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3 bars fam. sound okay?

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id like to post tonight, dont no show

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iono if i can post today...but i wont no show

due tonight.

theres no need to assume,hes just another oponent ill leave in a tomb
ill easily 'over take u',but im a 'under taker' to beat the 'legion of doom'
ur beating is soon,its your fate to lose cuz no1 has da force to choose
and abuses's wins 'are KOs by the legend killer' lik randy ortons moves(RKO)
ur corpse is bruised,lik sore losers 'i cant take a loss' on my weakest verse
u say u'll win?ur 'not aloud to take victory' so he cant 'keep his word'


-the wrestler undertaker and his brother beat the legion of doom before
-randy orton is the 'legend killer'..look at his crew name...randy ortons special is called the 'rko'


good luck

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Act like ya know me? Your the type to get slapped like a hoe by your homies
With initials like 'LA' you must be looking to get hit with the 'Ko, B' {kobe}

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105696 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105696) - READ

Get yea head right, dude can get smacked in the face with a lead pipe
Does snale need to shed light? KIDS bribing members with 'mod spots' to a a dead site (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105696)


dude looks like a fucked up version of pappoose, as far as getting in rap crews?!
The whole site could make an excersize vid, and we still wouldn't feel 'Ab use"



Ha:geek:

fuck i already did this once and RW fucked up...but ill break it down AGAIN

theres no need to assume,hes just another oponent ill leave in a tomb
ill easily 'over take u',but im a 'under taker' to beat the 'legion of doom'
meh...too forced
ur beating is soon,its your fate to lose cuz no1 has da force to choose
and abuses's wins 'are KOs by the legend killer' lik randy ortons moves(RKO)
this was ok
ur corpse is bruised,lik sore losers 'i cant take a loss' on my weakest verse
u say u'll win?ur 'not aloud to take victory' so he cant 'keep his word'
solid finisher



Act like ya know me? Your the type to get slapped like a hoe by your homies
With initials like 'LA' you must be looking to get hit with the 'Ko, B' {kobe}

solid

Get yea head right, dude can get smacked in the face with a lead pipe
Does snale need to shed light? KIDS bribing members with 'mod spots' to a a dead site (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105696)

lol...good personal

dude looks like a fucked up version of pappoose, as far as getting in rap crews?!
The whole site could make an excersize vid, and we still wouldn't feel 'Ab use"

good closer



you came with a solid verse abuse but snale just came with hotter punches/wordplay/personals

vote/snale

my fault guys, forgot abuot cats

flow-tie
personals-snale
punches-snale
wordplay-snale
metaphors-abuse
enjoyment-snale

vote/snale

wow, not only do you vote for snale everywhere, you voted twice? :smh:

Actually he just added to his vote.

i dont feel like copy n quote verse so ill do bar by bar w/o the verses:

bar 1- LA- it was a ok concept but i dont think it was delivered well 2/5 Snale- same as LA...good concept...but id like to c it used better esp from u 2.5/5

bar 2- LA-wrestlin thing is gettin a lil ova played...nice concept but again kinda simple...2/5
Snale-Nice shit...thats more like it...personal is nice...my fav bar 4.5/5

bar 3- LA-punch was jus weak, nice set up but u didnt finish it...work on ur wording cuz the concepts r good but delivery is off 2.5/5
Snale- another good bar...nice nameplay. n flow..i like it 4/5
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LA-6.5
Snale- 11

Vote-Snale

i like LA flow n the concepts r good but none of the punches did any real damage...u gotta fix the delivery n work on ur wording..its there u jus gotta figure out how 2 make it work 4 u...Snale, another solid verse...didnt really like the first bar..but the other 2 is nice...so there ya go

Thanks. I agree i could have worded the first bar better, thanks for the feedback i'll keep it in mind and work on that bro.

Appreciate it.

..this was a pretty good battle actually, both knew how to drop solid wordplay and personals..it was almost hard to judge. If abuse had used a little more wordplay and maybe a personal here or there, this might've been a straight up tie.


theres no need to assume,hes just another oponent ill leave in a tomb
ill easily 'over take u',but im a 'under taker' to beat the 'legion of doom'
^didn't get the take u part; sounded poorly used wp to me; i get the undertaker thing but it's average tho'.

ur beating is soon,its your fate to lose cuz no1 has da force to choose
and abuses's wins 'are KOs by the legend killer' lik randy ortons moves(RKO)
^punch is ok, but it's more self-praise then a diss. And the "legend" part was so admissible, you almost forgot it was part of the punch here.

ur corpse is bruised,lik sore losers 'i cant take a loss' on my weakest verse
u say u'll win?ur 'not aloud to take victory' so he cant 'keep his word'
^pretty nice. i've heard not aloud stuff before but this was pretty decent.


V.S.

Act like ya know me? Your the type to get slapped like a hoe by your homies
With initials like 'LA' you must be looking to get hit with the 'Ko, B' {kobe}
^snale...that's pretty fucking dope for an intro bar. sickness on the wp.

Get yea head right, dude can get smacked in the face with a lead pipe
Does snale need to shed light? KIDS bribing members with 'mod spots' to a a dead site
^funny personal, i saw that...

dude looks like a fucked up version of pappoose, as far as getting in rap crews?!
The whole site could make an excersize vid, and we still wouldn't feel 'Ab use"
^nice shit again, good nameplay.

Vote=Snale.

k.o

close this

flow - snale
structure - snale
punches - snale
creativity - snale
multis- tie
personals - snale
wordplay - snale

overall - snale

double k.o.

good match...close this