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I said 3-4 bars.
We can go 4 bars then, let's get this done by tonight though.

Ugh... Dude whats 1 bar... Whatever though... 4 Bars it is... but i cant guarantee i'll have mine up tonight... im about to leave out for the rest of the day not sure when i'll be back on here... but ima definitely drop.. Let's make the deadline 12 Noon EST Tomorrow..

K, sounds good.
Links from me soon..

Links

I'll drop soon.

http://rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1669193&postcount=10
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1662837&postcount=6

It’s clear that this dudes lonely… past dread? Probably, cuz you’re getting killed, he’s too phony! Fags dead…
& he’s losing to C? Why battle me when: “you can’t beat a no-body” like fighting people who only have heads!!
Dig your grave, then I’m throwing you deep… When I write my verse then drop? Dude even knows he’s been beat…
Seein me? He’ll get cold & just freeze… & I’ll “Phil, you with bullet’s”, yet he’s not the one who’s holding the heat!!
Seriously, enough of this though… Imma show him to his death bed, you suck & it shows, stop fuckin’ with pros…
Because, when I’m clutching you’ll go… Plus it’s obvious that “Phil a bitch”… as if I’m just busting in hoes!!
I think it’s “your time, to leave”, as if he already needed an extention.. So this faggot’s flows are wreckin’?!
NO!, becuz your verse? Well, you need “something, that FITS your style” even though, “the hat is no exception” (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75093)!!

& if you don't get it, don't vote..
*waits for Phil's verse*

This Weakling Resigns When I'm Stringing These Lines; I'm Thinking Up Rhymes From A Brain Thats Refined.
And Even If He Run Through The Jungle With Tarzan, You'll Never Catch Godlike 'Swinging D' Vine'..
He's Seeking Some Shine, Like Bums On The Corner; Screaming For Change, Like Woman Reformers.
So If The 'Rev Foe Lose Shins'; It's No Illusion, This Blasphemous Activist 'Fell On Knee', Like Manslaughter..
Camcorder- 'Foreva Dense', Like Population In China. I'm Digging Thru Dirt Like Occupation Of Miners.
& Im Seriously Considering Switching To GFX, Just Check How I 'OpenGL' Like Applications For Writers..
Inflicting The Damage, If You Dont Understand Bruh, Im Guessing The Greatness You Will Not Behold.
Cause After Flicking Your Camera, You Noticed Your 'Expo's Sure' Sucks Worse Than Baseball In Montreal..

Swinging D' Vine - Swinging Devine = GodLike
Rev Foe - Reverend's Enemy = Blasphemy
Rev Foe Lose Shins - Revolutions - Reforming - Change
Fell On Knee - Felony
Foreva Dense - For Evidence (Remember The Felony Line...)
OpenGL - Open Graphics Library - Open G.L. (His Initials)
Expo's Sure - Exposure (Camera Exposures...)

Links Coming Really Soon... BTW Good Verse...

Yeah, you too.

LINK 1: http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127070
LINK 2: http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=124835

*moved*

Yawn, 5 days & no votes is cool.

It’s clear that this dudes lonely… past dread? Probably, cuz you’re getting killed, he’s too phony! Fags dead…

fairly good opener, 2.5/5

& he’s losing to C? Why battle me when: “you can’t beat a no-body” like fighting people who only have heads!!

little confusing but the first rhyme is nice 2/5

Dig your grave, then I’m throwing you deep… When I write my verse then drop? Dude even knows he’s been beat…

yeap i like this,by why the question mark needed? 2.5/5

Seein me? He’ll get cold & just freeze… & I’ll “Phil, you with bullet’s”, yet he’s not the one who’s holding the heat!!

good plain and simple punch 3/5
Seriously, enough of this though… Imma show him to his death bed, you suck & it shows, stop fuckin’ with pros…
Because, when I’m clutching you’ll go… Plus it’s obvious that “Phil a bitch”… as if I’m just busting in hoes!!

like this middle bit nicley worded 3/5
I think it’s “your time, to leave”, as if he already needed an extention.. So this faggot’s flows are wreckin’?!
NO!, becuz your verse? Well, you need “something, that FITS your style” even though, “the hat is no exception” (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75093)!!


could have had a better ending if re-worded a lil' better....but still fairly good...2.5/5



This Weakling Resigns When I'm Stringing These Lines; I'm Thinking Up Rhymes From A Brain Thats Refined.
good, simple but needs a bigger hit for an opener 2.5/5

And Even If He Run Through The Jungle With Tarzan, You'll Never Catch Godlike 'Swinging D' Vine'..
yeah i like, good use of words 3/5

He's Seeking Some Shine, Like Bums On The Corner; Screaming For Change, Like Woman Reformers.

again as above good use of words 2.5/5

So If The 'Rev Foe Lose Shins'; It's No Illusion, This Blasphemous Activist 'Fell On Knee', Like Manslaughter..
yup yup good shit but flow jumpy when you read it 2.5/5

Camcorder- 'Foreva Dense', Like Population In China. I'm Digging Thru Dirt Like Occupation Of Miners.
nicley relates back to his other line 3/5

& Im Seriously Considering Switching To GFX, Just Check How I 'OpenGL' Like Applications For Writers..

hehe good nameplay but only understood it cuz of your explanation..2/5

Inflicting The Damage, If You Dont Understand Bruh, Im Guessing The Greatness You Will Not Behold.

ok not brill tho,2/5

Cause After Flicking Your Camera, You Noticed Your 'Expo's Sure' Sucks Worse Than Baseball In Montreal..

i guessing a personal dig here... cool but bigger punch to end with 2.5/5





ok fairly good battle guys,

godlike has got good punches for sure, like one after the other

qwerty.....you've defo done this before have'nt you? hehe

vote: qwerty

i think i little more skill and effort went into it,
but i have to give credit where its due to god ...cuz you are pretty damn good at text....i just liked prefered the overall feel of qwerty's only reason he won other than that it was defo on the same level two good battlers

QweTrow? dont know what his name is, dont feel like looking back, but in my personal opinion he won. his verse was easier to read, and it seemed like it would flow better to a beat.

1st dude, his bars seemed to drag on and then try to rhyme,

punches, multies and everything else go to deathrow

1st dude is aite, i just think he needs to write to an audible beat

1-0 qwerty

jones you gotta break your vote down better

Alright, so..
1. "potter", by your markings, I won.
Me = 52%
Him = 50%
2. Jones, this battle isn't based on who's would flow better to a beat, dude.

yeah i broke bars down i'm still allowed to pick overall

and was anyone making an effort to vote in this battle me thinks not?

vote still stands or ask snale i'm not quite sure but if he says change it then change it

It’s clear that this dudes lonely… past dread? Probably, cuz you’re getting killed, he’s too phony! Fags dead…

bullshit

& he’s losing to C? Why battle me when: “you can’t beat a no-body” like fighting people who only have heads!!

waCk

Dig your grave, then I’m throwing you deep… When I write my verse then drop? Dude even knows he’s been beat…

nice... he should have flowedlike that the whole way

Seein me? He’ll get cold & just freeze… & I’ll “Phil, you with bullet’s”, yet he’s not the one who’s holding the heat!!

meh

Seriously, enough of this though… Imma show him to his death bed, you suck & it shows, stop fuckin’ with pros…

Pros suck, lol

Because, when I’m clutching you’ll go… Plus it’s obvious that “Phil a bitch”… as if I’m just busting in hoes!!

nice

I think it’s “your time, to leave”, as if he already needed an extention.. So this faggot’s flows are wreckin’?!
NO!, becuz your verse? Well, you need “something, that FITS your style” even though, “the hat is no exception”!!

what hat?

3/7 that means i liked 42% of his bars






This Weakling Resigns When I'm Stringing These Lines; I'm Thinking Up Rhymes From A Brain Thats Refined.

nice rhyme scheme

And Even If He Run Through The Jungle With Tarzan, You'll Never Catch Godlike 'Swinging D' Vine'..

i had to read that 1 twice

He's Seeking Some Shine, Like Bums On The Corner; Screaming For Change, Like Woman Reformers.

change + Reform = good

So If The 'Rev Foe Lose Shins'; It's No Illusion, This Blasphemous Activist 'Fell On Knee', Like Manslaughter..

back on his rhyming miller, plus it make sense

Camcorder- 'Foreva Dense', Like Population In China. I'm Digging Thru Dirt Like Occupation Of Miners.

89.993% of the worlds population is asian

& Im Seriously Considering Switching To GFX, Just Check How I 'OpenGL' Like Applications For Writers..

dont do graphics

Inflicting The Damage, If You Dont Understand Bruh, Im Guessing The Greatness You Will Not Behold.

:( i dont behold the graphics card

Cause After Flicking Your Camera, You Noticed Your 'Expo's Sure' Sucks Worse Than Baseball In Montreal..

wack


4/7 overall i liked 57% of his verse
i vote for quartz





































































































lol, qwerty

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