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First to 3 votes..



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Thanks Russian OG, Okay House Rules

8 Bars....16 lines....no biting....First to 3 votes wins.....

Due at 12:00 EST TIME

GO!!!!!!!!!!

Winner gets $100 IN RW CASH

POST LINKS: 2

HERES MINE:

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=118002&page=2 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=118002&page=2)
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=118719&page=2 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=118719&page=2)

Check in.....Curse are you there???????? Check in to this thread and then post 2 links youve given feedback on....then get your thing posted in the next 2 in a half hours.....Dropping out the battle you will have to pay me $150 RW Cash....or E-Money on the site.....so yeah....check in and get your rap in....

check i got this

Aite cool.....

CHECK IT:

Ayo I'm the plainest image in a world of ever changing gimmicks,
Give this bitch the fidgets, Cuz Im quicker than a game of quidditch//

Held the fire lighter when I lit it,
Still I count on emcees on the re-digits//

Im like a crazy wizard with lyrics like magic "curses"
If I drop a verse, "CURSE", might turn into a fucking midget//

Its a pain to rip it as well as I do
My best defense against the jealous; let em dwell in my shoes//

Cuz some cats get mad; say I like to brag and shit
But if you had half my skill you'd be twice as arrogant//

And for gassed up rappers I'll be the tagament//
How you gon` give me a curse, when ya aint a wizard or witch//

I Kill this bitch with my flow, slap the shit outta my hoes//
Throw em in a river with a boat, and no strength to row//

And when you in the water drowning feet first//
Remember a curse wont help you, Only the paramedics or the hearse.....


EXPLANATIONS:

BAR 1: JUST A OPENING DISS....SOME COMPARISON WITH HARRY POTTER (Quidditch)-AND THEN HIS NAME (CURSE)-it fits in with that category..lol

BAR 2: Just a flow bar...kept me flowing

BAR 3: A lot of nameplay and dissing him because of his name curse....

BAR 4: Self Explanatory

BAR 5: Self Explanatory

BAR 6: TAGAMENT-RELIEF OF GAS, NAMEPLAY AGAIN

BAR 7: SELF EXPLANATORY...CLAIMING CURSE AS MY BITCH...haha

BAR 8: HE FELL OUT THE BOAT FROM BAR 7, AND STARTED DROWNING, AND A CURSE WONT HELP HIM....ONLY AN AMBULANCE OR HIS DEATHBED...THE HEARSE.....

HERES MY THANG RITE HERE...POST YA LINKS AND UH COOL!!!!! I MADE THE DEADLINE!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1540514#post1540514

AND THIS IS ANOTHER BATTLE LINK THAT EVERYONE SHOULD VOTE ON EVEN YOU CURSE....

ME VS. SIXTYNYNE

ALSO CHECK THE ONE WHEN I BATTLED

ME VS. RUSSIAN OG!!!!!!!

AND VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh when the saints, oh when the saints, oh when the saints go marching in.....


Its on

Saints REELING FROM HITS ~ my flows so potent like im DEALING MY SPITS ~ when an “arm up your ass” the only way anyones FEELING YA SHIT!//
enema styles, they CLEARIN YA SHIT ~ while they’re at it they can WASH YA MOUTH OUT ~ you LOST THE BOUT HOW? ~ cos ur at a loss for WHAT TO SHOUT NOW!//
I LAUGH OUT LOUD ~ run a train and get brain from ya dame...then DROP THE WHORE ~ with the key that I dropped you still couldn’t UNLOCK THE DOOR//
What you says played man, like ‘LENO YA TIME IS DONE’ ~ votes you don’t like? Ya VETO HIDE AND
RUN ~ it just proves ya fuckin stupid like the cops from RENO 911!!// from reno
Ya lines are contradictory, its time to change history and SWAP BACK ~ ya DROPS WACK ~ n you aint a ‘home dogg’ just a LOST CAT!//(cat=pussy?)


Switch!


Like a DJ scratched em, ya lines need a RE-PAINT/
PLEASE FAINT ~ when you find im better than DeSAINT!// (decent)
get STRESSED TO ENGAGE ~ im REPPIN WITH RAGE/
and bitch ill kick ya “face off” like NICOLAS CAGE!!!//
Im sick of ya shit man its TIME TO BOOT/ (leave=boot)
cosy a lines just sound better with ya RHYMES ON MUTE!!//



uppin votes

cant edit, but my last line is supposed to be...

cos ya lines just sound better with ya rhymes on mute

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=118903
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1540543#post1540543

UPPIN!

UPPIN...good job

Uppin 4 Votes

ok i like this one!

again saint not feeling this one from you!
good! but your punches and lines seem weaker don't no why!

curse made me laugh!
i think thats why saint cuz u'll usually have a line or 2 that makes me chuckle

so my vote take it or leave it!

Vote:curse

generally i thort his lines where better in this one
can't be fucked to break it down!

curse is disqualified….close this thread….after you check this….I was reading his rap and it seemed like a lot of lines….he had 9 bars instead of 8 and 19 lines….so he didn’t follow the rules….he put the lines together hoping no one would notice he added more lines and bars….he also put the switch in there to disguise and say he was switching the beat so he could cover his tracks up…..the only thing that was legit about this shit was Bar 7-Bar 9……mod please close this…..I won by a disqualification…..


BAR 1(contains 2 lines)
Saints REELING FROM HITS ~
my flows so potent like im DEALING MY SPITS~

BAR 2 (contains 2 lines)
when an “arm up your ass” the only way anyones FEELING YA SHIT!
enema styles, they CLEARIN YA SHIT,

BAR 3: (contains 2 lines)
while they’re at it they can WASH YA MOUTH OUT ~ you LOST THE BOUT HOW? ~ cos ur at a loss for WHAT TO SHOUT NOW!//I LAUGH OUT LOUD//

BAR 4: (contains 2 lines)
run a train and get brain from ya dame...then DROP THE WHORE ~
with the key that I dropped you still couldn’t UNLOCK THE DOOR//


BAR 5: (contains 3 lines)
What you says played man, like ‘LENO YA TIME IS DONE’,
votes you don’t like? Ya VETO HIDE AND RUN//
it just proves ya fuckin stupid like the cops from RENO 911!!// from reno


BAR 6 (contains 2 lines)
Ya lines are contradictory, its time to change history and SWAP BACK ~
ya DROPS WACK ~ n you aint a ‘home dogg’ just a LOST CAT!//(cat=pussy?)


Switch!

BAR 7: (contains 2 lines)
Like a DJ scratched em, ya lines need a RE-PAINT
PLEASE FAINT ~ when you find im better than DeSAINT!// (decent)


BAR 8: (contains 2 lines)
get STRESSED TO ENGAGE ~ im REPPIN WITH RAGE/
and bitch ill kick ya “face off” like NICOLAS CAGE!!!//


BAR 9: (contains 2 lines)
Im sick of ya shit man its TIME TO BOOT/ (leave=boot)
cos ya lines just sound better with ya RHYMES ON MUTE!!//

^^ wow didn't notice...just read them both

Yeah the mods going to close this one....i guess curse lost this one just cuz he cheated when he didnt have too...curse you would of beat me if you didnt cheat anyway....but you did so it counts as my win....otto should close this next time he's on....wow....

I WIN BY A DQ.....wow....never thought this would happen....



NO MORE VOTES....YOU CAN FEED BUT NO VOTES....THIS IS GOING TO BE CLOSED......

stop shouting at me! damn! haha

stop shouting at me! damn! haha

i wasnt....lol

hehehe i was joking

Ok, after reading this battle I have decided.....

Voting will continue on this match...

It seems as if Curse used a long style bar format instead of the standard short bar....(Which is fine, Burden does it, and so does a few others...)

Best I could do is to have Curse tell me which ONE bar he wants taken out of his verse and let the voting continue....

Thanks, Peace...

Ok, after reading this battle I have decided.....

Voting will continue on this match...

It seems as if Curse used a long style bar format instead of the standard short bar....(Which is fine, Burden does it, and so does a few others...)

Best I could do is to have Curse tell me which ONE bar he wants taken out of his verse and let the voting continue....

Thanks, Peace...

aite thanks dun....

ok, i really dont get how ur gona call it 9 bars, i count 8, the one with the reno911 reference may be long, but its still only 1 bar. saint stop bitching, ur shit, og is shit, n u 2 need ta hop off. that said if i gota drop a bar, ill drop the 2nd 1

your sig should say "its gameover for curse"

stop bitchin

lmao...hop off my dick and set up our battle faggot, we'll see who the bitch is

Ight...gimme a sec

its done check it.

http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=119167

leave it to two idiots to start a battle within another battle..

*claps*

leave it to the kid who thinks hes "the thinking man" to comment on it

^^^^ lol at u lot hehehe

Stop freeposting damnit....

Infractions will be handed out like Candy with next freepost...

Up...

Note: Those are 8 bars by Curse

Punches -Tie
Curse had many played and weak punches. DeSaint had indirect and weak punches.
Multies - Tie
Both had lots and it was too close to call IMO
Metaphors- Curse
He just had more metas than DeSaint
Personals- Tie
Nothing stood out here from either
Wordplay-Curse
Again, he just had more of them
Complexity-DeSaint
He was a little more complex but was repetitive about it with the magic
Creativity-DeSaint
Most of the shit Curse was played, generic or both...More so than DeSaint
Enjoyment-DeSaint
Just felt it a little more

Overall - Tie
Close call

Vote - DeSaint
He won by a category

Punches -Tie(more toward DeSaint with originality)
Curse had many played punches. DeSaint had some selfhype punches.
Multies - Curse
Better Quality"imo"
Metaphors- Curse
He just had more metas than DeSaint
Personals- Tie
None
Wordplay-Curse
He just had more of them
Complexity-DeSaint
He was a little more complex but was repetitive about it with the magic
Creativity-DeSaint
Most of the shit Curse was played, generic or both...More so than DeSaint
Enjoyment-DeSaint
Just felt it a little more

Overall - Tie
Close call

Vote - DeSaint
Very SLight Win.. if he was more creative he would have definetly won..

2-1
UPPIN!!!!!!!

2-DeSaint

1-Curse

dude pretty much copied my answer

dude pretty much copied my answer
actually what he did was take your breakdown and changed it a bit..

that guy is a sad fuck

Punches - Curse(Concepts Where Played But Still punches Where Better)
Personal's - Tie(Both Where Weak On This Area)
Multi's - Curse
Wordplay - Tie(Blah)
Creativity - Curse
Enjoyment - Curse
Complexity - Tie(Niether Was That Complex)

Vote - Curse

Really All Desaint Did Was Rap n talk there Were'nt To many Things That Stuck out in his Verse,
Curse's Verse Was Aight some Of His Concepts Where Played But he Still Came With the Harder Verse I feel

UnO

2-2 uppin

uppin..finish dis shit please