Spyder- lo-fi:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1083106&q=Lo
hi-fi:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1083106&q=Hi

RaZa-
lo-fi:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1081449&q=Lo
hi-fi:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1081449&q=Hi

Who u think won? Additional comments?

i put this battle here because i didnt think i should has put it in the battle section just cuz spyder isnt a member of RW but if i am wrong just move it dont delete it cuz i still would like feed back on the battle an wat not...thank u

links-
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21280
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21132

you may repost your verse alone for feedback as long as you followed posting rules...

..um...huh?

.....listening as i type

spyder's intro is too long, .....he's talking to much, getting annoyed........... wait a minute! he's rhyming. Why is he takin breaks?!? This is hilarious. this guy CAN NOT flow, and he needs to learn how to compose 16bars atleast. Also, what the hell is he talking about. Not feeling that track at all. 0/10

...........now listening to Raza................
...........liking the m&m beat, yeah.................
......yo, your lyrics are low as hell, barely audible. You seem to be flowing more on beat than spyder, so on that basis, i'll give you the upper hand in this battle, but the lyrics aren't anything amazing. 3/10

you need to make more of your words rhyme at the end.

lmao wak all of u fuck dis rap worlds no talent

^^^garbage^^^



Fa'Sho



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BOth of you need to stop rapping ya'll suck

yeh..sounds like both of yall have speech impedements or sumtin..stick to text kid.

A man that hurt my ears.

Raza took it even though his mic sounds somewhat muffled...