View Full Version : Skorch vs. Paavo II (Paavo wins 5-2)


skorch
05-18-2004, 06:28 PM
10/15 bars
no crew or dr votes
3-0 is sweep or first to 5
ONLY EXPLAINED VOTES WILL COUNT

i voted on the Dynamik vs. Straw



ya verse is like a hollywood script, a fake act thats hard to follow/ the only heat ur packin is an emptied out can of coke just to prove that ur wise cracks are hollow/
you couldn't knock me off if you were on jimmy hoffa's mailing list/ ur so pathetic that you couldn't win in this battle if you came back and voted as an alias/
i could give you the keys to my front door and you still wouldn't take something/ ur verse is fragile and destructable but i promised the movers that i wasn't going to break nothing/(i lied!)
iv'e seen better shit get spit out of bowel movements/ ur childish disses are getting whipped like towel bruises/
ur game reminds me or a septic tank, its shitty/ ima run more marathons around you then p-diddy/
you for rap is the equivalent of kids in a sweatshop/ i'm throwing lyrical boulders to ur pebbles, you aint going to make my battling record bedrock/

-EXPLANATIONS-
emptied out can of coke thats heated, and wise cracks are hollow- crackheads hollow out cans and heat them up to smoke crack

fragile verse, and movers that i wasn't goin to break nothin- saying hes breakable.

getting whipped like towel bruises-wet towels leave bruises

marathons and p-diddy-he ran the marathon

lyrical boulders to his pebbles and my record won't bedrock-the flinstones(pebbles,bedrock)

......ur up paavo, GL no beef -1-

Paavo
05-18-2004, 06:54 PM
good verse Skorch.... jus check'n in... i'll drop in jus a lil while.

aiight
holla at cha' boi

Paavo
05-18-2004, 11:19 PM
aiight herre i go...


I come out'a tha dark with a TORCH to *SKORCH* and set FLAME to your own NAME,
Cant you think of anything betta to say,
Either yo shit don't make sence or it all sounds tha SAME//1
I'mma beat ya in multi, structure, personals, punches and FLOW,
Face it Skorch, when it comes to rappin you jus another "average JOE"//2
Your PRIED DIED when yo rhymes were DENIED,
No one likes yo shit, whoeva told you ya had skill LIED//3
Crew "Ride or Die" ripped you, brought tha pain and made you HURT,
They got you lookin like a bitch and had yo ass wearin a fuckin SKIRT//4
You talked alot of shit but who tha fuck were your punches directed TOWARD?,
Thats right i am hollywood and my verse will go on to win an acadamy AWARD//5
Murda' ya with words is what i do to delete my COMPITION,
I'm holdin an unloaded gun and you jus gave my sum AMMUNITION//6
You say you can run circles around me... well i can do betta than THAT,
I'm Jeff Gordon and your standin in tha middle of a race TRACK//7
At 200 Mile Per Hour i'm spittin my VERSE,
Tha sound of my voice hurts you, so watch out for my bite cause thats WORSE//8
Petestal wise i'm on top of mount EVREST,
And your standing on top of a speed bump at BEST//9
This is me put'n you to REST,
Go ahead and wear that bullet proof VEST,
Cause i'm aim'n fo yo head lil man not yo CHEST//10


Skorch said-"ya verse is like a hollywood script, a fake act thats hard to follow..."- so i replied with line 5
Skorch said-"...ima run more marathons around you then p-diddy"- i replied with line 7 and 8 i guess

crew "Ride or Die" beat Skorch and his partn'a- i mention that in line 4, i said
"...They got you lookin like a bitch and had yo ass wearin a fuckin SKIRT"- tha skirt part was me jus emfasize'n on him bein a bitch

and an "average joe" which i'm sure ya'll already know is sumone whos nothin special, jus average

my vote link~~>http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=289362#post289362

NO BEEF SKORCH

stilez
05-18-2004, 11:54 PM
MY VOTE:Paavo


HAHAHAHAHAHA my man Paavo....I gotta throw it up for you! your opponent didnt have shit on you man! you stragiht up ripped him! tight opener...me liked
n heres sum more lines that really stood out to me

I'mma beat ya in multi, structure, personals, punches and FLOW,
Face it Skorch, when it comes to rappin you jus another "average JOE"//2

Your PRIED DIED when yo rhymes were DENIED,
No one likes yo shit, whoeva told you ya had skill LIED//

Crew "Ride or Die" ripped you, brought tha pain and made you HURT,\

tha ending wasnt great, couldve came harder than that paavo but overall I liked your shit!



SKORCH..you shudda took yah time man! your verse was pretty lame i thought! no hatin but I wasnt feelin it! sorry man....I did like only one line from ur shit! keep elevating


ur so pathetic that you couldn't win in this battle if you came back and voted as an alias/

Tackdaddy
05-19-2004, 05:25 AM
punches-paavo
flow-paavo
structure-tie
wordplay-tie
multis-skorch
enjoyment-both

so i vote for paavo

Paavo
05-19-2004, 06:09 AM
uppin fo votes


holla at cha' boi

Paavo
05-20-2004, 07:37 AM
c'mon er'body... don't sleep on this...

holla at cha' boi

Yur Worst Enemy
05-20-2004, 01:53 PM
Skorch said, "ya verse is like a hollywood script, a fake act thats hard to follow"

And then Paavo said, "Thats right i am hollywood and my verse will go on to win an acadamy award"

If that's not Feeding, than I don't know what is. And by feeding you're basically saying that you couldn't think of anything original, so you had to get inspiration from their verse, which is cheating imo.Plus your verse was horribly structured and the rhyming was elementary. I vote for Skorch

BkBrawla
05-20-2004, 01:59 PM
^Agrees, Paavo lose points for feeding off skorch verse, and the punches was extremely weak i didn't see no kind of multi's , wordplay -No...skorch came ok but it's almost lacking of punches but aleast he came original


Vote-Skorch

Paavo
05-20-2004, 02:07 PM
first off we was allowed to feed, it wasn't in tha rules that we couldn't... and i find it very hard to belive that i lose votes fo that one line... i think there might be sum hate'n goin on, but fuck it. it's very obvious that i got skorch in jus bout every categorie (no dissrespect skorch). but its whateva. and you say by feedin shows that i couldn't come up with sumthing orginal, shiot... i did and me doin so made his line almost un-useful against me. so i should acually be gettin yo votes fo that.

Seize
05-21-2004, 04:20 PM
i gatta say that paavo tore schorch a new ass. every single line was more of a straight diss. and good word play. some cats is just hata's man. but paavo took him in every aspect of the game. so if paavo loses its sad ass hatin.

I am
05-21-2004, 04:24 PM
I dont think Paave knew not to feed... It was probably an accident..
But to me he still one... The part where he said he's on Mt. Everest and Speed bump line was Funny to me....

Punches-tie Pretty Even
Flow-Paavo
Structure-Paavo
Multi- ??
Vocabulary- Skorch
Enjoyment- Both

Vote- Paavo

But for Future notice Paavo.. Dont Feed off a Verse.. You do loose points for dat.. But otherwise nice battle and Keep Elevatin.. :cool:

stilez
05-21-2004, 04:36 PM
I have ta open my mouth for this one....Yur Worst Enemy, you always give Paavo shit! I havent seen you vote for him at all! your always cock riding on sumones shit an im gettin sick of it! christ! vote fair!!! and paavo right..in the rulez nowhere does it say no feedin so how u gonna hate on paavo fer that? never said nuthin b4 cuz your a vet compared to me...but YWE...your dickryding gotta stop mayn! jus cuz you dont like sumone dont mean you vote gainst them mayn....I c you doin it all the time! not in my battles or nuttin...ya been votin good fa me...but you gotta stop fuckin wit other people n shit! how wud you like it if we all started dickryden? you wouldnt! so fuckin stop the shit!

I am
05-21-2004, 04:39 PM
^^OH MY....

stilez
05-21-2004, 04:47 PM
im just statin the truth mayn! hes always hatin on certain peops jus cuz he dont like em! Im gettin heated! it aint rite! unless he jus always votes for shitty versus cuz hes a moron? but i doubt that....hes been on the site for how long now? i mean kmon, he SHUD b able to tell a good verse frum a bad one! dayum!!! And Rellik, go in yah freakin battle thread against me n check in finnaly! been waitin fer like a week yah slow ass

skorch
05-21-2004, 06:35 PM
enough of this bullshit. stilez quit jockin on this battle and call out YWE in a battle call. it seems to me u be dick ridin 4 paavo, but whateva. there really aint no explanations on this but it's 4-2 him i guess. stop buggin and occupyin this thread. uppin -1-

Paavo
05-21-2004, 06:54 PM
uppin this shit... lets get this ova with...

Paavo
05-22-2004, 03:32 AM
c'mon er'body... help us out and vote... if you vote on ours then i'll vote on yours... and i'm sure skorch will do tha same thing... so help us and we'll help you... and please don't hate or dick-ride...


holla at cha' boi

Arabian poet
05-22-2004, 04:21 AM
stilez dickrydin paavo?...proly they both from the Three-one-Three. proly know eachotha, but catz in this forum need to know they cant hang with 3-1-3rd peeps. Paavo riped him, feeding wasnt put into the rules.

my vote goes to paavo, im not into all that structure stuff and all that, I've just started writin. But kid had some shitty punchlines.Pavoo had a better flow.

Paavo
05-22-2004, 04:45 AM
koo... i win... thanks fo vote'n er'body, but poet... why did ya say that me and stilez know eachother jus cause we both live in detroit?... you live in detroit too... does that mean i know you? but still... thanks fo vote'n fo me and not bein a hater... close this shit up and make sum room...


holla at cha' boi

BkBrawla
05-22-2004, 01:31 PM
Congratulation Paavo wins 5-2,Thanks to everybody who voted