Check In By Tues. Dec. 11th Midnight EST
Verses Due By Wed. Dec 12th Midnight EST
4-6 Bars Only
Anything over will result in 1 docked vote.

Check....

put em up quick this week huh? good shit... check... g'luck dunny boy

And when I blast, I wont miss you… Dun, these aint just idle threats that I spit…
I don’t need to “flex” to “rip”, cuz your “fuckin dead” that’s why Patrick Bateman’s in ya sig//*
SICK……
American Psycho? Please, ur a light ho… I do need to go Louisiana to get “bayou” (by you)…
You an internet nympho, but the only time you get “action” is between two asterisk symbols//
*kicks Dun’s ass*
I could move a crowd of a few cripples… and it’s too simple to rip Dun when I rhyme…
And it’s not hard to define… I can give you an “L on two lines” like I used a pound sign//

http://www.logo-search.com/viewPreview.php?preview=1197

(wow…)

You still breatin???......

Yalls decision will be wavered cuz beating Dun like indecisive college students, nothing MAJOR!…
I saw the predictions, I know this kids favored, but don’t go to “Dunlo” thinking the Pen’ll-save-ya// (Pennsylvania) **
He’s into incest, him and his brother were forced to cuddle… he shouldn’t be forced to rumble…
Cuz he a “preemie”, so of course he’s humble, Dun could get beat by an abortion puddle//
You shook like a rattle D, you can’t rattle me… he can’t wait til this “round(s) up” like cattle meat…
I guarantee he’ll just quote me… but I aint Cassidy… cuz his best bet at winning is if “I battle ME”!//
You can’t see me like Slick Rick, you on ya last eye… I’m the teacher…or Rapworlds Rabbi…
Ur a disgruntle fag or just mad bi… since we talking ‘quotes’, I knew you and your brother “smashed guys”//vvv

Ehhh....I'd get Ak and we'd smash all on you guys....


must i explain?
* Patrick Bateman fucked dead woman in the movie American Psycho
**Dunlo is a ciy in Pennsylvania



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FORGOT MY BELT....
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*exits again*

4-6 Bars Only

unless Dun doesnt care and wants to match

oh my bad... i was thinkin 8... if Dun don't match i'll tell which ones i want removed tomorrow...

Damn, easier than I thought....time to leave the filler out, you had enough for both of us...Key'd, EASY.....



4-6 Bars Only

Learn to read before you try to rap faggot, LET'S GET IT!!!....


*DunLo sees D.C. at the weigh-ins, and notices he's in the wrong weight class. Seems P.G. had to make an exception, being as there is no feather-weight class...Dunny walks over to D.C., spits in his face, then simply proclaims.....

"THE CHAMP IS HERE!!!"....

Ayo...
He doesn't ever fuck with the keys...so it's safe to say that D. Free's laughable...
This free be's natural...cuz 'visiting the district of columbia', is the only way we'd ever see 'D.C.'s Capitol'!,
This faggot has no 'tracks that ride'....he only peeped the audio forum and took lessons...
His hooks flexion...so the only time you'd see a 'D.C. Car-tune/cartoon' is in the 'comic book section'!,
Plus his text sucks...A 'Jay-Z dickrider' who'll dissapoint whenever we open a drop....
Not even jokin' a lot....it's like 'RW's had us confused', the way D.C. is 'Smokin' the Roc'(k)!,*
Hop off Hov's dick, you've got the meter trippin'...plus he's mad at UL's leader riffin'....
Watch this cheater stiffen...go back to being a 'Family Guy', and stop 'writing fanmail to Peter Griffin'!,:owned:
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=112246

TIME TO PULL THE FUCKING PLUG ON THIS POSER......

Now it's time you test destruction....made 'big mistakes', like 'first dates with sex seduction'....
A 'failure' with 'less deduction'...cuz the only way a 'D.,C. goes to an A', is during 'breast reduction'!,=))
His gang is 'non-explosive'....like these bitches crawled out from under some bomb....
'Too Easy' so the 'cumbersome's gone'...plus his 'title proudly admits it', how he's 'Def's #1 Con'!......


*Dating back to the jokes of how me and A smoked Rocks....lol

***Dunny wipes the blood off of his screen and his keyboard, and puts the final nail in D.C.'s coffin***

GoodNight Faggot.... ,,!,,

And I'm not swayin', but Patrick Bateman never once fucks a dead chick in american phsycho....he has prostitutes, but never fucked a dead women....

Get PG to delete two of your bars and the people can get to voting...Or if people think they've got the just of it to just start voting now....GL

Peace....

i gotta be honest here Dun, i've seen you come with crazy personals n wild wordplay before, so i know what you're capable of...but with the constant nameplays here, you started getting really dry. i didn't really feel anything much besides the peter griffin fanmail and the def's con lines, that's it. The RW one was like huh? like..i think you meant to make wordplay outta RocaWear and RapWorlds but it just came out sour. D.C. you struck out on a few bars as well cuz you need to get down the wording right on your disses...you seem to always have good material for punches but you don't listen to how you're delivering them which makes them fall off to anyone reading it. Work on that, and you'll be nice. Besides that, smash guys personal/abortion puddle/the nothing major..all decent lines plus sum of ya' wordplay with fillers here and there were nice, you just gotta starting hearing them out as you write it so that they make more sense and become clear. I basically took off your first 2 bars cuz they weaker and made my decision from that, but if ya'll think that it's unfair and i should wait, then i'll fix my vote later.

flow=dunny
punches=tie
personals=tie
multies=tie
metas/similies=D.C., he had more dunny had a few played ones.
structure=dunny
creativity=D.C., slightly.


My overall feeling from both verses, i'm sorry but i gotta go with a TIE...

Get PG to delete two of your bars and the people can get to voting...Or if people think they've got the just of it to just start voting now....GL


PM'd Pap...

DunLo
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He doesn't ever fuck with the keys...so it's safe to say that D. Free's laughable...
This free be's natural...cuz 'visiting the district of columbia', is the only way we'd ever see 'D.C.'s Capitol'!,
Decent Opener
This faggot has no 'tracks that ride'....he only peeped the audio forum and took lessons...
His hooks flexion...so the only time you'd see a 'D.C. Car-tune/cartoon' is in the 'comic book section'!,
Decent Nameplay
Plus his text sucks...A 'Jay-Z dickrider' who'll dissapoint whenever we open a drop....
Not even jokin' a lot....it's like 'RW's had us confused', the way D.C. is 'Smokin' the Roc'(k)!,*
Ha, Alright.
Hop off Hov's dick, you've got the meter trippin'...plus he's mad at UL's leader riffin'....
Watch this cheater stiffen...go back to being a 'Family Guy', and stop 'writing fanmail to Peter Griffin'!,
Nice..


TIME TO PULL THE FUCKING PLUG ON THIS POSER......

Now it's time you test destruction....made 'big mistakes', like 'first dates with sex seduction'....
A 'failure' with 'less deduction'...cuz the only way a 'D.,C. goes to an A', is during 'breast reduction'!,=))
Nice Set up Here Good Ender.
His gang is 'non-explosive'....like these bitches crawled out from under some bomb....
'Too Easy' so the 'cumbersome's gone'...plus his 'title proudly admits it', how he's 'Def's #1 Con'!......
Ehh, Not So Good Here.




And when I blast, I wont miss you… Dun, these aint just idle threats that I spit…
I don’t need to “flex” to “rip”, cuz your “fuckin dead” that’s why Patrick Bateman’s in ya sig//*
lmao.. good attempt at sig, but sig punches are played.
American Psycho? Please, ur a light ho… I do need to go Louisiana to get “bayou” (by you)…
nice good wordplay, played concept but you flipped it nice.
You an internet nympho, but the only time you get “action” is between two asterisk symbols//
Alright.
*kicks Dun’s ass*
I could move a crowd of a few cripples… and it’s too simple to rip Dun when I rhyme…
And it’s not hard to define… I can give you an “L on two lines” like I used a pound sign//
Meh, Decent.
http://www.logo-search.com/viewPreview.php?preview=1197 (http://www.logo-search.com/viewPreview.php?preview=1197)

(wow…)

You still breatin???......

Yalls decision will be wavered cuz beating Dun like indecisive college students, nothing MAJOR!…
I saw the predictions, I know this kids favored, but don’t go to “Dunlo” thinking the Pen’ll-save-ya// (Pennsylvania) **
Forced Wordplay There^
He’s into incest, him and his brother were forced to cuddle… he shouldn’t be forced to rumble…
Cuz he a “preemie”, so of course he’s humble, Dun could get beat by an abortion puddle//
Ok..
You shook like a rattle D, you can’t rattle me… he can’t wait til this “round(s) up” like cattle meat…
I guarantee he’ll just quote me
… but I aint Cassidy… cuz his best bet at winning is if “I battle ME”!//
Nah Aint feeling this one.
You can’t see me like Slick Rick, you on ya last eye… I’m the teacher…or Rapworlds Rabbi…
Ur a disgruntle fag or just mad bi… since we talking ‘quotes’, I knew you and your brother “smashed guys”//vvv
Ok..




Overall Vote: DunLo, Good Battle, On Both Sides, DC Came Harder then Expected, But If He Didnt Have Much Played Bars/ Concepts then Dun's Dun had Good Consistency, Verse Had Good Potential.. Good Battle Here. Yall Should Have A Rematch. Stay Up.

Thanks for the vote, that's 1-0 uppin', or 2-1 uppin', however DC prefers....

Peace...

P.s....the RW's line had nothing to do with rocawear Han, it was a punch about him being a Hov dick rider and how Multi and them used to say me and Ak smoked rocks...so I flipped it like Rw's had us confused cuz HE'S the one smokin' the Roc(k)....

Just felt I'd explain that bar, and I saw that DC explained 2 bars, so there should be no probs....

Uppin'.....

DunLo
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He doesn't ever fuck with the keys...so it's safe to say that D. Free's laughable...
This free be's natural...cuz 'visiting the district of columbia', is the only way we'd ever see 'D.C.'s Capitol'!,
Decent, but dc bars are played already
This faggot has no 'tracks that ride'....he only peeped the audio forum and took lessons...
His hooks flexion...so the only time you'd see a 'D.C. Car-tune/cartoon' is in the 'comic book section'!,
average jab okay nameplay
Plus his text sucks...A 'Jay-Z dickrider' who'll dissapoint whenever we open a drop....
Not even jokin' a lot....it's like 'RW's had us confused', the way D.C. is 'Smokin' the Roc'(k)!,*
nice personal, dont think to many people got it.
Hop off Hov's dick, you've got the meter trippin'...plus he's mad at UL's leader riffin'....
Watch this cheater stiffen...go back to being a 'Family Guy', and stop 'writing fanmail to Peter Griffin'!,
Ha funny quality bar

TIME TO PULL THE FUCKING PLUG ON THIS POSER......

Now it's time you test destruction....made 'big mistakes', like 'first dates with sex seduction'....
A 'failure' with 'less deduction'...cuz the only way a 'D.,C. goes to an A', is during 'breast reduction'!,=))
Nice nameplay, good set up
His gang is 'non-explosive'....like these bitches crawled out from under some bomb....
'Too Easy' so the 'cumbersome's gone'...plus his 'title proudly admits it', how he's 'Def's #1 Con'!......
didn't like this bar seemed like a forced/filler.

Rate this verse 7.8/10

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Dc

And when I blast, I wont miss you… Dun, these aint just idle threats that I spit…
I don’t need to “flex” to “rip”, cuz your “fuckin dead” that’s why Patrick Bateman’s in ya sig//*
Nice bar, i enjoyed the sig punch,

American Psycho? Please, ur a light ho… I do need to go Louisiana to get “bayou” (by you)…
You an internet nympho, but the only time you get “action” is between two asterisk symbols//
Solid bar, wordplay was nice punch wasn't to hard
*kicks Dun’s ass*
I could move a crowd of a few cripples… and it’s too simple to rip Dun when I rhyme…
And it’s not hard to define… I can give you an “L on two lines” like I used a pound sign//
Didn't like this bar
http://www.logo-search.com/viewPreview.php?preview=1197 (http://www.logo-search.com/viewPreview.php?preview=1197)

(wow…)

You still breatin???......

Yalls decision will be wavered cuz beating Dun like indecisive college students, nothing MAJOR!…
I saw the predictions, I know this kids favored, but don’t go to “Dunlo” thinking the Pen’ll-save-ya// (Pennsylvania) **
I liked this, the nameplay was a bit forced imo, but still nice
He’s into incest, him and his brother were forced to cuddle… he shouldn’t be forced to rumble…
Cuz he a “preemie”, so of course he’s humble, Dun could get beat by an abortion puddle//
Ehh could have hit a lot harder
You shook like a rattle D, you can’t rattle me… he can’t wait til this “round(s) up” like cattle meat…
I guarantee he’ll just quote me
… but I aint Cassidy… cuz his best bet at winning is if “I battle ME”!//
caddisy lines are played
You can’t see me like Slick Rick, you on ya last eye… I’m the teacher…or Rapworlds Rabbi…
Ur a disgruntle fag or just mad bi… since we talking ‘quotes’, I knew you and your brother “smashed guys”//vvv
decent wordplay off his quotes

overall rating -7.5/10


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punches-Dunlo

Personals-Tied.

Wordplay-Tied.

Nameplay- Dunlo

Metaphors-Tied.


Vote-Dunlo

Very close battle, could have went either

way but i feel dc fell of towards the end.


round 2.? i agree

stay up guys.

uh... either 3-1 or 2-0.... either way, if the next vote is Dun it's a ko.... thansk for voting yall

Punches: dun this was nice battle pretty even i think dun edge out dc a lil wit a tighter delivery and rhyme scheme i can see this goin a rd 2
Metas: tied
Multies: tied
Personals: dun
Humor: dun

^i guess we can lock this up.... we'll meet again Dunny ;)

stays 3-1... not counting that vote... rwbl participants need to vote

He doesn't ever fuck with the keys...so it's safe to say that D. Free's laughable...
This free be's natural...cuz 'visiting the district of columbia', is the only way we'd ever see 'D.C.'s Capitol'!,
simple, ok.

This faggot has no 'tracks that ride'....he only peeped the audio forum and took lessons...
His hooks flexion...so the only time you'd see a 'D.C. Car-tune/cartoon' is in the 'comic book section'!,
badly worded, but ok.
Plus his text sucks...A 'Jay-Z dickrider' who'll dissapoint whenever we open a drop....
Not even jokin' a lot....it's like 'RW's had us confused', the way D.C. is 'Smokin' the Roc'(k)!,*
nah.
Hop off Hov's dick, you've got the meter trippin'...plus he's mad at UL's leader riffin'....
Watch this cheater stiffen...go back to being a 'Family Guy', and stop 'writing fanmail to Peter Griffin'!,
lol.

TIME TO PULL THE FUCKING PLUG ON THIS POSER......

Now it's time you test destruction....made 'big mistakes', like 'first dates with sex seduction'....
A 'failure' with 'less deduction'...cuz the only way a 'D.,C. goes to an A', is during 'breast reduction'!,=))
eh.. too many nameplays right about now.
His gang is 'non-explosive'....like these bitches crawled out from under some bomb....
'Too Easy' so the 'cumbersome's gone'...plus his 'title proudly admits it', how he's 'Def's #1 Con'!......
nah.

Vs

And when I blast, I wont miss you… Dun, these aint just idle threats that I spit…
I don’t need to “flex” to “rip”, cuz your “fuckin dead” that’s why Patrick Bateman’s in ya sig//*
okay.

American Psycho? Please, ur a light ho… I do need to go Louisiana to get “bayou” (by you)…
You an internet nympho, but the only time you get “action” is between two asterisk symbols//
not really man.
I could move a crowd of a few cripples… and it’s too simple to rip Dun when I rhyme…
And it’s not hard to define… I can give you an “L on two lines” like I used a pound sign/
Played man, most L lines are.

Yalls decision will be wavered cuz beating Dun like indecisive college students, nothing MAJOR!…
I saw the predictions, I know this kids favored, but don’t go to “Dunlo” thinking the Pen’ll-save-ya// (Pennsylvania) **
This is forced man.
He’s into incest, him and his brother were forced to cuddle… he shouldn’t be forced to rumble…
Cuz he a “preemie”, so of course he’s humble, Dun could get beat by an abortion puddle//
lol nah man.
You shook like a rattle D, you can’t rattle me… he can’t wait til this “round(s) up” like cattle meat…
I guarantee he’ll just quote me
… but I aint Cassidy… cuz his best bet at winning is if “I battle ME”!//
played fam.
You can’t see me like Slick Rick, you on ya last eye… I’m the teacher…or Rapworlds Rabbi…
Ur a disgruntle fag or just mad bi… since we talking ‘quotes’, I knew you and your brother “smashed guys”//vvv
nah.

V/DunLo, for having simpler shit. DC tried to complicate his shit, to make it complex.. I think it backfired, you're pretty good, & if you worked on your verse a bit more before u dropped u probably would have won. Dun you need to start adding wordplay to your verses man, nameplays get wore out after a while, close battle.

V/DunLo...barely.