10 lines
no dickrydin or feeding
standard voting rules
due asap


check in first so i know you here...

Checkin in.

Smash-this-tard, dude works out with ‘”Buns Of Steel” to claim his “ass-his-hard”/
Crashed-and-scared, plus you like “armless gymnast” the way you can’t “grasp-my-bars”/

Get “focused” cuz ya skills aint “Ford”-a-fide (fortified),ya just get “crossed” up enough for the “Lord”-to-buy/ (ford focus)
Scorch-this-guy, it’s cuz I see a “bitch in this male” just like a “mail order-bride”/

Foot long? Please this guys packin-a-two (2”), that’s why I’m slappin-this-dude/
”Hit this star” like I’m “smackin-a-Jew”, how you gone win? Ya ghostwriter’s wacker-than-you!/

Mention-my-cards, I got a full deck, I'll brush you off with intentions-to-scar/
You bitchin-too-hard, cause on ladies night is the only time you pay attention-to-bars/

Blessin-this-track, hold no weight so it's easy to rip ya pedestrian-raps/
Leave you messy-and-flat, cuz ya post more “pussy hits” than chicks on “lesbian-chats”/

you'll be snacking on sheets, what you drop ain't even decent writtens/
it's like your 'nationality', when i'm asking "what is you...Kiddin'!"/
none of your punches really grazed me, just wasting my time/
like cocaine addict toddlers...you just "played" with your lines!/
your outcast in society, the wack~ we could do without ya'll/
cause mr."Satan" signing verbal-"abuse" only set up for "downfall"!/
reason with me? and i doubt all...words will make ya' mouth-pause/
they claiming "bridge is over", so i'm burying you~ in the "south" Bronx!/
in caskets with ya' pom-poms...go to Obie Trice for leading-'cheers'/
how you above my level? you ain't even old enough for "drinking-beer"!?/

*everthing taken from his profile on side bar.

Anyone votin?

that was a great battle,one of the best i have seen here

Punches-both
Flow-jw
Multi-verbal
Personals-jw
Enjoyment-both
Wordplay-both

you both came hard but jw edged it out,props to both of you.

Need some links......

multis-verbalabuse
punches-verbalabuse
flow-jw
metas-verbalabuse
overall-verbalabuse came harder on this one, he had nice punches and multis, he completely smashed jw

Multies- verbal
Punches- Verbal
Flow-JW
metas- Both
Enjoyment-Both

Vote Verbal jus think he hit harder with the punches, tight battle

Multis - Verbal
Punches - Verbal
Structure - JW
Metas - Both
Enjoyment - Both

Overall

VerbalAbuse

I agree, Verbal just came a little harder...I think JW's flowed better but Verbal's punchlines and multis overcame that easily...

JW u cvoulda ate this cat....



anyway

Opener: JW
CLoser: VA
Pun:va
flo: JW
multies: Va
enjoyment: Va
complexity: JW
overall VA

Jw u coulda cam hard that's all i got to say



Vote: VA

c'mon seriously, you guy really aren't reading my disses to him.

Maybe i should throw in a whole bunch stupid metaphors and qoutes symbols and shit to win more battles. For god sakes, the guy barely said anything about me, how do i know it's not bitten or played!?


*sigh*
here's my link: http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=294404#post294404

^ Very True, i seen on verbal other previous battle's he tend to do the same things..bunch of played lines i seen before millions of times, i believe this could be possibly bitten it really he didn't come one punch at Jw indirectly , so it's kinda supscious ....Jw had some nice punches, flow well i really don't see how verbalabuse getting the votes that he are getting.......

Vote- Jw

this was a very very close battle
really close
my vote goes to
JW

Punches-VA
Flow-VA
Multi-jw
Personals-jw
Enjoyment-VA
Wordplay-VA

Overal: Verbal Abuse

Blessin-this-track, hold no weight so it's easy to rip ya pedestrian-raps/
Leave you messy-and-flat, cuz ya post more “pussy hits” than chicks on “lesbian-chats”/

Nice rhyme right there