Ok...
5 Bars
House Rules
Standard Voting
No Deadline...But ASAP
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Check...gettin links for all the battles so theyll b up soon

czech srry didn't see this..

Links
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http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=120772&page=3
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=120377&page=2

word i'll get to this when i switch comps..

We still doing this?

Heres 5...
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Watch how my Posts set the Rhythm...I dont need my Folks 2 Defend em
bars in front dude, like he enclosed in a Prison...So only way ull See 'V wit a W', is on a "Volkswagen Emblem"/

U should go Amount some Rep...Cuz Ive seen his verses,so I doubt his Threat
he should jus take this loss he Bout 2 Get,Cuz this 'Character (V) wouldnt b Near the Front',If u 'Reversed the Alphabet'/
Yet, Everything About u Screams Backwards...Time 2 Face Fate, even tho Fact Hurts
Talk Stupid, but u Rap Worse, like I said 'BackWords'...Cuz 'S.A.T was All over Verbs' n theres no explaing how dat Works/(Shouldnt it be the other way Around)
Voters Came 2 See-Me, cuz P's the Feature, I make u Stand Down like Cement Sneakers
cuz Im Hot like Demon Creatures,n if u checked my verses ud See... I been Mastered Verbs like English Teachers/

Look at ur Record, Jesus!, Wut we 'post 2 Think...Cuz All ive seen is alota Unfocused Ink
so watch ya Boat jus Sink...Cuz None of Works Moving, like u Forgot to Vote 4 Links/
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there ya go...sorry if its stretched but i didnt wanna change the font or nuffin

u gonna drop or wut?

Lol,, u dropped
yo my bad i'll scribble some shit now

Fast Feet-be-still... this S.I.Q-ness causes my speech-to-kill; so its useless to "push dope" in the game with Payroll's Weakend-Pills
I'll Beat-n-fill... my cup up with that green heat-n-trills..sure Feats-n-chills... look how He tried to "duck me" like weekend-bills...(4)

this Dr. Dickhead is fucking "PAYROlls like he's cheap".. u have L shaped cuts?...do u really want my prognosis still?
like Arm-n-get-um..this the New Dr. Phil..V stay preaching-till ...this Thread to Thread geek is speaken-wills...(6)


Even if this Arsonist Burned Rolls That talk.."u won't be black at heart"..cause i'm Rocking Roll Like i was giving this Kid ROck's
No Lethal Weapons..maybe back in the day u were a force to be reckoned..but now ure "Time's Gone" like i hid clocks...(8)

This "Cash Flow is Frozen Solid".. since ya last date I'm a "block your wins" like u ran into a firewall of ice
so let me bring u up to speed..its HARSH that u-lost-2.. and im rolling to dice again... so the outcomes not looking-nice...(10)

*expos*
Bar 1-4
S.I.Q.. Suicidal I.Q/sickness..(looked like he wasn't going to post for a while)
Bar 5-6
Arm-n-get-um/Armagedon "wills as in what people right when there bout to die"
Bar 7-8
Rocking roll.. nameplay.. Kid Rocks. Wordplay..
Bar 9-10
He beat Firewall by dq..lol. dude said he was weak n just gave him the win..
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=117300
He lost to Harsh.. Rolling to dice/as in chopping him up...
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=116193

Heres 5...
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Watch how my Posts set the Rhythm...I dont need my Folks 2 Defend em
bars in front dude, like he enclosed in a Prison...So only way ull See 'V wit a W', is on a "Volkswagen Emblem"/

U should go Amount some Rep...Cuz Ive seen his verses,so I doubt his Threat
he should jus take this loss he Bout 2 Get,Cuz this 'Character (V) wouldnt b Near the Front',If u 'Reversed the Alphabet'/
Yet, Everything About u Screams Backwards...Time 2 Face Fate, even tho Fact Hurts
Talk Stupid, but u Rap Worse, like I said 'BackWords'...Cuz 'S.A.T was All over Verbs' n theres no explaing how dat Works/(Shouldnt it be the other way Around)
Voters Came 2 See-Me, cuz P's the Feature, I make u Stand Down like Cement Sneakers
cuz Im Hot like Demon Creatures,n if u checked my verses ud See... I been Mastered Verbs like English Teachers/

Look at ur Record, Jesus!, Wut we 'post 2 Think...Cuz All ive seen is alota Unfocused Ink
so watch ya Boat jus Sink...Cuz None of Works Moving, like u Forgot to Vote 4 Links/
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there ya go...sorry if its stretched but i didnt wanna change the font or nuffin

Every line flowed well, sick personals and wordplay. i like every bar.

favorite line: he should jus take this loss he Bout 2 Get,Cuz this 'Character (V) wouldnt b Near the Front',If u 'Reversed the Alphabet'/

8.5/10

Fast Feet-be-still... this S.I.Q-ness causes my speech-to-kill; so its useless to "push dope" in the game with Payroll's Weakend-Pills
I'll Beat-n-fill... my cup up with that green heat-n-trills..sure Feats-n-chills... look how He tried to "duck me" like weekend-bills...(4)

this Dr. Dickhead is fucking "PAYROlls like he's cheap".. u have L shaped cuts?...do u really want my prognosis still?
like Arm-n-get-um..this the New Dr. Phil..V stay preaching-till ...this Thread to Thread geek is speaken-wills...(6)


Even if this Arsonist Burned Rolls That talk.."u won't be black at heart"..cause i'm Rocking Roll Like i was giving this Kid ROck's
No Lethal Weapons..maybe back in the day u were a force to be reckoned..but now ure "Time's Gone" like i hid clocks...(8)

This "Cash Flow is Frozen Solid".. since ya last date I'm a "block your wins" like u ran into a firewall of ice
so let me bring u up to speed..its HARSH that u-lost-2.. and im rolling to dice again... so the outcomes not looking-nice...(10)

*expos*
Bar 1-4
S.I.Q.. Suicidal I.Q/sickness..(looked like he wasn't going to post for a while)
Bar 5-6
Arm-n-get-um/Armagedon "wills as in what people right when there bout to die"
Bar 7-8
Rocking roll.. nameplay.. Kid Rocks. Wordplay..
Bar 9-10
He beat Firewall by dq..lol. dude said he was weak n just gave him the win..
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=117300
He lost to Harsh.. Rolling to dice/as in chopping him up...
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=116193


the lines were a little bit stretched and it didn't maintain a constant flow. there were some parts where i thought it was sick and others where it just wasn't doin it for me. i give it a 7/10

Pay Roll got this.

..uppin more voters..

links.. i'll get the other one up soon i got to sleep man i'm tired..
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1572174#post1572174

yeh i vot3d on the other battle already.. besides i'm one of the only people on this site who vote regularly.. *sigh*

Upping VOTERS NOW!!
-this was a nice batle-

Verb.

i really liked the read on this battle.. it had some clever bars that really made you think..

heres my break down...



Watch how my Posts set the Rhythm...I dont need my Folks 2 Defend em
bars in front dude, like he enclosed in a Prison...So only way ull See 'V wit a W', is on a "Volkswagen Emblem"/

this bar was fuckin sick.. the only problem i seen is it could be applied universally to anybody name that starts with V.. but it was still a sick opener..




U should go Amount some Rep...Cuz Ive seen his verses,so I doubt his Threat
he should jus take this loss he Bout 2 Get,Cuz this 'Character (V) wouldnt b Near the Front',If u 'Reversed the Alphabet'/
another good one, was less decent then opener but still good.. again, could be applied to another V names..



Yet, Everything About u Screams Backwards...Time 2 Face Fate, even tho Fact Hurts
Talk Stupid, but u Rap Worse, like I said 'BackWords'...Cuz 'S.A.T was All over Verbs' n theres no explaing how dat Works/(Shouldnt it be the other way Around)

clever man, liked this one..




Voters Came 2 See-Me, cuz P's the Feature, I make u Stand Down like Cement Sneakers
cuz Im Hot like Demon Creatures,n if u checked my verses ud See... I been Mastered Verbs like English Teachers/

good punch, liked the flow.. very nice wordplay/meta




Look at ur Record, Jesus!, Wut we 'post 2 Think...Cuz All ive seen is alota Unfocused Ink
so watch ya Boat jus Sink...Cuz None of Works Moving, like u Forgot to Vote 4 Links/

eh.. it was decent, wasn't anything special.. but stuck on topic.



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Fast Feet-be-still... this S.I.Q-ness causes my speech-to-kill; so its useless to "push dope" in the game with Payroll's Weakend-Pills
I'll Beat-n-fill... my cup up with that green heat-n-trills..sure Feats-n-chills... look how He tried to "duck me" like weekend-bills...(4)
compounded multi's and good flow... it applied to payroll, but i needed the explaination to fully understand it..




this Dr. Dickhead is fucking "PAYROlls like he's cheap".. u have L shaped cuts?...do u really want my prognosis still?
like Arm-n-get-um..this the New Dr. Phil..V stay preaching-till ...this Thread to Thread geek is speaken-wills...(6)
put together nice, but i didn't really think it hit hard for a punch.




Even if this Arsonist Burned Rolls That talk.."u won't be black at heart"..cause i'm Rocking Roll Like i was giving this Kid ROck's
hot bar.. liked this one..


No Lethal Weapons..maybe back in the day u were a force to be reckoned..but now ure "Time's Gone" like i hid clocks...(8)
nice follow up, i liked the concept and meta..



This "Cash Flow is Frozen Solid".. since ya last date I'm a "block your wins" like u ran into a firewall of ice
so let me bring u up to speed..its HARSH that u-lost-2.. and im rolling to dice again... so the outcomes not looking-nice...(10)
this was decent, it had a scheme.. i didn't really feel it..



all and all even with verbs explainations i'm going with which one i enjoyed more and thought was more relevant, and right to the point...


great battle still, great read..


vote: Payroll

Now Im Not Sure If You Can Category Vote Here, So PM Me If You Cant And Ill Do A Breakdown

Opener: Payroll
Punches: Verb
Creativity: Tie
Closer: Verb
Personals: Verb If Any
Enjoyment: Verb
Skill: Verb Hands Down

The Unimportant Cats

Flow: Verb
Structure: Payroll
Execution: Verb





O/A Verb Hands Down.. Had Better Punches, Wordplay, Used Some Personals, And Actually Was The Only One Here To Drop A Decent Verse... Pz

Nce Breaking Downs.. n Cats yo!! - even if all the votes weren't for me..
i think its 2-2 or 1-2(his lead).. all depends on this site.. nah mean uppin much needed votes yo!!

i really didn't see anything i liked in this one. The rockin roll line has been used before Verb and quite of few of your lines are either not punches, or way too simple for my tastes. Pay didn't really have any sting on none of his easier but he at least made punchlines.

Vote=Pay Roll

24 hrs. most votes win or I'll decide the tie breaker....

uppin voters..

Watch how my Posts set the Rhythm...I dont need my Folks 2 Defend em
bars in front dude, like he enclosed in a Prison...So only way ull See 'V wit a W', is on a "Volkswagen Emblem"/
start of the bar was ehh but you finished it nicely 3/4
U should go Amount some Rep...Cuz Ive seen his verses,so I doubt his Threat
he should jus take this loss he Bout 2 Get,Cuz this 'Character (V) wouldnt b Near the Front',If u 'Reversed the Alphabet'/
uhh rhymes seemed forced.. 2/4
Yet, Everything About u Screams Backwards...Time 2 Face Fate, even tho Fact Hurts
Talk Stupid, but u Rap Worse, like I said 'BackWords'...Cuz 'S.A.T was All over Verbs' n theres no explaing how dat Works/(Shouldnt it be the other way Around)
you rhymed backwards twice basically.. but other then that it was ehh 1.5/4
Voters Came 2 See-Me, cuz P's the Feature, I make u Stand Down like Cement Sneakers
cuz Im Hot like Demon Creatures,n if u checked my verses ud See... I been Mastered Verbs like English Teachers/
this was alright 2/4
Look at ur Record, Jesus!, Wut we 'post 2 Think...Cuz All ive seen is alota Unfocused Ink
so watch ya Boat jus Sink...Cuz None of Works Moving, like u Forgot to Vote 4 Links/
not that good 1/4

9.5/20 pretty decent.. just improve your rhyming


Fast Feet-be-still... this S.I.Q-ness causes my speech-to-kill; so its useless to "push dope" in the game with Payroll's Weakend-Pills
I'll Beat-n-fill... my cup up with that green heat-n-trills..sure Feats-n-chills... look how He tried to "duck me" like weekend-bills...(4)
stop streching your bars so much.. 2/4
this Dr. Dickhead is fucking "PAYROlls like he's cheap".. u have L shaped cuts?...do u really want my prognosis still?
like Arm-n-get-um..this the New Dr. Phil..V stay preaching-till ...this Thread to Thread geek is speaken-wills...(6)
there wasnt really a good punch there and the rhymes were pretty bad 1/4
Even if this Arsonist Burned Rolls That talk.."u won't be black at heart"..cause i'm Rocking Roll Like i was giving this Kid ROck's
No Lethal Weapons..maybe back in the day u were a force to be reckoned..but now ure "Time's Gone" like i hid clocks...(8)
first line was decent nameplay.. second line was decent.. this was a decent bar.. 2.5/4
This "Cash Flow is Frozen Solid".. since ya last date I'm a "block your wins" like u ran into a firewall of ice
so let me bring u up to speed..its HARSH that u-lost-2.. and im rolling to dice again... so the outcomes not looking-nice...(10)
uhhh.. no 1/4

6.5/16 dont worry about it. just keep elevating..

if you changed the fractions around it looks like payroll won this one.. but it was very close.. good battle

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Watch how my Posts set the Rhythm...I dont need my Folks 2 Defend em
bars in front dude, like he enclosed in a Prison...So only way ull See 'V wit a W', is on a "Volkswagen Emblem"/2.5

U should go Amount some Rep...Cuz Ive seen his verses,so I doubt his Threat
he should jus take this loss he Bout 2 Get,Cuz this 'Character (V) wouldnt b Near the Front',If u 'Reversed the Alphabet'/1.5
Yet, Everything About u Screams Backwards...Time 2 Face Fate, even tho Fact Hurts
Talk Stupid, but u Rap Worse, like I said 'BackWords'...Cuz 'S.A.T was All over Verbs' n theres no explaing how dat Works/(Shouldnt it be the other way Around)2.o
Voters Came 2 See-Me, cuz P's the Feature, I make u Stand Down like Cement Sneakers
cuz Im Hot like Demon Creatures,n if u checked my verses ud See... I been Mastered Verbs like English Teachers/2.0

Look at ur Record, Jesus!, Wut we 'post 2 Think...Cuz All ive seen is alota Unfocused Ink
so watch ya Boat jus Sink...Cuz None of Works Moving, like u Forgot to Vote 4 Links/3.0

11.0

Fast Feet-be-still... this S.I.Q-ness causes my speech-to-kill; so its useless to "push dope" in the game with Payroll's Weakend-Pills
I'll Beat-n-fill... my cup up with that green heat-n-trills..sure Feats-n-chills... look how He tried to "duck me" like weekend-bills...(4)1.5

this Dr. Dickhead is fucking "PAYROlls like he's cheap".. u have L shaped cuts?...do u really want my prognosis still?
like Arm-n-get-um..this the New Dr. Phil..V stay preaching-till ...this Thread to Thread geek is speaken-wills...(6)1.0


Even if this Arsonist Burned Rolls That talk.."u won't be black at heart"..cause i'm Rocking Roll Like i was giving this Kid ROck's
No Lethal Weapons..maybe back in the day u were a force to be reckoned..but now ure "Time's Gone" like i hid clocks...(8)2.5

This "Cash Flow is Frozen Solid".. since ya last date I'm a "block your wins" like u ran into a firewall of ice
so let me bring u up to speed..its HARSH that u-lost-2.. and im rolling to dice again... so the outcomes not looking-nice...(10)2.0

7.0
well my opinion this was a one sided batlle


payroll..11.0
verb7.0


vote payroll

mod close this its 4-1