View Full Version : Semi Finals Aero -vs- Im Pissed
Dominate 03-09-2004, 04:27 AM 12-24 lines
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no biting/recycling/feeding
check in by 11.59pm GMT Thursday 11th
drop verse by 11.59pm GMT Saturday 13th
first to 5 votes or 3-0 TKO or failing that the person with the highest number of votes at 11.59pm GMT Tuesday 16th will win.
Dominate 03-09-2004, 04:27 AM check.....
:( ......^......
*Pimp Smirk*
Dominate 03-12-2004, 11:12 PM this hoes a gelding and Im homophobic so watch as I smoke n melt him
Was gunna do a “U lost to someone” line but all the options were overwhelming
promotes himself quick like “Im nice b*tch!” …Trick!! You a joke honest
and the way you hide ‘swearing’^^ its no wonder you don’t show ‘promise’!!!*
You don’t want it with me son ya season’s over - ya demandin service
bland with curses cuz ya lyrics hold less mass than abandoned churches!!!
Ya stagnant, worthless, if you had a purpose it’s to stand under me
Chump must be pro cigarette corporations cuz he likes fags company!!!
Lad’s up to me? Nah, he’s whack and only recognition's from talking a lot
Appalling with drops cuz judging tennis the only time he was calling the shots
straightness: all that ya not, closets open - he’s a fag and insisted on telling
Cuz he plays ‘on the utha side’ n I don’t mean when he listens to Nelly!!**
Im above you! Like CFCs im fuckin air up, tear guts when I envoke spills
Could be good wit TV controllers but you wouldn’t have remote skill!
ya no thrill my flows ill so when a track's dope its usually when im on it
truthfully and honest kid you've seen more 'boos' than alcoholics (booze)
I'll bruise you wit the phonics and rip and serve ya fickle verbs
shouldn’t expect big terms from him cuz aero’s a man of 'little' words
u christened a herb...skills? You the nadir - put simply you under me dunny
cuz selling me chicken pens the only way I get a 'run' for my money!!!!!
ya done, & its funny, left punctured and bloody Im holdin the weapon
foldin ya efforts cuz ya drive only gets a thumbs up from hitch hikers goin to heaven
boldest expressions, I flow with aggression demented wit killa verbals
victorious? forming a crew with me the only way u enter the Winner's circle
*whenever aero drops a cuss word he covers it with a * (eg. f*ck) ...... its cute :p
**utha side = nelly track, he likes nelly god help him....
D-Illar-1 03-12-2004, 11:56 PM Sick verse Pissed. Expecting an ill battle.
Upping for Aero.
Die! Once I'm keying, hehe, I laugh seeing you flash in a suddle-fleeing
I've won this meeting, cuz you'll only Stay up if you're having trouble sleeping
Snuff then beat him for presumptous pleeding, he's not the best to mod
cuz his head has got, bigger, Dayum Pissed you got the threads on lock!! :rolleyes:
I think not, ink blot, I'm the truest to take the title with ease and strut
3 wins, and pissed wants another Topping like the newest item at Pizza Hut*
I'll be brief and such beat him up with punches, yeah I'm brining the left hooks
His reps-shook, way Aero stay on Pissed u'd think he had a thing for the Prep look!!
I stress rooks, this homo type left Global Mics for these rights and reasons
Was a wack textcee, and like bad Cell plans couldn't Free nights and weekends
A serene win, for me, you shouldn't go outside because then air will hurt you
& The board would like u more if u promised fewer lines like skin commercials!!
It's controversial, how I embarras the mod, and then dare to floss
Impair this Aus, make it easier & bring it his capitol so he Canberra Loss**
Aero's boss!! and a candidate for a legend so what you see nominate
No time to waste, cuz like football cheers I got you in 1-2-3 Dominate!! ***
Ya Dunn like the Falcon running back sonned infact it's sad ya writs tossed
At this loft, I'm usually nice but in this tourney I just had to get Pissed-Off
Sh*t's Awf-ul, don't debate my spars just relate how I elevate the stars
Doesn't take much, only have to control 2 lines to seperate your bars!!****
Don't ever hate ya are, gay, blowing ya men, I promise u'll never be flowing again
Cuz only way being Optimistic will get you four-words is saying "You're going to win" (forwards)
* Pizza Hut has the 4 for all... If i win it'll be my 4th over him
** Canberra (can bear a)... Australian Capitol
*** Dominate is his alias.. beat him in 3 votes
**** If you highlight and press ctrl .. then 2 you double the lines
Yur Worst Enemy 03-13-2004, 05:11 PM HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA I'm going to vote on this later, I've printed it out i will read it and come back and tell you who took it!
Elldawg 03-14-2004, 05:09 PM this hoes a gelding and Im homophobic so watch as I smoke n melt him
Was gunna do a “U lost to someone” line but all the options were overwhelming
haha...nice wordplay...pretty nice punch
promotes himself quick like “Im nice b*tch!” …Trick!! You a joke honest
and the way you hide ‘swearing’^^ its no wonder you don’t show ‘promise’!!!*
ill wordplay...pretty decent punch
You don’t want it with me son ya season’s over - ya demandin service
bland with curses cuz ya lyrics hold less mass than abandoned churches!!!
lmao...ill wordplay..ill punch
Ya stagnant, worthless, if you had a purpose it’s to stand under me
Chump must be pro cigarette corporations cuz he likes fags company!!!
eeehh.... pretty nice
Lad’s up to me? Nah, he’s whack and only recognition's from talking a lot
Appalling with drops cuz judging tennis the only time he was calling the shots
aight wordplay....decent punch
straightness: all that ya not, closets open - he’s a fag and insisted on telling
Cuz he plays ‘on the utha side’ n I don’t mean when he listens to Nelly!!**
lmao...ill wordplay...nice personal
Im above you! Like CFCs im fuckin air up, tear guts when I envoke spills
Could be good wit TV controllers but you wouldn’t have remote skill!
nice wordplay... nice punch
ya no thrill my flows ill so when a track's dope its usually when im on it
truthfully and honest kid you've seen more 'boos' than alcoholics (booze)
kinda played concept...nice punch
I'll bruise you wit the phonics and rip and serve ya fickle verbs
shouldn’t expect big terms from him cuz aero’s a man of 'little' words
nicde wordplay...pretty nice punch
u christened a herb...skills? You the nadir - put simply you under me dunny
cuz selling me chicken pens the only way I get a 'run' for my money!!!!!
pretty tight
ya done, & its funny, left punctured and bloody Im holdin the weapon
foldin ya efforts cuz ya drive only gets a thumbs up from hitch hikers goin to heaven
lool..nice wordplay
boldest expressions, I flow with aggression demented wit killa verbals
victorious? forming a crew with me the only way u enter the Winner's circle
decet closer
Die! Once I'm keying, hehe, I laugh seeing you flash in a suddle-fleeing
I've won this meeting, cuz you'll only Stay up if you're having trouble sleeping
nice ulties...wasnt feelin the punch..aight opener
Snuff then beat him for presumptous pleeding, he's not the best to mod
cuz his head has got, bigger, Dayum Pissed you got the threads on lock!!
nice multies... aight punch
I think not, ink blot, I'm the truest to take the title with ease and strut
3 wins, and pissed wants another Topping like the newest item at Pizza Hut*
ill wordplay..nice personal
I'll be brief and such beat him up with punches, yeah I'm brining the left hooks
His reps-shook, way Aero stay on Pissed u'd think he had a thing for the Prep look!!
eehhh...not really feelin it
I stress rooks, this homo type left Global Mics for these rights and reasons
Was a wack textcee, and like bad Cell plans couldn't Free nights and weekends
lol...ill wordplay
A serene win, for me, you shouldn't go outside because then air will hurt you
& The board would like u more if u promised fewer lines like skin commercials!!
lol...nice wordplay
It's controversial, how I embarras the mod, and then dare to floss
Impair this Aus, make it easier & bring it his capitol so he Canberra Loss**
haha....ill wordplay..nice punch...ill personal
Aero's boss!! and a candidate for a legend so what you see nominate
No time to waste, cuz like football cheers I got you in 1-2-3 Dominate!! ***
nice wordplay...nce personal
Ya Dunn like the Falcon running back sonned infact it's sad ya writs tossed
At this loft, I'm usually nice but in this tourney I just had to get Pissed-Off
wasnt feelin it too much
Sh*t's Awf-ul, don't debate my spars just relate how I elevate the stars
Doesn't take much, only have to control 2 lines to seperate your bars!!****
nice
Don't ever hate ya are, gay, blowing ya men, I promise u'll never be flowing again
Cuz only way being Optimistic will get you four-words is saying "You're going to win" (forwards)
ill wordplay... nice finisher
wordplay: tie
punches: pissed
personals: aero
multies: tie
flow: tie
enjoyment: pissed
vote: pissed
reason:
he came with more consistant punches.... aero had nice personals...he had ncie punches... but...sum lines he jus show for wordplay and nopunch
Thanks for the vote/ breakdown Ell.. 0-1
Hemlok 03-14-2004, 05:52 PM Pissy:
"this hoes a gelding and Im homophobic so watch as I smoke n melt him
Was gunna do a “U lost to someone” line but all the options were overwhelming"
^ decent personal 2 open with...nice concept delivered perfectly with that pissy humour..
"promotes himself quick like “Im nice b*tch!” …Trick!! You a joke honest
and the way you hide ‘swearing’^^ its no wonder you don’t show ‘promise’!!!"
^ I swear this sh*t is tight...nice set up and real clever wordplay for a heavy personal...
"You don’t want it with me son ya season’s over - ya demandin service
bland with curses cuz ya lyrics hold less mass than abandoned churches!!!"
^ not bad, nice multi for the set up but not the most creative punch..
"Ya stagnant, worthless, if you had a purpose it’s to stand under me
Chump must be pro cigarette corporations cuz he likes fags company!!!"
^ nice try..but u get no point's of me for fag talk..
"Lad’s up to me? Nah, he’s whack and only recognition's from talking a lot
Appalling with drops cuz judging tennis the only time he was calling the shots"
^ Nice flow to it with the multi usage, and the whole set up, tho linked with wordplay, it all fits 2gether nice..but the punch again isn't the most creative..
"straightness: all that ya not, closets open - he’s a fag and insisted on telling
Cuz he plays ‘on the utha side’ n I don’t mean when he listens to Nelly!!**"
^ another fag reference, but being a concept for a personal that's alrite...obviously nice wordplay, but it's the delivery that's devastating..i'm being dramatic for no reason..enjoy it...tight punch anyways..
"Im above you! Like CFCs im fuckin air up, tear guts when I envoke spills
Could be good wit TV controllers but you wouldn’t have remote skill!"
^ blah...should've carried the cfc's/air shit in2 a punch...
"ya no thrill my flows ill so when a track's dope its usually when im on it
truthfully and honest kid you've seen more 'boos' than alcoholics (booze)"
^ I think this is pretty tight, although it seems like it should be a played concept but i can't recall seeing it anywhere...
"I'll bruise you wit the phonics and rip and serve ya fickle verbs
shouldn’t expect big terms from him cuz aero’s a man of 'little' words"
^ kinda creative, simple..not bad, but a bit filler'ish..
"u christened a herb...skills? You the nadir - put simply you under me dunny
cuz selling me chicken pens the only way I get a 'run' for my money!!!!!"
^ pretty decent..creative and sumwhat funny..
"ya done, & its funny, left punctured and bloody Im holdin the weapon
foldin ya efforts cuz ya drive only gets a thumbs up from hitch hikers goin to heaven"
^ ain't 100% sure about the concept..but the delivery is definitely nce as usual..undecided bout this really..
"boldest expressions, I flow with aggression demented wit killa verbals
victorious? forming a crew with me the only way u enter the Winner's circle"
^ i see what u've done but i don't like it really..nevermind..
Aero:
"Die! Once I'm keying, hehe, I laugh seeing you flash in a suddle-fleeing
I've won this meeting, cuz you'll only Stay up if you're having trouble sleeping"
^ pretty nice delivery..decent punch, haven't heard that concept before..
"Snuff then beat him for presumptous pleeding, he's not the best to mod
cuz his head has got, bigger, Dayum Pissed you got the threads on lock!! "
^ lol..tight delivery for a funny personal..
"I think not, ink blot, I'm the truest to take the title with ease and strut
3 wins, and pissed wants another Topping like the newest item at Pizza Hut*"
^ lol..again tight delivery for a funny personal..
"I'll be brief and such beat him up with punches, yeah I'm brining the left hooks
His reps-shook, way Aero stay on Pissed u'd think he had a thing for the Prep look!!"
^ got a smirk..this is what u do best..real clever concepts..simple yet complex..it's tight..
"I stress rooks, this homo type left Global Mics for these rights and reasons
Was a wack textcee, and like bad Cell plans couldn't Free nights and weekends"
^ nice set up and delivery..fresh concept 2...decent punch with a personal touch..
"A serene win, for me, you shouldn't go outside because then air will hurt you
& The board would like u more if u promised fewer lines like skin commercials!!"
^ lol creative and worded real decent for a nice punch...
"It's controversial, how I embarras the mod, and then dare to floss
Impair this Aus, make it easier & bring it his capitol so he Canberra Loss"
^ tight ass wordplay obviously 4 the personal...aint entirely sure about the wording tho, but clever funny shit none the less..
"Aero's boss!! and a candidate for a legend so what you see nominate
No time to waste, cuz like football cheers I got you in 1-2-3 Dominate!!"
^ worded the concept perfectly for another decent personal..
"Ya Dunn like the Falcon running back sonned infact it's sad ya writs tossed
At this loft, I'm usually nice but in this tourney I just had to get Pissed-Off"
^ Nicely worded on the concept again..feeling it..
"Sh*t's Awf-ul, don't debate my spars just relate how I elevate the stars
Doesn't take much, only have to control 2 lines to seperate your bars!!"
^ couldn't seem 2 get that ctrl shit working so i guess i'll have 2 take ur word 4 it..clever wordplay and concept i guess..but i'm just a bit lost on it..
"Don't ever hate ya are, gay, blowing ya men, I promise u'll never be flowing again
Cuz only way being Optimistic will get you four-words is saying "You're going to win" (forwards)"
^ lol..another clever concept worded real nice..good ending.
Overall, pissy just about took the personals, but lacked the creativity in his other punches that Aero had. Both are very nice at wording their punches, but Aero was definitely more consistant with his clever concepts.
Vote-Aero
Tight battle the both of you's...when you gonna beat Aero, Pissy..
Thanks Hem for the breakdown 1-1 Up...
Dominate 03-15-2004, 12:52 AM :eek:
*rubs eyes*
hem? wow....wassup man? havent seen your ugly ass in a good minute
thanks for the breakdowns & votes
Dominate 03-17-2004, 12:34 AM and thats the deadline :(
ummm.......i guess that means whoever gets the next vote advances....unless i put it in the vet arena or something for a day or two?
:mad: at the lack of voting...
-TeK- 03-17-2004, 12:36 AM indeed...................
Dominate 03-17-2004, 03:19 AM ^ enjoys the penis
-TeK- 03-17-2004, 08:16 PM ^only makes "you're gay" statements to get himself off...
ill make it a point to vote today :(
Yur Worst Enemy 03-18-2004, 11:05 AM Im Pissed
"this hoes a gelding and Im homophobic so watch as I smoke n melt him
Was gunna do a “U lost to someone” line but all the options were overwhelming"
---Funny Punchline + Personal= Good opener
"promotes himself quick like “Im nice b*tch!” …Trick!! You a joke honest
and the way you hide ‘swearing’^^ its no wonder you don’t show ‘promise’"
---Lines fit together rather well. Good personal. The "You a joke honest" was a set up though. You shoulda found something better
"You don’t want it with me son ya season’s over - ya demandin service
bland with curses cuz ya lyrics hold less mass than abandoned churches"
---Good punchline. That can even be used in a live battle. Some filler in there though.
"Ya stagnant, worthless, if you had a purpose it’s to stand under me
Chump must be pro cigarette corporations cuz he likes fags company"
---I understand it, but it wasn't too good of a punch.
"Lad’s up to me? Nah, he’s whack and only recognition's from talking a lot
Appalling with drops cuz judging tennis the only time he was calling the shots"
---Good. Kinda funny too. (Btw, Nobody says "lad" anymore)
"straightness: all that ya not, closets open - he’s a fag and insisted on telling
Cuz he plays ‘on the utha side’ n I don’t mean when he listens to Nelly"
---lol. Ouch. Good punch.
"Im above you! Like CFCs im fuckin air up, tear guts when I envoke spills
Could be good wit TV controllers but you wouldn’t have remote skill"
---Damn good punchline and the "fucking air up" line was dope. That envoke spills part just didn't seemt to connect well. Overall niceness.
"ya no thrill my flows ill so when a track's dope its usually when im on it
truthfully and honest kid you've seen more 'boos' than alcoholics (booze)"
---Once again, a verry good punch. Str8 to the point.
"I'll bruise you wit the phonics and rip and serve ya fickle verbs
shouldn’t expect big terms from him cuz aero’s a man of 'little' words"
---I see the personal, but it was a weak punch.
"u christened a herb...skills? You the nadir - put simply you under me dunny
cuz selling me chicken pens the only way I get a 'run' for my money"
---Pretty good. Better than the last punch.
"ya done, & its funny, left punctured and bloody Im holdin the weapon
foldin ya efforts cuz ya drive only gets a thumbs up from hitch hikers goin to heaven"
---Good punchline. Nice imagery, cause I was pictureing this in my head. lol. Shit made me laugh too.
"boldest expressions, I flow with aggression demented wit killa verbals
victorious? forming a crew with me the only way u enter the Winner's circle"
---lol. Nice personal, punchline, everything. Sick finisher.
Aero
"Die! Once I'm keying, hehe, I laugh seeing you flash in a suddle-fleeing
I've won this meeting, cuz you'll only Stay up if you're having trouble sleeping"
---Nice wordplay. Kinda subtle opening
"Snuff then beat him for presumptous pleeding, he's not the best to mod
cuz his head has got, bigger, Dayum Pissed you got the threads on lock"
---Not a good punch. A nice little personal though.
"I think not, ink blot, I'm the truest to take the title with ease and strut
3 wins, and pissed wants another Topping like the newest item at Pizza Hut"
---lmao! Damn. Now you're starting to go somewhere...
"I'll be brief and such beat him up with punches, yeah I'm brining the left hooks
His reps-shook, way Aero stay on Pissed u'd think he had a thing for the Prep
look"
---Good pucnh assuming you were talking about Aeropostale
"I stress rooks, this homo type left Global Mics for these rights and reasons
Was a wack textcee, and like bad Cell plans couldn't Free nights and
weekends"
---lol. Funny and a personal
"A serene win, for me, you shouldn't go outside because then air will hurt you
& The board would like u more if u promised fewer lines like skin commercials"
---Another funny one. I like this little tv approach.
"It's controversial, how I embarras the mod, and then dare to floss
Impair this Aus, make it easier & bring it his capitol so he Canberra Loss"
---Excellent wordplay, although the top line had way too much filler.
"Aero's boss!! and a candidate for a legend so what you see nominate
No time to waste, cuz like football cheers I got you in 1-2-3 Dominate"
---Another funny one, and it's personal because of the prior KO to Dominate.
"Ya Dunn like the Falcon running back sonned infact it's sad ya writs tossed
At this loft, I'm usually nice but in this tourney I just had to get Pissed-Off"
---I like the Warrick Dunn line, and the Pissed Off=usually nice fit together perfectly.
"Sh*t's Awf-ul, don't debate my spars just relate how I elevate the stars
Doesn't take much, only have to control 2 lines to seperate your bars"
---Not a good punch. You've stated the meaning, but it doesn't really make me say, "Damn"
"Don't ever hate ya are, gay, blowing ya men, I promise u'll never be flowing again
Cuz only way being Optimistic will get you four-words is saying "You're going
to win" (forwards)"
---lol. Really good finisher. Nice wordplay.
Overall
Im Pissed had some very nice punchlines. At times his lines didn't connect together too well, but nobody's perfect. Aero had the same mistake here and there but not as much as Pissed. Pissed had a much better start than Aero did. Because when I read Aero's first two lines, I really thought he was headed no where. But the difference to me, is that Pissed lost steam somewhere near the middle but regained it slightly towards the end. Whereas with Aero, it seemed after his slow start every bar was better than the last for the most part. And made for a climatic ending. Which made his verse more enjoyable. And so My Vote is for Aero
Lyrikal 03-18-2004, 06:08 PM Im Pissed
"this hoes a gelding and Im homophobic so watch as I smoke n melt him
Was gunna do a “U lost to someone” line but all the options were overwhelming"
---Funny Punchline + Personal= Good opener
"promotes himself quick like “Im nice b*tch!” …Trick!! You a joke honest
and the way you hide ‘swearing’^^ its no wonder you don’t show ‘promise’"
---Lines fit together rather well. Good personal. The "You a joke honest" was a set up though. You shoulda found something better
"You don’t want it with me son ya season’s over - ya demandin service
bland with curses cuz ya lyrics hold less mass than abandoned churches"
---Good punchline. That can even be used in a live battle. Some filler in there though.
"Ya stagnant, worthless, if you had a purpose it’s to stand under me
Chump must be pro cigarette corporations cuz he likes fags company"
---I understand it, but it wasn't too good of a punch.
"Lad’s up to me? Nah, he’s whack and only recognition's from talking a lot
Appalling with drops cuz judging tennis the only time he was calling the shots"
---Good. Kinda funny too. (Btw, Nobody says "lad" anymore)
"straightness: all that ya not, closets open - he’s a fag and insisted on telling
Cuz he plays ‘on the utha side’ n I don’t mean when he listens to Nelly"
---lol. Ouch. Good punch.
"Im above you! Like CFCs im fuckin air up, tear guts when I envoke spills
Could be good wit TV controllers but you wouldn’t have remote skill"
---Damn good punchline and the "fucking air up" line was dope. That envoke spills part just didn't seemt to connect well. Overall niceness.
"ya no thrill my flows ill so when a track's dope its usually when im on it
truthfully and honest kid you've seen more 'boos' than alcoholics (booze)"
---Once again, a verry good punch. Str8 to the point.
"I'll bruise you wit the phonics and rip and serve ya fickle verbs
shouldn’t expect big terms from him cuz aero’s a man of 'little' words"
---I see the personal, but it was a weak punch.
"u christened a herb...skills? You the nadir - put simply you under me dunny
cuz selling me chicken pens the only way I get a 'run' for my money"
---Pretty good. Better than the last punch.
"ya done, & its funny, left punctured and bloody Im holdin the weapon
foldin ya efforts cuz ya drive only gets a thumbs up from hitch hikers goin to heaven"
---Good punchline. Nice imagery, cause I was pictureing this in my head. lol. Shit made me laugh too.
"boldest expressions, I flow with aggression demented wit killa verbals
victorious? forming a crew with me the only way u enter the Winner's circle"
---lol. Nice personal, punchline, everything. Sick finisher.
Aero
"Die! Once I'm keying, hehe, I laugh seeing you flash in a suddle-fleeing
I've won this meeting, cuz you'll only Stay up if you're having trouble sleeping"
---Nice wordplay. Kinda subtle opening
"Snuff then beat him for presumptous pleeding, he's not the best to mod
cuz his head has got, bigger, Dayum Pissed you got the threads on lock"
---Not a good punch. A nice little personal though.
"I think not, ink blot, I'm the truest to take the title with ease and strut
3 wins, and pissed wants another Topping like the newest item at Pizza Hut"
---lmao! Damn. Now you're starting to go somewhere...
"I'll be brief and such beat him up with punches, yeah I'm brining the left hooks
His reps-shook, way Aero stay on Pissed u'd think he had a thing for the Prep
look"
---Good pucnh assuming you were talking about Aeropostale
"I stress rooks, this homo type left Global Mics for these rights and reasons
Was a wack textcee, and like bad Cell plans couldn't Free nights and
weekends"
---lol. Funny and a personal
"A serene win, for me, you shouldn't go outside because then air will hurt you
& The board would like u more if u promised fewer lines like skin commercials"
---Another funny one. I like this little tv approach.
"It's controversial, how I embarras the mod, and then dare to floss
Impair this Aus, make it easier & bring it his capitol so he Canberra Loss"
---Excellent wordplay, although the top line had way too much filler.
"Aero's boss!! and a candidate for a legend so what you see nominate
No time to waste, cuz like football cheers I got you in 1-2-3 Dominate"
---Another funny one, and it's personal because of the prior KO to Dominate.
"Ya Dunn like the Falcon running back sonned infact it's sad ya writs tossed
At this loft, I'm usually nice but in this tourney I just had to get Pissed-Off"
---I like the Warrick Dunn line, and the Pissed Off=usually nice fit together perfectly.
"Sh*t's Awf-ul, don't debate my spars just relate how I elevate the stars
Doesn't take much, only have to control 2 lines to seperate your bars"
---Not a good punch. You've stated the meaning, but it doesn't really make me say, "Damn"
"Don't ever hate ya are, gay, blowing ya men, I promise u'll never be flowing again
Cuz only way being Optimistic will get you four-words is saying "You're going
to win" (forwards)"
---lol. Really good finisher. Nice wordplay.
Overall
Im Pissed had some very nice punchlines. At times his lines didn't connect together too well, but nobody's perfect. Aero had the same mistake here and there but not as much as Pissed. Pissed had a much better start than Aero did. Because when I read Aero's first two lines, I really thought he was headed no where. But the difference to me, is that Pissed lost steam somewhere near the middle but regained it slightly towards the end. Whereas with Aero, it seemed after his slow start every bar was better than the last for the most part. And made for a climatic ending. Which made his verse more enjoyable. And so My Vote is for Aero
^Im with YWE, said everythin i was thinkin....
Vote=Aero
Dominate 03-19-2004, 01:16 AM ^^quoted votes are a no-no
2-1 aero
but he advances cuz the deadline's gone...
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