View Full Version : Round 1 Brooklyn Mami vs. Fixion


Dominate
02-09-2004, 02:03 AM
12-24 lines
3-0 ko or 5 votes to win
no hate/dickride/crew/unexplained/dumb votes
sign in by 11.59pm GMT thursday 12th feb
verses in by 11.59pm GMT sunday 15th feb

good luck!

BrooklynMaMi
02-09-2004, 08:46 PM
...Check-n...

Fixion.
02-10-2004, 04:26 PM
...Ate..Yes Im here..

Fixion.
02-14-2004, 10:21 PM
..What a Fake..
G'luck Az..

Shouldnt curse young'n, your ma will see n' then the beatin starts
Neglected cuz we only wanna see a 'Blue Angel' when heatin farts*
Shes a satisfied customer; come back for a 2nd round in wit Fix
N' puttin the phone to her puss is only when dudes poundin her clit
S.Devour wishin he was half of Fix or does this bitch not speak fractions
'Lesbian schizo', cuz tryna get at herself is the only time she'll see action*
Fix is dangerous, always comes hard at ya chest leavin ya T's drenched
Az's useless, like broken telephone cords, she struggles when she Sprints*
Down low? Dudes wont dive in dae, her flow its gettin choppy kid
Say she from Bk, cuz it didnt 'work down south' like Az jocking quiz*
I dont need to bring the 'Tek-in', Fix drops combos gettin double hits in (Tekken)
Jus scrible somethin,Az is like jammed printers, cuz she has trouble spittin
Holds no weight, Az's punches are as weak as her aud-ios
Verses like her hips cept she got more stretched lines then her body holds*

* in order..
Her SN is Blueeyedangel
She wanted to face herself..Az vs. BKMa..she has so many personalities..make the connection
Sprint is a phone company..Az always on the phone wit dudes
Az is from the south..not Bk
And finally..her lines are stretched out the asshole
Stretched lines equals stretch marks..

BrooklynMaMi
02-15-2004, 04:13 AM
I'm always kinda ruthless bitch a happy killer slashin many throats!//
Last time we battled in the vet area you got slepted on and didnt cash any votes!//
Might've has no showed stop with your whoopi goldberg flow your a ghostwritten hoe!//
Like bunge jumpers at stadiums baby im coming off the dome!//
While fixion spits weaker personals than single ad's written on foam!//
Thought i told ja hoe merked that ass proper had you quiting your own crew//
Yur Worst Enemy is here and im not talking about me but the emcee who ghostwrote for u//
8 days to come at 1 dae and still lose dog if i was you i would ask for some help again dude!//
My lyrics blind side you like RAY CHARLES driving buses for downtown Ny metroplis//
What? You think cause you posted above me you actually got a chance to top this?//
I'm the reason why your team second guessing your raps dont make me grab the -tek-//
Put holes in ya neck the size of quaters this is beyond the bases of slaughter beatch//
Just for ya INFO in fear of my lyrical crusa-FIXION cause he betta be scared to cross me//
Cause your from canada u aint hard like washin Polo's with snuggles your just a SOFT T//
You took this battle serious tried your best and it simply wasnt hard!//
But you could always flow to death well maybe if your arteries were clogged!//
My flows pressurized 1000liters up to ya temples and then pierce ya pupils with pencils!//
Fixion couldnt have a trace of my illness if i fucking let him borrow my rhyming stencils!!!!!//
Your a fucking imposter imitatin usin mothergoose hooks to send me rhymes!//
Your commas(,,) are like cocaine overdoses you used way to many lines!//
Leaving binding trails of your blood your just a nusense i shoot photos of you blowin dicks like they chew sticks!//
Ya rep is threw wit when i print copies and pass them out as if they were fucking POWDER PIMPIN EXCLUSIVES!//
Everyone know MERK IS GAY (http://www.geocities.com/rw_merk_files)....two members bite (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11224&highlight=Biters) the one is ghostwritten with a bat up his ass!//
When i win this tourney i suggest you run to the AZERDAE SELF DEFENSE CLASS!//

cause hunnie you need it bad!!!!!!!!!


THE GHOSTWRITTEN SHIT NEVER HAPPEN LOL!!!!! I was around when INFO was asking people what they think about his raps when he wasnt very secure and me and ywe talked and he said he neva GHOST WROTE But he would just tell em what he didnt like and shit i just STRETCHED THE TRUTH!!! LOL

sorry i was just hyped for the moment...and now to explain...



LINES

2- talks about the 1st battle we had he lost didnt get any votes..
6- he looked like he quit he said he didnt but um yea... he deleted his whole sig then came back like 5 days later on sum I HAD DRAMA IN MY LIFE SHIT LOL

blah

the -tek- line is talkin about how his member in his crew voted for me and him not.....
the next line INFO was his real rap name then it later changed to FIXION

~K!LLA 4tZ~
02-15-2004, 04:49 PM
Shouldnt curse young'n, your ma will see n' then the beatin starts
Neglected cuz we only wanna see a 'Blue Angel' when heatin farts*

lol ok, starts and farts? never seen that b4...lol

Shes a satisfied customer; come back for a 2nd round in wit Fix
N' puttin the phone to her puss is only when dudes poundin her clit

lmao nice

S.Devour wishin he was half of Fix or does this bitch not speak fractions
'Lesbian schizo', cuz tryna get at herself is the only time she'll see action*

lmfao burnt...

Fix is dangerous, always comes hard at ya chest leavin ya T's drenched
Az's useless, like broken telephone cords, she struggles when she Sprints*

not relly feeling this...

Down low? Dudes wont dive in dae, her flow its gettin choppy kid
Say she from Bk, cuz it didnt 'work down south' like Az jocking quiz*

if i was american id prolly get this more...

I dont need to bring the 'Tek-in', Fix drops combos gettin double hits in (Tekken)
Jus scrible somethin,Az is like jammed printers, cuz she has trouble spittin

nice punch

Holds no weight, Az's punches are as weak as her aud-ios
Verses like her hips cept she got more stretched lines then her body holds*

That is a nicepersonal too...



I'm always kinda ruthless bitch a happy killer slashin many throats!//
Last time we battled in the vet area you got slepted on and didnt cash any votes!//
Might've has no showed stop with your whoopi goldberg flow your a ghostwritten hoe!//
Like bunge jumpers at stadiums baby im coming off the dome!//

the 1st line was :Scash in votes? and i wasnt feelin this at all..

While fixion spits weaker personals than single ad's written on foam!//
Thought i told ja hoe merked that ass proper had you quiting your own crew//
Yur Worst Enemy is here and im not talking about me but the emcee who ghostwrote for u//
8 days to come at 1 dae and still lose dog if i was you i would ask for some help again dude!//
lol nice 3rd line... pretty ouchie.

My lyrics blind side you like RAY CHARLES driving buses for downtown Ny metroplis//
What? You think cause you posted above me you actually got a chance to top this?//
I'm the reason why your team second guessing your raps dont make me grab the -tek-//
Put holes in ya neck the size of quaters this is beyond the bases of slaughter beatch//
Just for ya INFO in fear of my lyrical crusa-FIXION cause he betta be scared to cross me//
last line wasthe best here, the rest seemed filler and thetop this line was played...

Cause your from canada u aint hard like washin Polo's with snuggles your just a SOFT T//
You took this battle serious tried your best and it simply wasnt hard!//
But you could always flow to death well maybe if your arteries were clogged!//
My flows pressurized 1000liters up to ya temples and then pierce ya pupils with pencils!//
that just didnt rhyme at all. or is it just me?

Fixion couldnt have a trace of my illness if i fucking let him borrow my rhyming stencils!!!!!//
Your a fucking imposter imitatin usin mothergoose hooks to send me rhymes!//
Your commas(,,) are like cocaine overdoses you used way to many lines!//
Leaving binding trails of your blood your just a nusense i shoot photos of you blowin dicks like they chew sticks!//

the last lines an attempted pesonal i think? the commas line wass new to me.. pretty cool.the rest seemd a lil :S mother goose?

Ya rep is threw wit when i print copies and pass them out as if they were fucking POWDER PIMPIN EXCLUSIVES!//
Everyone know MERK IS GAY ....two members bite the one is ghostwritten with a bat up his ass!//
When i win this tourney i suggest you run to the AZERDAE SELF DEFENSE CLASS!//

exclusive, bat up his ass? didnot rhyme... this was kinda weak, no real truth to many of the linesas far as i could tell and the rhyme was a bit iffy too...

no hate... just overall i thought your verse was weaker than fix's...

vote fix, from the breakdown i actually did think fix took this... dae seemed to just ramble and use alot of filler... and her lines/structure was messy as hell...

vote fix.

Aero
02-15-2004, 06:02 PM
Fixion:
'Lesbian schizo', cuz tryna get at herself is the only time she'll see action
^^ Okay...Basic Diss

Verses like her hips cept she got more stretched lines then her body
^^ Could be a true personal physically and rhyme-wise so I liked it

Brooklyn:

u aint hard like washin Polo's with snuggles your just a SOFT T
^^ Nice Basic WordPlay

Delivery: Fix.. Some lines were Dae's rhythmic pattern was off
Personals: Tie.. Both had 'em but weren't used right
Creativity:Brooklyn Mami..
Punches:ehh... Fix..
Complexity: Both had it.. Both Sucked at it.. Tie..

Vote:Fixion

Rationale: Fix was better in most categories. Better punches with good delivery led to a better verse. Dae had good creativity but nothing outstanding that could have won this for her...

Royalty
02-15-2004, 10:48 PM
killa u broke it up in the wrong order.....lol completely fucked it up some rhymed three sum rhymed twice....2-0 up.

D-Illar-1
02-16-2004, 12:53 AM
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: Fix
Multies: Tie
Personals/Disses: Tie
Flow: Fix
Enjoyment: Fix

Vote: Fix. For the simple fact that he had the better wordplay and flow. I also enjoyed his verse better seeing as to how it wasn't any stretched lines which led to excellent flow. Dae had stretched lines in her verse, which made the flowing harder, which made it harder to enjoy. Everything else was about equal to me.


Fix is dangerous, always comes hard at ya chest leavin ya T's drenched
Az's useless, like broken telephone cords, she struggles when she Sprints*
Down low? Dudes wont dive in dae, her flow its gettin choppy kid
Say she from Bk, cuz it didnt 'work down south' like Az jocking quiz*
I dont need to bring the 'Tek-in', Fix drops combos gettin double hits in (Tekken)
^^I was feeling that. Nice...


Your a fucking imposter imitatin usin mothergoose hooks to send me rhymes!//
Your commas(,,) are like cocaine overdoses you used way to many lines!//
Leaving binding trails of your blood your just a nusense i shoot photos of you blowin dicks like they chew sticks!//
Ya rep is threw wit when i print copies and pass them out as if they were fucking POWDER PIMPIN EXCLUSIVES!//
Everyone know MERK IS GAY ....two members bite the one is ghostwritten with a bat up his ass!//
When i win this tourney i suggest you run to the AZERDAE SELF DEFENSE CLASS!//
^^This is what I felt the most from Dae's verse. The flow was decent in this section and the personals and punches were nice.

Vote: Fix VOTE ON D-Illar-1 vs. DigitILL IN HERE!

Fixion.
02-16-2004, 12:59 PM
..Over..3-0..


Good try Az..

Good Match..

.Inphinite.
02-16-2004, 01:21 PM
Fix advances to round 2.

Good Battle..!