Yur Worst Enemy
03-31-2003, 12:28 PM
Yeah, it's me. I'm back. With a vengeance. A lot of dickriders are on this site, and it's hard as hell to recognize who's one of them. So I'm gonna start my own crew that judges shit fairly. Spits real "original" verses. That ain't scared to battle ANYONE at any given moment. And who is a muthafucking KING (or queen). If ANYONE is interested, spit something. (I'm a see if I can get some niggas from my other site to be down.)
DA_PRISTINE_1
03-31-2003, 01:15 PM
i will eat anyone in ur crew....
Prestige...
Yur Worst Enemy
04-01-2003, 10:04 AM
Umm, okay. But like I was saying, anybody who thinks they might enjoy being a SUPREME KING, spit a lil' something.
Frankie Felony
04-03-2003, 05:22 PM
yo i'm not all that hype but this is a jagged keystyle.....
my style is street wit a lil metapoetic/i pop slugs in ya body that make ya get organs that's synthetic/tha punchlinez is sick like a baby born wit A.I.D.S./i got tha heat from miami like travis best/they shout at me hey ucon like caron butler my gun is husky/if tha don't get by tha muscular bullet you'll be lucky/don't step in my area if ya don't want ya mom to get that special call/the bullet of a potential supreme king is to what you shall fall!
like I said a lil jagged
Yur Worst Enemy
04-04-2003, 08:21 AM
Nice flow. You showed that you have some talent.
"tha punchlinez is sick like a baby born wit A.I.D.S."-nice punch. You have a lot of potential and are worthy of being in THE SUPREME KINGZ!!!!!!!!
Good luck man - running a crew is hard work - i wish mine was active.
Yur Worst Enemy
04-04-2003, 08:29 AM
Thanks. I'm gonna have to find at least one vet to help me out, so I don't kill myself trying to improve upon everyone, but I'll keep the crew small until then. Oh yeah, and for your crew to have so many veterans, they sure ain't around much. Sorry about JIZM.
I know - I'm active. Yeah Jizm should be ok..
I need a fuckin crew!...shit I'll give it a couple of days and then I'm leavin..lol
D'luzion
04-04-2003, 10:54 AM
I got traumatic views to place this rage in verbal extortion/
A mental abortion from minds that I blow outta proportion/
I’m basically fading mc’s that be patiently waiting/
For people to praise me with raps that seems so amazing/
Regardless of this harvest through metaphorical carnage/
I got the rawest scriptures that flow so flawless/
And it’s catastrophic how I turn mic’s into stares/
Cause IM kicking so many styles you could call me Nike air/
But it’s a mission-I’m-on with these vision-of-song/
If you ain’t feeling my rhymes then you listening-wrong/
Cause I synthesis rhymes to proceed with the times/
When I release fluid beliefs and touch millions of lives/
With theses syllables I swoop swords beyond the lyrical/
An infinite d’luzion may boost minds as chemicals/
I shatter dreams from scenes with mental projectable/
I wrap nightmares and hold them like verbal tentacles/
feeling it? holla at me
Frankie Felony
04-04-2003, 04:38 PM
yo that was kinda hot...
"cause IM kickin so many stylez you can call me nike air"-hot punch.... but it's not my decision homie!
Yur Worst Enemy
04-04-2003, 07:12 PM
Welcome to SUPREME KINGZ!!! You showed excellent lyricism.
"And it’s catastrophic how I turn mic’s into stares
Cause IM kicking so many styles you could call me Nike air"
---sick line.
"But it’s a mission-I’m-on with these vision-of-song
If you ain’t feeling my rhymes then you listening-wrong"
--- Another sick line. It explains your complicated rhyme style.
"I shatter dreams from scenes with mental projectable
I wrap nightmares and hold them like verbal tentacles"
--- That did it.
I welcome you to THE SUPREME KINGZ!!!!. Nice wordplay, and it's nice to see a rookie with such a good vocabulary!! All we need to do is work on your punchlines a little. Make sure you have punchlines throughout the entire verse. But FUCK THAT! LOL. we have plenty of time for that. WELCOME THE NEWEST SUPREME KING!!!!!!!!
Frankie Felony
04-07-2003, 05:09 PM
D'LUzion needs to be PMed