4 bars..

due before the day is over..

check in..
and just pm when your done with your verse..

Haha, vet votes only/respected heads...
Such as:
Meta-The-Demon
DunLo
Harsh
Snale

This is my check..

check..

Been ready,
just got back home.
PM me & let's drop 3.

ready..

Okay whit3, so..

I got some fuckin’ heat flows, that’ll melt you… But your rhymes? You can keep those…
Plus last time you went &: “said it was a done deal” (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1622340&postcount=7), I just “assumed UL started a casino”! (DunLo)
I’m mean hoe… Every time you speak dudes’ll say wow, damn… obviously, he’s a queer…
& you better “Start looking for tired people”, cuz it’s the only time “white-noise is needed here”!
I sense someone feeble near.. it’s whit3! This Bitches rhyming? Believe I’ll need to stop it…
Cuz when people talk about “her, she is always made fun of”, & “you’re a no-name, chocolate”! (hershy)

...easy...

y speak?.. your not that tight.. and your greatness is weak..
him winin?.. is bleak.. cuz im all over GOD.. like a 'JESUS FREAK'..
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you talk like a thug.. but you wouldnt be tight with mic(mike)... if you started wearing a glove..
and the slug?.. will leave god 'head over heels' like he was falling in love..
:owned:
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got him stressin..like fuck white gonna teach me a lesson for messin..
when i leave god out of the question.. like a school session..
:boxing:


done...
=]..

good battle god..

^Yup..
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system ghost can vote.. and so can CAT..

Yeah, those 2 can also vote..
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Okay whit3, so..

I got some fuckin’ heat flows, that’ll melt you… But your rhymes? You can keep those…
Plus last time you went &: “said it was a done deal” (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1622340&postcount=7), I just “assumed UL started a casino”! (DunLo)
Wording/set up could use work, but funny

I’m mean hoe… Every time you speak dudes’ll say wow, damn… obviously, he’s a queer…
& you better “Start looking for tired people”, cuz it’s the only time “white-noise is needed here”!
decent jab/nameplay

I sense someone feeble near.. it’s whit3! This Bitches rhyming? Believe I’ll need to stop it…
Cuz when people talk about “her, she is always made fun of”, & “you’re a no-name, chocolate”! (hershy)

This bar was nice.

...easy...


y speak?.. your not that tight.. and your greatness is weak..
him winin?.. is bleak.. cuz im all over GOD.. like a 'JESUS FREAK'..
These simple god flips are played, all the same. You need to come with something more than just a nameflip to make it hit, maybe some wordplay or a personal linked in thee would help.



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you talk like a thug.. but you wouldnt be tight with mic(mike)... if you started wearing a glove..
and the slug?.. will leave god 'head over heels' like he was falling in love..

Decent meta, nice.

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got him stressin..like fuck white gonna teach me a lesson for messin..
when i leave god out of the question.. like a school session..
Easy flip.


Vote-godlike

He was consistent and a little more complex. White your nameflips were too simple, you need to add more to your bars to make them witty and original.

-of course i can vote-
but i'll wait n see the responses..

^ nope, sorry.
1-0 up.

I got some fuckin’ heat flows, that’ll melt you… But your rhymes? You can keep those…
Plus last time you went &: “said it was a done deal”, I just “assumed UL started a casino”! (DunLo)

decent opener...not too hard tho

I’m mean hoe… Every time you speak dudes’ll say wow, damn… obviously, he’s a queer…
& you better “Start looking for tired people”, cuz it’s the only time “white-noise is needed here”!

good personal here....

I sense someone feeble near.. it’s whit3! This Bitches rhyming? Believe I’ll need to stop it…
Cuz when people talk about “her, she is always made fun of”, & “you’re a no-name, chocolate”! (hershy)

creative line wit that her-she shit.


y speak?.. your not that tight.. and your greatness is weak..
him winin?.. is bleak.. cuz im all over GOD.. like a 'JESUS FREAK'

too simple of a nameplay...and god battles people daily (lol) so plain ol' god jokes are played

you talk like a thug.. but you wouldnt be tight with mic(mike)... if you started wearing a glove..
and the slug?.. will leave god 'head over heels' like he was falling in love..

that mike shit is super played..the head over heels part was smooth and nicely worded. that really saved this bar. good punch

got him stressin..like fuck white gonna teach me a lesson for messin..
when i leave god out of the question.. like a school session..

coulda had a real good punch here...but u wasn't creative wit the word'n in the punch.


vote - god

if white woulda brought that last punch home this woulda been a real close battle. but god had a solid verse...pretty consistant and his punches were effective. plus he had the edge on creativity.

wow ppl aren't feeling my 1st bar as much as i thought they would.. ok tho..
2-0, uppin' KO.

fer sure.. 0-2 uppin..

dunlo view'd and didn't vote... smh...

yaddayadda, UPPPPPPPPPP......

uppin,..

wow.
ups!

i was gone vote

lol*nuff said*

C, vote. This isn't over.

GodLike
I got some fuckin’ heat flows, that’ll melt you… But your rhymes? You can keep those…
Plus last time you went &: “said it was a done deal” (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1622340&postcount=7), I just “assumed UL started a casino”!
this was alright..good wording 2.5/5
I’m mean hoe… Every time you speak dudes’ll say wow, damn… obviously, he’s a queer…
& you better “Start looking for tired people”, cuz it’s the only time “white-noise is needed here”!
punch hit..decent bar 2.5/5
I sense someone feeble near.. it’s whit3! This Bitches rhyming? Believe I’ll need to stop it…
Cuz when people talk about “her, she is always made fun of”, & “you’re a no-name, chocolate”! (hershy)
good wp attempt..ok punch 2/5

Total: 6.5/15
White
y speak?.. your not that tight.. and your greatness is weak..
him winin?.. is bleak.. cuz im all over GOD.. like a 'JESUS FREAK'..
not feelin it..punch was there tho 2/5
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you talk like a thug.. but you wouldnt be tight with mic(mike)... if you started wearing a glove..
and the slug?.. will leave god 'head over heels' like he was falling in love..
no..wp was bad..punch not hard 1.5/5
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got him stressin..like fuck white gonna teach me a lesson for messin..
when i leave god out of the question.. like a school session..
noooo..1/5 for effort

Total: 4.5/15

Overall: GodLike had some decent punches..wp was alright..but the key is he was consistant throughout..On the other hand Whitechocolate had the 1st bar which was decent..and two shitty bars following it..punches were weak..and you didn't use any wp..we'll any good wp.

Vote: GodLike

lol...
vet votes only.
you're a very critical voter aren't you?
2-0...

uppin...

^^ u should take the vote u get.. when last time u see dunlo r ny old top head vote??
not freeposting just saying.. u making shit harder than it need to be!
~1~

i would but it's not a vet vote.
so 2-0.

^^ u should take the vote u get.. when last time u see dunlo r ny old top head vote??
not freeposting just saying.. u making shit harder than it need to be!
~1~


i vote all the time

old top head
your like in your mid 20's still :D

blah... 2-0 still..

2-0 ups.. Lol..

Lol, sup with this?
2-0.

dude is banned



*plays lil flip hit single*