Due whenever ASAP
All the people who voted in the last battle
Are not to vote in this one(except crew)
^only rule
I'll drop when I can, feel free if you wish..
Anywhere between 6-12 bars

Peace TUN

Chex
Will key this in a few hrs.

sorry for this post in ya battle , but wassup with our battle are you going ta make it happen soon ? i aint rushing so get touchy just let me know what's what..and please drop a fair vote here : http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=117168

^^^Dude stop posting in ppls threads just PM them and Im checking in.

this nigga got into the crew, but I aint giving no dap(handshake)
cause like cumming in bitches asses too
thats a load of crap..
like Bulimic pornstars "Your The Weakest To Take The Position"
looks like I'm gonna make another "Record Drop-N-Fall" like Autumn days friggid!.
don't need DNA testing to prove "This Ain't A Match",
cause Lokes wouldn't find himself "A-Head In A Cabbage Patch"..
being surrounded by lumberjacks is the only way anyone will axe about you
the closest you get to punch~lines is fighting a coke habit
like addicts in rehab do..
your rhymes are tasteless not even a vampire would bite you
and neither would Mike too, box~in match?
nah I dont get into bum fights dude..
aint talking planes when I say I'll make this fighter jet,
homo sex with RW's best is the closest you'll get
to becumming into a core vet..
you beating me with a good verse?
not even if you strapped bibles to your fist
and how the fuck you beat me?
when ya scripts are watered down like sunken ships..
its easy to see eye won like I was Cyclops
despite the freebie win, working on movie sets
is the closest you get to REAL PROPS..
need more than papparrazi to picture me lose
similar to Penelope I couldnt see you with Cruise(crews)
its like you own a liquor store the way you be getting the booze(boos)..


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=117027
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=116941

shit has hit an all time low
never thought things would ever get this bad, but they have
there is no further reason to continue after this embarrasment
I'm done with battling/texting shit RW in general
its time to hang it up..

thanks for letting me run with TUN
I was hoping it would reinvent me and bring me to new heights, but :(
I will miss all of you and wish you the best

much love and respect
*lights up L , picks up suitcase.......looks around, walks out*

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=116570
^^^^^^^^
You had us fooled, I thought u were leaving I guess we misunderstood
Beat you once, but this time I’ll have you running for good
^^^stfu..
umm fire u gotta elevate unless u came easy in this iono but yea

^^^coming from someone who doesnt know what metas are...fuck out of here


it should be 3-3 cause Kons your bitch, but whatever 3-4
^^^stfu you little bitch..
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Crying in post, I think its time to give this baby his bottle
How can you step to my face when all you do is toddle

Im finna erase this fool, Im the handyman without the tools
Check yo user title fam we all know that Im greater than you (http://s53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/bigern_01/?action=view&current=Firewallbattle.jpg)

You’re whining a lot, afraid that Imma take your spot? Believe it or not.
I knew you took that last one hard but damn you’re now crying drops?

I was always raised to know that the ladies go first,
That you did and you came up with that weak ass verse

At your full potential you couldn’t make this battle worthwhile
Wack as hell the only nigga I know who pays for his free-styles

You can’t rock a crowd, your at the right spot no one thinks you can fulfill
Niggaz sleep on you cuss we purposely Overdose on Nyquil

Time to kill, you might have heart but you lack the skills, I enjoy the Thrill
Only time this nigga ridin on Dubs is when he is sitting on his own Twenty Dollar Bill

Give it up you suck, you know you wack as fuck
A lucky charm, but too bad you have no luck

You can keep all them bars, cuss still by me you'll be outdone
Claiming you a heavy hitter but you know you can't handle a TUN

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=117184
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1517936#post1517936

uppin for Votes

Lets get some muthafucking Votes, Firewall this is your fault no one is voting.

Well, I may be new to this site, since I had never heard of it before, but Im not new to battling. You can take my vote with a grain of salt to the wound, or whatnot, I dun really give a shit. I'm giving an honest synopsis of what I saw here. But first I gotta say this: L.L. I have read some of your other battles and this one fails in comparison to them. You might have taken firewall lightly, but you still shoulda rocked him. Thats all. On to the breakdown.

FireWall:

this nigga got into the crew, but I aint giving no dap(handshake)
cause like cumming in bitches asses too
thats a load of crap..

[ehh, could have been set up better, sorta weak]

like Bulimic pornstars "Your The Weakest To Take The Position"
looks like I'm gonna make another "Record Drop-N-Fall" like Autumn days friggid!.

[decent delivery, like the way the weather reference was set up]

don't need DNA testing to prove "This Ain't A Match",
cause Lokes wouldn't find himself "A-Head In A Cabbage Patch"..

[DNA is overused in most cases, heard the this aint a match before. But the following line was a nice finisher for the bar]

being surrounded by lumberjacks is the only way anyone will axe about you
the closest you get to punch~lines is fighting a coke habit
like addicts in rehab do..

[Should have reworded, came off weak and forced but decent try at the rhyme scheme within the line]

your rhymes are tasteless not even a vampire would bite you
and neither would Mike too, box~in match?
nah I dont get into bum fights dude..

[Mike Tyson references are weak, and where is the reference to bum fights coming from?]

aint talking planes when I say I'll make this fighter jet,
homo sex with RW's best is the closest you'll get
to becumming into a core vet..

[this one was def forced, be"cumming" into a core vet makes no sense.]

you beating me with a good verse?
not even if you strapped bibles to your fist

[I dont think I've seen this one, might just be me tho, but I liked it. I think you meant fists tho, no disrespect.]

and how the fuck you beat me?
when ya scripts are watered down like sunken ships..

[played]

its easy to see eye won like I was Cyclops
despite the freebie win, working on movie sets
is the closest you get to REAL PROPS..

[Haha]

need more than papparrazi to picture me lose
similar to Penelope I couldnt see you with Cruise(crews)
its like you own a liquor store the way you be getting the booze(boos)..

[the first two frames of this bar(lines) were good, but then you dropped the booze line, which made the bar fall flat]


Lunatic Lokes:

Crying in post, I think its time to give this baby his bottle
How can you step to my face when all you do is toddle

[baby bottles are played, but I liked the way you made it rhyme with toddle for a decent personal blow, considering the references]

Im finna erase this fool, Im the handyman without the tools
Check yo user title fam we all know that Im greater than you

[you said handyman without the tools, which mentally made me picture that you didn't have what it takes to do the job. No disrespect.]

You’re whining a lot, afraid that Imma take your spot? Believe it or not.
I knew you took that last one hard but damn you’re now crying drops?

[good personal, but sad delivery]

I was always raised to know that the ladies go first,
That you did and you came up with that weak ass verse

[weak, you coulda came harder]

At your full potential you couldn’t make this battle worthwhile
Wack as hell the only nigga I know who pays for his free-styles

[decent]

You can’t rock a crowd, your at the right spot no one thinks you can fulfill
Niggaz sleep on you cuss we purposely Overdose on Nyquil

[hahaha]

Time to kill, you might have heart but you lack the skills, I enjoy the Thrill
Only time this nigga ridin on Dubs is when he is sitting on his own Twenty Dollar Bill

[decent multi into a good finisher, even tho it wasnt great]

Give it up you suck, you know you wack as fuck
A lucky charm, but too bad you have no luck

[Come on, are you serious?]

You can keep all them bars, cuss still by me you'll be outdone
Claiming you a heavy hitter but you know you can't handle a TUN

[decent play on the personal, liked the weight reference]

Overall, FireWall had 1-2 decent punches, nothing too personal that I could tell, but I am new after all, so I really can't judge that.

Lunatic Lokes had some good personals, but his wordplay was underscored seriously from what I have seen him do in other battles.

My Vote: L.L., just because of the personals, and the Nyquil line made me laugh. Take it how you want it, count it or not. I care not.

Treetop - Outro.

you guys need to rep TUN better than this....DBO should be DQ'd for using a cumming line

punches-fire
personals-lokes
wordplay-fire
nameplay-none
multis-none
metas-fire
flow-lokes


no hate to either of you guys cause i like both of you...but this was a pretty lackluster battle...lokes you've said 'you cant handle a TUN' in like your last 3 battles

vote/fire

barely...he had better punches and some wordplay

1-1 uppin for more votes, so why is that Harsh, why should he be D'Q?

uppin for some votes

THIS WAS A WEAK BATTLE..BUT IMO

PUNCHES- FIRE
PERSONALS-LOKE
NAMEPLAY-NONE
WERDPLAY-FIRE
MULTIS- MEH
ENJOYMENT- ???? HAHA

NO HATE BUT I FEEL LIKE FIRE EDGED THIS WUN HE JUS SIMPLY CAME HARDER IMO

Ehh... alright, Lokes I've seen much better... the personals were there but you really didn't do anything witty, creative, complex or anything with the material to make it come off nice... kinda just stated facts... sleep/nyquil is old, as are TUN/weight lines... Your structure was better though.. DBO I don't know why you still do that weird structure... you had a LOT of played concepts, a couple were cool... I actually smirked @ "load of crap", even thought the wp concepts are ooooolllddd, it was funny... ahead/cabbage patch was OK...

I gotta go with Fire for the enjoyment factor... but realy, if Lokes had made even one of those personals come off well it would've gone to him...

Well Firewall is Banned so ya'll votes don't matter

punches-fire
personals-lokes
wordplay-fire
nameplay-tie
multis-loke
metas-fire
flow-lokes



good battle you 3 but i think its to close for me to pick someone
so im going to give it atie

vote tie

flow/FIREWALL
PUNCHES/LOC
STRUCTURE/LOC
CREATIVITY/LOC
MULTIS/NEITHER
GOOD BATTLE
VOTE-LOC DAWG~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well Firewall is Banned so ya'll votes don't matter

Why would being banned change the outcome of a battle?

Fire posted a verse and links.
And won 4-1
Before Rapids horrid vote was posted

Mods should close this.

wtf^^

Good battle Loc I thought u kilt it anyway

but votes for a banned member dont count

especially if the thread hasnt been closed aren't i right?

vets vouch please

Loc wins

Well its obvious your a dickriding homo, and the only thing that killed shit was your lame ass vote.

Biters shouldn't be able to vote anyway, cause you\they have no credibility.

personals- lokes
punches- firewall
flow/structure- lokes
multies- firewall.. better attempts
creativity-firewall
enjoyment-firewall
overall-firewall gmv

Firewall is banned stop voting ppl