RULES

votes - must be sufficiently explained.. any bland votes lacking reason or analysis will be disqualified immediately. No dickryding or Hating. 3-0 = TKO or First to 5 votes Any one is free to vote - as long as votes are well explained. Verses must be 15-20 lines

deadlines i will post a date for each battle where verses are due - there will also be a signing in date to avoid no-shows. Any body failing to meet the deadline will be disqualified.

Biting-any biting of lyrics or material will result in immediate disqualification - if other cats see examples of this, please report it but with evidence to back it up

sign in by tuesday
verses by wednesday

Signin in, will post my shit by wednesday sumtime.....

signin in....post whenever by wed.

Well here it goes, cant be bothered waitin till wed...

I'm a tear your lyrics down from deep within,
like da paper they written on thrown in this bin,
stop dis caper, you a kitten, i'm kill u, win,
so u can mark my words, my whole life is in sin,
lets begin, dis battle, with only one shot,
one straight to ya head usin a 9mm glock,
hit like a rock, stun all of ya body,
now u startin to see me as a killer rotty,
fool, you did'nt know who u messin with,
ya see i'm da new smith n western kid,
gonna do u without a vest or my fist,
leave you to destroy ya self with ya wrist,
if u insist, den i'm gonna drop a bomb on ya corps,
run to ya house and drop anthrax on ya porch,
make sure u r dead, burn ya clothes with a torch,
and the ash remain, i'm piss on em for sure,
u a hore, u aint gonna have time ta draw,
for dis battle is done, its the closin of dis here door......

well, I mind as well get it over with


Yo, check it

Flowz, you can't compeat with the master of rhymes
I spit like food samples, Give you a taste of my mind
DISS CYPHER is an example of ya talentless flow
You claimin you still ill, but real niggaz know
You a crook in the game, I expose you to the tabloids
You aint 1/2 a don, you claim an image, but live a decoy
Rappin like you the next King, Prophetcizin is not ya place
I shoot darts at ya glass jaw, Im ya unpaid bill, flu,and ya Aids
Im the ROFC future king, you just a blockade to my ship
Dick ridin my s***, claimin you # One Pic
Open the book, rip the pages, Read between the lines
Every problem has an answer, So don't disrespect my rhymes
Look at me..Im serious, Ya games not raw, Im acknowledgin
You a mile in the hole, study me nigga, Get the filin
Copy every word, this diss is only to teach
God give the positions, Im the shepard, you da sheep
Flowz lacker, uuuhhhhh, There's nothin more to say
Except ya rhymes is ve-ry wack and ya style is ve-ry gay
No ya place, Im crowned King on the RAPOMETER
I'll have you retirin ya future when I bring out the Ether Repeater

O.K., let me break this one down. Flowz I think you should've gone ahead and waited a little while longer because it looks like you rushed this one. I've seen you come better before. You used a very amateur rhyme scheme. Pretty much the only things that rhymed in each line was the last word.

Example: "lets begin, dis battle, with only one shot,
one straight to ya head usin a 9mm glock,
hit like a rock, stun all of ya body,
now u startin to see me as a killer rotty"

"if u insist, den i'm gonna drop a bomb on ya corps,
run to ya house and drop anthrax on ya porch,
make sure u r dead, burn ya clothes with a torch,
and the ash remain, i'm piss on em for sure"

Just those examples alone take up nearly half of your post. The very few metaphors you had were weak. Could've been a lot better.

Now to the other guy, your metaphors were better. But that's about it. Your rhyme scheme was also not very advanced. A good portion of your post suffered from the same thing as Flowz did, the last word being the only thing that rhymed in most of the post.

Example: "Flowz, you can't compeat with the master of rhymes
I spit like food samples, Give you a taste of my mind"

"You a crook in the game, I expose you to the tabloids
You aint 1/2 a don, you claim an image, but live a decoy"

"Look at me..Im serious, Ya games not raw, Im acknowledgin
You a mile in the hole, study me nigga, Get the filin
Copy every word, this diss is only to teach
God give the positions, Im the shepard, you da sheep"

"Flowz lacker, uuuhhhhh, There's nothin more to say
Except ya rhymes is ve-ry wack and ya style is ve-ry gay
No ya place, Im crowned King on the RAPOMETER
I'll have you retirin ya future when I bring out the Ether Repeater"

That's over half of your post, 12 lines out of 20. I also find a couple lines in your post kind've "interesting".

My Post-"Illest Beat Alive"
Either except it, or I'll kill you, but I don't wanna go that far
To have to gun it or stab y'all
Or shatter your glass jaw
Fuck it I'm mad paw

Your post:
Rappin like you the next King, Prophetcizin is not ya place
I shoot darts at ya glass jaw, Im ya unpaid bill, flu,and ya Aids

Another post from me in the same thread:
Some people just can't read between the lines can they?

Your post:
Open the book, rip the pages, Read between the lines
Every problem has an answer, So don't disrespect my rhymes


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This could be a coincidence, but only you know that for sure.

Overall, my vote goes to MCIllest, just barely though. Your metaphors were better, but overall rhyme skills were about equal.

Vote=MCIllest

NOw,lemme tell you what I think:

I won' say nuttin against the rhyme scheme,coz I rhyme like that too.But anyways,here it goes:

Ill_Flowz:
Man I agree with moses,you rushed this.That ain' half of what you did before,or what I've seen before.

"stop dis caper, you a kitten, i'm kill u, win,"

This is a huge mistake."I'M kill you",you claim yourself to be "kill you" and then "win" is like an order given to MC Illest.I know it ain' that,but it's kinda confusin there.

""if u insist, den i'm gonna drop a bomb on ya corps,
run to ya house and drop anthrax on ya porch,
make sure u r dead, burn ya clothes with a torch,
and the ash remain, i'm piss on em for sure""

It ain' really good,it's not real obvious.I mean okay,you gonna kill him but you also claim yoself to be the piss on his ashes?

"i'm da new smith n western kid"

Smith'N'Western?What's that?

I don' think this is the real you,man,it's not good.

MC Illest:
First of all,you both use the same rhyming style,"ending word rhymes",so I can' say nuttin against yo style.

"you live a decoy",so he's basically living a decoy,not living "like" one.

"Open the book, rip the pages, Read between the lines
Every problem has an answer, So don't disrespect my rhymes"

"read between the lines" seems like sumthin from a moses post, but I can' be sure,so I ain' sayin anythin,it's just suspicious.

"Im the ROFC future king, you just a blockade to my ship
Dick ridin my s***, claimin you # One Pic"

Okay,now "dick ridin my shit" may be a rhyme with "blockade to my ship",but I don' see anythin in "clamin you # one pic" that rhymes with those,or those to come,since you switch rhymes.

Both of you used rhymes only twice,like two bars rhyme,then the other two rhyme in themselves..MC Illest wrote a little bit longer but he used the "rhymes"twice,first with "mind" other with "lines".

Now,you all know I've been collaboratin with these people so I don' have no hate towards them.But I think,in this situation, one of you sucks as much as the other one.This was the half of what you two are really capable of.

(You may ask,do you deserve a vote?Maybe yeah,maybe no.)

But,if I HAVE TO give a vote,I give my vote to both of you,since you're the same,in this situation(emphasis on this)

Nova...what up with voting for both of them??? I know your cool with both MC's but this is all in fun....I think U should pick one. I guess MCD will get at you about that.......anyway, my vote is for MC Illest.

I liked how you opened:
Flowz, you can't compeat with the master of rhymes
I spit like food samples, Give you a taste of my mind
DISS CYPHER is an example of ya talentless flow
You claimin you still ill, but real niggaz know

Ill Flowz verse did seem a tad bit rushed. But overall Illest had the better punches

If I HAVE TO pick one,it'll be MC Illest,coz he was sligthly betta...

I agree.......MC Illest had a slight upper hand, fuck it, he had a whole fist at sum points.....its cool though....MC ILLEST is grasping my vote...

sorry but i have to give it to MC Illest he looked like he put way more ime into it and thouhg about what he was gunna cum at u wit Vote (drumroll) lol MC Illest

WHAT THE......I GOT MORE VOTES!!!!:eek: I DIDN'T THINK I WOULD ADVANCE LET ALONE GET ANY VOTES. THAT'S 5. WHOA. THANKS FOR YOUR VOTES GUYS EVEN THOUGH YOU WERE VOTING WHAT YOU THINK. AND ILL FLOWZ, HEY IT'S ALL GOOD AND IT'S ALWAYS.......................................



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winner - MC Illest

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