here you go all set up, ok rules are

3 bars
no biting
due by 18th aug (cuz i'm goin out tonight :D)
first to five votes wins


and you gets to drop first sonny jim cuz i set it up

check in

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127303 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127303)

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1673800#post1673800 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1673800#post1673800)

If you win it's luck, trust me when I say duck
Cause if you don't my fist will leave your eyes blacker then a hockey puck

You from the uk, ok, I'll diss you all day
Your a girlie version mini me of Peter Andre

I don't know if your a boy or girl or wear skirts or jeans
But I do know that your mum will go down on me like a submarine

there you go

...Wack

haha Tets the guys just as new to this as i am...we all have to learn baby :D ....i'll drop in a bit....cuz i'm still meant to be working right now doh

arrhh fucking links:

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127249&page=2

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127418&page=2

admitting your new,well you've nicely tripped yourself up from the start,
forfitting your rhymes, is my tip to you here cuz i've smelt stronger farts,


this whore's 'young and trashy' selling tapes, trying to make a quick buck,
it's more shit and nasty this fake's, got 'no reply's', cuz noone gives a fuck,
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127743


stepping up to 'destroy' this so fading 'starr', he's just the next wannabe doctor dre,
nothing but a 'del-boy', make more money 'car' bootin' copies out the back of a caberalay,










there you go

er explanations:

'no reply's' he has no replys for his mixtape offer and no reply's text battle wise cuz his rhymes ain't tight enough...if you get me

and a 'del boy' is a character from british tv....you know like a dodgy dealer would try to sell you his own grandma to make money

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bLnRXnTd7KU&feature=related

delboy is the guy selling out of the suitcase after the opening titles in this clip ^^^ (just for the americans if you've not seen it)


rest of it you should understand hopefully

when your good and ready plz put us in the voting section mr snale spank you very much :D


keep going at it jae :D,*reps*
and ask for peoples advice....some good battlers in here and they're good guys too ...so ask em how to improve.....i do all the damn time

anyone wana help us out with a vote or two maybe? plz :D

punches- Potter ( she was swinging at least)
wordplay- Potter
nameplay- neither
Multis- Potter
Metaphors- Potter
Personals- Jae i guess i mean the hockey bar was a try

Both were weak but Jae that shit had me laughing in a bad way.

Vote Potter

nice one cheers ex

1-0 to moi :)

Punches - Potter..She Actually Tried To Punch At Jae..He Just..Rhymed?
Wordplay - Potter..Same Thing..
Multis - Honestly, N/A..
Metas - Potter
Personals - None..Well I Guess Jae..

This Battle Was Real Ehhhhhhh Ergghhhh Ugh...Potter Clearly Won..

Vote - Potter

vote-potter

she at least attempted a personal in her second bar, pretty simple battle both have a lot of elevating to do.

Closed and moved.