alrite mayn, heres the thread

RULEZ

1. 7-10 bars min/max
2. first to 5...3-0 KO
3. You check in an choose who spit first
4. Post link before yah post or with your post/ have fun and goodluck

All right... Checking in...

I will also edit this post with my link later... Hmm.. Well ofcourse since its my pick, Stilez you can drop first.. I won't feed or anything, so don't worry... I will post my verse as SOON as I see it... Good luck..

MY VOTE (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=291474#post291474)


MY SPIT

OPENER:
I watched Aero knock you out cold, not a daym voter thought you wuz hot
like a bitch, when ~Malagen~ has ta piss he be poppin a squat thru his twat.......
ya you managed ta murdered Militia but hes a noob wit like only 30 sumthin posts
kill you n spread yah body coast to coast, only way u replyin is if u turn ghost.......
even then you still wouldnt b scary, stilez pop rookiez like virgin cherries
my styles vary, dawg you still wudnt be phat (fat) if you wuz the virgin mary.......
you lie, bitch dudes like you cry! My AK-47 sounds like the 4th of July
laugh my ass off as you die, you sigh then stilez make u kiss your whole crew bye.......

CLOSER:
im takin The Supreme Queens out one by one, started wit Yur Worst Enemy, I just begun
1st ill take my baseball bat to yah faces just for fun, bases loaded so I hit a home run.......
alright mayn, enough wit the personals, im hurtin yah wee little feelings
like a fan, imma stick a light bulb down yah throat, and hang you from the ceiling.......
im a battle craver, with anger and bad behavior, shankin katz like u wit pubic shavers (razers)
wrap yo lips around the barrel in my sig bitch, unload the chamber and do us all a favor.......


OWNED!!!

GOODLUCK MAYN

EXPLANATIONS:

1st bar... 1st line-He got his ass raped by Aero, he got KO'd
2nd line- callin this dude a BITCH

2nd bar... 1st line-he beat a rookie with 37 posts? woooohoooooo :)

3rd bar... 1st line-when I refered to virgin cherries im talkin bout pussy

4th bar... im just rippin on him the 2nd line, I dunno how this whack kat managed to get in a skilled crew on RW like The Supreme Kings?

In the closer i only got one thing to explain...

5th bar, 1st line-rippin on his crew callin them all BITCHES :)

Link: http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=24131&page=2&pp=10



...Death cries for your soul...

Aight yo for starters, how could you think your flows the hardest?
You showed your horrid the minute this fag was KO'ed by Flawless! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23902&page=3&pp=10)
You slow and harmless which proves by far that your text aint nice
Your rep is tight? How? You got more replies when you left the site!! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22993)
I'm wild with lines, you " hold no words" like seein mics with mimes
And "INSURRANCE POLICIES's" (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=287566#post287566) the only way STILEZ GETS SIGNED!!
People "exile your rhymes" while you desperately try to trash n bomb vets
While seeing battles stuck at 4-4 proves you can't GRASP A CONCEP (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22746&page=4)
I'm bashing this cock, you honestly think rhymes-wack can surpass to the top?
Last that I got, Queeny was DISSIN YA FLOW (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22746&page=4) and she's the wackest in drops!!
This maggot gets popped, he's gay it seems so it's like i'm beating a fag
Now he's leading to drag!? No wonder why no emcees AGREED TO COLLAB! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22768)

...Rest In Peace...




That's only 6 bars man... But I didn't feel like typing anymore... It should be enough... Hopefully you don't DQ me on such gay shit...

multis - malagen
flow - malagen
personals - malagen
wordplay - stilez
punches - malagen
vote - malagen, easily.

Punches- Mal
Multi-Mal
Flow-Mal
Strcutre-Mal
Personal-Mal
Wordplay- Mal

Vote-Mal

Reason- Well, this was very one-sided wow stilez you went up against somthing that you couldn't handle because no offense you got sonned pretty bad, your verse wasn't bad either i seen some decent punches and personal the best i've seen from you but your were still outclassed by malagen verse which was good to a extend , love the punches ,and the personal the 2flawless line was cool, flow very conistant but malagen is far more advance for you stilez right now....No Beef

*Sigh* don't sway, rookie..lmmfao

Stilez

I watched Aero knock you out cold, not a daym voter thought you wuz hot
like a bitch, when ~Malagen~ has ta piss he be poppin a squat thru his twat
^first line was a reference to a personal..should've followed it up with the second
ya you managed ta murdered Militia but hes a noob wit like only 30 sumthin posts
kill you n spread yah body coast to coast, only way u replyin is if u turn ghost.......
^terrible
even then you still wouldnt b scary, stilez pop rookiez like virgin cherries
my styles vary, dawg you still wudnt be phat (fat) if you wuz the virgin mary.......
^wtf?!? what were you thinking?
you lie, bitch dudes like you cry! My AK-47 sounds like the 4th of July
laugh my ass off as you die, you sigh then stilez make u kiss your whole crew bye
^where's the punch? where's the wordplay? where's anything good about this?
im takin The Supreme Queens out one by one, started wit Yur Worst Enemy, I just begun
1st ill take my baseball bat to yah faces just for fun, bases loaded so I hit a home run.......
^:rolleyes:lmfao@first line..again no punch, though
alright mayn, enough wit the personals, im hurtin yah wee little feelings
like a fan, imma stick a light bulb down yah throat, and hang you from the ceiling.......
^what personals? you put light bulbs in your fans? horrible
im a battle craver, with anger and bad behavior, shankin katz like u wit pubic shavers (razers)
wrap yo lips around the barrel in my sig bitch, unload the chamber and do us all a favor
^ok.. 'kill yourself and do us a favor' is played as fuck..people say that on sit coms and shit.. still no punch nor wordplay

Pretty weak verse..no punches, no wordplay, you attempted an Aero personal but just simply stated it with no wordplay or creativity..and there was no creativity in your whole verse. Only plus is maybe flow? Other than that, there wasn't anything good about this verse, and it was all below average because of the lack of any punches. Elevate.

~Malagen~

Aight yo for starters, how could you think your flows the hardest?
You showed your horrid the minute this fag was KO'ed by Flawless!
^Good personal and multies
You slow and harmless which proves by far that your text aint nice
Your rep is tight? How? You got more replies when you left the site!!
^liked the final punch, should've linked the two lines, though
I'm wild with lines, you " hold no words" like seein mics with mimes
And "INSURRANCE POLICIES's" the only way STILEZ GETS SIGNED!!
^decent
People "exile your rhymes" while you desperately try to trash n bomb vets
While seeing battles stuck at 4-4 proves you can't GRASP A CONCEP
^nice
I'm bashing this cock, you honestly think rhymes-wack can surpass to the top?
Last that I got, Queeny was DISSIN YA FLOW and she's the wackest in drops!!
^lmfao.. good diss
This maggot gets popped, he's gay it seems so it's like i'm beating a fag
Now he's leading to drag!? No wonder why no emcees AGREED TO COLLAB!
^nice diss and personal.

Nice verse, one of your best recent verses. Good personals throughout, nice multies and flow, and good punches. A little lacking as far as wordplay, but still a solid verse.

Punches - Malagen..stilez had none
Wordplay - Malagen..not much in this battle but his was better
Flow - tie
Personals - Malagen easy
Multies - Malagen
Enjoyment - Stilez..a good laugh
Vote - Malagen

Congratulations ~Malagen~, 3-0 KO.. closed n moved.....


And stilez, you're an idiot if you honestly can't see that you're wack. You seriously need to stick to battling rookies for a good 4 months or maybe more before you even think about battling a vet, because right now you don't have anything going for you..no punches, no creativity, no wordplay, no personals, weak multis at best, and for some reason you're big headed, yet you certainly shouldn't be. Go elevate, fag :mad:


SK BITCH!!!