12-24 lines
no biting/recycling/feeding
no crew/hate/dickride/unexplained/stupid votes
check in by Monday 23rd 11.59pm GMT
drop verse by Wenesday 25th 11.59pm GMT
3-0 ko or 5 to win, failing that who ever has the most votes at 11.59pm GMT Saturday 28th wins

Good luck

~checkin'...

...uppin 2nd round~

i....am.....in.....

Sup man, you dropping anytime soon?

Letme know... cuz i really cant be fucked to write if you aint dropping...

You've-Lots-To-Prove - This-Dukez Weak Cuz In this Battle I Only Need 'To-Drop-A-Few'
Im Too-Hot-To-Lose You Cant Stop-Me-Dude Cuz Youll Only Make It 1st By Being The 'Pre-Lude'
Cuz When Fews On the Scene We Drop-And-Snooze,This Kids A-Poof And Few Admitted It Too! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13459)
Ill Enough To Rip Fews Neck-in-2 - Ill Do It-For-You Just So You Make The 'Head-Line-News'
Ya 'Tasteless' Like Old Gum That-Chews,Fews So Fat-Wack-And 'Dense' he Can-Catch-Cats In 'Orbit'
This Is Galactic So Be a Sport-Kid Cuz Face-It You Wont Spit 'Tight' Wit Jaws Wrapped In-Elastic
Spastic-Talks-Shit,You Aint Infinite Cos 4tz Puts an End to your World Like a Personal Apocalypse
My Flows 'Electric' And I Blow up 'Fuse' Ya 'Static' Bitch cant Touch me Ya Feeling The 'Shocks'
Ya Pulse-Stops Like Fat Men Wit To many Hot-Dogs ya Times out,Like We Exceeded 12 on the Clock
Get Back On The Ward With-Ya-Birth-Rights,When Ya Parents Named Ya,Only Time Ya Hear-The-Word-Mic(Mike)
Get Out My Site You Lost To That Bitch-Dae cuz battling 4tz is Triple Penetration - Ya Fucked in Every Way...


Prelude - Comes before the main thing, its like a sneak preview that isnt half as good as the main thing... Get it?
Fuse is few And its also the thing that regulates electric flow.
Orbit and the chewing gum line... you get stuck in orbit, orbits a make of chewing gum,space and the denser object attracting the not so dense object... simple...

I think you'll get the rest...

Its not Much, But Im Lazy... Looking Forward to A Good Battle..

catch it...


this 'killa's' a'Gangsta'? he shootin 'nothin but blanks' like his-pic-did/
u always miss-prick, how can u flip-it, when ur loss has already been predicted/*
4tz dont like how i twist-it, cuz no matter what...he only 'globalizin-my-name'/*2
cuz even 'StressiN' his good qualities, this Bitch just 'aggravatin'-the-game/*3
im stabilizin-this-lame, cuz this 'neutral' pussy can only spit 'singin-in-the-rain'/
killa only 'sittin'-in-my-way, cuz he cant even 'Stand HimSelf' like 'ringin-in-the-brain'/
thinkin-u-win?-shame, this punk's hits always 'come up LAST' like the River-Card/
killa cant giv'er-hard, admits his bitch...n' as 'unfortunate as his filler', he's thinner-hard/
...damn...
killa only b 'tastin good', cuz he got 'no left overs' n is askin-for'a-break/
kid claims ta b'a VET, but he only 'taken literally' when masked-n'-caped/
but bounce killa...i like 'watchin-u-shake', cuz 'addin up ur punches' dont mean that THEY-COUNT/
n' u got 'reason to doubt' ur abilities...u only over 'mIc', cuz u saw the pole and wanted ta-MOUNT/
n' understand u only 'phelt(felt) at the table', cuz u gettin 'Played-On'/
and refusin ta leave 'The Hard Rock Cafe' is killa's way of StayiN-StronG/
but 4tz convinced he belongs...killa figures 'he can only move forward' AS A ROOK/*4
only 'hot'-cooked, but killa's 'happy as can be' cuz he knows he 'gettin a SECOND'-^look^!!!/
n' where u headed as-a-crook? cuz killa...im simply dissin ya even 'in-BARS'/
and 4tz couldnt hope for a 'positive' outcome, if the bitch was put in-'charge'/*5


(his pic is blank)
*-check 2nd round predictions from BEEF THREAD
*2-GLOBAL MICS...my name's MIKE...globalizin my name
*3-stressin = aggrevatin.....(simple...lol)
*4-IN CHESS....rooks can only move forward (or sideways n back, yea..i no)
*5- a charge = positive/negative, couldnt hope for positive...u get it
.......rest im sure u'll understand....not too much to it....



nice drop^ killa,

uppin~

nice verse, double my lines but still :(

looking for votes.

...
man^, u got 11 lines...which is kinda stupid...lol, j/k,
but sum'of 'em r really 2 lines...so u dropped like 14 or so to my 18
...(jus'ta clarify)

good battle tho ~ no beef, so g'luck...

Killa:
Cos 4tz Puts an End to your World Like a Personal Apocalypse
^^ Nice

few:
kid claims ta b'a VET, but he only 'taken literally' when masked-n'-caped
^^ Nice and Original concept.. i think

n' understand u only 'phelt(felt) at the table', cuz u gettin 'Played-On'/
Okay WordPlay

Delivery: tie.. both were off in places
Punches:ehh... I felt FEWs were better
Creativity: Few
Personals: Killa
Complexity: ehh.. FEW
vote: FEW

Rationale: Hard battle to judge by the lack of anything in it. FEW was better in most categories. Killa's personals weren't likable at all.. FEW had two punches I liked..

This was equally weak as far as DISSES go. FEW seemed to be more complexed tho. He worded his shit better and said better shit. Killa spit lines and didn't even rhyme em smh...

Punches: uhh, tie
Multis: pfttt, FEW
Wordplay: FEW
Enjoyment: none
VOTE=FEW

eh...time limits up........few advances due to having more votes