Rules
unlimited bars
4 votes
Explained votes
No HATE/CREW/..or d/r votes(that means rellik and multi)
Post by Sunday
I spit first.... :mad:

Arki-teXt, bitches....

Check in....

Don't spit too much, but I'll try and match you....

Links will be needed....

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23287
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23647

Explinations
Opener
On the other board hes on he bit aero on his last line
2%
1-His sig awards are "improving awards"
3-keep a gun handy...handi-cap....Spill/saran wrap....
15%
1- 2 in 1 chinese chess is chess n chekkaz....Chinese peeps are known as chins..the chekkaz get played on a board
2- bonaparte is a poet, Arabian poet has been ducking his callout
50%
2- Fast=not eating....which is diet, nudists have no clothes on hence "no-wear"
3- Novice is mediocre...1 on crew board/they are first listed crew in office
60%
2- Keenen wayaans was used cuz one of his tracks he uses "Scary Movie"..royce's instr....Keenan played in scary movie
3-you should get it
75%
1-Zulu soldiers have holes in their faces
3-Someone said he used the same line that he used in the arki diss against them
1%
Self explanitory

AND IT STARTS
Arki cut you up and expose all D-illar-1's marrow,I'm a v8 bitch... you weak like camero's, Accused me of chompin but bitch you been exposed for "BITIN AERO"

2% of skill
I'm the illest ever known while you only improving...after i sonn you quick D1 gonna resort to movin
Tossin hoes the only way illar 1 gonna "throw-blows",throw knives at a stage the only way you rip shows, almost drowning only way this nigga spit flows...
Like wheel-chairs with guns...you shoulda kept a "handi-cap", Illar..your blood will "spill" when I start to "wrap"
Like constipation, you need to stop droppin crap, Rellik hyped you up but you gon be slow to type back


15% of skill
I shouldnt have even dropped...Kadeem would wreck-ya, and like "2-in-1 *chinese chess*"..this "board will meet the *chin*-chekka"
RW know i spit fresha...but CP below Arki charts,like bubblin tests...after the outcome your gon wish you used-ya-smarts, and avoided the callouts like the arabian-bonapart
BLAH.....

50% of skill
It was a fucking mistake when D1 wanted to battle me, Him n multi always * down on the dick* like sex in gravity
Pussy u goin "no-wear fast" like "Nudists on a diet*...so bring ya Crew in for the riot cos i'll bludgeon your topics.. fuck this wackness, how CP spose to be good when its smothered by novice..Ya clickonly number 1 in the crews office
hope times get easy or you'll spend ya whole life tryna cop mine...
Claimin you ghost write but couldnt 'buy coke' to possibly 'sniff up' a 'dope-line

60% of skill...
Before i say something your dyin, cos * anal with golfclubs* only time ur *pumpin the iron* ,
so learn ya wack cos yo talents lacking, the first time i heard ur track, i was like fuck,when keenan wayans start rapping??!??
ur crushed by these spits that scare hell, ur like peeps hopin for a *good deal on wishing*.. you'll be "bidding* *fair well*

75% of skill...
Told u ya waste i'll rot ya bones without trace , faggot for you its over, u cant roll with the greats so i'll blow *holes in ya face* bigger than a "zulu soldier"
this is me takin it light, what im saying is right, its like ur *eyes are on ur toes* cos you'll never " walk away from the site"
u aint tight , i'll leave ur mind crushed with harsh lines, lets watch illar 1 use the same punches he used in a past time...

Fuck It....1%...
I'm ILLIN-NOIZE like Kanye west...you gotta spit thru the wire,Tossin hot tameles only time D-illar-1 droppin some fire, when you read my verse you gonna make like multi and retire!
I spit the roughest of Chemicals , yur flow aint a spectacle, whats illar 1*got in the bag*... well from ur voice i know it aint *TESTICLES*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...uNo...
....arki,bitches....

Wordsmith Battle (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=291267#post291267)

..arki we need your links dawg..

It's at the bottom of his post "Wordsmith battle"...

I'm almost done keying my verse....

Should be up in 10 minutes...

*-His sig says “Click the link for the Illest Keystyle", but it’s his Outpimp page.
**-In this battle and in a battle with Aero, he used a Kanye line.
***-His avatar is repeated punches
****-Another avatar lines…
*****-He has battled Aero, Xkwisite, and Virt. And lost to all three. He’s 0-3 since coming back. 0 minus three equals -3.

You’re not better than me….

Arki keeps hopping off the wrong way, I’ll leave this rabbit-past-dead/
Not good at text, AT, you see less keys than rehabbing-crackheads//
You’re not on my level, I hope ya-just-realize-you’re-weak/
You textcee! You numb to the mic like a paralyzed-MC//
You just should change ya name to Ice, you’re allergic-to-fire/
And ya pops is a vamp, the way you been just-sonned-by-a-biter (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5039) //
After your ventures from RWs, it’s undetermined how you kept-ablaze/
Ya stealing streak; Clicked the illest keystyle it was someone else’s-page//*
You’re now a one man clan, I’ll leave ya squad-mauled-clown/
Chi-town native loves Kanye lines, but never when they All-Falls-Down//**
I don’t even know why Arki claims-he’s-hot/
When his recycling’s Breakin’ All The Rules (http://movies.yahoo.com/shop?d=hv&cf=info&id=1808467631) like Jamie-Foxx//
This dude wouldn’t deliver fear if he went postal-for-cowards/
And his punches so similar, I thought I watched his post-for-an-hour//***
This dude probably feels Overstruck like someone slapped-his-favorite-star/
Because his verses throw no punches like we kidnapped-his-avatar//****
Before this battle even happened, peeps said that I might-top-him/
He’s in the worst spot; the BL Ladder (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23412) proves he’s hit rock-bottom//
Arki, Fallacy, Oblivious, Chris, you’re not better-than-me/
Your record makes you seem you’re before D1(the 1) because it equals negative-3//*****
Your not even sick, come on face-it-lame/
You got put out of AP (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=24072) like you got a basic-brain//
You wouldn’t lead a team if you had a coaching-job;call me a fool for cooking saliva how I toast-this-slob/
Sport, you might be the bomb and blow but we shut you down quicker than the Olympic Explosive-squad//


I’m done with you, child…..

Punches- tie
Flow- illar
Multi- lillar
Personal-illar
Enjoyment- illar
Wordplay- illar

Overall Vote-illar

Thanks for the vote. 1-0 My way........

Punches-illar
Flow-both
Multi- illar
Personal-illar
Enjoyment-both
Wordplay-illar
i say illar got this,he just came harder but both did a nice job.good battle

2-0 Upp.........

HAHA@tackdaddy......WTF

2-0

From now on, established members who actually follow the voting guidelines....

You mean vets?

Might as well move this to the Vet Arena.....

might as......

....Good verse by the way....

Thanks....

Upp........

Well... Called as it is seen... I'm not going to do a full breakdown, but I will explain as thoroughly as possible...

Punches- Arki_Text... You had some very nice punches throughout your verse... Although I feel some of them weren't as hard hitting, because they went in a different direction other than aimed straight at Illar... The creativity was... ehh ok? I've seen better from your past battles...

Illar... You had a more fierce line-up of punches... I have a bit of a cold, so laughing at some of them made me cough lot... You pulled off with a "few" original ideas, but don't get cocky.. You did use a few played concepts as well... I favored your punches more because they were all constructed to mae Arki look like an ass... So Illar, you have this...
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Flow- To be quite honest.... I think the flow was pretty much tied... You both had relatively long lines, with somewhat of the same pattern of bars... So it was kind of hard for me to recognize who had the better flow... At times it seemed as Arki did, sometimes Illar... So this bit goes for a Tie..
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Multies- Hmm... Arki you had some little baby one.. For the small amount, they were decent... It's not that hard to make multies... But Illar topped you off tremendously with multies... At the end, middle, and begining of his verse and throughout his bars... Multies to Illar..
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Personals- Definately to Illar... Arki, I only remember seeing 2-3 if that many... But you have to admit, you basically stuck to punches to win this battle.. Illar came with more effective ones, although they weren't presented as well as they could've been..
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Enjoyment- Actually... I enjoyed both verses... But since Illar had better punchlines, I'll give this one to him as well..
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Wordplay- Arki_Text to me.. His word play was good.. Illar, you came pretty mediocre with that..
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Overall: My vote goes for Illar.... Just edging off by a few catagories... None the less oth verses were good... You two could have came a lot harder in all aspects, but nice battle...

3-0 MY way....

Thanks for voting, Mal....

1 more vote........

Arki cut you up and expose all D-illar-1's marrow,I'm a v8 bitch... you weak like camero's, Accused me of chompin but bitch you been exposed for "BITIN AERO"

^Horrible. Simply a horrible start. You weak like camero's? wtf is that? 2 syllable rhyming? Good personal, but you didn't make a punch out of it.

I'm the illest ever known while you only improving...after i sonn you quick D1 gonna resort to movin

^Awful. This bar made me really wanna stop reading your verse

Tossin hoes the only way illar 1 gonna "throw-blows",throw knives at a stage the only way you rip shows, almost drowning only way this nigga spit flows...

^ All played material. All unoriginal and dreadful.

Like wheel-chairs with guns...you shoulda kept a "handi-cap", Illar..your blood will "spill" when I start to "wrap"
Like constipation, you need to stop droppin crap, Rellik hyped you up but you gon be slow to type back

^Okay. Finally I see some decent punches. Good start. Horrible finish. Nice wordplay in the beginning though

I shouldnt have even dropped...Kadeem would wreck-ya, and like "2-in-1 *chinese chess*"..this "board will meet the *chin*-chekka"

^Pretty nice. I kinda agree with the part about you shouldn't have even dropped. But very nice wordplay, and good nameflip on Kadeem The Wrekkah. Nice

RW know i spit fresha...but CP below Arki charts,like bubblin tests...after the outcome your gon wish you used-ya-smarts, and avoided the callouts like the arabian-bonapart

^Don't use the little dashes, because I haven't seen a multi yet. This sounds hella suspect to biting because "CP below Arki charts like bubblin tests" doens't make an ounce of sense

It was a fucking mistake when D1 wanted to battle me, Him n multi always * down on the dick* like sex in gravity
Pussy u goin "no-wear fast" like "Nudists on a diet*...so bring ya Crew in for the riot cos i'll bludgeon your topics.. fuck this wackness, how CP spose to be good when its smothered by novice..Ya clickonly number 1 in the crews office
hope times get easy or you'll spend ya whole life tryna cop mine...
Claimin you ghost write but couldnt 'buy coke' to possibly 'sniff up' a 'dope-line

^Decent start. no-wear fast is one of the most played things out right now. The rest I won't even comment on, because I hate unoriginal material

Before i say something your dyin, cos * anal with golfclubs* only time ur *pumpin the iron* ,
so learn ya wack cos yo talents lacking, the first time i heard ur track, i was like fuck,when keenan wayans start rapping

^ Pumpin the iron made me laugh. Pretty funny. Sounds bitten though. Last part was almost funny. Overall decent bars

ur crushed by these spits that scare hell, ur like peeps hopin for a *good deal on wishing*.. you'll be "bidding* *fair well*

^Nice meta4. Nice I guess


Told u ya waste i'll rot ya bones without trace , faggot for you its over, u cant roll with the greats so i'll blow *holes in ya face* bigger than a "zulu soldier"

^Talkin about how you'll brutalize your opponent isn't a diss

this is me takin it light, what im saying is right, its like ur *eyes are on ur toes* cos you'll never " walk away from the site"

^Very good. Excellent wordplay

u aint tight , i'll leave ur mind crushed with harsh lines, lets watch illar 1 use the same punches he used in a past time...

^Good personal, but you didn't really make a punch out of it. Maybe of you had have ended with this is would have worked


I'm ILLIN-NOIZE like Kanye west...you gotta spit thru the wire,Tossin hot tameles only time D-illar-1 droppin some fire, when you read my verse you gonna make like multi and retire!
I spit the roughest of Chemicals , yur flow aint a spectacle, whats illar 1*got in the bag*... well from ur voice i know it aint *TESTICLES*

^Pretty good. I liked it


Arki keeps hopping off the wrong way, I’ll leave this rabbit-past-dead/
Not good at text, AT, you see less keys than rehabbing-crackheads//

^ Nice meta4. Nice wordplay with keys (kis)

You’re not on my level, I hope ya-just-realize-you’re-weak/
You textcee! You numb to the mic like a paralyzed-MC//

^Pretty good. You didnt need the dashes between "ya & just" tho

You just should change ya name to Ice, you’re allergic-to-fire/
And ya pops is a vamp, the way you been just-sonned-by-a-biter //

^Good multi. But it sounded like you were calling yourself a biter. Maybe I took it the wrong way

After your ventures from RWs, it’s undetermined how you kept-ablaze/
Ya stealing streak; Clicked the illest keystyle it was someone else’s-page//

^ Funny. I clicked that link too. Quite disappointing

You’re now a one man clan, I’ll leave ya squad-mauled-clown/
Chi-town native loves Kanye lines, but never when they All-Falls-Down//

^Good. Nice play off of Kanye West's song title

I don’t even know why Arki claims-he’s-hot/
When his recycling’s Breakin’ All The Rules like Jamie-Foxx//

^Funny

This dude wouldn’t deliver fear if he went postal-for-cowards/
And his punches so similar, I thought I watched his post-for-an-hour//

^Original. That made me say, damn

This dude probably feels Overstruck like someone slapped-his-favorite-star/
Because his verses throw no punches like we kidnapped-his-avatar//

^Nice personal & metaphor

Before this battle even happened, peeps said that I might-top-him/
He’s in the worst spot; the BL Ladder proves he’s hit rock-bottom//

^ You stopped the constant flow of multis with this one. But still a good personal which you turned into a diss

Arki, Fallacy, Oblivious, Chris, you’re not better-than-me/
Your record makes you seem you’re before D1(the 1) because it equals
negative-3//

^Whoa. Excellent. That's a nice complex one that was good wordplay off your name

Your not even sick, come on face-it-lame/
You got put out of AP like you got a basic-brain//

^Another nice personal. And good wordplay with "Advanced-Basic"

You wouldn’t lead a team if you had a coaching-job;call me a fool for cooking saliva how I toast-this-slob/
Sport, you might be the bomb and blow but we shut you down quicker than the Olympic Explosive-squad//

^Decent ending. I think the lines were a little too long. Kind of a bummer because the rest of the verse had pretty good syntax all the way through


Overall, this battle was completely one sided. D illar 1 had him outclassed with originality and punchlines. His structure was far better too. Much easier to read and enjoyable. Multis go to D illar 1 also. He had only one bar where there wasn't a multi. Arki Text's verse was probably one of the worst cases of biting I've seen in the last few weeks. It's so obvious. And the structure was horrible. I don't even know you at all. (Under any name) so I'm not hating. Dog, I just think you've got to step your game up in every way. Punches/ Multis/ Originality/ Structure/ Turning Personals into Punches.. etc. And that little 3% thing before every bar is annoying and borderline gay. Just stop it. Because if some of that shish you posted was 75 % of your true potential than you should just quit

Vote- D illar 1

D illar 1 defeats Arki Text by KO (4-0)

Good Battle

(Moved To Archives)

4-0 KO....

Good battle, Arki....