frankies audio

"death to metcalf"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/topnotchproductionspresentfrankiefelonymusic.htm


mine

"killin ya ass"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/elldawgmusic.htm


opened for votes

I put a thread up in the text Battle Arena, too.

My token flows straight choking foes/
Shoot ya dick so ya little hole bleeds like Micheal Jackson's nose//
You vexed at being next to get his neck on wreck on behalf of his set/
And you won't flex; I'll put holes in ya chest to make Elldawg-flavored Chex//
Bend ya backwards so ya kidney can explode out the center/
You've been in and out the closet like a new coat in the Winter//
Snap ya knee and let you bite bullets until ya need ya teeth replaced/
In that case, I think you oughta get a new mouth and knee brace//
You between the devil and the deep blue sea the way you get drounded by heat/
Mr. Metal City will get broken like the Steelers versus the Chiefs//
The jokey-joke in me is gone, shouldn't have cross the Rubicon 'cause/
I've had enough victims to the point they'll overcrowd Rwanda//
I'm a hurricane and you just an autumn combination of dew and fog/
I'm concreted and you roll with more sets than Snoop Dogg//
And yes, I'm the best at it when it comes to making rap addicts/
Ya attempts at dissing me are simple like ya graphics//
I'm busting this muffin with typhus and having him for luncheons/
And who does ya beats? I guess Fisher-Price Productions//
I'n cracking this hick with sticks and bricks/
The only fists you recieve is from lesbian chicks//
Rounds to kill from pounds of steel/
Step up real and you'll get hung like Emmitt Till//
Trust over-confidence will get you smacked harder, kid/
I can stall out and still be an all-star like Vince Carter, kid//
The firestarter so try to get smarter yo/
I'll beat on my desk and still will KO ya audio//
I bet now that you wanna get half/
The respect I get but not with a name like Elliott Metcalf//
So step now because my anger needs managing/
The only FF you own is Final Fantasy, nigga!!//

aint no need fah all of that text Frank..heres my vote from listenin..


----Frank

what the fuck is Frankie Doing on the mic...sounded real fuzzy, i agree with this guy man... But lata in the audio u got louder so i kept listening..i couldnt understand u to quote u, i can tell u was reading bebi..U gotta measure up to ur name, i was expectin suffin sick, keep uppin tho..

-----Elle

sound like a west coast beat, not too much ethuasium...lyrics aint too great..lata in the verse it got better and so did the beat...but like i said, the lyrics aint match up with the beat.
AND WHERE IS MY MOTHA FUCKIN SHOUT OUT..lol..
anyho on the real tip..

Neither of u had quotables, but im going to vote for EllDawg because his shit was clearer and from what i can tell his lyrics was better at a shorter level if u get that..much elevtation from u two tho..stay uppin tho..

My lyrics are above ya post. Read em. And until you can get at least one quotable from each of us. Vote don't count. I really don't care if I lose. But I know Elldawg wouldn't take no half-ass vote like that for me.

















































From now on, be fair to both of us

wtf is this?

I couldn't hear frankies vocal but since he wrote it out, as far as I'm concerned he had a better verse. Elldawg had a beat, didn't flow well with the beat, some of his lines just sounded played or not too great, like XL said no quotables form each, but I'm going with frankie's verse.

vote =frankie

^^now this cat didnt have no quotes either, im not about to read the lyrics dawg, as a real reason y because i feel as if its swaying, EVEN IF THAT WASNT YOUR INTENT. and this wasnt a text battle..im not tryin to start no beef...but there wasnt nothing to quote...im being as fair as possible..I dont know either of u and this is my first time listening to either of u, so i considered my vote fair. But hey this is yalls battle,so i guess take it up with the other guy and c what he says.

as far as quotables....

all i remember, before i read frankies vers was the fisher price productions that stood out to me and the hurricane line.
Elldawg honestly I didn't remember anything cause I didn't wanna hear more dick cock and ball jokes, i know he talked about more than that in there but I didn't hear it much and there was nothing really felt from both, except the lines i said about frankie, sorry guys.

At least he mentioned a line. Mention a line just copy and paste one and you-ll be okay.

and verbalscuds vote was clearly a hate vote

ok then...... i'll go aead and post mah lyrics up...



convicts shit is muffled-and-trash, look as frankie watches him get fucked-up-tha-ass, tie'em up leave'em huddled-and-stashed, how would ya like it? cuddled-or-bashed//
frankie likes suckin on the sparkin-cocks, i'll murder you at recess or in parkin-lots, shove tones down ya throat so you'll be fartin-rocks, frank jus a janitor at his school usin the sparklin-mops//
how hard is it to tell that frankie's-wack, you treat ya shit like ya children only spankin-crap, both of ya create wackness y u call it makin-raps//
you'll get slashed-wit-hatchets, isnt hard to match-these-faggots, what would u choose? ashes-or-a-casket, like hardcore ball you'll be stashed-in-a-basket//
you'g be poop if u were flowin-for-cash, think u on top but you gowing-to-last, you be my servants mowin-mah-grass, like dynamite mayne im blowin-a-hole-in-ur-ass//
i be kickin-these-hoes, think u can push my weight but i be flickin-my-foes, i'll beat ya verse no matter how hard it goes, if i had to choose one of you as a partner i'd be pickin-my-nose//
you'll be clutchin-ya-chest, beatin me? you'll do nothin-at-best, i play fools like you like ya'll is russian-roulette//

..::Complexity::..
=
..::ELLDAWG::..
..::punches::..
=
...::ell.................fuck it man he ripped u *cough frankie is a bitch *cough*
..::ELLDAWG GOT MY VOTE NICE FLOW DOGG KEEP ELEVATIN UR STYLE HAS CHANGED MUCH SCINCE BACK IN DA DA(lol)::..

huh? how the hell is mine a hate vote. I voted on this battle because ya'll posted it in the text arena asking for votes. both of ya'll voted on mine so I returned the favor.

Now you wanna break down ok.....

"convicts shit is muffled-and-trash, look as frankie watches him get fucked-up-tha-ass, tie'em up leave'em huddled-and-stashed, how would ya like it? cuddled-or-bashed//
frankie likes suckin on the sparkin-cocks, i'll murder you at recess or in parkin-lots, shove tones down ya throat so you'll be fartin-rocks, frank jus a janitor at his school usin the sparklin-mops//"
^^^that whole part is wack, all it was mutlis but weak punches, you came harder than that in our battle!

"you'll get slashed-wit-hatchets, isnt hard to match-these-faggots, what would u choose? ashes-or-a-casket, like hardcore ball you'll be stashed-in-a-basket//"
^^^^that was ok.

you'g be poop if u were flowin-for-cash, think u on top but you gowing-to-last, you be my servants mowin-mah-grass, like dynamite mayne im blowin-a-hole-in-ur-ass//
i be kickin-these-hoes, think u can push my weight but i be flickin-my-foes, i'll beat ya verse no matter how hard it goes, if i had to choose one of you as a partner i'd be pickin-my-nose//
^^like I said, nothing stood out here, you can do better than this.

"you'll be clutchin-ya-chest, beatin me? you'll do nothin-at-best, i play fools like you like ya'll is russian-roulette//"
^^^why would you say russian roulette idiot, if you read your line your basically saying you'd kill youself, what the fuck is that?

you had a wack ender and you clearly took it lightly on frankie simply because of your overwhelming ego just like many others on this site and you thought you could beat him with "playful" bars. When it boils down to it, frankie's still a pretty good average emcee so you can't exactly keep using mommy cock and ball kindergarden shit every line. He even said your real name just to make you look stupid, that's battling not playing around with a newbie. What more do you want me to say.....you lost!

he didnt even have a beat...lmmfao.... there is more 2 a audio battle then jus the lyrics.....plus it took me like 10 min. to come up with that shit and record it..... i gave frankie 3 weeks to record his fuckin shit..... so jus STFU son.... im not even gonna play around wit ya wack ass...... i already beat u twice :D

Phantom's vote don't count. Obvious hate.

Real votes.

ok so its 1-0 me....


uppin this

No, 1-1. Count XL then count Verbalscud's. Verbalscud even did a small breakdown. Unlike XL's. So 1-1

no...verbalscuds was a hate vote.... so if u count verbal's then u'd have to count phantoms..... simple as that

Aight. Will do. 2-1 Your way. More fair votes.

Originally posted by Elldawg
he didnt even have a beat...lmmfao.... there is more 2 a audio battle then jus the lyrics.....plus it took me like 10 min. to come up with that shit and record it..... i gave frankie 3 weeks to record his fuckin shit..... so jus STFU son.... im not even gonna play around wit ya wack ass...... i already beat u twice :D


elldawg your a bitch, you beat me ONCE as far as I'm concerned.

Your dumbass didn't have enuff sense to make a vote count in the rules (even after I asked you three times in thread with no response) plus with all the anonymous dicksuckers such as phantom of course you would win. I really don't care about the fuckin' battle, all i know is that all of your stupid verse will be complied of dick cock mom suck this and suck this that.......how Ironic your songs are under christian rap and half your verses are about cock, I'm not suprised....fucking homo.


When I start posting up audio's and get shit right, I'll show you what emceeing is about.


P.S. your dumb ass rhyme stumbles all over this beat, why do you get some rhythm stupid.

^^ see wat i mean... pure hate.... kid u arent nothin to me.... so go back to ur sandbox as X would say

upin

this was really not a good battle at all but elldawg won but both of ya need to up ya flow just work on have a continous flow insted of a choppy flow

thnx for tha vote.... 3-1 me

Not explained well enough. Come on , Elldawg. Tighten up, would you? Explain that, youngin and I'll let it count.

ok

fuckinuppin

Frankie..please...for the love of the poor ukranian children...take my name out of your signature..

haha...he has mine in their too...didn't beat either of us...I take it as charity...im helping the needy (frankie) gain some confidence...cmon M, help a poor little orphan out...

ok ok *sighs*

No...Con-vict bit...Therfore me and VS won against you two. MCD no-showed. To an audio battle he coulda easily won.. SO both of you are under my win list.

u need to make ur sig smaller....

and i can tell that u have no clue how to make sigs either

WHy don't you make one??? HUH???

If you won't, didn't or can't make it then SHUT THE FUCK UP

STFU..... i can make a sig 30 times better then that piece of shit

i'lkl make TSK a new1 right now....

Flow-Ell
Punches- Ell
Personals-Tie
Multi's- Frankie
Complexity- Frankie
Wordplay--Tie
Enjoyment- Elldawg(by a hair)

Overall Vote- Elldawg

Flow: Ell
Punches: Ell
Personals: Tie
Wordplay: Tie
Enjoyment: Ell

Vote: Elldawg

damn, ain't this shit over yet... frankie is gone and this is like 2 months old...

oh and if frankie is still readin elldawg makes sigs a million times better then you...

finaly!!!!!!!!

5-1

i win :D