16-32 lines
no biting/recycling/feeding
no dickride/hate/unexplained/stupid votes
check in by 11.59GMT sunday 21st March
drop verse by 11.59GMT wednesday 24th March
5 to win or 3-0 KO

good luck, and come ill....

czechoslovakia...

ok..............

I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig
The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's
Re-Treat! like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo
Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote
Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here
I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move
ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion
I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers
Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines
You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First

My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift?/
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift!/
This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13536) like he accompanies-exertion/ (Arrid dry)
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/ (fedex,ups)
U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/
Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=17078&page=5&pp=10)!!!/
U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you?/
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you!/
Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/
U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and :( at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/ (comin back for seconds)
This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste/
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace!!!/
I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/ (fuck in Nissan)
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/(he uses *** for swear words)
And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til...
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13964)/

..


Nice verse Dig..real nice

and Aero..

:(..

^edit that...don't sway anything please...

thanks

..Its not swaying at all..
I see it as a matter of opinion..


Other people could think a totally diff way..

come on Mayne.. The Last Personal part?.. seems like Feeding to me

how is it feeding?...its my last personal on you....i dont understand how it could even be considered feeding...

^ Mayne.. u copied my whole verse and put it in there... 8 mins earlier then when u dropped ya verse..

Aero

"I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig"
--lol. Funny opener. I kinda forgot both of yall was in that crew. *shrug*

"The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's"
--Not a very good bar. Too much filler on the top line. Forced

"Re-Treat like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo"
--lol. Funny, and good personal.

"Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote"
--This made me chuckle. Another funny one. Nice and simple, but still creative.

"Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here
--Good multis. Punch is lacking though.

"I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move"
--whoa. Very good punch. Defintiely makes up for the last one. Personal too.

"ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion"
--Personal. But ehhh, it didn't really do it for me.

"I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers"
--Good punchline. Tad bit of setuppy filler though.

"Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines"
--Very good. Multis all fit together nicely. Good wordplay with "more pussy" and also with "outta Juice". This was a pretty hard bar.

"You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First"
--I like the Vacation home-Second place part. Very good wordplay. And nice line at the end, although it's been used a lot. Especially on 106 & Park. Overall decent ending.



DigitILL

"My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift"
--Not a good opener. Nice multis. But there was no real punch. It's just basically telling the audience what you're about to do.

"This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion(Arrid dry)
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging" (fedex,ups)
--Good wordplay with Fedex and UPS. Clever. I wouldn't have used that Arrid Dry because it's not close enough in it's sound.

"U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured"
--C ya is a played concept. Thank-memories part was cool. But it wasn't a diss.

"Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe"
--OMG!! Viscious! Lenny and Carl are the dudes on the Simpson's who frequent Moe's tavern. Jesus Christ! That's a good punch/ personal. Ouch..

"U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you"
--So so. Top line was filler. Okay diss though.

"Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one"
--Good wordplay. Once again, your top part had a little filler

"U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks
My punching-rocks and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-
clocks"
--Good wordplay. Strong punchline. Nice diss.

"This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace"
--Good wordplay.

"I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars (fuck in Nissan)
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars"
--lol. Damn. Funny as hell man. Definitely a good personal. Everybody knows how Aero does that little gay thing with the stars as if his computer won't allow him to curse or something.

"And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal"
--Horrible. This took down the value of the verse. That top part was filler, and it wasn't a good punch at all!

Overall
Aero was slacking. Defintiely slacking. You seriously underestimated DigitILL but you did manage to come through with the usual consistently good verse. There was never a part in where you fell off for more than 1 bar, and overall it was a very good verse by normal standards. DigitILL's verse was on the exact same level. Good personals. That "Served by Moe's" line was the best punchline I've heard this month. Easily. But there were too many times in which you forced wordplay, and that last part made me not vote for you. Making a personal? wtf is that? That's a no-no. And it is sort of like feeding off his verse because if you went first you wouldn't have been able to do it.


I was going to vote for Dig up until the end of his verse... but overall I think Aero took this. Better consistency. I Vote for Aero

Good Battle. Nice Fight....

Thanks for the explanation/breakdown/vote YWE... 1-0

..Aero..

"I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig"
Aight, this wasnt the greatest..I didnt get at first..cuz I forgot who AP was

"The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's"
Played right here..

"Re-Treat like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo"
This was an aiight personal..decent punch

"Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote"
Hmm, didnt really like this..it was ok

"Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here
This was sick tho, I liked this shit..Very creative

"I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move"
This was nice, personal and all..Cool punch

"ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion"
Weak, weak weak..Definitely did not like man..

"I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers"
This was cool, pretty coo punch..

"Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines"
Uhh, didnt really like this..it was ok tho

"You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First"
This was cool, nice punch..


DigitILL

"My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift"
Didnt really get this..

"This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion(Arrid dry)
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging" (fedex,ups)
This was decent..

"U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured"
Haha, this was nice..the C thing is played but second line was nice..

"Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe"
DEFINITELY, took it right here, sick punch..All the connections and shit..

"U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you"
This was sick too, I liked this shit..nice punch

"Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one"
Wow, nice shit..

"U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks
My punching-rocks and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-
clocks"
This was coo too..

"This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace"
Nice wordplay..nice shit..

"I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars (fuck in Nissan)
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars"
This is where I laughed..
Fuckin funny ass shit..

"And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal"
Meh, didnt really get this..it was *puts thumbs down*

Overall
Aight, it all came down to this, who had funnier punches n' shit and I honestly that Aero woulda ate him, but again he proves he cant be as consistent as he should be. What I saw in this was a lot of complexity coming from Digit..which I really liked. This is what did it for me, I didnt get a lot of Aeros shit for the fact it was too generic..

In conclusion I think Aero coulda came harder n' took this..
But, Dig did well and ate him..

Good battle ladies..
Vote..DigitILL..

Thanks for the vote.. 1-1

*is mad because his ¾ done breakdown just died along with the computer*

im doing the whole thing again though, you’d better love me….

I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig
:eek: OUCH!! Veeerrrrry tight punch, excellent opener…

The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's

decent……I dunno about ‘sees’ though, its kinda ambiguous with the ‘not on the same level’ thing….which is what I thought at first……

Re-Treat! like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo

nahhh, seems too obvious to not be accompanied by wordplay, or taken from a more creative angle

Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote

LOL, funny line……would’ve been better at a different place in the verse though…..there’s somewhat of a lack of wordplay by now

Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here

ehh……decent……

I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move

theeere we go, good personal, wordplay, punch….nice line

ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion

not bad……not great…

I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers

LOL, funny line, me likes

Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines

funny line, creative

You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies

you got in just before me with that second place line biyyatch! Decent closer……got a smirk, though ive seen similar lines, not overly played though…



Dig:

My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift?/
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift!/

first line coulda been worded better….second line was yuck……unless im missing something……

This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion/ (Arrid dry)
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/ (fedex,ups)

I prolly woulda liked it, but ive heard the wordplay in a joke ages ago……and Iunno about punches talking……

U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/

LOL, very nice line, good creativity, wordplay, punch, multis

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/

didn’t like it……came off extremely corny to me……

U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you?/
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you!/

okaaaay line……

Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/

pretty good, I thought of something similar in my battle……

U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/ (comin back for seconds)

pretty good personal……

This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste/
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace!!!/

ehhh…aero-something lines have been done…… though it was one of the better ones

I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/ (fuck in Nissan)
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/(he uses *** for swear words)

decent……not too original……but an ok personal……

And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til...
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal/

……??

no…..yuck…..




overall:

flow – aero, more consistent and better placed multis
delivery – aero, better wording and slightly better linkage
rhyme schemes – aero……dig had plenty of internal shit, but aero did too, with the addition of more multis……and more creative schemes
wordplay – dig by a little……aero didn’t come with the onslaught of this he usually does……dig was a bit more complex with it and brought it more consistently
punches – aero……cant go past that first line……was more consistent with lines I liked…
creativity – aero – more original more consistently
enjoyment – aero

vote – aero

inched ahead in most categories and had an :eek: line

good battle

Yeah we do love ya mayne.. thanks for the break down and vote IP.. 2-1..^

I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig

Ehh... Weak Opener, Didn't really fit together, 1st of all your giving props to his crew, lol @ mike one tho, they gettin quite played tho, quite plain imo.

The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's

seemed kind of forced, the first one was a bit of a filler, could have been improved a lot more.

Re-Treat! like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo

nuh uh, i see what you tryna do, but it didn't turn out as what i think you were tryna make it into.

Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote

-only a good punch i can say to this..at this point this rhyme is somewhat being quite Rye, there is nothing that has interested me so far.. oh well.. on we go..

Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here

hahaha, this was nice, the multies was nice, ^^ the rest of the verse shoulda been something like that, the personal was pretty nice, and playin on the DMX idea, was pretty kewl too

I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move

LOL. Damn, this was niceness.. the punch and the imagery was pretty nice, the personal was kind of ehhhhhhhhh...

ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion

LOL!! Shit, This was an excellent personal, what else can i say.. erm.. any feed is that it would be worded better so it would be easier to read

I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers

Played, this isn't what i would expect in a final, nothing special, felt like this was a pure filler

Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines

Lol. Nice idea, quite creative, whats with the censoring of the words tho? doesnt matter, it didn't affect nothin'

You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First

aha, not worthy of any more credit than that, i think the closer reflected most of the other verse, explained later..

My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift?/
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift!/

Aha, Nice opener, kind of scene setting, felt this was somewhat different from the other lines

This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion/
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/

Ooohh, LOL. This was a nice bar with nice wordplay and vocab, this was the only one that i found humorous so far on what i'v read, nice one

U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/

Ehh.. ahahaha, nice one, i thought wtf when i read it first but the second time i read it i was like Ohhh got it now.. haha, nice one.

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/

LMAO! Excellent Personal, Goddamn, favourite bar out of this verse, nice playin on the simpsons linnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnne

U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you?/
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you!/

LMAO. Fucking Harsh, but good punch.. nice, this is what a battle about

Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/

Ohh Shiitt.. Lmao. excellent personal again, aer force one, lmao, excellent personal, it just keeps getting better, wordd

U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/

hahhaha complex, i was readin this an thought about it, kind of hard to grasp but when you get it , its clever and funny

This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste/
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace!!!/

felt this was a pure filler imo.. nothin else about this

I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/

DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNN. Excellent, this bar fucked up half of aero's verse, thats all ima say, goddamn, you could have played on it better like aero dynamics in cars or whatever, get me? anyways might be my punch of tha month

And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til...
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal/

Lol.. This was Actually A closer.. nice one

Aero: I felt your material that you came up with wasn't tourney final at all, iv seen you do a lot better. there was an odd line that was like LOL, but most of that was filler, the only thing i can praise on this was good structure.. the personals were aiight.. and as i said in the bars i was commenting on, could have been worded better

Dig: WOW, that was simply a HOT verse, what more can i say.. everything was perfect, the only thing i suggest is a bit of multies and that's all i can say really,, pfft .. amazing..


Flow: Aero
Comedy: Dig
Multi: Aero
Punches: Aero
Wordplay: Dig
Personals: Dig
Complexity: Dig
Overall: Dig

Vote - Dig

I said, hopefully this would turn out better than i expected, like Dig giving aero some competition, and it happened..

I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig

Ehh... Weak Opener, Didn't really fit together, 1st of all your giving props to his crew, lol @ mike one tho, they gettin quite played tho, quite plain imo.

The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's

seemed kind of forced, the first one was a bit of a filler, could have been improved a lot more.

Re-Treat! like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo

nuh uh, i see what you tryna do, but it didn't turn out as what i think you were tryna make it into.

Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote

-only a good punch i can say to this..at this point this rhyme is somewhat being quite Rye, there is nothing that has interested me so far.. oh well.. on we go..

Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here

hahaha, this was nice, the multies was nice, ^^ the rest of the verse shoulda been something like that, the personal was pretty nice, and playin on the DMX idea, was pretty kewl too

I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move

LOL. Damn, this was niceness.. the punch and the imagery was pretty nice, the personal was kind of ehhhhhhhhh...

ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion

LOL!! Shit, This was an excellent personal, what else can i say.. erm.. any feed is that it would be worded better so it would be easier to read

I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers

Played, this isn't what i would expect in a final, nothing special, felt like this was a pure filler

Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines

Lol. Nice idea, quite creative, whats with the censoring of the words tho? doesnt matter, it didn't affect nothin'

You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First

aha, not worthy of any more credit than that, i think the closer reflected most of the other verse, explained later..

My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift?/
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift!/

Aha, Nice opener, kind of scene setting, felt this was somewhat different from the other lines

This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion/
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/

Ooohh, LOL. This was a nice bar with nice wordplay and vocab, this was the only one that i found humorous so far on what i'v read, nice one

U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/

Ehh.. ahahaha, nice one, i thought wtf when i read it first but the second time i read it i was like Ohhh got it now.. haha, nice one.

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/

LMAO! Excellent Personal, Goddamn, favourite bar out of this verse, nice playin on the simpsons linnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnne

U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you?/
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you!/

LMAO. Fucking Harsh, but good punch.. nice, this is what a battle about

Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/

Ohh Shiitt.. Lmao. excellent personal again, aer force one, lmao, excellent personal, it just keeps getting better, wordd

U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/

hahhaha complex, i was readin this an thought about it, kind of hard to grasp but when you get it , its clever and funny

This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste/
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace!!!/

felt this was a pure filler imo.. nothin else about this

I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/

DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNN. Excellent, this bar fucked up half of aero's verse, thats all ima say, goddamn, you could have played on it better like aero dynamics in cars or whatever, get me? anyways might be my punch of tha month

And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til...
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal/

Lol.. This was Actually A closer.. nice one

Aero: I felt your material that you came up with wasn't tourney final at all, iv seen you do a lot better. there was an odd line that was like LOL, but most of that was filler, the only thing i can praise on this was good structure.. the personals were aiight.. and as i said in the bars i was commenting on, could have been worded better

Dig: WOW, that was simply a HOT verse, what more can i say.. everything was perfect, the only thing i suggest is a bit of multies and that's all i can say really,, pfft .. amazing..


Flow: Aero
Comedy: Dig
Multi: Aero
Punches: Aero
Wordplay: Dig
Personals: Dig
Complexity: Dig
Overall: Dig

Vote - Dig

I said, hopefully this would turn out better than i expected, like Dig giving aero some competition, and it happened..

===AERO===


I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig

HOT Very tight punch NICE AZZ Opener

The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's

AERO HUNNIE THIS WAS QUEENY SO-CALLED RAPE AGAIN=FORCED..IT was ight i could see it werkin n audio..

Re-Treat! like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo

MUAHAHAHA...NICE PERSONAL

Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote

NICE,,,PUNCH AN personal.....

Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here

GOOD MULTI...NICE PUNCH 2

I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move

ONE WORD=ILL...NICE HUN

ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion

Brillant personal nice!

I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers

nice...goodflow nice punch...decent fillar

Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines

BRILLANT! it's so good i think u bite from me ...lol..j/p nice though!

You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First

LMAFO!...GOOD FLOW NICE LIL ARRANGEMENT! N WERDPLAY ILL WAY 2 CLOSE



===DIGI===

My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift?/
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift!/

not that great of a openier..u basically had nice multis whichevened it out!

This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion/
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/

played like jlo sex life..the ups n fedex..the arrid dry was hot but nt close enough 2 his name..overall peace-bar

U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/

C ya is a played....bar is ok nothin great..

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/

LMAO! OMFG! THIS BAR MAKES UP FA THE OTHAZ NICENESS!

U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you?/
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you!/

nice diss ok filler decent w/play

Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/

THIS WAS A GOOD FILLER WIT A HOT PERSONAL SETUP LIKE A PUNCH NICE

U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/

hot werd play

This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste/
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace!!!/

wordplay again......................

I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/

hot azz fuck hunnie one werd= BRILLANT

And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til...
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal/

decent coser lol a the link






Flow: Aero

Multi: Aero
Punches: Aero
Wordplay: Dig
Personals: Dig
Complexity: AERO
Overall: AERO

Vote - AERO

GOOD BATTLE LADIES!

2-2...thanks to everyone who has voted

3-2.. Multiplexed Double Posted


Aero- Your Worst Enemy; Im Pissed; Azerdae
DigitILL- FiXion; Multiplexed

what happend to my vote?

I think RW was down...maybe it didnt go through...

gutted :\ unlucky

Cut the free-posting...

I'll vote tomz... About to go do some more hwk atm

punches:aero
flow:aero
multis:aero
creativity:tie
rhyme scheme:dig
delivery:aero
wordplay:dig
complexity:dig
personals:dig
Overall my vote=Dig

^your gona need to explain that a bit more dude.....:(

punches:aero the more pussy line was pretty good
flow:aero takes this cuz dig was tryin to get his punches in but lossed flow in the process
multis:aero^^
creativity:tie both had some really nice n original lines
rhyme scheme:dig i like how he used those links to flip on aero
delivery:aero his verse was structured better
wordplay:dig...did u read his verse? i rest my case
complexity:dig that lenny n carl line was genious
personals:dig...read what i said about wordplay
Overall my vote=Dig

punches:aero the more pussy line was pretty good
flow:aero takes this cuz dig was tryin to get his punches in but lossed flow in the process
multis:aero^^
creativity:tie both had some really nice n original lines
rhyme scheme:dig i like how he used those links to flip on aero
delivery:aero his verse was structured better
wordplay:dig...did u read his verse? i rest my case
complexity:dig that lenny n carl line was genious
personals:dig...read what i said about wordplay
Overall my vote=Dig


^^Need quotes and a breakdown for it to be accepted.. Just like the other votes...!

Dig
Punches - These, in general, were very good. However, there were some very creative, hard-hitting and effective punches, as well as some fillers and normal punches. Gifted one was good too imo.
Word-Play- Very good. Original, Creative and most of the ill bought a smirk on to my face. The Seconds one was very good imo. The FedEx/Ups was good - i hadnt seen it before.
Personals - Good but not Excellent. The Moe line was a different flip to others before; it was good. The last one, differnet and original, but i didnt feel it much. The Air Force One flip was very good. Someone said it was played but this first time i seen it.
Multies - These were solid... run throughout the verse. Helped and aided the verse.
Flow - Failry good and consistent. A few bars that werent flowing as much as you could have made them, but nonetheless, still good.


This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion/
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/
-Good WordPlay. As Pissed said though, could have been worded slightly better. Solid noonetheless.

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/
-Good bar imo. Wordplay, Multies, decent flow, delivery...

U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/
-Wordplay based bar. First time i seen this shit, really liked it. No hard-hitting punch though, but excellent filler.

Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/
-Solid. Not very accurate though coz Aero's multies are good. Still good though imo.

I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/
-Funny and effective. Solid Personal/Punch with good wordplay



Aero
Punches - Solid. Though not as consistent or as effective as previous punches. Still some very good ones though: Juice and Ex-Lover lines bought a laugh.
Personals - Decent, Again not as good as previous, but they were still very good. lol. Those lacking were mostly because of your wording... Snake Champion line could have been an ill punch. Betty Boo personals could have been more effective as well.
Word-Play - Lmao. Some nyce shit. Throught the verse... Last punch was good.
Multies and Flow - Multies used effectively and consistently throughout the verse. Flow, therefore, was good.


I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig
-Brilliant opener. Set the level for the rest of the verse. Though, some of the bars werent on the level...

The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's
-In an aduio, as Dae said, this would have been solid and fairly good. Failry normal in text though...

I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move
-Ill... Personal - Punch - Multies - Flow.. everyting in one bar.. Ill..

You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First
-Tight ending... Simple but very effective wordplay... Ill


Over-All... i think Dig took this. I think his verse was more consistent and that Aero was not upto his usual standard of illness... I also think Dig would have won Originality and Creativity...

Fairly close battle imo..

Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here
I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move
^^Sick wordplay. Good multies. Personal and disses were on-point.

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/
^^Haha...Feeling that. Good wordplay. Good personal/diss

Punches: Aero
Multies: Aero
Flow: Aero
Disses: Tie
Personals: Dig
Enjoyment: Aero

VOTE: Aero

Thanks to all voters.. 4-3

^^Need quotes and a breakdown for it to be accepted.. Just like the other votes...!

Originally Posted by ~Virt~
punches:aero the more pussy line was pretty good
flow:aero takes this cuz dig was tryin to get his punches in but lossed flow in the process
multis:aero^^
creativity:tie both had some really nice n original lines
rhyme scheme:dig i like how he used those links to flip on aero
delivery:aero his verse was structured better
wordplay:dig...did u read his verse? i rest my case
complexity:dig that lenny n carl line was genious
personals:dig...read what i said about wordplay
Overall my vote=Dig

I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers
^^that was real nice...original
Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
one of the best lines
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines
kinda played but kinda creative in the same way..vending machine lines are kinda played but ur concept wasnt...

He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/ (fedex,ups)
this was original and very creative i liked this line
U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
it was a decent line i liked it but its kinda old now :o
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/
now this is what i like to see this was pretty creative and good line overall

Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/
^^this is what won u the battle in my opinion...genious.
I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/ (fuck in Nissan)
^^nice pretty good n creative.

4-4 uppin...

I'm Drillin-this-trick, Like a reluctant Mike no one's feelin-ya-kid
That's why AP's is not a fitting name, it's more like The Illest-and-Dig
haha....thas a tight ass opener
The realist to spit, me, killing-ya-writs, the win's going to be ease
we're Geeky, cuz when it comes to evaluating rhyme's nobody sees D's
pretty nicwe wordplay..a decent punch
Re-Treat! like you had a fetish for snacks, Jack, you already lose
Play~Off story? a tie, got merked, and lucked out on a DQ from Betty Boo
nice personal
Lettin Dudes as weak as dukes in should not come around in the future so
as the rules would show I should win cuz anything to you counts as a stupid vote
decent bar
Dude's-a-joke, I'll handle~n'~Cram the Cannibal~man who's stuck in fear
so much ya tear, don't post cuz like DMX u'll lose ya mind Uppin Here
haha...ill wordplay
I rupture queer's backs and bones with gats and chrome till they're missin a few
ya sh*t-isn't-new, and taking DI out ya profile was ya only Signature Move
nice wordplay...nice personal
ay Pissed I'm confused, shouldn't I face someone ill? this fake-can't-be-him
I came seriously ready and I'm not Playing games...Dig is the Snake Champion
decent personal....aight wordplay
I'll smack him if he acts a trip, so to newbs, i might prefer to wreck others
Rep-smothered, and Dig still can't get Over Me Like we were Ex-Lovers
ill wordplay...nice punch
Bumer, Dig gettin more Pu$$y and I don't mean he good wit women ya see?
Endin-ya-schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending-Machines
nice wordplay....decent punch
You just second Place like a vacation~home stay~hatin~yo & it maybe-worst
We crew so sorry for being Rude but being Polite would mean Ladies First
aight wordplay....nice punch


My punches keep you at arms length and my flows a handul, you catch-my-drift?/
Now watch-me-flip every thread you made that you thought-was-swift!/
ehh...wsnt feelin it too much
This horny-fool thinkin bitches sweatin' Aero Dry like he accompanies-exertion/ (Arrid dry)
He's-corny-too! usin punches that go: 'Im Fed-Up!' like mail companies-merging!/ (fedex,ups)
ill wordplay..nice punch
U bore-me-shrew! plus u ain't smart enough for anyone to 'C'-ya-dude/
I see-you're-screwed so jus 'thank me for the memories' like ya Amnesia-cured!!!/
nice wordplay.... decent punch
Aero n-dig-meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow/
So it's no-big-feat for Aero to figure out the irony in gettin' served by-Moe!!!/
haha....this has to be 1 of the illest bars ive seen in a while..!
U deserve-this-Hoe! if you so smart how come my words-play-wit-you?/
Well ya parents only told u you're gifted cuz no one would-pay-for-you!/
pretty ill punch
Does Nelly like your 3 inch dick?...You see, Aero's a quarter-horsemen/
U call those multis? naw son, your plain & each line we hear Aer-force-one!!!/
haha...nice wordplay...pretty ill punch
U get a fair-portion cuz I won when you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin-socks/
My punching-rocks! and at u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned-clocks!!!/ (comin back for seconds)
ill wordplay...feelin this shit alot
This tourney's-mine when u get stripped of ya belt and we all see Aero's-waste/
Ill burn-this-swine cuz im on top of the universe and ill never drop to Aeros-pace!!!/
ill wordplay.... ill punch
I say you're 'fuckin nice son' only cuz ya whole family's conceived-in-cars/ (fuck in Nissan)
And you'd need to use a shitload of cursewords to have me seein-stars!!!/(he uses *** for swear words)
nice personal
And for my last trick, ill embarass this dick and it'll only worsen-til...
He's wrapped in plastic for leftovers after the voters view the last personal/
aight finisher

wordplay: aero
punches: dig
personals: dig
multies: aero
flow: tie
enjoyment: dig

vote: dig

.......Nice Win.. Dig.. ........

:D .....................

congrats dig wins 5-4

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