2 min max.
house rules

due tuesday the 12th

good shit

good luck

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Lyrics

im paid in full,and you is a lame, its cool
they wouldnt call you a beast if you was raised with wolves
Wtf is a Yeshua? i guess English wasnt ya best grade in school
You on the stage is boo'd, gettin yah clothes stained with food
the Crowds anger is telegraphed, they want they staineless rugs
too put yah brains on the roof like a heli pad. Fuckin with cha1ns troops
al leave your maimed recruits.she'lld and bag'd like im trained in retail
for sellin Crabs..step to cha1n? and i wont be talkin symbols when i say you'll get more L's
dropped on you then tetris game..my Fire Blacken blocks, Yes ube catchin shots
cuz i stay with it around the waist Call me Kakerot? and be at yah wake screaming
im the one who did it before your caskest drop? im over sick , like the aids virus
and you a living organism me and you could never Co-exist, in this battle you
my bitch so cut yah dick off and grow some tits. for the time being, i cant go on like this
FUCK it IM LEAVING , they better ID em or call social services for the type of abuse that im seeing. give em some nurishment and IV em,i aint jokin when i say imma get on em
like he furniture at ikea. so whoever gave him the idea, must of not shown him the fine print,
and just said Sign here. Who Fucking wit me ? they like fuck it Cha1n battle yah Self?
cuz i take it personal it al be a hazard for health, so Yes when them red-dots on yah face
dont call pro-active for help. thats just a sign for massive clips! Whoo all the guns look like
they got darth vades light saber attacthed to it. Yeshua write my name and Tattoo it , on yah forehead so the rest of the world could know you was that stupid.

i got my track done but it wont show up on my page when i upload it... soundclick is getting to be a pain

chains gold plated
who'm i tellin; they know
overrated; homey made it???
LMAO
you never had a chance dog
im outta ya region
u couldnt beat a motherfuckin parapelegic
u know my flow games tighter
than the pick in ya corn roll
u mad because im hotter
than a chick in a porno
ull never see me lyrically
rap aroud this dude spherically (rap circles around him)
ya whole movements just a waste of time
noones takin seriously
let him go and call his homies
they'll be carryin him
his every punchline mrs. (misses)
like married women
u know a chain aint shit
unless u rock it right
i'd stab u 46 times
wit a pocket knife
but i just bought a new handgun
im itchin to shoot
so ima start bangin niggaz
like Bishop in juice
u know im radical
ill send u on sabbatical
mathematical catapult
u duckin from the gat i'll pull
lateral brain mater'll scatter u
battle rapidly shatter u
and leave u all broke up
like the Niggaz Wit Attitudes
Idont really understand
how u come at me sideways
im on this pussy's head
like fitteds on five braids
this guys gay; battles over
tell 'em good night boy
go and tell ya homies
u got beat by a whiteboy!!!!

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bump votes please

chain


im paid in full,and you is a lame, its cool
they wouldnt call you a beast if you was raised with wolves

Nice start

wasn't fellin the rest of the verse... heard you come better then that...
flow was ehh...this was iight..


yeshua


chains gold plated
who'm i tellin; they know
overrated; homey made it???
LMAO

ehh..chain had a better start


the married women line was nice... good flow... lyrics was ok...
but the flow you kept up with and didnt fall off...


flow: yeshua
delivery yeshua
punches: tie
multi: yeshua
wordplay: tie
personal: tie
quality: tie
enjoyment: yeshua

yeshua just came better vote-yeshua

Wow.. Close Shit.. Decent Battle..

Flow: Cha1n
Fluency: Yeshua
Consistency: Cha1n
Multies: Yeshua
Punches: Cha1n
Personals: Tie (Heard A "LITTLE" From Both)

Vote: Cha1n

Additional Comments:
Yeshua: Damn! That's How You Show Up To A Battle. Much Improvement. Keep It Up. And When We Battle. Go Hard.

Cha1n: You Had Me Laughing Through The Whole Track. Shit Was Mad Funny And You Had Some Really Over The Top Punchlines That I Don't Think Many People Are Going To Understand.. Like The Kakerot Line.. That Shit Was Nasty.. Your Overtop Shit Got My Vote!

thanx ya'll 1-1 bump

bump; need votes