my battles,
I drop stupid shit to entertain myself, it's not like I'm gettin paid for this fam.

i gotta agree with snale..

honestly, i hate Rican's style but i don't blame him..i've seen others use it on other sites and the wordplay and phrasing is annoying. Breaking up someones name Je-rr-odd, rod, er, all that crap gets really corny after a while. Some of it is alright, but either your metaphors or the way you use 'em needs alotta work; the multis aren't very attractive either. P just did what he does best Jerrod i unno him but he managed to throw some disses that i could feel.

Vote=Jerrod.

punches- tie between press and rican.. ricans were harder punches but p's were more comical
personals- press (didnt see much from jerrod besides mentioning a name in a diss and rican didnt have stand out personals)
wordplay- rican put in a better attempt
nameplay- press & rican
metas- ehh prolly press
multis- tie press and rican no one had anything stand out
flow- jerrod, made for audio
enjoyment-press, his was funnier to me


overall this was close between press and rican, but i think rican came more consistent.. if press didnt have some throw away bars that were pointless he woulda won

rican

I'm sorry, so is it all tied at 2 up?

3-2-2

RT WON WITH THIS WITH EASE

punches=RT
metas=RT
Structure=TIE
Creativity=TIE
Enjoyment=TIE
W/P=TIE

MVGT=RT

Just close it, R!can wins.