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dropping early

this how u gun play faggot

you really only have one eye? rough childhood Because ya pops liked skull fucking/
explosion eminent watch one die,ya cell riged wit explosives ya call busting//
fucker get ASSAuLTED/All salted SLUGZ fly, so when the BLOOD FLOWS ya JAW RUSTED/
the game winning pick...son tried, hand you a L when I spiked in the endzone the ball busted//
like the steelers thinking they big willie,ya efforts futile get on the ground parker/
gut stuff and blaze one like Big phillies,eye can be found with a glass dick around carters//
get ya juelz took when I spit needles have you more dope'd up than jim jones look/
ya boys probably told you to sleep on me but this a hurricane that'll have ya info shook//
silencer on the dessert ease won't let her scream so the shot's seen but not heard like silent pictures/
plastic bag wrapped round ya head muffles the struggle so the wind the only one adhears to ya silent whispers/

.......

Punches will have him delirious, shaking with a rattled head.
And fam this battle was over,
as soon our names were put next to each other in the battle thread!
kid is 'nothing special, like cheap gifts', the heat spits to leave his cheek ripped, I slay wimps.
I'll bitch slap this ho,
click clack and BLOW! Man.. this 'fags on the corner extorting homo sluts, like gay pimps'!!
keep writing and attempting to elevate, who knows? maybe you'll get close to nice kid
but as far as battling me? He 'won't see me anytime soon, like I just started a life bid'!
no need to go the whole 6 bars. your ass. bring ya soldiers? i'll clap troops cuz i hold wessuns!
and fam your gun is all ''hyped up and anticipated, but won't come out like papoose in 07''!
lemme put him out of his pain, i'll end this quick, you bitch nigga..... it's finished.
I'll give him a less severe beating
due to him being lyrically ass, although ''he deserved more, like Michael vicks sentence''!!

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you really only have one eye? rough childhood Because ya pops liked skull fucking/
explosion eminent watch one die,ya cell riged wit explosives ya call busting//
ehhh
fucker get ASSAuLTED/All salted SLUGZ fly, so when the BLOOD FLOWS ya JAW RUSTED/
the game winning pick...son tried, hand you a L when I spiked in the endzone the ball busted//
ehh
like the steelers thinking they big willie,ya efforts futile get on the ground parker/
gut stuff and blaze one like Big phillies,eye can be found with a glass dick around carters//
ehh
get ya juelz took when I spit needles have you more dope'd up than jim jones look/
ya boys probably told you to sleep on me but this a hurricane that'll have ya info shook//
ok
silencer on the dessert ease won't let her scream so the shot's seen but not heard like silent pictures/
plastic bag wrapped round ya head muffles the struggle so the wind the only one adhears to ya silent whispers/
ok...nice creativity and flow...but no real punhces


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Punches will have him delirious, shaking with a rattled head.
And fam this battle was over,
as soon our names were put next to each other in the battle thread!
ok
kid is 'nothing special, like cheap gifts', the heat spits to leave his cheek ripped, I slay wimps.
I'll bitch slap this ho,
click clack and BLOW! Man.. this 'fags on the corner extorting homo sluts, like gay pimps'!!
ehhh
keep writing and attempting to elevate, who knows? maybe you'll get close to nice kid
but as far as battling me? He 'won't see me anytime soon, like I just started a life bid'!
ok
no need to go the whole 6 bars. your ass. bring ya soldiers? i'll clap troops cuz i hold wessuns!
and fam your gun is all ''hyped up and anticipated, but won't come out like papoose in 07''!
ehh
lemme put him out of his pain, i'll end this quick, you bitch nigga..... it's finished.
I'll give him a less severe beating
due to him being lyrically ass, although ''he deserved more, like Michael vicks sentence''!!
nahh

better punches

vote/ one eyed willie

stand outs:
MB -
fucker get ASSAuLTED/All salted SLUGZ fly, so when the BLOOD FLOWS ya JAW RUSTED/
the game winning pick...son tried, hand you a L when I spiked in the endzone the ball busted//
like the steelers thinking they big willie,ya efforts futile get on the ground parker/
gut stuff and blaze one like Big phillies,eye can be found with a glass dick around carters//

first line flow as nice... no punch tho... and the Willie Parker line coulda been played a whole lot better.... didnt really hit hard

One -

kid is 'nothing special, like cheap gifts', the heat spits to leave his cheek ripped, I slay wimps.
I'll bitch slap this ho,
click clack and BLOW! Man.. this 'fags on the corner extorting homo sluts, like gay pimps'!!

good flow... but that was pretty much consistant throughout... none of the punches were hard hitting but they were effective enough

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punches - one
wordplay - neither tried to insert w/p
metas - one
personals - MB (willie parker/jim jones lines)... One didnt even use dudes name except for the "names in thread" line
flow - One
multis - One
creativity - One
wit - One
enjoyment - one

hard fought battle... coulda been a lot better but eh....
w/ ^said....

VOTE: ONE EYED WILLIE

flow-1
personals-1
punches-1 (didnt like the closer tho)
multis- neither
metas-1
wordplay-neither
enjoyment-1

vote/1