16 to 32 LINES
4-0 = TKO, 7 votes to win
no biting/recycling
no feeding off verses
no crew/dickride/hate/stupid/etc votes
ALL VOTES must be analytical and refer to the verses to explain, either by quoting or saying 'that cum line' or whatever (hopefully neither of you use a cum line lol)
CHECK IN by thursday 30th 11:59pm CST (which is GTS minus 6hrs to avoid confusion)
DROP VERSE by Monday the 3rd 11:59pm CST

good luck to both, and remember, this is for the title - so come ill conflarnit!

in...

check up...

He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'
Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=8336&highlight=Kataracks)
Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets
this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'
ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap
beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'
spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'
ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK
it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)
I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown
His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face
Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"
He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain
This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13816&perpage=10&highlight=DigitILL%20vs%20Aero&pagenumber=5)
Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"
Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this
Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you* (Check his sig)



Explanation
His sig says Seein is believin or some shit......Seeing/Cateracts...get it??


Rest of personals should explain themseves. If you dont undertand then ask me if you dont ask you wont undertand if you dont understand then DONT FUCKIN VOTE

700 pm starts voting

Aero

He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
nice opening, flowed well

gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'
nice line and punch, wow

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
nice flow and set up

ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar
nice personal punch

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets
2 nice lines, 2nd i've heard b4 but not in this flipped version

this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'
flowed nicely, ok punch

ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
haha nice

Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap
nice line there

beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
ok, wasnt feelin it, but god flow in it

Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'
lol, nice punch

spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'
pretty nice punch

ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK
not bad, good personal

it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
ok line

you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)
nice personal punch, ill shit there

I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'

pretty nice closing...over all, hot ass fuckin verse, simply ill shit

Flow: 4/5
Punches: 4/5
Wordplay: 4/5
Personals: 3.5/5
Originality: 3.5/5
Enjoyment: 4/5
Overall: 23/30



Kateracks

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
ok opener

Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown
pretty good

His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
lol, pretty nice punch

Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face
ehh ok, i understand but wasnt feelin

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
not a bad line

Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"
pretty good punch nice flipped version of line disses

He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain
pretty good, nice wordplay in there

This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass
nice personal and good punch

Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
ok line, whole oral thing is kinda played to me, seen so many of em

Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site
not bad, i used one of these L lines not too long ago

He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
ok line here, noth outstanding

Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"
lol, pretty nice punch

Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
nice wordplay and line here

Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this
nice line here, lol, i'm feelin this on here

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
lmao, haha nice punch...lol

How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you* (Check his sig)
pretty nice closer and personal

i think ur last verse was alot better against mcd, this one fell off from ur last one

Flow: 3/5
Punches: 3/5
Wordplay: 3.5/5
Personals: 3.5/5
Originality: 3.5/5
Enjoyment: 3.5/5
Overall: 20/30

Aero took this, raw verse, ill punches that had me say whoa a few times, kat had some that had me jus say nice, solid verse that'd beat most but didnt stand out against aeros

Aero again ill shit and deserving of this tourney win

Vote: Aero


accept it or not, jus how i feel

big ups to both emcees

end time 717pm

Aero - 1

Kat - 0

good battle^^,
turned out a pretty ill finals...

aero-
"He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'

^ok start, 2nd makes it a nice open...nice punch

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

^good for a personal...ok punch, but wordplays pretty sweet
good flow too...rhymes/multis r on...

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets

^worked really well...nice throw of a punch, good impact...
excellent wordplay, think "letter jackets" is lil played,
but flows^ really well...matches nicely, comes thru hard...

this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'

^ok...^^ok...rhymes off, but flow works...worplay is weak...

"ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap"

^good personal...liked this, lol...
good wordplay on both, and both nice punches...ill

"beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'

^1st a lil weak, i see wordplay, but soft punch...good flow
2nd is huge...good concept, brings up the impact of bar,
good flow still...nice wordplay...

"spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'"

^great flow...liked it...nice punch...kinda funny
^^nice...still good flow, ok wordplay, good punch

"ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK

^hehehe...lol...good personal, ok punch...
kinda basic shit, but funny...

"it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)

^lots of personals...good punches...flows a lil off,rhymes weak
nice in 2nd...wordplay...;ok punch

"I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'

^very, very good...nice set up on first...lil basic tho
2nd hits really hard and ends it with impact...nice wordplay...

Kat-
"Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown

^ok set up in first...nice flow, good rhymes...
2nd continues well...ok wordplay, comes together well...
lil played as a punch, the clown = circus...

"His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face"

^nice concept in first...worded/delivered well...nice punch...
^^lil basic...above=stars...soft punch....ok rhyme...

"Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades""

^like the 1st...good wordplay...soft punch...good flow
^^2nds aight...ok rhyme...good wordplay, ok punch..

"He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package
of Cain"

^first is basic...weak setup...flows off
2nds a lil better, ok wordplay....ok punch...

"This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass

^good try for personals...got alot in der, but weak delivery...
basic, but ok punches....pretty good flow...rhyme works,....

"Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site"

^hehehe...lol @ 1st...nice...good wordplay/punch, nice setup
2nds aight...didnt quite work dont think...ok punch...

"He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets""

^liked all this...good worplay in 1st...very funy, nice punch...
good flow thru it, lot impact on 2nd...fnny again...
good wordplay/nice punches...original spin on concepts

"Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this

^more like it...really nice flow...good wordplay
very funny, nice personal, rhymes very well...
good hits...hard punch^^

"Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KdATARACKS owns you*"

^very nice end...funny wordplay in first...ok punch-nice stetup
2nd works nicely...rhymes really well...hits hard....
good personal...closed well...

flow- close, both were on alot and only off rarely....AERO
multi- close, think KAT takes it by a bit
wordplay- very close...clever concepts from both....AERO
punch- both landed hard hits...KATs more direct, felt it more
creativity- props ta both, original thru the verses-so clsoe KAT
enjoy- fuck...liked both...liked AERO's concepts more...

vote- KAT...
changed this in my mind alot, buts how^ i see it...
his came off more hitttin...middle ta end really came nice...
more/better personals from aero and some great wordplay,
but kat had alot of clever punchs....nice^ battle...

peace...

1-1

props to both voters for the breakdowns

Uppin this...

Nice Battle...


I'm not gonne break down every word...just 3 favorite barz from both.

Aero:
"Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar"

^^This was an ILL personal....Caught everyone 100% off Guard...

"beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'"

^^Nice flow, multi's worked well...shaped up to be a great punch

"it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)"

^^Caught My Attention, But Nothing Really Special

Kataracks:
"Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face
Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"

^^LMAO...had me rollin...nice punch

"This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass"

^^You came back from his un-expected personal with one of your own, nice job

"Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you* (Check his sig)"

^^Persooonnalllll


Punches - Kataracks
Multi's - Aero
Meta's - Tie
Personal's - Kataracks
Flow - Aero
Enjoyment - Tie
Complexity - Kataracks


This was a sick ass battle, Ya'll should have a rematch sometime. Nice job on Both Parts

Vote - Kataracks

2-1 my way.....Thanx to all those who voted so far

But Mods, could you please promote this battle somewhat?...Like post sticky threads in the lounge or BA to let people know that the Playoffs are in its final stages cuz I dont think cats come here that much.

1nez

^Pissed has done that...

i gots another idea.....

..:: ThA WaY I SeE It ::..

..:: Aero's verse ::..

..:: Quoteables ::..
beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'
..:: Thought that was ill as fuck ::..

..:: ThA BrEaKdOwN ::..
..:: wordplay ::.. 8/10
..:: punches ::.. 9/10
..:: multies ::.. 8/10
..:: flow ::.. 8/10
..:: overall score ::.. 33/40

..:: Kat's verse ::..

..:: Quoteables ::..
Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site
..:: ILL, Nuff Said ::..

..:: ThA BrEaKdOwN ::..
..:: wordplay ::.. 9/10
..:: punches ::.. 10/10
..:: multies ::.. 8/10
..:: flow ::.. 9/10

..:: overall score ::.. 36/40

..:: final vote ::....:: Kataracks ::..

nice idea Pissed....

3-1 my way.....^^this

smh

This is going nowhere....OK, Im accepting one crew vote from Im Pissed and thats it. If no more votes come in for a about a week then Ima jus quit

you know what the prollem is.....


all the good voters are on MERK and DI.....:(

^^I agree..

Uppin this again.

FUCKING VOTE YOU LAZY BASTARDS...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^lmao

Aero

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'

it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)




Kat

Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you*



Punches - Aero
Personals - Kat
Word-play - Aero
Multies - Kat
Flow - Aero.. slightly
Creativity - Aero
Originality - Kat


Really tough battle to vote on; but imma have to go with Aero.. Extremely slightly as i said

thanks

3-2 kat...

i'll vote on this later

Karnage can vote if he wants to but I believe people will vote.
I think it's a close enough battle to the point that crew bias is small but becomes a pertinent factor..

Actually I don't care just vote people..!!

uppin this shit once afuckingain

I'm gonna have to go offline for a while, but when I return, I will have a complete breakdown of both verses along with a final vote. Peace

Aero

He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'
great intro nice stroy and use of multi

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

nice set up and personal

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets
witty

this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'
this was str8 for yer level of skill t his is a filler

ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap
witty funny and nice

beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'[quote]
this is nice it aint hit me like ya otha ones though

[quote]spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'

these kinda of lines are played it was still nicely put together

ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK
it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)

beautiful personals well put lol

I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'
this was mediocre you co ulda had a better ending

ill verse

[b]KAT[b]

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown

str8 opener aaveraged skilled line

His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face

nice diss

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"
He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain

NICENESS that 3 rd line was off but the other were ill it was funny too
This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass
this was str8

Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"

this was lyrically respected by me but I wasn't feelin these lines

Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this

this was a good diss

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you*
nice ending


overall I feel Aero's verse out did Kats by a noticable amount the consitanc and degree of Aero's lines exceeded Kats to me

VOTE: AERO

Break down of a few bars from each verse..

Aero:

He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'

(nice openin, the punch was good and it all had a flow to it)

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

(Good personal and the use of multies was good, nice wordplay about hungry and bit)

I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'

(excellent way to end it, dude's falling and raining men, very nice way. Hanging up the phone at the end of the verse - Good idea again)

Flow: 4/5
Punches: 3/5
Wordplay: 4/5
Personals: 3/5
Originality: 4/5
Enjoyment: 3/5
Overall: 21/30

kataracks:

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown

(nice opening, set out the introduction in a good way)

His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face

(Nice diss about the pamela anderson thing, good wordplay on the above the stars thing)

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"

(nice diss..)

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you* (Check his sig)

(the closing could have been improved.. personal is iight)

Flow: 4/5
Punches: 4/5
Wordplay: 4/5
Personals: 3/5
Originality: 3/5
Enjoyment: 2/5
Overall: 20/30

that's my two cents..

vote - aero.

Uppin...


:)

No offence, but T-Giz's vote was hardly explained. Just a few words after every bar like "nice bar" and "witty" doesnt really justify why that person deserves to win the battle. Needs more in-depth reasons in my opinion.

^^Yea...

Its stated in the rules... first to 7 votes wins...


currently its

Aero - 4 (Vokals, Siccness, T-Giz, Ras-Kass)
Kat - 3 (Few, Rhymez, Elldawg)

I summed u da battle in the end of my vote but if ya want me to edit it I can

Let me show you clowns how to break down a verse. You have to EXPLAIN why a line/bar is tight, not just simply state that it is. And suggest improvements to help elevation. Me voting in the BA is a rare thing, so appreciate what I'm doing here lol. Here we go...

*Aero*

It may just be me, but I couldnt quite understand why you kept switching between 2nd and 3rd person narrative. Near the beginning of the verse, it was "He should be booking, I'm schooling him" and towards the end it was "u winning is a Reasonable Doubt". Not necessarily a negative thing, just a tad bit strange. But anyway....

He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'

^^ nice opener. Sets the structure and flow for the rest of the verse nicely and throwing in a multi in the early stages is always good

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

^^ I get what you were trying to do with the multi, but I think you just mixed it up a bit. If I'm guessin right, "fooled him when" is supposed to rhyme with hooligan? If so, there was no need for the dashes between Clap up this hooligan. If not, apologies are due. Never the less, the second line makes up for it with a quality punch. Inserting the link in there was clever, if not a bit cheeky, lol.

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets

^^ rid-his-heart would have matched get-his-art quite nicely, i dunno if you just missed that or something, but it flows really well. Second line was a nice original punch, well done.

this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'

^^ First line has a fuckin brilliant flow to it, I could see someone using that in a audio freestyle battle to great effect. Another good second line. Good thing is that the punches are original, or they are to me anyway. Good job.

ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap

^^ Was the first line a reference to eating pussy i.e. 'Kat'? If it was, then good god yeah that was nice. If not, then I'm sure it is now lol. Nice wordplay in the second line also.

beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'

^^ One of the best bars. Great flow, nice punches, wordplay, multis. Shit, this bar alone contained more rap skill than EazyB could accomplish in his lifetime. I love the way 'sketchers then stretchers-n-doctors, u fight?' flows. Sickness. The ending is a great punch, made me laugh my ass off.

spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'

^^ I liked this bar, it was a nice punch, but the only thing that let it down was the length of the second line. Kind of ruined the flow of it, but it was still a tight bar. Maybe you could have left out the 'ya creepin me out' bit, although i did like the way it connected the ending of the first line to the beginning of the second with the rhyming of bout and out. S'all good.

ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK

^^ This bar was a bit of a letdown. Too short and a bit simplistic, but it was still a good personal diss in the second bar. Maybe making the overall bar more complex and throwing in a multi in there would have improved it. At the moment, its kind of a filler.

it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar

^^ Nice intelligent personal. Taking what you see of Kat every time he posts and turning into a diss - good idea. I'm not sure who you mean by 'meet up wit ya crew member', but I get the idea that its a personal diss, so good job.

I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'

^^ I felt the ending could have been improved. It would have been real nice if you could have ended it with a bang. Saying that, its still not a bad diss. First line was a bit of a filler, but the second was more of a diss, which was good. Always good to end with a diss.

Flow: 4/5
Punches: 4/5
Wordplay: 4/5
Personals: 3/5
Originality: 4/5
Enjoyment: 5/5
Multis: 3.5/5
Structure: 3.5/5

Overall Mark - 31/40

Great work Aero, mad props are due.

*Kataracks*

For some reason, you did the same thing as Aero with the narrative perspectives. Starts off as second person and ends with third person. I dunno if this is just coincidence or a deliberate style method, but whatever, its not really important. Lets get this shit rollin...

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown

^^ Nice opener. Set the flow and structure nicely, and included a good opening punch. In fact, the flow was spot on. Good job.

His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face

^^ First line was a nice diss, although the second wasnt really a diss. Good bit of wordplay though, makes up for the lack of punch in the second line.

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"

^^ This is more like it. Excellent punch. Plus the first line had some nice wordplay throughout - links between chiropracters and back, plus blow you away and holding grenades. 2 bits of decent wordplay in a single line. Impressive.

He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain

^^ Good concept, but I would suggest turning into more of a punch in the second line. The first line was good, it was a nice setup for a good diss in the second line, but it didnt quite come off. Maybe switching the two lines around would have had a better effect? I dunno, just an idea.

This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass

^^ Great response to Aero's original linked diss. Great personal and overall punch, its bars like these that win battles. Good fuckin job Kat.

Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site

^^ The flow at this point is still consistent and on key, which is very impressive. I like the first line, good diss and wordplay was used to great effect. Second line also had some nice wordplay, good variation and intelligence shown. Mad nice.

He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"

^^ This is some very hot shit. One of the best lines you produced. Disses all the way through, with some fine wordplay and vocab. The 'narcoleptics on toilets' bit was superb, lol. Definitely one of the most clever, original and well executed bars in the whole battle. Props.

Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this

^^ Even though it didnt include a diss, I still enjoyed readin this bar. Its always good to include something like this within a battle rhyme, as long as its not too consistent. A bit cocky, but having reached the final, you probably have a right to be. In a way, it is kind of a diss saying that Aero didnt produce an ill verse, so I'll give you that one lol. Nice bar indeed.

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you

^^ Sweet diss in the first line, I never get tired of seeing so many variations of "my opponent is homosexual" disses. The list of disses is unlimited lol. Must admit I wouldnt have got the full concept of the last line had you not explained it, but now that I look at it, its actually a very good personal diss. Ending with a personal is a very good way to end a battle. So you were spot on with that one Kat. Good job.

Flow: 5/5
Punches: 3/5
Wordplay: 4/5
Personals: 3/5
Originality: 4/5
Enjoyment: 4/5
Multis: 0/5 - didnt see any, if there were some that i missed, i'll happily change this score.
Structure: 4/5

Overall Mark - 27/40

Shit hot battle guys, you both came hard and both deserved your place in the final. You both got some great skills and original ideas, which is refreshing to see. Best thing to do now is keep keying and elevating. Mad props to the both of you.

OVERALL VOTE - AERO


p.s. This took me a hell of a long time to do, so please show some appreciation and post feedback on my future drops and stuff. Take it easy guys, check you later. Peace

^^lmmfao...

I'll bruise this tard! J might as well be 'bubble mixture' the way he gets 'used in spars'
and the truth? it's hard, but you'll get 'taken out, syde' like standard 'disputes in bars' !!
I doubt ya 'tunes' get far and son sadly I don't mean 'failed and dropped animations'
And as far as 'flags'? I'll have you 'holdin up the white' like you 'robbed a caucasian' !!
Ya lost reputation, cuz duke cant even come ill in cyphers (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35983), son is the dunce of the crew
& you lost to 'A' (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=358184#post358184) and 'I' (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=28878&page=2&pp=10) so I guess u have 'trouble with vowels' like a 'stuttering groom' !!
It's fast becoming his doom, so like 'books getting published' he'll need to 'find a cover'
Cuz one hit'll 'send white through the air' - proof that I'm winnin with 'flying colors' !!
Quit trying, brother... a belt holder?! Like bein 'desperate for the toilet' - 'you gotta go!'
And Representatives? I'll have 'dirty jerzys washed up' like 'cleaning soccer clothes' !!
Dubz 'stop-in shows'? Only when 'forgettin his lines', so i'll sever his spine & queer flows
It's clear yo - Jin is fanless, cuz besides 'calling for superman' nobody 'wanna hear-O' !!
J even near? no, and if he 'believes in beating me'? Well, once i've got this fag torn...
We'll see why 'owl is a symbol of wisDom' - I'm literally 'ending what he stands for' !!
Damn, whore! U lovin my nuts, cuz 'posting verses' the only time you 'drop off my dick' (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37105)
& his spot? Is not a big hit cuz only thing 'blowing up' around this jock is his 'chick' :(
God is he thick! So like 'amputations to fags' my lines are 'making this gay stumped'
And game? Chicks only screaming "whi!" when wanting an explanation for break ups !!
You fake chump, useless to AP, ya 'stay-in idle' and i dont mean that 'singin's ya hobby'
So winning a lot? please, I'm takin~titles & 'startin wit white belt' like 'beginnin karate'!!









^^^damn, now THATS a vote!


5-3 aero's way


while the votes are coming i wont cast one myself....i havent done an entire mental breakdown yet but from what i can see its reasonably close, and obviously i want aero to win......so i'd subconsciously be looking for a reason why his verse was better....so.......unless theres a shortage of votes again, AND i do the breakdown and feel that theres a clear winner i wont vote.

Uppin for more votes. This is taking too long, these 2 deserve more votes for their achievement of reachin the final. Wake up people!

Uppin this once again.....

UP!

Uppin for Kat and Aero..

VOTE THE FUCK UP!!!

i quit

Fair enough. Does this mean Aero wins by default?

no...i dont mean that kind of quit...

I mean ima quit tryin to get votes for this battle. Aero, Nuke and Pissed is responsible now, this is fuckin ridiculous.

well... i can't be fucked to do a HUGE vote like a lot of tha (more dedicated/less busy) people have done... so i'm a say it like this. i'm only here 'cos its a dope battle and there were mutterings of sprinklings and some kind of confectionery... (*looks at shane with purpose*)

mad close battle. my favourites from each:

Aero
Aero:
knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar
^^ nice...

he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets
^^ dddoooooooppppee... and feeling tha multies all throughout that bar

sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'
^^ nice too

type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'
^^ sick to me

you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK
^ lmfao harsh

you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar
^^ feeling it

hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'
^^ nice finisher

Kat
Kat:
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown
^^ dope opener

Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face

^lol

Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain
^^ niiiiiiiiiiiice

They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass
^^ nice

Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site
^^ lol

naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"
^^ LMAO

Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this
^^ AH!! ILL AS SHIT!! hahaha killed it

Multies: I felt that although Kat came hard... Aero took this so (Aero)
Punches: I kinda judge on who made me smile/laugh more... and Kat just got this
Wordplay: Damn.. close... a tie
'Flow': By flow, which doesn't exist in text battles obviously, i am judging it on how i read it. so this part can be excused if you feel its too subjective. But as i read Kats verse out loud, i got tha impression it had a real nice flow to it, so i'm a give it to him
Creativity: Damn... both came hot... er.. Tie
Lasting Impression: Which basically means, now after i've read both a coupla times, which has left a lasting impression i.e. which one am i thinking "damn - that WAS an ill line/bar/verse/whatever". And to me - this has gotta be Kat. still think that 'drop twice' line killed it.

So it was very close... and huge props to both for coming so hot... but i'm a just give it to Kataracks

PZ>

thanks ol' bean.......your sprinkles are erm......in the mail......

5-4 aero or 5-5.......iunno if you guys wanna count queeny's or not....

we can count queeny's if we count t-giz's which would make it 6-5

Because hardly anyone else is gonna vote, you might as well count them both otherwise we'll be here next year. Call it 6-5?

Actually, T-Giz's vote was always counted, its just someone said it wasnt explained, but it stil counted all this time...go back and count the votes up and see for urself. If you too lazy then here is the stats so far

Aero-5---(Vokals, Siccness, T-Giz, MultiPlexed, B-Real)
Kataracks-5---(FEW, Rhymez. Elidawg, Queeny, Oblivion)

So its 5-5

Aero


He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'

^^nice opener starts a good flow and a nice multi

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

^^a good punch i like how you started it that was a nice ryme

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets

^^this punch has a real nice flow i like the first part: rid-his-heart I don't get his art

this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'

^^danm your flow is awsome on this one it just all went together nice

ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap

^^lmao at th pussy thing the o yeah and it had some nice word play

beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'

^^Great flow nice punches wordplay multis danm this was a nice bar and a nice punch

spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'

^^nice punch flow was off a little bit tho

ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK

^^good personal diss could have been longer and a little to simple

it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar

Nice personal i also liked the nahhs thing

I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'

^^could have had a better finisher but it was still a nice diss


Kataracks

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown

^^nice flow average opener and an nice punch

His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face

^^i liked thr Pamela punch and had some nice wordplay

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"

^^a pretty nice punch with some average wordplay

He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain

^^ehh....average diss nothing realy special

This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass

^^Great personal and a very nice punch

Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site

^^good diss and some wordplay and a nice flow

He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"

The narcoleptics on toilets was very nice nice vocab it was a very nice punch

Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this

^^not realy a diss but it was still good

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you

^^a very good personal diss and a nice finisher


danm this was a good battle it was worth doing a breakdown to notice every thing about each bar well they were both nice but i thought that areo was just tad bit better

my vote=aero

o yeah and do you want me to do the thing that some people did ex:

Flow: 5/5
Punches: 3/5
Wordplay: 4/5
Personals: 3/5
Originality: 4/5
Enjoyment: 4/5
Multis: 0/5 - didnt see any, if there were some that i missed, i'll happily change this score.
Structure: 4/5

Overall Mark - 27/40

because i will if i have too

UPPIN THIS DANM IT FELL REALY FAR DOWN

Multis: 0/5 - didnt see any, if there were some that i missed, i'll happily change this score.


^^i dunno about that......but ya did a whole breakdown soo

6-5 aero, still upping...

OMG DANM THIS IS ON THE SECOND PAGE I FEEL SORRY FOR YOU GUYS HAVEING EVERYBODY SLEEPIN ON THIS ITS WAS A GOOD BATTEL UPPIN I WANNA SEE WHO WON

Aero

"He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'"

-Funny opener. I didn't understand 'He should be booking I'm schooling him'. Seemed kinda odd.


"Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar"

-Great personal! And nice wordplay too.


"Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets"

-Excellent punch! But I really don't undestand that first line. I just don't see the connection its supposed to have with the second line.


"this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'"

-okay... umm huh? Is this supposed to be some sort of wordplay on "cat nap" (Kat-nap)? This was really shaky.


"ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap"

-lol. I really liked this one. Wish I would have thought of something like that in previous battles.


"beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'"

-...


"spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'"

-lol!. I liked this a lot. And it goes well because Kat seems like a Jigga fan. Good job.


"ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK"

- Feeling this. Good personal too.


"it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar"

-Really good! Never heard a play pf 'Nas' before. Exceptional.


"I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'"

-It's a good bar, but your verse would have had a much harder impact if you used that 'Nas' line last instead. But still good.


Kataracks

"Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown"

-Whoa. Great opener. And I love the internal rhyme= 'services at circuses I'm steady serving this clown'


"His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face"

- Pretty good. The Pamela Lee part was really good, but the 'look up to the stars' part wasn't too original.


"Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"

-lol! Feeling it.


"He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain"

-okay I guess, Not too hard hitting.


"This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass"

-Great personal! Nice diss.


"Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site"

- Pretty Good. Nice metaphor.


"He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets""

-lol. Funny stuff.


"Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this"

-lmao! This is my favorite bar so far. It's easy to make a complicated diss, but the ones that are short, funny and have a punch are hard to come by.


"Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you"

-So so ending. Maybe because his sig is changed, and I didn't see it when it said something else.





great battle. I think it was pretty evenly matched. Aero had more personals than Kat. But Kat's verse was entertaining and had a variety of punches. Aero had filler in some areas and that was the difference maker for me.

Vote= Kataracks

Nap is like nappy hair.. Your probably not of african american descent to know that.. but if you want some holla..

booking means running.. also reading.. "i'm schooling him" he should be running b/c im schooling him

6-6.....

I vote for me which makes it 7-6..

Mods close this..

Good battle Kat

^ You have probably now confused some of the voters on rapworlds.com..

will this never end???

He should be booking I'm schooling him, contusions u'll lose since I fathom cruel intents
gave him a 'gun' and said shoot-ya-friend, but he didn't use that kind of Magnum to 'do him in'

not really original concept but new twist and funny punch nonetheless

Clap-up-this-houligan, they fooled him-when announcing he could get this far
ripped n' marred, knew he'd be HUNGRY for a win cuz previously Kataracks bit a bar

[b]nice personal, multis were nice

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll vex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered
jackets

so-so setup line, good wordplay and punch tho

this vet-is-backwords, Aero the apex slay text while Kat makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz
everyone's taking-a-'nap'

dont really understand this punch, maybe its me. hat does clean-cut have to do with takin a nap

ya blatantly-sad, girls chasing-me-fast, fantasizing cuz i'm known for eatin the Kat
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap

ok setup line, last line original witty and hard punch

beaten n' chaffed seems he's outclassed, block'll fall like Tetris when i'm flarin-out-choppers
Knock-ya-off ya sketchers then stretchers-n'-doctors, u fight? sportin undies only time u 'wearing out boxers'

i get what ya saying, but could of been expressed better

spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
ya creepin me out, should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'

lol

ya season's about- over, give it up and head for the dirt
you had a chance to be around the elite but instead u settled for MERK

nice personal

it's said-im-bezerk, TEKNOWLEDGE? cuz u meet up wit ya crew member? ha @ this average-tard
you'll get bandaged-scars, asked if ya flow was hot and got 'Nahhs' like ur avatar (Nas)

original play decent punch

I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'
nice finisher

curious to why you only mark some of your multis and not some of your others


kataracks..

Im determined to pound ths herb in the ground just for disturbing the crown
Like catering services at circuses Im steady serving this clown

decent opener

His lines are more strecthed than "Pamela Lee's blouse' so I
reckon he's FAKE
Im "above" Aero, he'll try to "look up at the stars" but I'll only step in his face

not doin much for me..more self praise

Kat is back to "blow you away" like chiropracters "holding grenades"
Aero's phony and lame and has more "bad lines" than barber stoned doin "fades"

funny punch, new twist on bad lines

He's known to be "gay" so Im breaking "heterophobic" artwork when Im crackin his frame
Aero gettin beat my keys like I smacked him with a package of Cain

decent punch

This youth's a fag to the point that even his crew gon laugh
They not only bomb you but they dropped ya "Digits" after they Nuked ya ass

can see why you wanna put in the crew members name but it doesnt really do anything punchwise if you aint flip it right

Your "spits aint workin" effectively so I suggest you put your "oral on strike"
Since you seein more L's than Lamont Coleman's memorial site

funny punch on new twist but concept kinda played

He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
Underrated?, naw quiet the opposite and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"

ok punch

Kataracks will take ya "breath away" until its ya "lungs you miss"
Voters expected to see two ill verses, so I'll have to post another one after Im done with this

this was an "ooooooooh" bar...dope punch

Aero's only "dead ass serious" cuz he a "cancerous faggot who bones dudes"
How you expect people to belive you when they know that KATARACKS owns you*
mediocre finisher


overall i think Aero took this because he had the personals and the overall flow... kataracks had the best bar but wasn't enough in my opinion


count my vote if ya want

thank god this is over.................congrats to areo and kat this was a nice battle

Aero wins!!!!!, Finally


Congrats Aero, and Comiserations to Kat

Was a sick battle..!