Aight it's up i got Night school so due tomorrow anytime early or late ...
Good luck and check in i'lll have link's later coo ...

Fa sho I'll drop after you son

link - http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=290254#post290254


Ish put's fans in Bleacher's! Take this cat to school like i was A 'pet-teacher' cuz i'm like Peeler the way 'L-Blows' rearrange 'facial-feature's//1
'Float wit clouds' to fly wit angel's cuz dawg you gonna die wit Stranger's! Only time ya 'rock-the-spot' is escavatin wit park-rangers//2
Like 'new-bad-sculputres' Unknown is wack at 'first-imperssion'! Only time Peep's sweat from you as at 'church-confession'... I pound 89 worse den a yearly depression//3
So swift i drink straight fifth's ... and pop 89's lid ! Cuz my ryhmes make you 'delay-your-flow' worse den pop-lockin kid's//4
We all know Ish straight rule thee! treat you wit cruelty, Kat aint even gone through you puberty... Well i'm ages ahead of kid's like this was another 'teen-movie'//5


| ok your go dude GL |

yo man it was due yesterday ya didnt drop and it look's like ya not droppin todayif ya need an extention holla but it'sonly ten lines ...

yeah man i just got jumsped or whatever extend the deadline till sta. night

Yo bitch/when you see me/you better shit in yah power ranger draws/
Drink another 5th/grow some hair on yah chest/cuz its not on yah balls/1
Man I got lil sisters that can whoop yo ass/ You only 12 years old/
Rip yo arms from the shoulders/ Nigga dont know shit bout throwin el-bows/2
I'm ripin through Ish'U's/ rippin through his tissue/ leavin no humanly identified remaints/
Redirecting shots to your vortex/until you got no-legs/excersing no verbal restraints/3
Nigga up your vocab before you come gainst' me/ it's a must/ you'll get crushed/
Let me drop to your intellectual level ' Nigga something like Pixie Dust'/4
This battle is joke to me/ had to use some Rap Worlds Humour/
And you mad cuz Unown's fire/ left you with a cancerous brain Tumour/5


===link==== http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22762&page=3&pp=10

Well... There really isn't any need for me to break these verses down... Ishu definately took this one... A lot better word-play, punches, and flow... Unknown, your verse was VERY simple and plain... Nothing really stood out about it...Seems as if you rushed it... Ishu had a lot more.... "thought" put into the verse, which out-shined Unknowns by far... :(

Vote= Ish



























SK BITCH! :mad:

uppin for votes!

Metas-Ishus
Punches-Unknown
Flow-Unknown
Multis-Ishus
Overall-My vote goes to Unknown, his flow and punches seemed better to me then Ishus'

Yo its 1-1 yall niggas trippin,lol

i was feelin unown's shit a lil mo... but ish... yo shit wasn't that bad either... but unown got ya on this one in jus bout every catagorie... my vote--unown

my bad 2-2

come on man can i get some vet vote's this shoulda been a KO !

KO, lol, you really think your that good. i made those lines in like 5 min.HAHA

thats whut i mean... i never said i was better then you but your verse against mine on this thread i was better ya feel me

oh an can weget some votes !

Dont like uppin but damn

~Unown~

FUCK,SHIT,FCK ass mothafucker, Someone fuckin vote on this battle so i can stop worrying bout this shit. AHHHHHHHHH * Unown stabs himself*

this one is hard to vote on but here goes
multis-Ish
flow-UnKnown
punches-UnKnown
personals-both
wordplay-Ish
enjoyment-UnKnown
Overall Vote-UnKnown

yo it's 3-1 keep them comin

im goin wid unknown
he had better punches
he had betta flow
but Ish u did good 2
a very close battle

Vote-Unknown

Umm..

Point blank period..Ish took this one, clearly because of his much elevated wordplay and multies.

"So swift i drink straight fifth's ... and pop 89's lid ! Cuz my ryhmes make you 'delay-your-flow' worse den pop-lockin kid's//4
We all know Ish straight rule thee! treat you wit cruelty, Kat aint even gone through you puberty... Well i'm ages ahead of kid's like this was another 'teen-movie'//5"

Lines like these r what determined that ish was tha victor...

VOTE = Ish'U"

I need 1 more. Let's rap this one up.

~Unown~

4 TO 2 vet 's let's get some vote's please !

Opener-Ish
Closer- Ish
Puns-Ish
personals...
structure-Ish
complexity-ISh
Flo-Ish
orginality_ish
creativity-Ish
overall-Ish


My fav line was

"Like 'new-bad-sculputres' Unknown is wack at 'first-imperssion'! Only time Peep's sweat from you as at 'church-confession'... I pound 89 worse den a yearly depression//3"

I didn't think anyone would diss that part of his name that was nice but Un got beat in all categories to me so...

vote: Ish

My vote goes to Ish'U's...just overall better wordplay and came harder...keep tearin it up! both were pretty good vereses tho! just gotta go with ish

umm................ here it is

multis--neither
punches--ish
structure--ish
wordplay--ish
vocab--unown
personals--unown
enjoyment--neither

overall--shit was aight for some rookies...not too entertainin...but still okay..............
you 2 keep battlin and elevate........you 2could be good in the future.......................

Congratulations Ish, you win 3-0

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