5 bars
due ASAP..
house rules..
AND
im god like can vote(even though he would probably hate)...
must check in..

check..

..checkerz..

I won't hate, I never hate, that's only you.
But yeah, G/L to both and if I vote that will be my only other post in here.

ive never hated.. and i havent vote on your battle cuz you wont let me lol.. but its coo. waitin on rican 2 drop..

I Can See Your FAKENESS DOG! Have You Even Ever LAYED A BROAD? (Prolly Not) But Rican Is "God Like" Like The Dude You "HATIN ON"!!~
I'm WALKIN BY HIM since everyone say this FELLAS TOUGH but he'll starty "Swellin Up" Like "ROCKY EYES DID"!! White ChocoLate? Your SPEECH IS LAME! You'll Beat Me The Day FOXY FIGHTS KIM!!!~ He like "Cant find another woman HOT AS MY CHICK!" how ya brag about her tho when her COCK IS TYPE THICK? CHOCO-LATE SPLIT?.... I mean..I SAW THE DYKE'S CLIT. that fucka-was...eww! I was "hungry"-fa-cooch...but now I think I'm ON A DIET!!!!~ this KID'S FAKE AND A HATER! i'll punch you till your RIBS BREAK; I'M A PLAYER... so "write-down" any thing necessary to match my script but i'll still have "White Out" Like the liquid to corect the "MIXTAKES ON PAPER"!!~ yes someone needs to STOP THE FIGHT QUICK! and just "Blow Out" When I Give "Chocolate; Bars" Like Tha Type That Make your "BODY-TYPE SHIFT"!!!

i kill for power... beatin you inless than an hour...
J. rican(reekin)? nah only when he dont take a shower..=))

haha was gonna go easy but TEXT IS SERIOUS BUSINESS SO NO MERCY LMAO..

your wackness has shown threw... you king? its gonna easy 2 de-thrown you...
show him what the crome do!! cuz you aint got nothin 2 'STATE' no wonder we own you!! haha(we own p.r. its are territory haha)..

hittin him wit shells and mortor... he bout to lose he literally on the 'border'..
and J ahead of W?.. only if we talkin alphabetical order..

no crome..just messin wit 'white'.. will leave ya nose blown...
you dumb clone... out here your a martian so just PHONE home...

rap?.. just give it a rest.. i could be palyed as shit and still beat you 2 death..
cuz 'J'.. tha bomb? only if he strap c4 2 his chest!!..
haha easyy...

vote up..

I Can See Your FAKENESS DOG! Have You Even Ever LAYED A BROAD? (Prolly Not) But Rican Is "God Like" Like The Dude You "HATIN ON"!!~
^^haha hype, but nyce^^
I'm WALKIN BY HIM since everyone say this FELLAS TOUGH but he'll starty "Swellin Up" Like "ROCKY EYES DID"!! White ChocoLate? Your SPEECH IS LAME! You'll Beat Me The Day FOXY FIGHTS KIM!!!~
^lol, ok ok^^
He like "Cant find another woman HOT AS MY CHICK!" how ya brag about her tho when her COCK IS TYPE THICK? CHOCO-LATE SPLIT?.... I mean..I SAW THE DYKE'S CLIT. that fucka-was...eww! I was "hungry"-fa-cooch...but now I think I'm ON A DIET!!!!~
^^LMFAO!!!! no dude^^
this KID'S FAKE AND A HATER! i'll punch you till your RIBS BREAK; I'M A PLAYER... so "write-down" any thing necessary to match my script but i'll still have "White Out" Like the liquid to corect the "MIXTAKES ON PAPER"!!~
^^Nice nameplay, never thought of that^^
yes someone needs to STOP THE FIGHT QUICK! and just "Blow Out" When I Give "Chocolate; Bars" Like Tha Type That Make your "BODY-TYPE SHIFT"!!!
^^Obviously nameplay, it's straight^^

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i kill for power... beatin you inless than an hour...
J. rican(reekin)? nah only when he dont take a shower..
^^seen the same nameplay on a different Rican, it's played, but its worded so it's not even a punch....^^

your wackness has shown threw... you king? its gonna easy 2 de-thrown you...
show him what the crome do!! cuz you aint got nothin 2 'STATE' no wonder we own you!!
^^ok, nice...^^
hittin him wit shells and mortor... he bout to lose he literally on the 'border'..
and J ahead of W?.. only if we talkin alphabetical order..
^^VERY played concept... no^^
no crome..just messin wit 'white'.. will leave ya nose blown...
you dumb clone... out here your a martian so just PHONE home...
^^not feeling dude...^^
rap?.. just give it a rest.. i could be palyed as shit and still beat you 2 death..
cuz 'J'.. tha bomb? only if he strap c4 2 his chest!!..
^seen it... very played... :(^^

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Cats:
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Flow- White
Structure- White
Punches- Rican
Wordplay- Rican
Multis- Rican
Creativity- Rican
Personals- Rican
Nameplays- Tie
Complexity- Rican
Humor- Tie
Enjoyment- Tie
Overall- Rican took this with an overall better battle verse with solid punches and supporting characteristics which made him take this, white did have a better structure/flow which made it easier to read. Overall though, Rican won.

lol.. i would call it a hate.. vote but yea.. its the internet im not gonna bitch lol..
0-1 bump..

I won't hate, I never hate, that's only you.
But yeah, G/L to both and if I vote that will be my only other post in here.
you just said he's a hater which makes you a hater of his hating ways of hating-ness lmfao j/p

lmao.. true

I Can See Your FAKENESS DOG! Have You Even Ever LAYED A BROAD? (Prolly Not) But Rican Is "God Like" Like The Dude You "HATIN ON"!!~

made me chuckle 3/5

I'm WALKIN BY HIM since everyone say this FELLAS TOUGH but he'll starty "Swellin Up" Like "ROCKY EYES DID"!! White ChocoLate?

I thought that was kinda stupid 1/5

Your SPEECH IS LAME! You'll Beat Me The Day FOXY FIGHTS KIM!!!~ He like "Cant find another woman HOT AS MY CHICK!" how ya brag about her tho when her COCK IS TYPE THICK? CHOCO-LATE SPLIT?.... I mean..I SAW THE DYKE'S CLIT

girls dont have dicks...did you mean his girl's a boy...I'll give it a 4/5 cos I laughed at it(4/5)

. that fucka-was...eww! I was "hungry"-fa-cooch...but now I think I'm ON A DIET!!!!~ this KID'S FAKE AND A HATER! i'll punch you till your RIBS BREAK;

didnt care for that...2/5

I'M A PLAYER... so "write-down" any thing necessary to match my script but i'll still have "White Out" Like the liquid to corect the "MIXTAKES ON PAPER"!!

okay 3/5

~ yes someone needs to STOP THE FIGHT QUICK! and just "Blow Out" When I Give "Chocolate; Bars" Like Tha Type That Make your "BODY-TYPE SHIFT"!!!

it was aight 3/5



i kill for power... beatin you inless than an hour...
J. rican(reekin)? nah only when he dont take a shower..=))

lmfao GET'EM 4/5


haha was gonna go easy but TEXT IS SERIOUS BUSINESS SO NO MERCY LMAO..

your wackness has shown threw... you king? its gonna easy 2 de-thrown you...
show him what the crome do!! cuz you aint got nothin 2 'STATE' no wonder we own you!! haha(we own p.r. its are territory haha)..

the 1st line didnt rhyme...atleast from what I see or pronounced it 1/5


hittin him wit shells and mortor... he bout to lose he literally on the 'border'..
and J ahead of W?.. only if we talkin alphabetical order..

both them lines was hot 4/5


no crome..just messin wit 'white'.. will leave ya nose blown...
you dumb clone... out here your a martian so just PHONE home...

ET lol! 3/5


rap?.. just give it a rest.. i could be palyed as shit and still beat you 2 death..
cuz 'J'.. tha bomb? only if he strap c4 2 his chest!!..

decent 3/5

haha easyy...

vote up..

JRican you came cold it was definitly better than the battle you did with GodLike... but your structure was really bad I couldnt really read the shit and you came kinda generic at times(the whole thing about his girl), I'd give you a 8/10 but since I could barley read, its a 7/10

WC was a beast his punches came hard the BO line was pure sickness and it had me laughin' for a minute...9/10

punches - WC
personals - WC
flow - both
effort - Rican
multis - WC
enjoyment - both
vote/WC

lmao.. true
yup...I only speak the truth...sometimes

Slim you separated Ricans bar's wrong.. look @ my vote, thats how they should be.

haha...
1-1 bump...

like you tell me god

GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY BATTLE.. YOU VOTED NOW KEEP IT MOVIN..

Slim you separated Ricans bar's wrong.. look @ my vote, thats how they should be.
no I didnt he fucked up on structure this time if he dont have structure then I cant seperate it the way it should be...I'm not gonna seperate it...I kno he aint lazy he can do it himself

uppin ...

uppin..

Flow - tie
punches- WC
metas - WC
Muties - tie
structure - White
creative - tie
nameplay - Rican

vote - WC

break down the bars niigga^

that wasnt in the rules..
if you wants 2 he can..
if it doesnt then it stands..
2-1 bump

I Can See Your FAKENESS DOG! Have You Even Ever LAYED A BROAD? (Prolly Not) But Rican Is "God Like" Like The Dude You "HATIN ON"!!~
simple but straight line 2.5/5

I'm WALKIN BY HIM since everyone say this FELLAS TOUGH but he'll starty "Swellin Up" Like "ROCKY EYES DID"!! White ChocoLate? Your SPEECH IS LAME! You'll Beat Me The Day FOXY FIGHTS KIM!!!~
first part straight coulda ended better 2.5/5

He like "Cant find another woman HOT AS MY CHICK!" how ya brag about her tho when her COCK IS TYPE THICK? CHOCO-LATE SPLIT?.... I mean..I SAW THE DYKE'S CLIT. that fucka-was...eww! I was "hungry"-fa-cooch...but now I think I'm ON A DIET!!!!~
ehhh 2/5

this KID'S FAKE AND A HATER! i'll punch you till your RIBS BREAK; I'M A PLAYER... so "write-down" any thing necessary to match my script but i'll still have "White Out" Like the liquid to corect the "MIXTAKES ON PAPER"!!~
coulda worded it a lil better...but this line was tight 3.5/5

yes someone needs to STOP THE FIGHT QUICK! and just "Blow Out" When I Give "Chocolate; Bars" Like Tha Type That Make your "BODY-TYPE SHIFT"!!!
wasnt that hard of a close, kinda see where u was goin tho. 1.5/5

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i kill for power... beatin you inless than an hour...
J. rican(reekin)? nah only when he dont take a shower..=))
straigght lol 2/5
haha was gonna go easy but TEXT IS SERIOUS BUSINESS SO NO MERCY LMAO..

your wackness has shown threw... you king? its gonna easy 2 de-thrown you...
show him what the crome do!! cuz you aint got nothin 2 'STATE' no wonder we own you!! haha(we own p.r. its are territory haha)..
not bad 2.5/5

hittin him wit shells and mortor... he bout to lose he literally on the 'border'..
and J ahead of W?.. only if we talkin alphabetical order..
kinda played but i liked it, 2.5/5

no crome..just messin wit 'white'.. will leave ya nose blown...
you dumb clone... out here your a martian so just PHONE home...
was feelin the first part but not the second 2/5

rap?.. just give it a rest.. i could be palyed as shit and still beat you 2 death..
cuz 'J'.. tha bomb? only if he strap c4 2 his chest!!..
like the close 3/5.

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It was a pretty close battle, yall tied in score...but i think imma have to give my vote to rican. i feel like he put a lil bit more thought and effort in his shit so it was more complex.

Vote- Rican

fer sure 2-2 bump..

bumpin 2-2