3 bars
due tonight
None of the infamous "-ings"
G/L

shhiit 5 i posted i wanted 3 bars but idc 5 works check..

Checking in...

Here's one of my required links, I'll get another one after we both drop:
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1624892#post1624892

Oh did you say 3?.. My bad, got you confused with Mothman.. 3 it is..

cool..heres one of my links too
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1651632#post1651632

tommorow it is im guessin..

let me know im ready when you are!

We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
(Hicup)

I Represent a Threat!..

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!

I'll Wreck this Bitch And..

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
(Meat-a-Raw-Head)

uppin yourrs man common

meta has till tomorrow night or this will be closed.

MORBID SCRIPTURES GET ETCHED QUICK and FORMED FROM SLITS IN YOUR FLESH PRICK
From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!

He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!

Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!!

Vet votes only please..

punches-meta
personals-tied
metas-tied
wordplay-meta
nameplay-tied

vote-meta

Yo Snale I think you edited instead of quoted.. Haha.. Thanks for the vote though man.. 1-0, ups

yea my bad, I'm use to the 'quote' button being there, but now i can edit other people's posts and i always forget, lol.

Oh well i edited it back

this is a hard battle to call kinda

but



















not

so


much


aight meta came in corny and shit, but later on he was throwing decent punches, then he like


impressed me

hahah kidding


























no



really that last bar was pretty good












but all in all days inn and shit TD had a okay verse to merk a herb
and it was solid and shit

and shit was shit this and that,




know what







if meta didnt have the corny ness in his verse he may have won


but




he didnt and fax is fax homey




sorry but my vote goes to TD

FLOW TD
PUNCHES TD
HUMOR TIE
PERSONALS TIE



so there ya go folks im out like fat niggas runnin bases

0-1 meta still

you didn't even vote on wordplay, nameplay, or metas.

We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
(Hicup)
3/5 aight personal and shit okay punch

I Represent a Threat!..

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!
2/5 kinda simple but personal
I'll Wreck this Bitch And..

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
(Meat-a-Raw-Head)
2/5 aight


lacked multis and solid flow

7/15





MORBID SCRIPTURES GET ETCHED QUICK and FORMED FROM SLITS IN YOUR FLESH PRICK
From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!
1/5 wow that shit was corny

He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!
2/5 meh kinda wack but I will give it a 2 for effort

Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!!


1/5 you should of set it up better, you just found some shit
to rhyme with amertrade corporations.. there was no set up
and the punch wasnt good


flow was better by a lil bit multis better by a smidget....
buy it was far cornyer

4/15



VOTE TD

1-1.....

punches-meta
personals-tied
metas-TD
wordplay-TD
nameplay-TD

vote-TD

Punches-Meta
Personals-None
Nameplay-Tie
Flow-TD
Multies-Tie
Wordplay-Meta
Creativity-TD
Originality-TD
Overall-Meta



Punches hit harder and were more wittier.Last bar was crushing.Dont get me wrong Td had a nice verse but overall punches werent hitting as hard.

2-2.....

Not to sway but this is why I said Vet votes only. Cause Vets know what's played and what isn't. Thanks to everyone for voting so far though.

TD VERSE:

We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
(Hicup)
Opener was nice, I liked the Aretha Line, very good wordplay. Second part of the bar seemed forced, i get the hick up line, but wans't a very hard hitting punch. 6/10

I Represent a Threat!..

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!
Wow, really nice personal, nameplay and wordplay. Very nice lines right here.. 8/10

I'll Wreck this Bitch And..

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
(Meat-a-Raw-Head)
Again, really doesn't make sense, as far as battling goes, some forced nameplay, other than that, pretty decent closer... 5/10

19/30
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Meta The Demon VERSE:


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From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!
Nice Multi's. Good punches, like the T.op D.og line... Good nameplay, personals, flowed nicely. 8/10


He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!
Ha.. Nice multi's and flow, once again. Good punches in here, somewhat forced and filler words not really directed at Td. Good bar throughout. 7/10

Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!!
Opening line had a good visual, average nameplay, nice ending. Somewhat forced it seems, but flowed nicely, and the Multi's were present again. 7/10

22/30


Punches - Ill go with Meta on this one, pretty good punches throughout.

Personals - Meta has this category, nice shit homie.

Nameplay - Tie, both didnt have anything stand-out, but I enjoyed the read, and seeing you guys war this one out.

Flow - Meta, TD's verse had a couple bars that were filled with alot of syllables, but still sounded good, but meta took this with his good structure.

Multies - Meta

Wordplay - TD, but it was a hard Decision.

Creativity - Tie, both had very good verses, TD and Meta both showed nice creativity in both verses.

Originality - TD, had some prety creative shit my man, Meta just kinda used big words, but it sounded nice, and I understood what you were trying to get across. Both are very nice with the Text.

Overall - Meta




BreakDown:

I feel that this was a good battle hook up, evenly matched, no favorite. Its hard to come out and drop first, and still take the battle, and you TD, almost did, I just feel that you need to work on that structure, and get to the point, where you dont have to put so many words in one bar. It was also, on meta, that you really didnt have too good of creativity, I loved the Larnyx line BTw, nice delivery, good multi and rhyme scheme. I look forward to seeing a remath in the future.



Vote - Meta.

3-2.....

We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
(Hicup)

pretty good opener creativity wise. a true punch was absent, but nice wordplays.

Represent a Threat!..

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!

the set up was almost gayish....but the punch was dope. i'm feel'n that one.

I'll Wreck this Bitch And..

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
(Meat-a-Raw-Head)

setup line was quite weak. I don't see how Met and Meat sound anything alike. failed wordplay here.

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From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!

nice...cool opener. simple and straight to the point

He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!

nice again

Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!

haha...setup seems irrelevent here utha than throw'n lil jabs at him....but the punch is dope.


overall...this battle was fuck'n close. td fell off wit his last bar. meta dropped 3 nice bars...so that pretty much sealed the deal. td, ya first 2 bars were nice kid...but Meta gets my vote.

4-2 meta uppin

Uppin for votes

We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
Decent..

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!
not feeling this.

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
Better..

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From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!
Ok....

He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!
Not feeling this... 1st line boasted, 2cd line didn't punch
Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!!
Nah...

Overall I feel like both could use harder punches but I'm giving this battle to TD for having what I feel was a slightly better verse

We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
This was Ok

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!
not feeling this.
First line seemed like filler, "And with him? The 'Sex-ain't-missin' really isnt an insult, liked the last line tho

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
Better..
Bit of filler, but decent punch.--------------------------------------------------------

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From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!
Nice Multi's

He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!
Multis there, last line, I didnt like

Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!!
Rhyming wasn't so good.. didn't like this bar

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Overall:
I think TD was more consistent & More creative. Meta had some nice multi's. But I give my

VOTE: TD

4-4 upping for the final vote

Final Vote....

Hmmmm.....

Ok, Now this battle was FUCKING CLOSE....

But here's the breakdown....


T.D...
We Ain't Neck and Neck!..'Holdin an Aretha CD' was last time he 'Felt Respect'
This Hillbilly Elevatin?
NA!..Last Time I 'Saw this Hick-Up' was when i 'Held My Breath!
(Hicup)
Whoa!...Dope Hick-Up line, only down side is that bar could be directed at anyone, not just Meta...Dope concept though...

I Represent a Threat!..

And 'Pourin Glitter on Your Words' is the only way his 'Text is Glisten'
And With Him? The 'Sex-ain't-Missin'..
'Demon's in Guys' so much you would think there was an 'Exorcism'!
Ehh...Decent.....HomoSexual Punches are played, but this was ok....

I'll Wreck this Bitch And..

Leave his Brain Empty..Just 'Filled with Air' so he 'Outta Bounce'..
Looks like i Caught-a-Mouse..
The Last Time 'Met-a-Raw-Head' it was in the 'Slaughter House'!!
(Meat-a-Raw-Head)
This seemed way too forced....


Meta....
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From HHA?.. I'll 'send Top Dog back' like returning Chuck NORRIS PICTURES TO NETFLIX!!!
Lmao, dope opener....


He's never SEEN DROPPIN' A SAVAGE BAR...... It's a BLEAK OPTION TO SCRAP OR SPAR
I'm the best... I'll force him 'Two-Face the Fax' without XEROXIN' HIS AVATAR!!!
Lmao...Concept was a bit played but you deffinitly flipped it into an original manner, good shit....


Watch the LARYNX MAKE SWORDS TO SHANK HIM... He's SCARED TO TAKE MORE ABRASIONS
Plus he's broke.... only time 'TD handles funds' is the AMERITRADE CORPORATION!!!
A lil weaker than the rest, but dope none the less...



This was a hard one to call, but in the end I feel as if Meta-The-Demon squeezed it out by a hair...This battle couldbr gone either way, but Meta gets my vote this time...



I'd like to see a rem-Match, this deserves it....

Peace....

Thanks Dun. I'll rep everyone who voted at some point today. Good verse TD. I'm not taking anything away from you, but this battle marks the end of me battling people outside of the League here, except for elite heads. Cause voters need to have a concept of what is and isn't played. "Meta" and "Demon" flips have been used in literally every verse thrown against me for the entire time I've been here. Not counting the 100k times on other sites. You had know way of knowing this, I'm just saying.. the average RW voter needs to read more battles.


Good shit though. We'll have a rematch if you're still around sometime. Hell you can have a shot at my belt I'm sure if you join the league.

5-4 meta good battle