12-24 lines
3-0 ko or 5 votes to win
no hate/dickride/crew/unexplained/dumb votes
sign in by 11.59pm GMT thursday 12th feb
verses in by 11.59pm GMT sunday 15th feb

good luck!

in, good luck

Checkin' In'....goodluck to you as well..

neva mind...i tried to drop my verse but the way it comes out wit the lines spilling over makes it too hard to read....i'll figure it out tomoz

Jay droppin wit faults, swamped wit assaults cuz dukes here’s stagnant
And I heard he’s had more men in him than Chinese new year dragons *
I nuke queer faggots …… cook em in propane til it provokes pain
Ya so lame and got ‘Montana’ in ya ‘cig’ so u already in a ‘smoked state’**
There’s no-way u can beat me so pack ya shit and Jay u betta run
Victory? Understanding that I’m iller the only way u’ll get it son
Vexed him? Yup, stepped it up even my spits off the top kills
Ya not-ill cuz bein clumsy wit gangstarr singles the only way u ‘drop skills’
U pop pills? Cuz ya getting killed wit ease kid ya lame as hell
I’ll blaze ya pelt cuz ya last battle shows u aint good at evading Ellz***
Ur fake as well……Jigga wannabe!!!!!! Ya raps have missed
& u got a crush on ya crew member cuz like ya sig I seen u ‘flashin’ quiz
So pack ya shit… ya crews nothin, I’ll drop & I’ll finish ‘em
& Im only goin to 14 lines so u don’t feel bad u lost 2 the minimum


*- ya know those dragon thingys they have at new year...ppl get inside to hold it up....new years ones can get pretty long...lots of men inside

**Montana is a state, and also as in tony montana who is quoted in his sig........sig/cig........smoked goes wit cig.......'state' as in territory and also like.....umm....'a state of shock' or w/e........already in a smoked state B4 ive done my verse.......ask if ya dont get it....


*Jay's last loss is to elldawg, informally known as Ellz (Ls)

^^^okay fine....jay's battling elldawg and looks like hes GUNNA lose.....line still works.......

lol...a little side note for you....I haven't loss to Elldawg...votes are still 0-0......heh...droppin soon...

Ok...and now I'm going to actually try.....let's go...

You couldn't "spit grit", if you goggle wit "co-gate", if you "lift dumb bells wit toungues", ya "verbals" still wouldn't "hol'-weight"/
"Hoe-take", dis "stickin-wit-bars", thinkin you've "elevated", cuz you plottin a "wish", "reachin-fa-stars"/
"Teachin-you-hard", gotta spit "sediment's to-ya-mental", but no "fruity peb-bles", I put "one(1) 4th(4), to ya fore(4)" head, leave ya "mental split twelve-fold'(144)"/
Your a "lost-cost", even "doubt wouldn't give you-the-benefit", you still "interconnected wit ya past life", cuz nigga you "been-a-bitch"/
"Remember kid", like "reminison", you couldn't throw "gutter punches", if I "lended-you-PISS,-SHIT"/
This-is a "verbal abusin", cuz my "lyricals Ike'n-ya-physical", chances of you winninz, like sayin "no wheeled bike-is-dependable"(The fuck?)/
Ya "fix is bendable", like "Stretch Arm Strong", but ya punches'll "never-connect", my reign'll(RAIN) have niggaz "STORMin" ya cavity, don't make me "WEATHER-ya-chest"/
My flowz genetic, somebody get this guy-a-"medic", I'm to "sweet for his fluids", dawg you basically "di-a-betic", dis nigga must be "allergic to verbals", cuz he "dies-of-text-an'-shit"/
"Hex-ya-SCRIPT", cuz I'ma manifested "Polt-er-giest", you couldn't come "hard and to the point", if you "poked-at-ice"/
"Choked-ya-life", cuz my "palms connectin" on ya "spiritual-level", even If I "tossed you a book of BRAIL", you wouldn't "catch-da-PUNCHLINE", hear-the-flow,-let's-go../
I tell you once, Yo'-don't-push-me, I'd slap you wit a "wet personal", ya "stink wit flows", everybody "knows(nose)-ya-pussy"/
You gon "catch feelings", like "physics", I wouldn't be "in ya shadows", if I let you, "side-kick"(Pause)......Me../
See, my "SKILLS sicker" best-jus'-let-it-go, cuz all my "ATTRIBUTES" jus' infested-wit-colds", "stripped his image, nudities sin", somebody best "bless-him-wit-clothes"/
*Jay is iller-than-dude, I'm not "jus' doing text"(like you..), I'm "dimensional(3D)", thus I'm "realer-than-you"....wooo... :rolleyes: .../
Damn ya hit's-so,-vague, "sifilus" in ya "anus", no wonder ya "shits-so-plagued", wit da worst-raps-dis-century/
Clap ya "mental-V"(Vision), I'd re-develope ya "third-eye", "verbals elusive", you can't "follow my words-RIGHT"??.../
Cuz I'm "left-handed", you rappin is like tryna record a "def-man-spits"(Flowz jus' horrible -_-'), you couldn't "spit High", if you ate "Meth(Method)-man-shits".....ha...you're a "dead-man"..."ripped(RIP'ed)".../
I could go all day, "wearin-ya-past", like "throw-backs", hit cha wit a "Pimps PUNCHLINE", this "hoes-smacked".......oh shat.. :p .../

Explanation-
*: He only text far as I know.....

Punches: Tie
Wordplay: Tie
Disses/ Personals: Tie
Multies: Jay
Flow: Pissed
Enjoyment: Pissed

Vote: Pissed. Just for the simple fact that I enjoyed his better because he didn't have all those extra characters blocking his words, which made it harder to spit out loud, which threw off the flow. It was an excellent winner's effort by MJ, but I just couldn't enjoy his verse as much because it didn't really have good flow. Not to mention, it's bar form is unorthodox.

Jay droppin wit faults, swamped wit assaults cuz dukes here’s stagnant
And I heard he’s had more men in him than Chinese new year dragons *
I nuke queer faggots …… cook em in propane til it provokes pain
Ya so lame and got ‘Montana’ in ya ‘cig’ so u already in a ‘smoked state’**
^^Favorite part from Pissed. Good structure, good wordplay, nice personals, and good punches.

You couldn't "spit grit", if you goggle wit "co-gate", if you "lift dumb bells wit toungues", ya "verbals" still wouldn't "hol'-weight"/
"Hoe-take", dis "stickin-wit-bars", thinkin you've "elevated", cuz you plottin a "wish", "reachin-fa-stars"/
"Teachin-you-hard", gotta spit "sediment's to-ya-mental", but no "fruity peb-bles", I put "one(1) 4th(4), to ya fore(4)" head, leave ya "mental split twelve-fold'(144)"/
^^Ill but as I mentioned, the characters threw the flow off because it was so hard to read passed them. Good multies, wordplay, and etc. But for the millionth time, I just couldn't get the flow.

Vote: Im_Pissed.

Nigga you jus' hatin'....seriously....vote not counted....do to hate vote...unless it is allowed :mad: ....but other than that....I don't consider him mentally fitted to vote on a battle I'm in.......

It's not a hate vote. I vote on EVERY battle unbiased. I don't care what you think. Because if it was a hate vote, I definitely wouldn't have voted, because I don't waste my time on reading shit from peeps I dislike or don't care for. And anyway, the beef between me and X-Quiz, or me and PPR, or me and God is squashed. So continue to think what you want, but I don't see it as a hate vote.

Well you can't all of a sudden say the beef is squashed now.....I ain't know this before-hand......you neva posted and said it was squashed.....neways....it's not counted.....

And damn-it they won't let me edit the drop to take out the quotes and shit...structure seems to be the only problem wit my verse(I was in a rush..)....-_-'......neways.....

0-0

jay.... ur smokin crack

This is a renewed version of the verse....had to re-do the structure......peep...

You couldn't spit grit, if you goggle wit co-gate, if you lift dumb bells wit toungues, ya verbals still wouldn't "hol'-weight"/

Hoe-take, dis stickin-wit-bars, thinkin you've elevated, cuz you plottin a wish, reachin-fa-stars/

Teachin-you-hard, gotta spit sediment's to-ya-mental, but no fruity peb-bles, I put one(1) 4th(4), to ya fore(4) head, leave ya mental split twelve-fold(144)/

Your a lost-cost, even doubt wouldn't give you-the-benefit, you still interconnected wit ya past life", cuz nigga you been-a-bitch/

Remember kid, like reminison, you couldn't throw gutter punches, if I lended-you-PISS,-SHIT/

This-is a verbal abusin, cuz my lyricals Ike'n-ya-physical, chances of you winninz, like sayin no wheeled bike-is-dependable(The fuck?)/

Ya fix is bendable, like Stretch Arm Strong, but ya punches'll never-connect, my reign'll(RAIN) have niggaz STORMin ya cavity, don't make me WEATHER-ya-chest/

My flowz genetic, somebody get this guy-a-medic, I'm to sweet for his fluids, dawg you basically di-a-betic, dis nigga must be allergic to verbals, cuz he dies-of-text-an'-shit/

Hex-ya-SCRIPT, cuz I'ma manifested Polt-er-giest, you couldn't come hard and to the point, if you poked-at-ice/

Choked-ya-life, cuz my palms connectin on ya spiritual-level, even If I tossed you a book of BRAIL, you wouldn't catch-da-PUNCHLINE, hear-the-flow,-let's-go../

I tell you once, Yo'-don't-push-me, I'd slap you wit a wet personal, ya stink wit flows, everybody knows(nose)-ya-pussy/

You gon catch feelings, like physics, I wouldn't be in ya shadows, if I let you, side-kick(Pause)......Me../

See, my SKILLS sicker best-jus'-let-it-go, cuz all my ATTRIBUTES jus' infested-wit-colds, stripped his image, nudities sin, somebody best bless-him-wit-clothes/

*Jay is iller-than-dude, I'm not jus' doing text, I'm dimensional(3D), thus I'm realer-than-you.... :( /

Damn ya hit's-so,-vague, sifilus in ya anus, no wonder ya shits-so-plagued, wit da worst-raps-dis-century/

Clap ya mental-V(Vision), I'd re-develope ya third-eye, verbals elusive, you can't follow my words-RIGHT??.../

Cuz I'm left-handed, you rappin is like tryna record a def-man-spits(Flowz jus' horrible -_-'), you couldn't spit High, if you ate Meth(Method)-man-shits...ha..you're a dead-man...ripped(RIP'ed).../

I could go all day, wearin-ya-past, like throw-backs, hit cha wit a Pimps PUNCHLINE", this hoes-smacked.......oh shat.. :p .../



Explanations-
*:He only does text, as far as I know....

-Murderous~Jay

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im not modding the threads im battling in so its up to nuke whether or not that vote counts....but since the guy is really frankie.....i dont see why it shouldnt.....frankie and i arent exactly bestest buddies, as far as what i can remember there was a certain degree of ill will between us when he "left", so since he doesnt like either of us it kinda cancells out...

w/e.....up to nuke

D-illar's vote stands. He explained well enough imo..

Just for curiosity.. Jay.. Can you explain your bars or lines to me please... Coz it seems to be much more than 24 lines (12 bars)... PM it me or something

wow jay your verse was he hardest verse i have ever had to read,seriouslt your structure was horrible and the added dashes and shit, well that many were unnecessary!
I guess i cant really vote, cos it would be affected alot by how jays verse looked and not actually the content... so i wont...

reckon you could change it again, cos u makin it very difficult, im not hating so dont get offended...

ImPissed:
And I heard he’s had more men in him than Chinese new year dragons *
^^ hehe..

Ya so lame and got ‘Montana’ in ya ‘cig’ so u already in a ‘smoked state’**
Good Sig diss

Victory? Understanding that I’m iller the only way u’ll get it son
Hehe .. nice wordplay concept

Jay:
lift dumb bells wit toungues", ya "verbals" still wouldn't "hol'-weight"/
Nice basic creativity

ya "stink wit flows", everybody "knows(nose)-ya-pussy"/
hehe.. nice wordplay


Delivery: Pissed
Punches: Pissed
Creativity: Pissed.. it's quality not quantity
Personals: Tie.. Both had about one or two
Complexity: Jay

Vote:Pissed

Rationale: Better in Most categoried... Jay's punches were very weak and nothing else about his verse was really good. Pissed had nice multis.. Very creative effective Punches.. And better Creativity even though Jay had more..

thanks...

whats happening wit that collab man?

Damn yo'...I must've read the rules wrong...I thought it said 24 barz -_-'....does dat DQ me o.o.....

I dropped 17 barz...

:(.......probably.....unless you wanna pretend you have 17 ridiculously long lines....which dont rhyme with each other.....lol.....

Naw I ain't gon do that...heh rules are rules....I'll take the loss...


Seeing As It was a decent verse and it was a genuine mistake... And if Pissed Says it Alright.. Then ill let it pass.. Get Bak at me Pissed asap

fine with me

Alrighty then...

Carry on Voting please!

Ya so lame and got ‘Montana’ in ya ‘cig’ so u already in a ‘smoked state’

^nice

I could go all day, "wearin-ya-past", like "throw-backs",

^u need more shit like this...creative shit...

Punches: Imp
Wordplay: Imp
Flow: imp
Multis: tie...

Vote: Im Pissed....

He won this battle straight-up...Jay, I dunno what you think sometimes...

Yea..well I have my dayz...lol.....s'all cool...

errrr......i made a point of not modding the threads i was battling in....but theres a lot of pressure from people to get round 2 going and nuke doesnt seem to be around so.....i kinda have to advance myself.........if youve got a prob with anything regarding this pm me and we'll sort it......