Yea u know tha rules no d/r/no crew/no bs and all that other shit...... verses due whenever I know niggas got lives

Mine will be done Monday or Tues most likely Ill post directly after u or w/e I may just post 1st u know tha deal nigga lol ...goodluck

I'll be droppin monday or tuesday as well....till then my nigga..wun

Song: Goodbye (http://mjay.dmusic.com)
Album: The Rookie Vol. 1

"Artist Note: Click tha link for audio"

(Verse 1)
It's jay-tha-great, I've "viced mobs", don't get "twice-mossed", flows so hot, it'll blow "ice-off"/
Bars swing n' rupture-ya-shit-an', you stuck a fucked verse in ya shit, jus' ta rupture-my-image/
I've had enough-of-you-dicklett, couldn't "spit-sick", if you was choked wit a "shit-stick"/
Tha only bitch-wit, pimp in ya sig, which is false, tha long arm'll blow ya shit off/
You can't really-stop-mae, Can't really-top-"J", but they say, that your o. "K"(K comes before J in da alphabet -_-' for those who don't know)/
Claimin ya hot, when ya records-un-played-wit, both me and you know your shit, dats why ya
battle records-un-stat-ed/
I'm jus' warmin-up, herez jus' a warnin-ya-fucked!, go n' get cha battle-arms-up/
No use, in you, tryna block-da-don-shit, how you claim ta "vice", when you ain't got a "lock-on-shit"/
Slob-on-dicks, you tans-verse, watch as I, hand-dis-herb, fantastical verbs/
Watch me slap ya wit a mud-pie, and I say uh..(bye)/

(Verse 2)
God, you suck, none of ya shit-scare-minds, "bars deadilier", than slappin ammonia on a "crisp-hair-line"/
Nigga I bring da bout-ta-worlds-n'-disect-um, only time you "spit-hot-shits", when ya "cleanin out-ya-girls-rectum"/
Envy me so long, I'm basically ya ghost-writer, I'ma slay-ya-face, takin tips from me in "pen", dog I ain't cha "paper-mate"/
I'ma tap you gently, n' rub-a-massage, your "not tha real deal", your "jus'-a-mirage"/
I can't stand-da-tingle, mans-jus'-twinkle, as I "pop you" like a "can-of-pringles"/
Dawg, I'm da best-by-far, tryna get complicated, "study ya tae-bo", cuz ya vocab jus doesn't "stretch-that-far"/
Da shit you spit, I swat-ya-weak, watch me "move mob" wit ease, like "swat-police"/
The evidence, state it's evident dude-your-shit, slammed into ya "grave" thus "your-R.I.P'ed"/

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/potentmusic.htm

Murder'n Jay

That was a tite drop Jay ... good luck

Jay...you know you mah nigga...but umm I'm sorry this battle goes to Vice in my mind. Jay your shit sounded better as far as interest. Better beat. Was that a Kanye beat? Sounded like his type of shit. Plus I thought your flow rhythym was bad...til I heard vice lmao. But Vice had consistent punches, Jay only had one punch that made me laugh.

Claimin ya hot, when ya records-un-played-wit, both me and you know your shit, dats why ya
battle records-un-stat-ed/

Thats it...but Vice had me rollin yo. And the last line "you not even worth my time...all you get is a minute" or w/e lol thats just a beautiful way to end a battle verse. Jay there was absolutely nothing wrong with your audio...if I could vote for the both of you I would, but I decide to vote for Vice Mob.

Jay: uh... not really a battle beat lol dope beat, certainly.... but not for a battle imo doesn't matter really

by far tha best part: Claimin ya hot, when ya records-un-played-wit, both me and you know your shit, dats why ya
battle records-un-stat-ed

flow wasn't good... not staying in tha structure of tha beat... delivery was kinda ok i guess... voice is cool enough...

lyrics weren't really that attention grabbing... tha mirage line was actually nice tho'... a couple of nice multies and everything... a good verse overall but i reckon if Vice comes well he got this

Vice: dope voice... don't really feel tha beat too much but it suits ya voice and its nice and slow...
3rd and 4th line were both pretty dope... permanent flow lol
elevate thing was nice.. pussy is cool... lol at urkel - tho' they are getting way overplayed now... obese thing was ok
lol at tha ending - good way to end it.

i'm a vote for Vice 'cos he had a much higher percentage of punches, and they hit harder. Had me smiling at times... and his flow on tha first two lines lol was pretty nice

PZ>

JAY: too be honest man i wasnt feeling this as a battle verse. Cool voice and cool beat if it were a drops...but its not and is a battle beat. The lyrics weren't attention grabbing but i thought your flow was on point for most... punches were not there really either...

VICE: I liked this alot more than Jay's. Pretty cool rapping voice, beat was more of a battle beat and the lyrics did get my attention.lol, some of the punches were quite funny too.

so Nice battle but Vote Vice

I thought both these kids came hard, but I just felt like Vice flowed better, and had better punches. He came more personal. But Jay held his own.

Vote = Vicemob

aight 3-0 K.O. Vice.....I agree on that my verse wasn't much of a battle verse...egh o well'

ALL good ... good battle


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*pissy drunk*

NAH VICE YOU LIGHT SKIN MUTHAFUCKA TALK SHIT TO DAT NIGGA WIT YA MEKHEI TRICE LOOKIN ASS BIOTCH!!! LOL

Sike nah but Jay yo if I was you I would peep the battle arena...we have some unfinished business. In fact that unfinished business was stated in this battle.

jay's beat was hot tho', he just fell off at the end.