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What up!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Check check

Biting bitch needs his teeth-intact because his illness is like hallucinations, it ain't no seeing-that\/
Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack/\ (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=12210)1
Don't need to be name-calling but like {vomiting} at his {own feet}, his {spits} are why this lames-{falling}\/
You can name-all-{men} that you {fucked up} because Dig's a {gay writer} like {James-Baldwin!}*/\2
I'll make-this-child face-it-now Dig's punches so weak he the only one who tastes-the-POW!\/
Start hating-now because my {flow} have you {puking} in {excitement}, your {spits} only get {bay-sick}-WOWs**/\3
So weak you take a beating-in-spars-man, and ya wouldn't make a {famous partner} if you {teamed-up-with-Carson}\/
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/\4
You just bel-low wack rhymes so boo's come mel-low so stick to Kardinal repping Canada in~stead-tho\/
Do as I said-yo; I'm a {dicitonary} so the only way you {beyond me} is if ya {name} was {Mead-ow}****/\5
Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}\/
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!/\6
You suck, so U and DI have no re-lation and like a gladiator match Dig don't know what he-facin\/
This kid's name is M~C-basic, but he's only known because {X} is {behind} him so his name's {e-quation}*****/\7

*-He fucked up men, so that's gay. He writes rhymes. James Baldwin is a gay writer.

**-Flow. Puking in excitement over flow. Similar to seasickness. Bay Sick. Wow represents excitement. Basic Wow.

***-It's all connected wordplay. He team with Con~vict who is a biter. Stealing rhymes. Stealing=larcen.

****-In the dictionary, me is before meadow.

*****-X=5. That's part of an equation. Xkwisite has always been a supporter of Digit since his rookie days. X is behind him.

Illness throguh research

not bad, not bad at all....

Why-ya'll-talkin, I aint the tetris champ, but I'm known to put squares 'nta-their-place/
Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space/
I-doubt-ya-age, you're 15? How come ya mom still calls you butter-cup?/
Step-right down son cuz I took ya left shoe and you still a runner-up!/
Franklin's Mom?...I thought-her-up to play a joke on the child-like-Frankie/
Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey/
Ha ha I beat this charity case, paid for his funeral and got labeled a philanthropist/
Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!/
U really think you have respect..cuz im pretty sure "he's wack" is what all the vets minds-say/
Shit, I'm breaking Frankie's heart and im not talking about fights on Valentines-Day/
Im so confident my last bar will knock I just threw in a filler-pun/
Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1!!!!/

Vote it out.

Upping for peeps to see it, so they can vote.

Uppity....

Uppity....

Uppity....

quit ^uppin ur shit so much...whtvr tho,

d'illar~
"Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack/\1

^lol...ok punch(funny, but not too complex

"If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/

^ahhhnn...ur personals and creativity r weak...gay/wack punch

digit~
"Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space/

^wow...ill idea guy, good punch kinda

"Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey/

^haha...funny punch, good idea

"Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!/

^nice personal...kinda off his^^, but good idea...and tru^dat, hehe...

flow-tie, maybe digit
multies-d'illar, dig's felt too forcd
wordplay-digit, some really clever ideas
personals-close(illar had more, but digits were better) tie
punch- digit...some great diss lines
enjoyment-digit, d'illars was too basic and kinda borin...

vote - digit

g'luck,

peace~

Whatever. 1-0 Dig's way.

d'illar~
"Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack/\1

^lol...ok punch(funny, but not too complex

"If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/

^ahhhnn...ur personals and creativity r weak...gay/wack punch

digit~
"Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space/

^wow...ill idea guy, good punch kinda

"Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey/

^haha...funny punch, good idea

"Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!/

^nice personal...kinda off his^^, but good idea...and tru^dat, hehe...

flow-tie, maybe digit
multies-d'illar, dig's felt too forcd
wordplay-digit, some really clever ideas
personals-close(illar had more, but digits were better) tie
punch- digit...some great diss lines
enjoyment-digit, d'illars was too basic and kinda borin...

vote - digit
.................................................. ........

Hold up, man. Can't anyone see he was feeding from my verse? Whatever 2-0

D-Illar-1 PLEASE Get Rid of them \/, they make you seem like a rookie and work on yo structure. Or Either Make the font size smaller.

Biting bitch needs his teeth-intact because his illness is like hallucinations, it ain't no seeing-that
Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack

Ok first line about hallucinations was pretty nice but the aint easy being wack is played to hell..

Don't need to be name-calling but like {vomiting} at his {own feet}, his {spits} are why this lames-{falling}
You can name-all-{men} that you {fucked up} because Dig's a {gay writer} like {James-Baldwin!}

Aight First Line, Nothin Special. Baldwin line wasnt that bad, As said before, nothing too special, kind of a filler to me.

I'll make-this-child face-it-now Dig's punches so weak he the only one who tastes-the-POW!
Start hating-now because my {flow} have you {puking} in {excitement}, your {spits} only get {bay-sick}-WOWs

Lol. This was just Lol Material. I liked the second line, you could have played off the Basic and Baysick a bit more and highlighted it out a bit more but nonetheless, pretty good.

So weak you take a beating-in-spars-man, and ya wouldn't make a {famous partner} if you {teamed-up-with-Carson}
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}

LOL. Ill Personal, Slowly Getting Better. Saw that Convict Line. Lol.

You just bel-low wack rhymes so boo's come mel-low so stick to Kardinal repping Canada in~stead-tho
Do as I said-yo; I'm a {dicitonary} so the only way you {beyond me} is if ya {name} was {Mead-ow}

What ? This was weird, another filler.

Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!

This was prolly your best line, flow and personal and wordplay in the same line. I liked think about the whore and the personal was nice. G'd One.

You suck, so U and DI have no re-lation and like a gladiator match Dig don't know what he-facin\/
This kid's name is M~C-basic, but he's only known because {X} is {behind} him so his name's {e-quation}

Nice nice, nice way to close it..

Flow: 7/10
Wordplay: 4/10
Multies: 4/10
Enjoyment: 3/10
Personals: 8/10
Punch: 7/10

Why-ya'll-talkin, I aint the tetris champ, but I'm known to put squares 'nta-their-place
Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space

Second line was fire, dont know about the first one, but the second was really good, pretty basic opener but good nonetheless. Kind of fed off the tetris thing tho.

I-doubt-ya-age, you're 15? How come ya mom still calls you butter-cup?
Step-right down son cuz I took ya left shoe and you still a runner-up!

Lmao. Butter-Cup thing was funny.. Good Punch. Flow was really good..

Franklin's Mom?...I thought-her-up to play a joke on the child-like-Frankie
Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey

Ok.. Not Bad but Not too good.. kind of a filler..

Ha ha I beat this charity case, paid for his funeral and got labeled a philanthropist
Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!

Flow was Dodgy but the vocab was nice, structure not that good neither. kind of a filler..

U really think you have respect..cuz im pretty sure "he's wack" is what all the vets minds-say
Shit, I'm breaking Frankie's heart and im not talking about fights on Valentines-Day

Lol. Imaginative Concept. Good last line but could have elaborated or put it in a better way kind of.

Im so confident my last bar will knock I just threw in a filler-pun
Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1

Shit. Closer was excellent, nice personal. Good way to end it.

Flow: 9/10
Wordplay: 4/10
Multies: 4/10
Enjoyment: 5/10
Personals: 8/10
Punch: 7/10


Vote - Digitill.

Okay. Damn, I was hoping to make it to the second round. 3-0 KO. Good match, Digit.

Come to think about it, I'd like to see if anyone considers F.E.W's vote a hate vote, seeing as to how he's had this grudge against me since July.

D, Ask Pissed or Nuke. They might be able to do something if you gather enough evidence.

Thanks for the tip.

...
lol^...why does everyone think im always hatin on'em these days?...

IS IT SOMETHIN I SAID???...lol...
honest, i never hated on frankie,
we beefed for awhile back when the fuck and havnt heard of him in awhile,
but no he back as this cat, so, coo...

n' n e beef ive started wit him now has been in reply's to his shit, just check..
vote should count,
the real "iller-one" should go on...

peace~

WHatever. Good battle, Digit.

Fuck that. 2-0 until Pissed or Nuke says no. I'm not letting anyone punk me out of what I think.

Pissed please do not let F.E.W.'s vote count. As far as I know, he's held a serious grudge against me since July.

fews vote.......i dunno.....hes weird.....says exactly what he thinks from my experience with him, so you can never tell if he's hating or just being honest lol........i dont think he's hating....normally id let it count......but he's buddies with dig, so iunno.......I'll let nukey boy decide, its a question mark at the moment

black thurs's vote doesnt count, quoted votes wont do without some additional explanitory comments.

1-0 dig

Thank you, Pissed. Much respect.

Quote:
d'illar~
"Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack/\1

^lol...ok punch(funny, but not too complex

"If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/

^ahhhnn...ur personals and creativity r weak...gay/wack punch

digit~
"Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space/

^wow...ill idea guy, good punch kinda

"Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey/

^haha...funny punch, good idea

"Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!/

^nice personal...kinda off his^^, but good idea...and tru^dat, hehe...

flow-tie, maybe digit
multies-d'illar, dig's felt too forcd
wordplay-digit, some really clever ideas
personals-close(illar had more, but digits were better) tie
punch- digit...some great diss lines
enjoyment-digit, d'illars was too basic and kinda borin...

vote - digit

I dont see why it amkes perfect since but hey.......................D-illar ya rhymes look horrible with all that mass confusion and its basic nothin real special at all....................Digit ive seen better but nonetheless the wordplay and punches were on point and thats all you really needed ta win this one....................Digits still my vote..................

2-0 Dig......

no, still not good enough.....especially since the quoted vote is question marked....I appreciate the effort thurs but you gotta refer to the verses yourself, check the thread i made on how to vote for more detail.

its still 1-0 dig

the feeding off verses thing.....uhhmmm.....he didnt actually feed off it.....just used the same idea as d illar but flipped to make a different line....looked like he mighta got the idea from him....its a slightly frowned upon offense, but nothing major and I neglected to put the 'no feeding' thing in the rules anyway.....so even if he had fed directly from the other verse.....all we could do is frown upon it

1-0 Dig. Up.

let's get some fucking votes that will count...

1-0 Dig. Up.

Goddamnit! Stop Sleeping!!!!!!

no ones sleepin yo...this threads fuckin huge man^...

its ur fault for not lettin votes count,

i personally think quoted votes r wack, but they've always been counter bfor..
so black thurz vote should count, especially since he explained further
and its obvious he read the verses and voted...(no bullshit)

plus, just look at my voted, does it look like hate?...
i am friends wit DIG, good friends infact, but i've voted against him many tmes
he won this battle, its CLEAR,
so we should get goin wit the second round
or atleast have it as 2-0, so its only one more...

black thurz and me will count as one vote even,

~peace~

I'm not in POETS so I'm voting...

Illar:
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/\4
^^ Good Personal.. plus flow

Digitill:

Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1!!!!/
^^ Nice Basic Name Diss

Delivery: Illar.. Dig had better carry on multis but some weren't on point..
Punches: Illar.. Just better by a nudge.. Dig's last one was the only good.. Illar had 1 good one and then some decent ones
Creativity: Illar's sucked as did Dig's.. so TIE
Personals: Illar has about 3 personals .. Dig had maybe 2.. and Illar's were slightly better
Complexity: Illar

Vote: Illar

Rationale: Just better verse overall, better in most categories.. Dig's punches were not good like the "wild pink blankey... valentines day.. desperate for heir"... Illar had one good punch and threw in som decent punches as well
Vote:

And FEW'S vote should count.. Who holds a net beef since July?... Illar quit crying.. - My 2 cents..

And I think Dig had better creativity but my vote stays the same..

2-1 Dig. Uppity

D-illar

Biting bitch needs his teeth-intact because his illness is like hallucinations, it ain't no seeing-that\/
Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack/\1
the first was the best and the wack thing was aight
Don't need to be name-calling but like {vomiting} at his {own feet}, his {spits} are why this lames-{falling}\/
You can name-all-{men} that you {fucked up} because Dig's a {gay writer} like {James-Baldwin!}*/\2
nothin special.......although i liked your reference ta James Baldwin...........
I'll make-this-child face-it-now Dig's punches so weak he the only one who tastes-the-POW!\/
Start hating-now because my {flow} have you {puking} in {excitement}, your {spits} only get {bay-sick}-WOWs**/\3
overall nice ass punches creativity flow and mults..............
So weak you take a beating-in-spars-man, and ya wouldn't make a {famous partner} if you {teamed-up-with-Carson}\/
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/\4
nice personal in second.........carson line wasnt feelin.............
You just bel-low wack rhymes so boo's come mel-low so stick to Kardinal repping Canada in~stead-tho\/
Do as I said-yo; I'm a {dicitonary} so the only way you {beyond me} is if ya {name} was {Mead-ow}****/\5
nice creativity with the dictionary all the rest didnt feel
Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}\/
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!/\6
this has ta be the best line you had....nice punch.fuck it wish i thought of this........
You suck, so U and DI have no re-lation and like a gladiator match Dig don't know what he-facin\/
This kid's name is M~C-basic, but he's only known because {X} is {behind} him so his name's {e-quation}*****/\7
wasnt the greatest finisher and wasnt really that good
overall wasnt the best that ive seen had some nice personals, prolly 2 great punches..
overall 6/10

digit:

Why-ya'll-talkin, I aint the tetris champ, but I'm known to put squares 'nta-their-place/
Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space/
aight opener and sorta flipped his but the squares and heir thing was pretty creative
I-doubt-ya-age, you're 15? How come ya mom still calls you butter-cup?/
Step-right down son cuz I took ya left shoe and you still a runner-up!/
aight not really impactful.....
Franklin's Mom?...I thought-her-up to play a joke on the child-like-Frankie/
Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey/
lol wild pink blankey thats just silly lol........no punch though........
Ha ha I beat this charity case, paid for his funeral and got labeled a philanthropist/
Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!/
dissed the wrong dude...........and flipped his again
U really think you have respect..cuz im pretty sure "he's wack" is what all the vets minds-say/
Shit, I'm breaking Frankie's heart and im not talking about fights on Valentines-Day/
loved this line.........prolly your hottest.......
Im so confident my last bar will knock I just threw in a filler-pun/
Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1!!!!/
ill finisher........wish you woulda kept this same mind state throughout.but ya second hottest line.............
overall: i think you prolly coulda came harder and since you went second then you shoulda came hella harder but all in all i liked your flow and creativity..........and you also only had 2 great punches............
overall: 7/10

basically: my vote was considered on the grounds of you guys 2 best punches..........and weighin them both on creativity and power and enjoyment.......i would have ta give it to Digit.................his punches were nicer and more creative wordplay............pushed Digit ahead.....................

now if this dont count what the fuck?.......................lol

VOTE: DIGIT

3-1 Dig. Uppity...

thanks thurs...


ehhh....im actually gunna have to give my vote to Illar....

he inched ahead in flow with more and better places multis.....rhyme schemes went to illar by a fair while.......and i favoured his punches because the better wordplay generally made them more enjoyable.....plus he had a lot more linkage than dig.......dig had the better creativity.......but I had illar by a little in most other categories.

stand out lines were -

Start hating-now because my {flow} have you {puking} in {excitement}, your {spits} only get {bay-sick}-WOWs**/\3

good wordplay & punch

ehh....that was the best line to me in illars verse & i dont wana quote another cuz then id have to quote like five other lines which i felt were all about the same standard.

Im so confident my last bar will knock I just threw in a filler-pun/
Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1!!!!/

good nameplay & punch....

couple other bars which were not bad, but same as illars verse theres a lot aound the same standard so im just quoting the standout.......

the standouts were fairly even, but Illar was much more consistent with "yeah, pretty nice" lines whereas dig only had a couple others that were pretty good....

vote - Illar




3-2 Dig

D-Illar 1
"Biting bitch needs his teeth-intact because his illness is like hallucinations, it ain't no seeing-that
Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack"
~~Decent opening. Nice reference to the Drop they made.

"Don't need to be name-calling but like {vomiting} at his {own feet}, his {spits} are why this lames-{falling}
You can name-all-{men} that you {fucked up} because Dig's a {gay writer} like {James-Baldwin!}"
~~Pretty funny.

"I'll make-this-child face-it-now Dig's punches so weak he the only one who tastes-the-POW!
Start hating-now because my {flow} have you {puking} in {excitement}, your {spits} only get {bay-sick}-WOWs"
~~Good multis in the opening bar. The punch in the first bar was a tad bit filler. Also nice wordplay with Basic-Bay Sick

"So weak you take a beating-in-spars-man, and ya wouldn't make a {famous partner} if you {teamed-up-with-Carson}
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}"
~~Pretty Good again. Multis were definitely on point.

"You just bel-low wack rhymes so boo's come mel-low so stick to Kardinal repping Canada in~stead-tho
Do as I said-yo; I'm a {dicitonary} so the only way you {beyond me} is if ya {name} was {Mead-ow}"
~~I like the punch. It was creative. I just think you should have used more than a two syllable multi. But still extremely good punch.

"Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!"
~~Really good. Plus it's a good personal. (I damn near killed myself tryna beat that score btw.)

"You suck, so U and DI have no re-lation and like a gladiator match Dig don't know what he-facin
This kid's name is M~C-basic, but he's only known because {X} is {behind} him so his name's {e-quation}"
~~Too complicated to understand on the first read. But I got it. I'd say it's a good punch but the set up was so-so. Still a good finisher.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
DigitILL
"Why-ya'll-talkin, I aint the tetris champ, but I'm known to put squares 'nta-their-place
Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space"
~~Bad start. You put dashes in the wrong spaces. None of the multi phrases you hyphenated are true multies. All the syllables don't match up correctly. And I think it's more than a coincidence that you spoke about tetris after D-Illar-1 did. That's feeding in my book.

"I-doubt-ya-age, you're 15? How come ya mom still calls you butter-cup?
Step-right down son cuz I took ya left shoe and you still a runner-up!"
~~Pretty funny with the runner up. I'm feelin' it.

"Franklin's Mom?...I thought-her-up to play a joke on the child-like-Frankie
Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey"
~~It's okay. Why did you say "Flow?" Kinda threw me off.

"Ha ha I beat this charity case, paid for his funeral and got labeled a philanthropist
Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!"
~~You shouldn't have put a dash between "named" and "ImPissed". It wasn't a true multi. Only the last syllables matched up.

"U really think you have respect..cuz im pretty sure "he's wack" is what all the vets minds-say
Shit, I'm breaking Frankie's heart and im not talking about fights on Valentines-Day"
~~Pretty good. Last line didn't have a diss really.

"Im so confident my last bar will knock I just threw in a filler-pun
Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1"
~~lol. Really funny. That top line killed me with laughter. This is creative as hell. Good ending. I can see how some people might not like it, but I did.




Constructive Criticism
For D-Illar 1: You've got great multis. They're really improved a lot. Props. But I'd have to say that some of your lines have way too many words. It's almost as if one of your lines is long enough to be an entire bar. And the last thing is don't be too complicated because that could cost you some votes. Try to make it so they can read all the way through without having to stop.

For DigitILL: Your multis need some work. You should only put the dashes if all the syllables match up. Ironically this was the problem Frankie used to have a while ago. Here's an example:
Frankie:Teeth-intact; Seeing-That; Being-Wack
You: Philanthropist; Named-ImPissed
But I have nothing against you because you're a vet. I just think you had an off day. Everybody can't be at their maximum at all times. I think you mighta had a little writer's block because you had to sort of feed off one of his bars, and besides your finisher, there wasn't much in between. No beef


Vote: D-Illar 1

3-3 Tie...Uppity

D-Illar 1
"Biting bitch needs his teeth-intact because his illness is like hallucinations, it ain't no seeing-that
Ya face can be-intact so you'll have something since you know it ain't easy being-wack"
~~Decent opening. Nice reference to the Drop they made.

"Don't need to be name-calling but like {vomiting} at his {own feet}, his {spits} are why this lames-{falling}
You can name-all-{men} that you {fucked up} because Dig's a {gay writer} like {James-Baldwin!}"
~~Pretty funny.

"I'll make-this-child face-it-now Dig's punches so weak he the only one who tastes-the-POW!
Start hating-now because my {flow} have you {puking} in {excitement}, your {spits} only get {bay-sick}-WOWs"
~~Good multis in the opening bar. The punch in the first bar was a tad bit filler. Also nice wordplay with Basic-Bay Sick

"So weak you take a beating-in-spars-man, and ya wouldn't make a {famous partner} if you {teamed-up-with-Carson}
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}"
~~Pretty Good again. Multis were definitely on point.

"You just bel-low wack rhymes so boo's come mel-low so stick to Kardinal repping Canada in~stead-tho
Do as I said-yo; I'm a {dicitonary} so the only way you {beyond me} is if ya {name} was {Mead-ow}"
~~I like the punch. It was creative. I just think you should have used more than a two syllable multi. But still extremely good punch.

"Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!"
~~Really good. Plus it's a good personal. (I damn near killed myself tryna beat that score btw.)

"You suck, so U and DI have no re-lation and like a gladiator match Dig don't know what he-facin
This kid's name is M~C-basic, but he's only known because {X} is {behind} him so his name's {e-quation}"
~~Too complicated to understand on the first read. But I got it. I'd say it's a good punch but the set up was so-so. Still a good finisher.

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DigitILL
"Why-ya'll-talkin, I aint the tetris champ, but I'm known to put squares 'nta-their-place
Exile-all-ya-kin and leave ya desperate for 'heir' like accidents 'n-outer-space"
~~Bad start. You put dashes in the wrong spaces. None of the multi phrases you hyphenated are true multies. All the syllables don't match up correctly. And I think it's more than a coincidence that you spoke about tetris after D-Illar-1 did. That's feeding in my book.

"I-doubt-ya-age, you're 15? How come ya mom still calls you butter-cup?
Step-right down son cuz I took ya left shoe and you still a runner-up!"
~~Pretty funny with the runner up. I'm feelin' it.

"Franklin's Mom?...I thought-her-up to play a joke on the child-like-Frankie
Flow? yeah you cried like a baby til I gave back your wild-pink-blankey"
~~It's okay. Why did you say "Flow?" Kinda threw me off.

"Ha ha I beat this charity case, paid for his funeral and got labeled a philanthropist
Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!"
~~You shouldn't have put a dash between "named" and "ImPissed". It wasn't a true multi. Only the last syllables matched up.

"U really think you have respect..cuz im pretty sure "he's wack" is what all the vets minds-say
Shit, I'm breaking Frankie's heart and im not talking about fights on Valentines-Day"
~~Pretty good. Last line didn't have a diss really.

"Im so confident my last bar will knock I just threw in a filler-pun
Its kinda funny that I don't have an alias and I still proved im D-Illar-1"
~~lol. Really funny. That top line killed me with laughter. This is creative as hell. Good ending. I can see how some people might not like it, but I did.




Constructive Criticism
For D-Illar 1: You've got great multis. They're really improved a lot. Props. But I'd have to say that some of your lines have way too many words. It's almost as if one of your lines is long enough to be an entire bar. And the last thing is don't be too complicated because that could cost you some votes. Try to make it so they can read all the way through without having to stop.

For DigitILL: Your multis need some work. You should only put the dashes if all the syllables match up. Ironically this was the problem Frankie used to have a while ago. Here's an example:
Frankie:Teeth-intact; Seeing-That; Being-Wack
You: Philanthropist; Named-ImPissed
But I have nothing against you because you're a vet. I just think you had an off day. Everybody can't be at their maximum at all times. I think you mighta had a little writer's block because you had to sort of feed off one of his bars, and besides your finisher, there wasn't much in between. No beef


Vote: D-Illar 1




Imma have to agree with this comment it was very well descriptive and so fourth to that nature...and i read yall verses like 2 times just to be accurate in my decision and i gunna have to roll with...


vote-Illar

He has improved alot his verse was mad nice and digi ya verse was mad nice but i think illa came just a little nicer in certain spots



GOOD BATTLE YOU GUYS!!!!

peace

I won't accept that vote...no quotes...i think we've been over this...

Yea, Dae. Unless you explain it VERY well, I don't think Pissed would let it count.

D-ILLAR

If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/\4


That bar was just CRAZY and i liked it nice personal nice touch to it points for
D-ILLAR


"Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!" - D illa again


very nice

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DIGI!


"I-doubt-ya-age, you're 15? How come ya mom still calls you butter-cup?
Step-right down son cuz I took ya left shoe and you still a runner-up!"

^ i thought that was funny!!!

"Ha ha I beat this charity case, paid for his funeral and got labeled a philanthropist
Im reppin' Canada eh and the title's been heading North since the champ was named-ImPissed!!!"
~~You shouldn't have put a dash between "named" and "ImPissed"- Digi

Very very nice mutli to me i couldnt do that proper lol!

but i liked D-ILLAR-1 Why????

Delivery: Illar his delivery was crazy digis was cool
Punches: TIE YALL BOTH KILLED IT
Creativity: TIE YALL BOTH KILLED IT
Personals: Illar Killed it with personals in my eyes he went all out lol very deepth and very descriptive
Mutlis: eehhhh i would give this DIGI some of illar's wasnt all that but its was still good
Overal Enjoyment: TIE

i voted and i read the verses twice trust me it was hard but you both did a good job...and you can see the time and effort in your work

GOOD BATTLE GUYS!

Vote: D-ILLAR-1

Don't need to be name-calling but like {vomiting} at his {own feet}, his {spits} are why this lames-{falling}\/
^understand what you were thinking but wordplay could've been better.

You can name-all-{men} that you {fucked up} because Dig's a {gay writer} like {James-Baldwin!}*/\2
^don't like the play off fucked up men but i guess it's a punch.

So weak you take a beating-in-spars-man, and ya wouldn't make a {famous partner} if you {teamed-up-with-Carson}\/
If ya needing-a-bar-man, look for {Con~vict} because it's obvious you like to {team}-with-a-{larcen}***/\4
^good personal, could hit harder.

You just bel-low wack rhymes so boo's come mel-low so stick to Kardinal repping Canada in~stead-tho\/
Do as I said-yo; I'm a {dicitonary} so the only way you {beyond me} is if ya {name} was {Mead-ow}****/\5
^i wouldn't really say the meadow dictionary thing was a good metaphor to use.

Let's check-this-more, he's taking L's because Dig is like {crashing} into a {brothel} the way I {wreck-this-whore}\/
So you can for~get-this-or die because the only RW things you own is a high Tetris-score!!/\6
^best punch in the verse.

i just felt DigitIlls verse a little more , i can tell iller-1 tried but some of the punches were not hard as they should've been here.

flow=dig / punches=dig / personals=iller-1 / wordplay=dig /
metaphors=dig / multis=iller-1 / structure=dig /

overall i just think digitIll took it.

4-4
one more

blah, nevermind, tek just pulled out so since ya both checked in & dropped on time and its a 4-4 tie at the moment....ya both advancing....congrats to both