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check goddamn easy wins for vets lol

im no vet....one of my alias's is....lol

Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked
One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig

go vote and get your links ex.

:D okay

Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
decent....obvious though
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked
this is a common mistake when people start out, nameplay doesn't hit as hard if you split it up, cause than it's too easy to use.
One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
First line was a dope nameplay, you should have switched it though and made it your main punch
The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig
Sig disses are played
__________________


im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,
all the metas and link ups are witty, but wheres the real punch?

i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,
exonerated/ex honor reagan sounds nothing alike...

shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,
x a bitch in this/exhibitionist is forced.

dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...
again sig disses are played

Vote-Ex

You could tell he made some rooky mistakes, but the reaganomics line was nice and he was throwing punches. Reagan this isn't your regular style with the wordplays, they were pretty off here.

Punches- Reagan
Multies- Reagan
Metaphors- Ex
Personals- Reagan
Wordplay- Reagan
Complexity- Reagan
Creativity- Reagan
Enjoyment- Reagan

Overall - Reagan tried to come up with more creative punches which made me like his verse better cause took risks but Ex you did well bro so don't worry if you lose this one

Vote - Reagan

moved
1-0

I got a category :D

1-1 wow lol

1-0 silly billy.....

nu uh Snale voted for me hr just edited your post accidentally

whoa, how the fuck did i vote on reagan's account?

lol

1-1......

Come on guys vote i have a chance *gets teary eyed*

EX
BAR1 Nice concept, punchline was pretty good.

BAR2 Multies were good, wording on the firest line could have been better, just to make the punch harder.

BAR3 Set-up was NICE, not a great punchline tho.

BAR4 Liked the first line again, multies made it flow, punchline was alright.

Reagan
BAR1 Great flow, liked tha metas, and the play on his location.

BAR2 Punchline wasen't great, but the concepts were dope.

BAR3 Wordplay really needs to work in both context.

BAR4 Meh, not a great bar punch wise.

EX GMV, better concepts, punches were more on point, but flow and wordplay is all reagan. Reagan I wanna see some better wordplay from you, I know you can pull it off better than you did here.

2-1 :D OMG I just creamed

wow really....

yoooooooo... fix the verses Snale... i was mad confused.... i'ma go ahead and vote anyway tho

EX -
Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
eh... this coulda been played better w/ a better setup and longer lines... decent

I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked

wasnt feeling it

One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
another Pres Reagan line? 1 was enough, considering this is only a 4 bar battle... shoulda invested in finding out some of his other alias'

The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig

eh... sparked it w/ ANOTHER Pres Reagan line... and i always liked the chic in his sig.. didnt hit well mayne

Reagan -
im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,


flow was on point... brought the location into play... pretty decent opener

i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,


concept was there... wordplay was forced

shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,

Snale said it was forced... i think it flowed perfectly.... but that's just my opinion...

dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...

eh... wasnt feeling the closer...

___________________
punches - Reagan
personals - tie..
name/wordplay - Reagan
flow/structure - tie
wit/creativity - Reagan

overall, this was a pretty decent battle... the turn off i had w/ Ex is that he kept going back to the same concept... lacked creativity... i liked the Reaganomics line but you used it incorrectly... shoulda used that line as your punch, not the setup.... Reagan was wordplay heavy... didnt connect all the time but it was enough to get my vote

w/ all ^that^ said.....


VOTE: REAGAN

cool beans 2-2

Punches-Reagan
Personals-None
Multi's-Reagan
Flow-Reagan
Creativity-Reagan
metas-reagan
Vote-Reagan he took it,more well rounded verse,was nice but seen a whole lot better guess it was like you didnt need a strong verse to take the w.Ex you getting up there though just keep it up reagan just brought a lil more funk to the table

3-2 Reag....

I see no poll... But it was an even match, however, EX just made more sense to me.

ummmm idk about that vote counting but thanks Judge

ummmm idk about that vote counting but thanks Judge

Reagan was okay, but I think his lyrics lacked creativity. You had more variation and just made more sense.

Do it count now?

lol if you could go bar by bar ot do CATs like Chris P did yes it would

make more sense?
lacked creativity....wow...
WHAT THE FUCK IS CREATIVITY...cus obviously i dont know....

Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
Decent, fam.
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked
Haha, funny man, me likes.
One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
Damn, get 'em.
The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig
She is ugly fammo, I feel you, but sig/avi punches are a nono my dude.

.

im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,
What fam? Comon, that was wack.

i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,
That is plain forced, b.

shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,
Do you love forcing, man?

dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...
Sig punch is wack, stop.

.

Overall: I enjoyed this battle a good amount, although Ex had more hard hitting punches, and had simple bars he didn't need to force. Ex won this battle, good work to both though.

make more sense?
lacked creativity....wow...
WHAT THE FUCK IS CREATIVITY...cus obviously i dont know....

Don't feel offended. You are a good text battler. Maybe better than myself (we should have a battle to find out later, homie):D But I just think EX took this. Some of his lyrics were lame, but he had highlights that outshined yours. It takes too long to quote and stuff, but I said my opinion:D

3-3 tied up...

judge break your vote down bar for bar with cats if you want it to count.

EX's verse:
Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
Judge's comment: OK, this was lame. Weak rhyme and didn't made sense.
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked
Judge's comment: Nothing too original but okay.
One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
Judge's comment: The best punchline in this fight, and the nameplay is a definite plus.
The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig
Judge's comment: Weird introduction, but the punchline at the end balanced out.


REAGEN's verse:
im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,

Judge's comment: Too weird to me and it didn't made any sense.
i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,

Judge's comment: Hard to get the rhymes.
shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,

Judge's comment: Feels forced.
dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...
Judge's comment: I like how it fired up with cool rhymes, and hate how it ended with 'bruise'...

EX wins.

3-3 Godlikes vote doesnt count......

^
1. Lol @ my vote not counts, k?
2. Check callouts, man.

4-3 me?

:s

Ah 3-3 alright

4-3 to EX.

EX's verse:
Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
Judge's comment: OK, this was lame. Weak rhyme and didn't made sense.
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked
Judge's comment: Nothing too original but okay.
One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
Judge's comment: The best punchline in this fight, and the nameplay is a definite plus.
The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig
Judge's comment: Weird introduction, but the punchline at the end balanced out.


REAGEN's verse:
im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,

Judge's comment: Too weird to me and it didn't made any sense.
i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,

Judge's comment: Hard to get the rhymes.
shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,

Judge's comment: Feels forced.
dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...
Judge's comment: I like how it fired up with cool rhymes, and hate how it ended with 'bruise'...

EX wins.

Okay 4-3

It's 3-3

and it's first to 5 anyway, quit free posting judge

3-3 bump

I'm crew so I'm not voting, Reagan..

punches-reagan made some attempts at some
personals-tie
multis-tie
flow-tie
metas-reagan
wordplay-reagan
nameplay-reagan

although the elements reagan had were not that great, he made some attempts...unlike ex

vote-reagan

my name is Godlike and i love NUTS.....

4-3 reagan i suppose

Votes

bumping this....

Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again

ok opener

I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked

first line is extremely wack....second sucks too, but not as much

One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office

first line was kinda nice. 2nd line was a very weak follow up. coulda had a nice "bar" here...coulda,shoulda,woulda...

The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig

we get the reagan/president connection already....shows a lack of creativity to keep use'n president jokes, especially since this is only 4 fuck'n bars. and sig punches should be banned.


im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,

very much forced. "shockin dun, silly" "run, REALLY" haha...forced multies. the wordplay at the end is forced too.

i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,

w/win wordplays are old as dirt. the wordplay here is forced as well. doesn't even really make sense.

shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,

once again a forced wordplay

dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised

like I said in the utha guys verse....sig punches suck.

overall....weak battle. I vote for the first guy, EX is it? reagan forced a wordplay in every bar.

4-4

upping for the final vote

Ex won, obviously.
& Reagan sucks bad LMFAO.
This dudes a vet? Oh my god he's horrid.

Still need a closing vote but i appreciate it Godlike

Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
not for me.
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked
setup is wacker than wack and plain sucks and punch doesnt have one.
One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office
shoulda flipped the lines around
The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig
ewww, nah.
__________________


im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,
huh??

i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,
hell no.

shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,
ex i bish uhn ist...

dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...
really no.


this battle sucked. both your setups are completely irrelevant, both ya multis are fucked. reagan must have one hell of an accent to pull thos nameplays off with.. ex needs to work on makin his bars punch a lot more...

v// ex.

Yo, this dude obviously think i'll be an easy win
My verses come hard like June 5th, 04 Reagans dying again
Basic but cool
I'll make your head spin, your wacker than wack, you plain suck
Lost to God i was like "damn this was weak as fuck" you shoulda ducked

Miss.. Nameplay's either there or it isn't..

One punch from Ex leave yo ass inflated like reagan-omics
and after you lose you'll be whining worst than Republicans after they lost office

First line was cool.. Flow on the second was off..

The 40th prez, pumped full of lead, and force fed, i just hope you realize what i did
After all those punches taken your officially uglier than the bitch in your sig
Weak closer
__________________


im the best w/jewels-plus my sparkin puns frankly shockin dun, silly,
betta run-REALLY! cus im the one that command dropped bombs & i elect-tri-city,

Internal rhymes were cool but the end rhyme was really bad..

i rhyme gizzly-so imma pick up the W before X,Y? cus im onward slayin,
i aint talkin you excusin me for borrown someones aysins when i say EX-HONOR-REAGAN,

Oooooh.... Way forced.

shoulda did the math on me and read up on my lyrical viciousness,
instead you showed off & put ya 2cents in this makin me prove X-A-BITCH-IN-THIS,

Forced....

dont act unamused @ my text tools-dont need a shotgun ta cause his head and neck ta move,
you really tried hard too dude...but his sig proves this kid requested ta get bruised...

Irrelevant sorta :/


Reagan was obviously fucking off on this one... Not much of an explanation needed.... It was simple vs. bad on purpose..


Vote- Ex

So i win?

^ Yes, you just killed a wack vet. Shake my hand sir: *puts out hand*.

*shakes*

Very good sir.