Check In By Tues. Dec. 11th Midnight EST
Verses Due By Wed. Dec 12th Midnight EST
4-6 Bars Only
Anything over will result in 1 docked vote.

nice...i was hopin id get to battle you....checka

Check, Good luck

You go head and start using weak ass lines
You can’t murder me son, Im already dead inside.

Im Invincible nigga I always come back Resurrected
Fuck yo bitch wit smiles, No I don’t use Protection

Put my dick in her ear she very fertile bitch still came out Pregnant,
Charged me for abuse cuss I beat that shit so Reckless

Im swarming u like mosquitoes I suggest u use Repellent
Oops I just farted, Heres my asshole wanna smell it

Heavy hitter when I hit the ground Mobil Challenged people stand up
I’ll Have u eating shit with 2 girls from 1 cup

Get picked up high, Get Drop like Brittany Spears babies
Would I fuck Brittany? Yea, but yo mom Maybe

lmfao


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Nov 15 2007 6:15 AM
hey hoe whats good?
Will somebody please tell this wack kat hes about to set rap back
How can you be hard when 5 year old kids are pimpin your fat ass?

His Myspace friend Tom
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff120/DezDaScribe/m_cdbc9e16b859dac36bfae536cf2e089f.png

Big lokes? A big joke, coughin up heroins the only way youll spit dope
your about to get smoked, Only time you see lokes first is at pig roasts!!
Your games weak, Go back to gospel music, you’ll never hit mainstream*
Took one looks at his pictures and figured out why hes so angry (http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=227664802)
I saw DJ paul do it so I gave it a shot wit my own taste YAY YAY.
YAY YAY I’ll Discard your set, this angry bitch thinks hes the hardest yet
But please put your hands down you look like a retarded shrek


http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff120/DezDaScribe/l_2ef11e315e78f2b004276f01afe4a504.jpg



*on his myspace he said he quit gospel rap to try and go mainstream

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Very one sided, lokes verse was more of just lyrics than a diss. Dascribe came personal and hit hard with the punches.

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personals-DaScribe ...by alot..ouch
metas-DaScribe..he had a simile..
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Looks like a d/r vote but to be honest the dude just brought a better verse, he hit hard with personals and alot of BigLokes lines were played..

Keep at it both

Note: BigLokes don't forget to check in the topical league I'm up against you and I dont want a no-show

I ain't never went Gospel homie, I said I was listening to Christian Hip Hop muzik get it right.

big lokes got ate

Flow- tie...both pretty simple
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this was pretty much one-sided...it could b viewed as a CAT sweep cause Lokes flow was basic...Simply put...Loke came 2 elementary...u gotta step up a lil more..that verse was like for a audio..n i dont even think it woulda been that great there to be honest...So keep elevating